Humari Adhuri Kahani (chapter 14 updated) : LAST CHAPTER - Page 52

Originally posted by: sajwan07

Thankyou for this journey di.. couldn't have asked for a better ending than this one.. 🤗

Please update the epilogue too😃

Really want to have a glimpse of their normal life ..❤️

Thank you so much for sticking with it dear.

Epilogue?😆

Originally posted by: kruthik

Wonderfully written. You are an amazing writer Stuti. That historical portion was beyond imagination. Hats off to you dear.👌👌

Thank you so so much.☺️

Originally posted by: Soso70

Wonderful written. Full of emotions. I love your writing very much.

Your description of Akbar and Jodha's feelings is great. Also the Rohan-Pragya parts, his fight with his 2nd I, his feelings during and after the flashbacks. loved it

Tears came to me for some parts. Especially when Rohan-Akbar confesses his love to Jodha and expresses his feelings to fullfill his promise.

Beautiful story and beautiful last chapter

Thanks a lot dear. Your review made my day. ❤️

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

Congratulations Stuti for completing this wonderful saga..I am touched to see your dedication towards your Stories.. your hard work are oozing out through this update....loved , relished, enjoyed every bit of this journey with you.thanks for this blissful journey.

Oh My God so many praises! Thank you so so much😃

U deserve so much appreciation

Despite of such big gap u completed it

And u also update DL with such beauty

Lots of love🤗

Originally posted by: abha22

U deserve so much appreciation

Despite of such big gap u completed it

And u also update DL with such beauty

Lots of love🤗

Thank you sooo much dear🤗

ok , this was surprise 😳

but big thankyou for this update .

this had moments , agonizing , tenderness , magnificient....😃

past was sad , i loved that part where he simply stands & absorbs the view of his wife - son , basically mother son moment & delightful father silently watches also cherishes those precious moments , that smile that happiness of his wife is surely a surprise for him , as he experiences those moments of absolute content .

previously the part with saint chishti & him it was wonderful , you write so well i would end up quoting it all ...😃 , i have no skill to appreciate your work but just say that how much i love & like your efforts , keep writing like this dear.....🤗

then off course the tension , disappointed father letting it all out to the mother of their son , as a husband getting that solace from his wife that he always longed for . i liked jodha's words in that scene , best came out from her , jalal was as usual spot on....👍🏼

death was just too sad , i had mixed feelings 😭

then the final moment , the relief for the old souls who have desperately waited for this moment for ages & it finally happened it was ultimate , very well penned dear author , if only we could get such things in real with rajat doing it ⭐️ but then we want talented writers like you....😳

the whole description of it.....👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

maybe it was jalal in him , that used to transform rohan , & lately it completely resided in him so much...here in this moment he completely rose & just confessed...that confession part was simple yet mesmerizing , had it all .

oh i feel bad now because am really gonna miss them.......😭

new start......❤️

one story ended , another began actually a beginning of them which was pending before because of unpleasant reasons but now as the sores of past are over they sit & relax , very nice setting , good use of taj mahal........😆👍🏼 instantly idea of dating took place & the twist is this time its her taking the initiative...😆& poor him all his planning , forming of words gone to waste but what is the rush , or its you who just ended it all in an instant when it just began......😭

we want more....plzz......😃

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thanks a lot dear. Your review made my day. ❤️

You´re welcome dear ☺️

First of all hearty congratulations on completing this story, after reading I know what a daunting task it must be to come up with this story. And really it's not immature, atleast didn't seem like that to me.

So coming back to story i'd read the prologue before but couldn't muster courage to read the story, I was not into paranormal you see, but recently one of my favourite writers said it's her favourite genre, then I saw your post recommending this and you said it's complete, so I couldn't resist coming here.

Though it cost me a lot of studying time, but no regrets.

Again coming back to the story... I don't know if this reincarnation thing can really happen but I can't dismiss this as just an imagination as well. I've dipped a bit in meditation line and I've experienced things. the things you say about subconscious mind, it being a layer of memories over the various births, I don't know your source of knowledge but agree with it.

In the beginning chapters I was always thinking why does she not remember it like he does? Then by the middle parts I was like what if she never remembered because that's completely possible right, I started to dread whether his story will remain incomplete again.

I don't know how you managed to write 2 love stories with one couple. The time travel element was amazing as well.

But the most striking part for me was the conversation before going to the tomb, when he made peace with it, because we can't possibly find a solution unless we accept our problems first.

It was a rollercoaster of emotions for me because I've watched the show almost 10 times in last 5 months, and I feel more and more connected, maybe I would need a psychiatrist in near future as well. 😆

I've some reading recommendations for you if you're interested.

Keep writing.❤️

- Pooja😊

Originally posted by: kriya_12

ok , this was surprise 😳

but big thankyou for this update .

>> 😃 😃

this had moments , agonizing , tenderness , magnificient....😃

>> Aww Thank you 😃

past was sad , i loved that part where he simply stands & absorbs the view of his wife - son , basically mother son moment & delightful father silently watches also cherishes those precious moments , that smile that happiness of his wife is surely a surprise for him , as he experiences those moments of absolute content .

>> That would be the most beautiful scene to watch in the whole world.

previously the part with saint chishti & him it was wonderful , you write so well i would end up quoting it all ...😃 , i have no skill to appreciate your work but just say that how much i love & like your efforts , keep writing like this dear.....🤗

>> Aww☺️

then off course the tension , disappointed father letting it all out to the mother of their son , as a husband getting that solace from his wife that he always longed for . i liked jodha's words in that scene , best came out from her , jalal was as usual spot on....👍🏼

>> I got emotional writing that part 😭 Time was hard on Akbar in his last days...

For all the Mughal Emperor's I think...

death was just too sad , i had mixed feelings 😭

>> 😞

then the final moment , the relief for the old souls who have desperately waited for this moment for ages & it finally happened it was ultimate , very well penned dear author , if only we could get such things in real with rajat doing it ⭐️ but then we want talented writers like you....😳

the whole description of it.....👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

>>Oh If we could see this. 😆

Thanks dear...

maybe it was jalal in him , that used to transform rohan , & lately it completely resided in him so much...here in this moment he completely rose & just confessed...that confession part was simple yet mesmerizing , had it all .

>> Yes right

oh i feel bad now because am really gonna miss them.......😭

new start......❤️

one story ended , another began actually a beginning of them which was pending before because of unpleasant reasons but now as the sores of past are over they sit & relax , very nice setting , good use of taj mahal........😆👍🏼 instantly idea of dating took place & the twist is this time its her taking the initiative...😆& poor him all his planning , forming of words gone to waste but what is the rush , or its you who just ended it all in an instant when it just began......😭

>> Maybe I was in hurry to complete the story at one sitting. 😆 However, I wanted to keep their conversation short and crispy. And rest is on the readers' imagination 😃

we want more....plzz......😃

>> Now incarnation of Shahjahan Mumtaj?🤡🤣