my poem on DK!!

Hello my pyaari bhootnis!! Kaise ho tum sab? Well, this Forum looks sooo dead! That's why, I have come up with a poem for DK!! 😛 Well, our teacher assigned us a project where we have to write six poems using six different styles and then write why we chose each of the poems. 😃 So, I wrote one for Dk. The poem is dedicated to Kajju barfi from Devu, when Kajju was lost in dadu goat's house in Bhadrapur and Devu was dying to meet her. Well, my poem might be really stupid, because I rarely write shayaaris in English. Most of them are in hindi, so if it's stupid, then don't hesitate to tell me! 😆 So, here it goes:

I know I have always hurt you and given you nothing except pain.
But please give me a chance or all my love for you in this lifetime will go in vain.
I don't wish to live with this stain that I have given you nothing except pain.
I wish to bestow all my love upon you, like the Earth being showered with rain.
Flowers die at night and new flower buds bloom in the morning.
And I keep wishing for your return, thinking your return will make this life more adorning.
Days come and nights go by.
The sun sets and rises every morning with a sigh.
The dark cloyds try to block the moon, but it keeps shining throughout the night.
And I keep praying to the Almighty, hoping that someday I will catch your sight, (means I will see you) and that will be the end of our fight.
That will take our love to a greater height and our life will become as beautiful as the Almighty's Divine light.
There will be no place for any fight, and I will cherish you all day all night! 😳 😳

So, that was it. 😃

Originally posted by: gambi

Hello my pyaari bhootnis!! Kaise ho tum sab? Well, this Forum looks sooo dead! That's why, I have come up with a poem for DK!! 😛 Well, our teacher assigned us a project where we have to write six poems using six different styles and then write why we chose each of the poems. 😃 So, I wrote one for Dk. The poem is dedicated to Kajju barfi from Devu, when Kajju was lost in dadu goat's house in Bhadrapur and Devu was dying to meet her. Well, my poem might be really stupid, because I rarely write shayaaris in English. Most of them are in hindi, so if it's stupid, then don't hesitate to tell me! 😆 So, here it goes:

I know I have always hurt you and given you nothing except pain.
But please give me a chance or all my love for you in this lifetime will go in vain.
I don't wish to live with this stain that I have given you nothing except pain.
I wish to bestow all my love upon you, like the Earth being showered with rain.
Flowers die at night and new flower buds bloom in the morning.
And I keep wishing for your return, thinking your return will make this life more adorning.
Days come and nights go by.
The sun sets and rises every morning with a sigh.
The dark cloyds try to block the moon, but it keeps shining throughout the night.
And I keep praying to the Almighty, hoping that someday I will catch your sight, (means I will see you) and that will be the end of our fight.
That will take our love to a greater height and our life will become as beautiful as the Almighty's Divine light.
There will be no place for any fight, and I will cherish you all day all night! 😳 😳

So, that was it. 😃

Waahh!!

Kya poem hai yaar!!👏👏👏

It makes me cry a lot when i read over n over again!!😭😭

Ahaaks!!

Just kidding, yaar!! The poem is soo SAD, Zareen.. But I do love it very much!!😆

do make more poems on DK!!

I'll like to c dem!!

Thanku Yvaine! By the way, I not only make poems on DK, I also post my dreams about them!! 😛 I will post more poems and dreams of DK!!Aur thanks again!!I am waiting to see more mixes made by you!! 😛 😛

Ok!! 😉

I'll provide more vitaminos for u guys...
n Im not promising the vitaminoos will coming very soon.. I've been too busy rite now. Dun hav much time makin more mixes for u guys.. But no need to worry.. more vitaminos will coming up!! Just wait for it patiently.. 😉

wah wah zareen ... aap tu english main bhi shairy karti hain!!! wonderful ...

i loved the poem!!! great👏

Thanku Kashuu!! 😛 This time I thought of doing it in english, because first of all it's to be handed in as an assignment 😆 and also because, I wanted all the bhootnis to understand my poem. 😆 Sometimes, some bhootnis can't understand everything in hindi. 😆 Aur my ew dream will be up by this weekend ji! 😛 To tyaar raho! Because you are going to get a laughter attack! 😆