Originally posted by: vallu123
Bold ..i agree..this has been my biggest issue ...n it is stuck in my head since the revenge started..
when I watched all riansh scenes in a flow...only riansh...absolutely avoiding the rest ...the writer does get the core and essence of vansh and riddhima correct...but he just fails at weaving a good story...with logic, thrill and proper closure...
If you see the the story built around riansh is so inconsistent...full of loop holes...it makes look vansh look super ignorant and silly.....and riddhima with biggest double standards.....web after web...n no closure..has made us question vrs's intelligence...
May be shashwat rai is good at sketching intense extreme characters but not very good at building a story around them!for a good story writer has to work on multiple fronts...the writing team needs guidance...
I am sad...