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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: arsh_7

Hi Pragya, my name is Arshnoor. You can call me Arsh or Noor, the choice is yours 😆


You have such a beautiful name, Noor.

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


You have such a beautiful name, Noor.

Aww, thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Hi Pragya,

The concept and the first chapter sound interesting 👍🏼

I would love to read this FF 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Melina20

Hi Pragya,

The concept and the first chapter sound interesting 👍🏼

I would love to read this FF 😊


Thank you.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter-2

"No, it can't be possible," Aau Saheb gasped, "Malhar...Malhar can't be alive."

He had the same face but was nothing like Malhar Rane. His light blue blazer with navy blue shirt made his sophisticated aura even more prominent.

Aau Saheb was about to faint when Kalyaani and Hrishaan supported her and there hands brushed in the process. Kalyani felt something. Tere liye (from Fitoor) plays in background.

"Do you need water, Mrs. Whatever?"Hrishaan said, "There is a whole swimming pool in my backyard."

Kalyani makes a disgusted face.

DJ started playing I hate love stories song.

"Would you like to dance, miss beautiful?" Hrishaan was looking at Kalyaani. There was a puzzled expression on Kalyani's face. Then he extended his hand towards Godavari.

GodaHrishaan dance.

"Are you feeling cold, Anupriya Ji?"Sarthak asked, giving Anupriya his jacket.

"I didn't even want to come here," Anupriya said, returning the jacket, "And how is Hrishaan's face exactly like Malhar?

"But he's not my Malhar," Saarthak said, "He is someone else. Only you are the one I trust in Deshmukh family. If it were not for you, I don't know how could I take care of Moksh. Sometimes I feel bad for him more than my nephew. Sampada left him and Malhar when police arrested Malhar on a false blame even before Malhar died"

"You must thank Kalyani. She is the one who cares the most for Moksh."

Sarthak's face hardened. "No, I cannot forgive Kalyani for testifying against Malhar at court due to which he got life imprisonment."

Kalyani was going out of the mansion when someone pulled her in a corner.

"Do you know how much I waited for you?" It was Malhar's, no Hrishaan's voice. He pushed a lock of hair from Kalyani's eyes, "You're so beautiful." His face came closer to her.

"What are you doing, Malhar ji?" Kalyani pulled away.

"Who are you?" Hrishaan said, arching his eyebrow, "You're not the one, what's her name," Hrishaan scratched his forehead," You are not the girl I was with the day before yesterday. And what did you call me? Malhar Ji...there's no girl who can mistake my name."

"Get lost," Kalyani said.

"He can't be Malhar," Atharv told the group of AauSaheb, Pallavi and Vivek, "My men killed him in the prison itself."

"Then find out who he is," Aau Saheb ordered, "If he's Malhar, kill him the same way his sister was killed." Aau Saheb nodded at Vivek and Atharv.


"I need to go. I have an important work," Atharv went away. In his room, Malhar's wife Sampada is there.


"Did you know how much I missed you?" Sampada hugged Atharv.


"Sampu, my sampu," Atharv said, "Tractor chalta hai to udti hai garda, meena reena sabse better hai meri Sampada."


"Bahut bakwas shayarikrte ho tum," Sampada made a face, "But at least us irritating Moksh ki nappy badalne and us boring bhikhari Malhar me saath rehne se to lakh gunabetter h."


Please let me know what you think of this chapter.

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Wow another update

it’s interesting

So MJ is hrishaan but there is some mystery

Let’s see how it unfolds


And atharv shayari 🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Wow another update

it’s interesting

So MJ is hrishaan but there is some mystery

Let’s see how it unfolds


And atharv shayari 🤣🤣


Thanks a lot :) Actually everyone assumes MJ was killed in a fight with inmates but truth is still hidden.

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

This story is going very good i loved it keep updating 🙂

Finally got something different to read

Your story is very interesting

♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rimsha_Jawed13

This story is going very good i loved it keep updating 🙂

Finally got something different to read

Your story is very interesting

♥️


Thank you so much :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Chapter-3


Everyone returns Ahilya Niwas. Kalyani panics at the sound of Moksh crying. She rushes to Aparna's room where Moksh fell down his cot and is crying.


"Pillu," there were tears in Kalyani's eyes, "Tu gir kaise gaya? Kuch nhi beta...Kalyani Aai aa gayi hai na."


"Lo, inhe dekh lo," Aau Saheb taunts, "Us khooni ke bacche ki maa bani huyi hain. Anupriya samjhao ise, aisi harkaton ke baad kaise hogi Kalyani ki shaadi is manhoos Moksh ke rehte hue."


"Bas Keejiye Aau Saheb," Kalyani could not hide her anger, "Baccha hai pillu. Apke andar daya nahi hai kya. Bechare bistar se neeche gir gaya aur koi ise dekhne vala bhi nahin. Kitni chot lagi hogi bechare ko. Aur Malhar Ji ne jo kiya usme Pillu ki kya galti. Usne bola tha unhe Shinde ka khoon karne ko?"


"Lekin hai to is manhoos me bhi us Rane parivar ka khoon," Aau Saheb says, "Pachtaogi Kalyani tum. Bahut Pachtaogi."


Next day, Hrishaan is running with earphones in his ears. Suddenly a masked man comes from behind and attacks him with a stick but Hrishaan shifts sidewards and twists the masked man's arms and kicks him in the belly. The masked man moans.


"Are you OK, dude?" Hrishaan says, "Aurangabad me morning walk ki jagah doosron ki peeth par vaar karne ka rivaaj hai kya?"


"Ah..." the masked man is on the ground."Easy easy..." Hrishaan says, "Take deep breaths."


In the midst of this hullabaloo, the masked man's phone which fell on the ground starts ringing and the caller name displayed is sweetheart.


"Athu baby," Sampada calls from the other side, "Kitni der se call kar rahi hoon? Tum phone kyon nahin utha rahe? Kahin kisi ladki vadki ke saath to nahi ho na? Ya fir ek baar fir kirane ki dukaan se santre ki goli churane ke chakkar me maar to nahin kha rahe?" A flash of hurt in Hrishaan's eyes but he recovers quickly.


"Hello Sweetheart," Hrishaan says in a flirty voice, "Unfortunately I'm not your Athu baby. Apka Athu baby abhi mere kadmon pe pada hai." And Hrishaan unmasks the person and hands him the phone.


"Sampuuu..." he cries.


"Baby!" Kon hai tumhare saath?" Sampada is sweating, "Vo Malhar ki aawaj thi na?"


"Sampu main baad me tumhe call karta hoon?" Atharv cut the phone.


"Vo main...vo main..." Atharv says, "Main aapki company me naukri karna chahta hoon?"


"Naukri karna chahte ho?" Hrishaan says, "Mask pehankar aur ye...doosron ke sir par danda markar. Gundon ki vacancy to nahin nikli hai meri company me."


"Aap jo bologe vo main karoonga," Atharv folds his hands, "bas aap mujhe ye naukri de do."


"Kuch bhi?" Hrishaan says.


"Kuch bhi." Atharv says.


"Ahalya Niwas mujhe bechoge?" Hrishaan says, "Bees crore keemat hogi plus tumhara commission extra."


"Samjho aapka kaam ho gaya." Atharv says.

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