Pruvir ss making her mine chapter 3 updated on pg 3

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Hey guys I am back .after you're comments I decided to start this story which came in my mind after watching episodes.so its totally my idea not related to current track hope you will like it .



Virendar 's POV :

It has been 3 months of purvir ' s wedding .since she came in his life .he did this marriage for his family sake and most important for his kids .in starting days he didn't even ready to share his room with her but after realizing that servants and household people will talk bad about her character and about there relationship so he has to shift back in his room .it was really difficult in starting days to share room with her as he was not habitual of at female with him in room .he loves his deceased wife so much that he consider sin to think about any girl after her death .but situation forces him to marry .with passing days he was impressed with her .she wins everyone's heart including his naughty kids who torture her a lot in starting as she is taking her mothers place in there father 's life .she did everything to win everyone in family and slowly in just one month .his own mother and uncle treat her their own daughter .his kids treat her like there mother .they both share emotional attachment and unique bond with her and in such way that now they no.more run behind to gain his attention .there center of attraction is always purvi and he felt jealous with her sometimes and that now everyone belongs to her his own family becomes her .but he has to admit that some where she made place in his heart as well .she takes care of his everything from serving tea and meals to him every day ,pressing his clothes and arranging them in cupboard with his files ,taking care of his mobile ,handkerchief ,wallet .he becomes so used to her that for every single thing he calls her and make her run away in there room and mansion .she being so innocent keeps doing everything for his kids and him and becomes perfect wife and mother in every sense .she never try to replace sakshi but she defenteily makes her own space in everyone's heart .its not wrong to say that he started loving her and wants to make there relationship stronger and takes it to next level as she deserves each and everything .he wants to confess his feelings to her but only scared of her reaction that will she accept him as his husband ?? She will love him or not ?? He don't want to force her in anyway if she does not want him in her life .some time his heart sunk with this thought that they both don't share same age .she is too young and beautiful girl of 19 and here he is widow and a father of two kids .he is not some charming handsome young guy like every girl wants as partner but he cannot offoerd to loose her at any cost .if she will not accept him they both will remain friends the way they are right now comfortable with each other and most important they respect and trust each other .they understand each others like ideal couples .some times he feels amazed that they both don't share relationship like normals couples but still they prove to be the best for each other .





Pruvi 's POV :

It has been 3 months since he entered in his life .it was a roller coaster ride for her .as her parents sold her in Mollki and after marriage she realized. that she marry someone who is old for her and has two kids .it was shocking for her that he loves his deceased wife and he did this marriage just as compromise .she never forgets how much she cry on wedding night after all the truth revelation .in starting except her mother in law and mama ji they treated her well like a daughter and she was missing her old small house ,her mother ,her sister .both juhi and manas torture her a lot by giving her pain and making her fun and taunting her for marrying there father .she understand that no one likes step relation and it is difficult for them to accept her so soon .but after realizing that if this is what god planned her as her destiny then this has to be .she did every single thing to please kids and win there heart by bearing all tortures and taunt .and within one month she managed to become there friend .when she think about him in starting he try his best to avoid or ignore her as he didn't want her to take his deceased wife ' s place .which itrks her as well that why the hell he marry again if he did not want this .but when he started sharing room.with her they get to spend more time with each other .in starting it was awkward for her as well as she never share room with any male .she feels strange but slowly she start respecting her seeing his gentle man attitude .he never tries to touch her or look at her in bad way .which makes her feel safe around him in there room .she tarted trusting and understanding him .with the time passing the way he take care of her by scolding her and giving lectures .she started liking him and admiring his love for sakshi .she wished that some day he will love her and want her in his life they way he love her .but she never try to replace her .she makes her separate space in his heart .she started loving him and consider his family and home of hers .she felt belong to him .she feels good when people call her mukhyani or Mrs pruvi rangbhindar Singh .she smiles thinking about him but at the same time she is scared to confess her feelings that may be he will not accept her feelings due to his pure love for sakshi but she cannot afford to lose him .she wants him in his life at any cost.she wants to accept him as her wife and make there relationship like normal couples .she wants him to look at her with love and make her feel special .even though she knows that somewhere he also loves her but fails to express but she will keep quiet until he is ready to confess .she wants him to take the first step and lead in there relationship .





So this is it .pls shower love and support .next part is totally based on feedback .dont know you will like it or not .next part will cover some romantic scenes .till then take care .

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi Savira 🤗


Thks for PurVir SS


I guess u wanted to Virendra POV not Raghbir😳


I read it in a fast mode as am in a hurry ...it's beautiful...i ll read it later on at leisure and comment 😃

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Actually thanks for telling me hero 's name is quite difficult unable to remember it properly

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Lovely lovely SS eagerly waiting for the romantic moments as you mentioned. The best thing about it was it's clear descriptions... very well written and described. Please update it.. wanna see Purvir moments

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Hey Savira wht a beautiful start dear ....love both POV ..how they overcome their awkwardness to be friendly, respect and trust each other.


Both are afraid if they ll confess they ll lose each other and they wanna remain friends at least.


I love hw u described each one POV in details...beautifully penned down.


