Vani FF// The Phoenix (Thread 2 Link in Pg 1) - Page 25

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Added Ur book in wattpad. Will re read there again.

Update here soon. Waiting to know when and how veer will get his powers back

Just a bit of wait more and he's going to be back

Originally posted by: indigal07

I came upon this fanfic this week and it is breathing life into me at the same time the actual show and bakwaas episodes are breaking my heart.

Your writing is incredible and the way that you are shaping this story is so beautiful and authentic, you have outdone even the writers of the show and the character!!! Absolutely Amazing!!! 👏👏

I haven't fully caught up to the latest chapters yet, just made it to around chapter 30, but I'm so happy that I have more to read. I had to pause in the middle and post this comment because I love this story so much and can't keep holding in how much I love it!! I'm literally so addicted to this story. Everyday I can't wait to end all my work so I can read more. You've so accurately captured the essence of Aakesh and Nageshwari and Veer and Bani. The conversations they have with one another, the emotions and thoughts they express, it should have all been done on the show. Thank you so much for giving Vani fans an accurate portrayal of what the Vani story should have been. Hats off to you! Can't wait to keep reading!! ❤️

Also I love the characters of Sam and Vanshika and can't wait to see their story unfold too. I wish that what you wrote along with these two characters would have been the actual Naagin 5 show, seriously! This is the winning story!!

Thank you so much ❤️ I'm glad that my stories are making a place in your leisure time and giving you a nice relaxing time.

Originally posted by: Kusumani

Please update soon. Can you update everyday.

Your story is fab.

Please give Veer back his powers.

Is Jay dead? I don't get it.

He'll definitely get it back but just a bit more of wait. There's something in it. Just hold on with it.

Awesome.. Loved the way veer handled jay with strength even though he was injured. Yes veer Is always strong. With or without cheel powers.

Loved aadi naagin controlling every snake and forest. That fierce awesome. She is fierce.

Waiting to know what happens.

Update soon. Mind-blowing it is

Fantabulous chapters..I look forward to the new chapters more than the episodes these days.. this was the naagin5 we wanted to see..I'm glad we are getting to read it at least.

You write such powerful sequences.👏👏👏👏👏.I had goosebumps when bani walked towards jay and her anger was projected to jay by the other snakes ...and the vani scenes.. you write them best❤.

Loved all the scenes..whether veer being sarphira veeranshu while fighting jay and ahana who already won my heart..and the cute way tapish bhai became hyper running towards his kitchen..everything was WONDERFUL.

Bas ab thode vani romance bhi ho jaaye..but I know that will happen once veer gets his powers back..and can't wait for that..

Lots of love

Ratna.

Wow...

Another amazing update...

Continue soon...

Hey ally! Am not able to describe how much am involved in this story! Words are falling short!❤️ I am having this out of body experience where in I am imagine myself being a character in the story!❤️ Its incredibly gripping❤️

Every character is leaving its own mark!

Your Veer and Bani make me almost emotional! They have incredible depth and soul touching moments!

Am so glad, human Veer is becoming stronger! I want to be human for some more time maybe! Got all my Cheelu vibes from the latest update

But just one doubt I always had! Aren't the singhanias still criminals in the story? Then how come bani has accepted them as family? This bani isn't for revenge any more?

Originally posted by: J2lover

Hey ally! Am not able to describe how much am involved in this story! Words are falling short!❤️ I am having this out of body experience where in I am imagine myself being a character in the story!❤️ Its incredibly gripping❤️

Every character is leaving its own mark!

Your Veer and Bani make me almost emotional! They have incredible depth and soul touching moments!

Am so glad, human Veer is becoming stronger! I want to be human for some more time maybe! Got all my Cheelu vibes from the latest update

But just one doubt I always had! Aren't the singhanias still criminals in the story? Then how come bani has accepted them as family? This bani isn't for revenge any more?

Well, in my story i'm going ahead with this thought that Singhanias aren't involved in human trafficking business. About Ponky and Monil, I'm going to reveal about it as well. I just felt that it was a bit forced in the show that Monil and Ponky were involved in the murder and molested Noor. I'm not going in that direction.

About the revenge. Honestly, pure season mein there hasn't been a strong reason for revenge. So, I'm not setting my story upon revenge.

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Fantabulous chapters..I look forward to the new chapters more than the episodes these days.. this was the naagin5 we wanted to see..I'm glad we are getting to read it at least. Glad you're liking it. Even I'm like severely disappointed with the episodes.

You write such powerful sequences.👏👏👏👏👏.I had goosebumps when bani walked towards jay and her anger was projected to jay by the other snakes ...and the vani scenes.. you write them best❤. I didn't get to see a strong Bani that I hoped to see. She's Adi-Naagin so I wanted her to carry that aura. Honestly agar iss scene ko woh acche se direct karte, she would have given off the aura of being powerful. I want Bani to go from emotional, to cold, to a bit open and then bloom into that Queenly state. She never really got into the character of being a Queen. So, this is slowly her evolving herself into the true queen of her empire. I want a strong Bani. A strong Adi-Naagin unlike the one in the show who wouldn't think at all.

Loved all the scenes..whether veer being sarphira veeranshu while fighting jay and ahana who already won my heart..and the cute way tapish bhai became hyper running towards his kitchen..everything was WONDERFUL. Tapish bhai is definitely very protective of his kitchen.

Bas ab thode vani romance bhi ho jaaye..but I know that will happen once veer gets his powers back..and can't wait for that.. Who says it can't happen while he's human? It's still Veer Singhania. 😆

Lots of love

Ratna.

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Awesome.. Loved the way veer handled jay with strength even though he was injured. Yes veer Is always strong. With or without cheel powers. I think that is the strength of human side. The ability to keep going. That is why Veer hadn't instantly got back his powers. He'll get it after a while

Loved aadi naagin controlling every snake and forest. That fierce awesome. She is fierce.

Waiting to know what happens.

Update soon. Mind-blowing it is

Thanks will update the story today❤️