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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wanhedapie

At home:

Everyone enters the home and purvi said “ap sab fresh hokar aa jaye, tab tak hum khana bna dete hein” and everyone moved trough their rooms.

“App bhi jaye or bacchon ko utha dijiye, vo bhoot time se apse milna chahte hein” after saying this Purvi goes to the kitchen.

“Yo baawri ko mare se illawa sab ki chinta hein, huhhhh, ache se 2 mint baat bi na ki mare se. Or gadhi mein bhi chup chap bethi thi or muh par 12 baje hue thi, ke bath ho sakti hein? Par jo bhi bath ho, iska pati 4 dino bad jail se ghar aya hein or yo hein ki bhaw hi na de rahi mane, vese to hamesha mare age piche bagti rehti hein dawai or khana leke” thought Virendra “or vese mujhe ise inta fark kyu padhta hein? Na, mane koi fark na padhta, yo baawri apne umar valo ko ke sath rahe, mein humare bacchon se milta hun, warns iske bare mein soch soch ke mara dimaag kharb ho jaye ga”.


“Bacchon dekho kon vapis aya hein”

“BABAAAAA APPPP”

“Han mein, kese ho app dono?”

“Hum theek hein babar sher, ap vapis aa Gaye iska matlab app game jit Gaye? YAYYYY kroor Singh firse police ban gaye” shouted Manas

“Eyyyyy, pehle to mane kroor Singh bulana band kro, bap hun tum dono ka! Or dusri baat yo ke gaim ki bat kar rehe ho tum dono?” Asked Virendra trying to appear strict, but the reality was that he didn’t the heart, not anymore, to scold and be rough with his own blood. He was still to guilty to neglect them and thanked purvi for everything she has done.

“Baba, pehle baat to ye ki hum apko kroor Singh bulana tab band kare ge jab haathi apko kroor Singh bulana karega, or dusri baat, ap sachme budhe ho rahe ho-“

“Eyyyyy-“

“Apki memory kharb ho rahi hein. Haathi ne Hume bataya ki app thore din ke liye chor bane the, kahna ji ki game mein, isiliye apko humse dhor rehna pada. App vapis aa gaye ho iska matlab app jit gaye” said an overexcited Juhi, ignoring the grunt from Virendra when she called him budha.

“Han me jitgaya or yo sab tare dost haathi ki badolat hein! Or tum dono ki zuban jada na chalne lagi ajj kal”

“Dadi kehti hum ape hi gaye hein” both the kids affirmed together. This made Virendra smile and pull both of them in a hug.

“Haathi tum vaha kyu khadi hui ho? Tum bhi aoo na” said Manas diverting all the attention trough Purvi who was simply standing there, similing and admiring the scene in front of her and thinking how much she wanted a loving father and a happy and tension free youth. Coming out of her thoughts she approached the trio asking “ye sab kya ho raha hein”


“Haathi hum ek family hug kar rahe the, par tum missing thi. Ab tum bhi ao na, fir ye family hug complete hogi” said Juhi, making Purvi emotional. She was so happy that at least the kids have accepted her as their family, but how could she hug them without hugging or touching mukhi ji in the process? She didn’t want to be close to him after she come to know what he felt for her mukhi: love. Yes, she loved him and their was no doubt about it. Yet she knew that he would never feel the same for her, he loved shakshi ji very much, and may be he will love her till his last breath. Ohh how she wished that she had some in her life that loved her this much. She was always the one that did everything for everyone, she was always the one that sacrificed thing for her loved ones, she was the one that forgive them easily, but there was no one in her life that could do the same for her, excluding Juhi and Manas. They were the only reason of her smile and she could do anything for them, literally anything.

Noticing her turmoil, Virendra thought that this state of disturbance of hers was caused by the thought of being close to him and this made him restless and angry “yo baawri itna ke soch rahi hein, ise mare pass ane se dikat ho rahi hein ke? Nah, yo mein hone na dunga, baawri to mari joru se or tari sari zingdi tane mere sath hi bitani pade gi, tari marji se ya thari marji ke khilaf. Tane mein mare se dur kabhi na jan dunga” and pulled Purvi in the hug. His right hand were on her waist, his middle and ring finger touching the small patch of bare skin that was present between the gap of her lehnga and choli. She shivered she felt his cold fingers and big rings on her hot and delicate skin and her one arm went trough Manas and Juhi and one arm trough Virendras chest to seek some support. He smirked seeing her condition and decided to tease her and take his revenge for ignoring him. He started to move his fingers up and down on her waist, tickling her softly. She was shocked and embarrassed at the same time, how could he do this in front of childrens, but at the same time his action was effecting her a way, she had no idea about how to describe it. She was too innocent and native for this, and our mukhi ji knew it. But he wanted her to fell the same things he felt: confusion, desire, ecc.. he wanted her to fell the exact feeling and emotions and thoughts.

