PT 6PG9 READ NOW!! FFLove at first Fight

Hey guys i'm starting a new ff ill give yu a story line n frm there tell me if i shud cont or not:

K: o shoot im late i have to get out of here in 15 minutes i shud quickly take a shower

goes to take a shower while

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R: i have to gt in the suite in 15 minutes

gets out off the car goes into the hotel

Check In:

Z: hi my name is Zohra how may I help you?

R: umm i need the key to suite 17 plz

Z: ranbir ryt

R: yepp

Z: ok just sign here plz

he signs n gets the keys walks from the stairs n is on his way to the suite

meanwhile.

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K: Omg the guys gonna b here for his suite i better hurry up

Ranbir enters the suite n sees the suite clean n decides to go to the washroom and freshen up

kanya is coming out of the washroom with a towel around her at the same time as ranbir is walking in rannu openes the door walks in and sees kanya (donnu who she is) and slips on teh wet floor, taking kanya down with him ranbir on top of kanya and kanya in towel

whtsgonna happen

so wht do yu think?

great intro
kinda of like Maid in Manhattan with JLo
plzz continue soon 😊

Nice start
Sounds interestin
Plzzzzz continue

Hey nice one
Plz cont. soon 😊

👏 great start!!please continue soon!!

soundz interestin....pls cont soooon....pls pls pls pls plsss....lol 😛

👏 👏 👏 aww thats a gr8 intro plz continue soon!

sounds interesting... pls continue soon

good intro...it sounds good

plz cont soon 😊

ok recap : ranbir enters his suite and drops on kanya

R: o srry im relli srry

K: srry my foot get off get off

R: yea yea

K: who the hell r u

R: the guy who booked this suite and yu r

K: Im gone!!!
packs her stuff and leaves the suites.. in her towel

everyone starts laughing at her then she realized she was still in the towel she goes bak to the suite n tries opening the door to the bathroom but it was locked rannu was in it so she decides to change in teh suite he'll probably take long freshning up anyways so she starts to change her clothes while she is rannu see's her back and the towel was covering her waist and he keeps on satring and staring then shes abt to turn around rannu goes bak in the washroom... she leaves she goes outside and calls her house and her mom said taht she has to stay in the hotel for another day cuz their to busy in preperations for her proposal the family that proposed are coming tommorow until then stay there she tells her (kanya believes in love marriage and her boyfriend proposed to her a month ago his family came from england to see kanya n fix teh date of teh ceremonies) kanya agreed to her mom and goes to the check in desk and asks for booking a auite the people said theres none available and you cant leave the hotel becuz there's been a serious winter storm... Kanya gets mad and goes bak to her suite and knocks on the door...

K: hi... uummm may i stay with yu for 1 day in this suite

wht will rannu say????