Sođ as I had suggested, I am starting a combined story topic. As of right now, I was able to get 4 people- me, Nezuko, Shaon and Sri. So I'll kickstart this thread in the hopes that other's will pipe in too, hopefullyđ. Oh, I'll lay out the basics in a nutshell
1. Next writer picks off from where the previous one left and can take the story wherever they wantđ
2. You can incorporate the serial scenes at your own discretion (in case you want to see a particular scene go your wayâ¤ď¸)
3. I'll update the index here so no worries.
Edit- Guys jo bhi agla part post karne wala ho kindly label it an 'Act no.' Example the person posting after me will label it Act 2 and so on. Also kindly nominate yourself first taaki aisa na ho ki do log ek hi scenario prepare karke post kardeinđ
just drop me a dm saying you will be writing the next part and I'll update it on the topic so as to avoid confusion
Index
Act 1 - Crumbling {below}
Act 2 - Disintegrating
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155260063
Act 3 - Sleeping Beauty
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155262353
Act 4 - Rise & shine
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155270406
Act 5 - Divided
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155282928
Act 6 - A beautiful lie
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155315420
Ok, here we go!
Act 1 - Crumbling
(Continued from Episode 25)
âAb aap apni patni ka naam lijiyeâ
Virendra stole a glance at Purvi as she waited. He could not get away with âbawriâ this time.
âKe hua Virendra, bolâ Mama sarkar coerced the man as Virendra nodded.
Seeing mukhiji struggling with voicing out her name, Purvi leaned sideways and murmured, âAapko hamara naam toh yaad hai na?â
He turned to her with a snap as she pulled away quickly, and stole her gaze, then looked back at him.
âNhi, matlabâŚ.hota hai aisaâŚaapki umra mainâŚâ
Virendra felt his eyes widening while Purvi bit her lips to control her grin.
âHamare tauji bhi aiâ
âPurvi Pratap Singhâ ,Virendraâs announcement of her name interrupted Purvi as she snuck a glance at him and found him glaring, and almost instantly turned away, the corner of her lips lifting up in a smile.
'Thankoo tauji!â Purvi blessed her tauji and forwarding her hand held Virendraâs arm as he put aahuti in the havan kund.
âYajman, daan main dene ke liye, sakshi ji ki vastu chahieâ, Pandit asked and Virendra realized that he had forgotten about it.
Nodding, he started to get up when Purvi lightly pressed his arm making him look at her.
âHum le aaenge, aap bata dijiye kahan rakha haiâ
After staring at her for good two beats, he nodded and gave her the directions, as she got up and turning around walked out of the hallway and towards the stairs.
5 minutes later, as Purvi emerged out of her room with Sakshiâs saree in her hands, she went numb and turned around to see a woman ,her gun aimed at Purvi.
Scared, Purvi took a step back. âK..Kon h..ho tum?â Purvi stammered, her eyes looking all over the place for any sort of aid.
Gulping, she took a step back, her eyes trained on the vase on her left side. Almost in reach.
âK-kya bigada h-hai humne tumhara?â And taking another step back, in a flash she caught hold of the vase and flinging it at the woman,turned around and made a dash for stairs when a gunshot echoed.
Instantly, Virendra looked up as the other people started looking around too.
âPurviiii!!â As Sudhaâs cry echoed across the mansion,Virendra left his seat and quickly made a run for stairs, followed by Vaibhav and others.
On seeing Sudha, the cloaked woman started to run but Sudha spared her no chance and flung herself at her, fighting to snatch the pistol.
Arriving on top of staircase, Virendra came to a stand stillas he saw Purvi leaning against the wall, her fingers pressed tightly against the side of her stomach, from where blood was gushing out.
âBawriiiii!â Shouting for her at the top of his lungs, he raced towards her. Purvi looked in his direction and blinked her eyes. She could not quite make it out. Her head was ringing and her consciousness was fading fast. She opened her lips to speak but nothing came out, and then she was falling forward.
In the nick of time, Virendra caught her as her eyes rolled back.
âAe bawriiâ, Virendra called out patting her cheeks, âAankhne khula rakhâŚsunn ri hai naâ.
As Purvi winced, his gaze shifted to the wound on her waist and he brushed his fingers against it, the blood staining them red.
Virendra found his breath stuck, flashbacks of an accident coming to haunt him in this moment.
âAaahâ, Interrupted by a scream Virendra looked up to see Sudha holding her head while a cloaked woman pulled away from her and then his eyes fell on the pistol in her hands. Glowing with fury, he yelled, âPakdo uss aurat ne! Yo bachke naa jani chahiyeâ.
And the men behind him, rushed after the woman. As Purvi winced again, Virendra looked back at her, his fingers trying to put pressure on her wound.
âAe bawriâŚ.tanne kuch na hogaâŚmain hoon..main hoonâ Virendra assured her as Purvi smiled slightly before passing out in his arms.
Scared, Virendra shook her. âBawri? Bawri?!â
âArre gadi nikalo!â Shouting out, he clambered to his feet with her in his arms and turning around rushed down the stairs.
Hospital
As doctors put Purvi on oxygen, Virendra turned away from the glass and struck his fist against the wall.
This was all because of him. Amidst all the security arrangements, someone had sneaked in and with a weapon no less. Today, because of him bawri was in thereâŚand he just..
A tear rolled down his eyes and he clenched his chest tightly.
âVirendraâ, Turning around to his motherâs hand on his shoulders, he wiped his tears away.
As his phone started ringing, he stepped away from his mother and pressed the phone to his ears. With every word, his face steeled and blood dawned in his eyes. And once the call had ended he bolted out of hospital.
Godown
Virendra clenched his fingers tightly as Kallo tai struggled in the grip of his men.
âKyu kiya tanne aisa?â He asked, his throat choking, his head ringing with the mischief bawri had done with him just a few hours ago.
Kallo grinned evilly, âUss mukhiyain ne mujhe jail bheja tha na, ab khud maut ke muh pe khadi haiâ
Virendra gulped, resisting the urge to harm her. No, he couldn't stoop so low but he wasnât going to stand idle either. His face scrunched at the disgusting smile on her face and he nodded at one of his men.
Two minutes later, they showed up and pushed 4 men at Virendraâs feet, a mask on their faces while their hands were tied.
Kalloâs eyes widened as Mukhi started removing the masks. It was her sons!
âAe mukhi, mere beton koâ She had started to threaten him when Virendra beat her to it.
âParole pe chute thhe na, toh apni galti sudharni chahie thi. Je tune mere parivar pe haath dala hi hai toh ab saja bhugat!â Virendra bellowed out as his men dragged her sons and tied them to a pole.
âUdhed do inki khaal aur rukna mat jab tak mukhiyain ko hos naa aa jaeâ, Virendra ordered and turned around to leave when Kallo fell at his feet.
âAisa na kar VirendraâŚMaafi!â She pleaded while he pulled away in disbelief.
âApne beton ki itni chinta aur meri bawri ke sath jo kiya, uska ke?! Yaad karle apne bhagwan ne tai, aur dua kar ki mukhiyain uthe warna tere bĂŞte iss duniya se utth javengeâ.
With that said, he walked out of the godown.
For the next act, I'll nominate Shaon (since she was the first one to agree) but ofcourse that's your choice. Kindly nominate yourself đ by just saying "that you'll be writing the next part". Plijjjjj, koi nominate jaroor karna apne aap kođ
Oh, and do share how did you like my version of epi 26đ
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