They all pulled out of the hug when bhuri came to invite them for dinner, but Virendras finger were still there, as if it was their property, their land that they were not ready to leave.

“Bacchon Hume app logo ke liye kheer banai hein or-“

“Or tum dono jam, mein or baawri abhi ate hein, theek hein?”

“Ji baba” saying this the kids ran out of their room through the dinning table to finish the delicious kheer, leaving behind a scared and shivering Purvi with a smirking Virendra. He was enjoying the effect that he had on her.

“Hum bhi chalte hein, Hume khana laga-“ was the sentence that purvi was murmuring while going through the door, but mukhi hold her wrist and pulled her before going to lock the door. Turning around he founded purvi laying on the bed (because of the strong pull) trying to rearrange her dupatta and cover her chest that was exposed thanks to this deep cut choli. He was mesmerised seeing her like this, things he wanted to do to her “apni chahto ko rok mukhi, ise pehle ki koi der ho gaye. Yo baawri abhi bacchi hein, ise yo sab kiso ke bare mein pata bhi nahi hoga jo tu soch raha hein. Tane pehle ye pata lagana hein ki yo baawri bhi mare bare wohi sochti hein jo mein iske bare mein sochta hu?”.

He started moving trough her with slow step. She was up and sitting trying to put the fixing pin (I don’t know their name sorry😅) on her duppata when mukhi took the pin from her hand. He moved her hair and lowers himself trough her shoulder and pinned the duppata.

“Thanku”

“Rukh baawri, yo daga nikal raha se tare duppate se. Mein ise nikal deta hu ganda lag raha hein”

“Nahi hum-“ before she could finish, mukhi ji lowered himself again, and with his mouth pulled the thread with his teeth, bitting even some of her skin in the process, voluntarily. Purvi was frozen and chould only utter a painful “shhh”, fulling mukhis inner fire with a simple noise. Even after the task was complete, he stayed in that position for a couple of minutes smelling her scent and tempted to kiss her shoulder and neck. After a while he got up, not before kissing the point were her shoulder and neck joint, surprising her.

After this stunt of his, he watched her blushing face and confused state and smiled to himself “abhi to suruvat hein baawri, age dekh mein kya kya karta hu”.

“Ib hum dono hi hein yaha, ib mane bata ki tane kese pata khla ki Vaibhav jinda hein?” Purvi came out of her state and said “ye apko yogi bhaiya hi batyege, par please app koi bhi faisla ghusse mein mat ligiye ga,please”

“Pehle to tu yogi ko bahiya bulana band kar, dewar hein tara, sirf yogi bula or dusri bat mein kabhi bhi koi bhi faisla ghusse me nahi leta”

“Han pata hein hume app kitne aram se faisla lete hein, huhh. Ghusse to apki nak pe 24 ghante rehta hein. Par baat to apki bhi sahi hein, ye ghusse or ghusse wale fasile app sirf mere liye hi lete hein, huhh” murmured purvi in a low voice, unaware of the fact that mukhi heard everything and was very hurt. He messed up big times. He stepped through Purvi, she took a step back, he took another step through her and she took another step back, till she was almost sandwiched between the wall and mukhi ji.


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Sorry guys for the (very) late update, but i was busy with school and was preparing for exams. But now i can update regularly (hopefully) and participate a lot more because we are redoing

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Wow Poonam! Such a lovely update ❀ Vir is getting upset bcoz she doesn't want to spend time with him😆


Looking forward to the next part when Virnxomes to know everything

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Posted: 4 years ago
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No words to describe..It's just awesome❀

Please continue ASAP..We badly need these stories and OS.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful Poonam beautiful! Can't stay here long but this is something magical! Lovrd it 💖💖💖💖💖💖

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