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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks again Uma di & kwaishfan for providing more questions for the Q & A & thanks di for providing amazing responses !! 👍🏼


Part 22

Spellbinding update !!! 👏👏👏👏

From geet pounding maan with a pillow 😆 ( he is lucky she did not have her chainsaw 🤣)

To maan being spell bound staring at the dazzling gal beside him 💗

Maan’s confession that he would not have been a saint if he had been in her shoes 😳

Geet’s cute notes to herself , not to get drunk with MSK123🤣🤣

I totally loved how maan is trying to get through her guarded barricades ( more like barbed electrical wire 😆)& is trying to get her to open up & talk about her insecurities ......,, I love the fact he is trying to reassure her

Looks like our Munda is falling hard for his “gee” 🤣🤣( di her nickname reminds me of butter 🤣)

& last but not least leaving them in a very compromising position again 😳

Loved it !! 💕

Di , I am loving your character development in this story ..... they started off as 2 extremely unique individual hell-bent on revenge ....,,which was very humerous but as the story progresses you are starting to show their insecurities behind their rigid exteriors ....... they both act like they are carefree & are enjoying life to the fullest when I think they both are lonely & have hidden skeletons in their closets ...... I love how you are showing more depth to their characters & of course their interactions & dialogues are superb !! bravo job well done di !!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thank you again for the pm & update 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to All the Winners of Part 21


Interesting Questions asked

on Part 21

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Posted: 4 years ago


My Question is for Maan


Do you somehow feel Geet's disease can be cured ?


or you just messing around with her trying to get a reaction ?



Part 22


I liked how Maan is trying to show his support

and care towards Geet

and at the same time not once did he flinch or insult her in any way

I really would like to know what he truly feels for Geet

well Geet is just annoyed or is she actually scared getting close to Maan

it almost seems like he does not want her to have any insecurities

again I liked how Geet ensures herself that Maan cannot touch her

as she is on top of him yet away too

Maan still feels Geet to be beautiful and he appreciates her feminine side



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Posted: 4 years ago

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nice

geet wants to be strong n independent before maan

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hilarious these two.

maan so one track mind and assumed Everything wrong. Poor geet getting scared completely by maans behavior

Mofcourae she does not want to acknowledge her feelings for him. Probably due to the fear of her problems poor girl

Maan so confused



Next update

Maan wanting to make sure geet is okay both with him And herself

I guess he does not want to loose her and her friendship / companionship. But what’s up with him calling her “Gee”. And she did not question that. For sure she is lost in this whole closeness and her feelings

she realizes he will not leave her till she acknowledges that she is okay with her problems and him


he does care but the way he shows is bizarre and vice versa geet too is affected by him


Edited by Alamelu - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter


I am from India but I love in US now. What about you?

oh where in USA?

I am from South Africa

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi.... thanks for the pm.

enjoyed the Q&A. liked their responses and reactions.

hats off to you!


Part 22

Magnificent update.... amazingly written

Geet's reaction is reasonable

even of she was tempted she would not admit it

at least Maan was honest

so her note to self was expected

of cos she is affected by his closeness

liked his concern for her

seems like he knows her well

great advice....

loved that he calls her Gee

I do not think that Maan will think less of her if she admits she is insecure

well he told her that she is beautiful

not surprised that she threatens him....

nice seeing some trust on him

so will she believe him?


Question to Geet

why did you assume Piyush told Maan about you issue?


Question to Maan

what do you feel for Geet?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Note:Please share the fic with your friends on IF. The story is getting very less readers. Thank you

Star Commentor Award (Part 22)

Winner: Creampuff⭐️

Runner-ups: UmaDevi97, Alamelu

SpecialMention: coderlady, ferdouz, Taahir 004

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): coderlady, ferdouz, crazyfriends007

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏

QnA- Episode 5

Nilz: Hello all, welcome to the Fifth episode of QnA with Maan & Geet. This episode we have so many questions from different readers. So first start with UmaDevi97’s questions

UmaDevi97:First question is for Geet: Do you have any trust issues or is it just because of Maan and his bakwas behavior towards you

Geet: Do you think this person is trustworthy?

Maan crosses his arm

Maan: Really? Tell me what did I do that is so untrustworthy?

Geet: You! You….

Geet is trying hard to come up with an answer

Maan: Yeah, go on

Geet: I…I don’t have to discuss my personal life with people

He raises an eyebrow

Maan: What?You are discussing about me here. Am I your personal life?

Geet looks away and doesn’t respond

UmaDevi97: Second question if Maan ne propose kiya I love you are you willing to except it or you just want to say NO and reject him?

Geet: I won’t reject him or say no coz if he is in his right mind then he won’t propose me. We don’t even look eye to eye….what“I love you”?

UmaDevi97 gives up thinking if you don’t see eye to eye then why do you guys always come together for the interview

Nilz: Next set of questions by Taahir 004

Taahir 004: My Question is for Maan :Do you somehow feel Geet's disease can be cured or you just messing around with her trying to get a reaction ?