Looking forward to the next part ...do continue soon

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Lovely start Savira

Looking forward to read more

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Nice update n virendar is thinking how purvi become a part of his life n how is become important for his children n he has feeling for her but he is scared of her rejection n purvi have feeling for him but she wants him to take step first n waiting for next update n please pm me too.

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Loved it ❤

It was short and crisp I really like pov style of writing

Pls continue 🙈🙈🙈❤❤❤

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❤️ excellent one Savira💞

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Hey guys I am back again pls hit the button of like and do comment on it request to silent readers as well pls it really helps to motivate



Chapter 1:

It was regular morning in mansion .both purvi and viren were peacefully sleeping in there room .purvi wakes up first on alaram ring .she went to take bath while grabbing her towel and Saree .on the other hand viren was sleeping peacefully on floor with mattress .purvi comes out after taking bath and start drying her hairs with towel .water droplets falls on his face .he feels irritated that who the hell is disturbing him in sleep .without knowing that he is getting disturbed she keeps drying her hair .when he opens his eyes in anger and irritation which soon converted in love .he looks at her she was looking simply breath taking in Saree and drying her hairs .he deeply stares her while putting cushion so that he pretends that he is sleeping .suddenly purvi saw clock and thinks to wake him up .other wise he will be late and scold her .she turns and calls him .he pretends to sleep ignoring her attempts .she came near her and touch his arm and slowly calls him to wake up


Purvi: ap pls uth jayen ap ko late joayega phnachaiyat ka liye dekhen ghari pa time kitna ho gya hai ?? Phir mujhe pa mat gussa karna ka ma late hoa tumhre waja sa




viren: Bawri tume masla kya hai ?? Sone do mujhe sukoon sa abhi time hai bohat ?? Zyda mat bola karo tape recoeder ki trh chalu ho jati ho bus





Purvi: acha theek hai sote rahen ab ma nhi jagaon gi apko ?? Is umar ma insan wese bhi sust ho jata hai ja rhe hon ma juhi aur manas ko jagane





viren:(feels anger that she commented on her age in early morning spoiling his mood he holds her from waist and she landed on her chest he looks at her deeply ) yeh Kya is umar wali baat a jati hai har baat ma koi budhha nhi hon ma agr 2 bache hain mere samjhe har baat pa yehi baat sara mood kharb kar diya mera jao bachon ka pass mere Ksi ko koi fikar nhi hai





Purvi:(she was taking heavy breaths due to there physical proximity and his hold on her waist .she feels shy as he never does this before not even in anger or fun .she quickly runs away by pushing him away from her .)





She went to kids room leaving him angry and irritated .he went to take bath in anger and gets ready for phanachaiyat .she comes in kids room and wakes both of her kids they start teasing her with there cute antics .





Manas:purvi tum Roz hame jaldi jagate ho school ka liye ?? Aj tum na nashte ma mera favorite partha banya hai ???




Juhi : aur mera milk shake bhi purvi?? Aur mere tiffin ma aj mere favorite sabzi bana ka dena sab jalte hain school ma ka tum itna yummy food banate ho




Pruvi:Han Han sb ready Kar dongi mere shaitan bachon tum log jaldi sa jaka fresh ho jao aur ready ho ma kitchen ma jaka tab tak sab dekh lati hon





she left for kitchen and kids gets busy in getting ready for school .she prepares all the things for breakfast and tiffin making sure that she made every single thing which kids ask her to make it .she prepares tea for him .she goes upstair in there room and place tea on table .she calls him but he looks at her and simply ignores her and started drinking his tea making serious face .she feels bad seeing him that he is upset and not talking to her .he instantly drinks tea and went towards bed where his vascoact was kept neatly pressed by her .she comes forward to help him in wearing .but he signals her to stop and wears by his self .she leaves the room feeling bad and went to kids again .she makes them.ready by tieing their shoe laces and combing there hairs .they both gives a tight hug to her at the same time and place kisses on her cheeks making her smile and happy .he was passing from outside when he saw her with kids hugging and kissing her.he smiles and feels proud that she is perfect mother for both and went down .




In hall everyone is doing breakfast .she was serving him as well but he didn't eat anything properly and went to takes hi file .she feels bad that now he is so upset and not even eating properly .she bids good bye to kids and sent them with driver as they were getting late .she comes back in his room .where he was busy reading some file .she calls him but he pays no attention .she again try to gain his attention but all her actions are getting fail .he was loving the feeling that now atleast she is giving him importance that she wants him to talk to her but he decided that this time he will teach her a lesson that now he is her husband and she should give him value and most important her time due to kids and family .she rarely spends time with her and often only comes to serve him meals and tea .he used to like and feels proud on her that she gives so much importance to family .but now he feels irritated with her that she is just busy with family and kids .its like she marry with kids and family instead of him .he puts his file on table and went to panchiyat without talking to her .she feels hurt that what wrong she does that now he is behaving in this way .he Nevers ignore her in 3 months then why now ?? She decided that no matter what she will make him talk to her .she is his wife .how can he behave with her like that ? .she decided in evening she will sort out this matter .





So this it big thanks to those who like and comment 🙏 .next chapter will depend on feedback .hit the button of like and do comments plus forgive mistakes I am not Indian so I don't know the language which they used in show .I used simple Hindi for this story .

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