Maan: Yes. I have researched a lot about it. I don’t mess around with serious stuff

Geet who was looking down, looks up at him

Geet: Hellooo! I am a doctor. I know it cant…

Maan: Hey and I know you are a doctor, but a prejudiced one who is not open to try other approaches

He says putting his foot down on the discussion

Geet muh phulaake baith jaati hai ki daant diya sabke saamne

Nilz: Next set of questions by Khwaishfan

Khwaishfan: Question to Geet: why did you assume Piyush told Maan about you issue?

Geet leaps to answer

Geet: Coz he was making back handed comments about s*x in the morning at the hotel. What am I supposed to think?

She looksat Maan but he doesn’t give any reaction

Khwaishfan: Question to Maan: what do you feel for Geet?


Maan remains silent for a moment, looking down crossing his arms


Maan: You are right. We shouldn’t discuss personal stuff here


He gets up while Geet follows him


Khwaish wonders whether Geet is not personal matter for Maan


UmaDevi97 sighs

-~-




Part 23


**Mature Content**

M-Good. You don't need me or any other man to validate your femininity for you

G-Are you listening to me?

M- As much as you are listening to me

Geet takes a deep breath to calm down a little

A few deep breaths more and she realizes…Okay. She is on top... so it's not like Maan is gonna force himself on her from his position...nor is he touching inappropriately... Guess this is his twisted version of shock therapy or something

M - Do you believe me?

Geet looks away not responding

M-I really didn't know about what happened with Piyush and any stuff before you told me today; and at the wedding….what happened…that’s my fault …I had set it up before I made up my mind to stop bothering you. And after that….I really thought you were feeling me up when I was drunk... And I thought that we can……well, never mind that…

He sighs

M-I honestly don't want to hurt you or take any revenge on you.

G -Fine-fine. I believe you. Jeez!

M- And that you are one of the most beautiful women on this planet

Geet’s eyes widen with surprise

G- You are beauty pageant judge now?

M- Is it harder to believe in yourself than believe I have changed and turned over new leaf?

G -I have mirror…I won't believe stupid nonsense

M - Do you wanna sit on me whole day? Or just agree with me and be done with it?

Geet realizes ki she was getting pretty comfy there for a moment

G-.. ahemm.. yeah so fine…ok I am beautiful

Maan laughs... and Geet could feel vibrations in places...she hasn't felt much before and blushes hard

M- You don't have to make peace with anything and compromise with anything. You can have whatever you want.

G- I am medically incapable of having it

M- You don't need to c*ck to get and org*sm or a man to have a baby. So what is it that your medical condition is stopping you from?

G – You…you!!! Talk properly!!!

Geet shuts his mouth with her hand

He raises his eyebrows . Akhon akhon mei ishara for her to reply to her question

G- Don't act obtuse ok.... Even though I don't need a man for those things... but to have a normal relationship the guy wants what I can’t-

M- Then don't have a normal relationship…or a relationship with a normal guy. Choose whatever suits you... but don't put yourself down

G- it's not that easy as you think it is...

M- I don't see what's so hard, if you know what you want

G – It’s not easy to get even if I know

M - It's not right science

G- Huh?

M- You know helping yourself...

G- To do?

M -To do whatever brings you... Pleasure...

G-Huh?

He sighs

M- Why are you dumb in this department?

G - I am not dumb about anything

M - I am talking about you mast*****ing

Geet blushes so hard she didn't even have words for a comeback

This totally wasn't what she thought they were talking about.

But she can't back down

She tries to put up a brave front

G-You can't live your life like that... just doing that...You need a .... Ewwwww!!! Maan!!!!

He smiles at her reaction

G - Aisa nahi hota hai... To have a healthy relationship...you can't deny each other's needs and just pleasure yourself...

Geet is trying to come up with civilized words to argue

But it is getting harder to do that

M - Hmmmm….but you are so hot...and frankly the thought of you....hmmm......Pretty hot

Maan holds her waist a little tighter and closes his eyes as if imagining something

Geet is getting shivers and tingles from their position and their talk alone.

Seeing that bliss full expression on his face, feeling the heat of his hands on her skin.

She knows he is up to no good and when she feels something nice under her butt.

She grabs the pillow to suffocate Maan

As soon as Maan let's go off her to move the pillow away, Geet scrambles away and opens the door to her apartment

G-Get. The. F*ck. Out!!

He takes the pillow down from his face and puts it's on his lap while sitting up

M - I uh... need few minutes...

He says feeling embarrassed himself at his body’s reaction to her closeness

Her ears are getting warm with embarrassment in his presence, but she can't even insist he leave right now

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

wonderful update superb

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi, thanks for the update!

loved the Q&A


Part 23

fabulous update.... excellently written

you are portraying reality

at least Maan cleared everything

well he was sincere

glad she believes

appreciate his efforts to assure her

she is affected by his closeness

of cos his advice shocks Geet

he was trying to be subtle lol but Geet did not understand

eventually he had to be direct

seems like she did not expect that

hmm she cannot come come with any arguments

so Maan ends up demonstrating and cleared affected.....

she was shocked and angry

her reaction is reasonable

can understand his embarrassment

the love hate relationship continues

update soon


Question to Maan and Geet

when will you admit that you care for each other

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago

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