FF- How We Fell In Luv! part7/pg10 4/26

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi, guys im new in this forum (as u can tell cause im a newbie😆) and i got inspired from all the ff here so i thought ill try it and lets see wat happens!

Don't kill me and if u dont like it tell me honestly, ill stop😆! Everything in (parenthesis) are my personal thoughts!

TABLE OF CONTENTS

PART 1: PAGE 1

PART 2: PAGE 2

PART 3: PAGE 5

PART 4: PAGE 7

PART 5: PAGE 8

PART 6: PAGE 9

PART 7: PAGE 10

PART ONE

Ok its starts rite after April 2nd episode where Ranbir is about to kiss Kanya😳

(Dont kill me for this) Ranbir starts to walk closer and to Kanya. He leans forward when just then Shanta tai cums running towards them (😭)!

S=shanta tai

R=ranbir

K=kanya

C=chunno (chunnu watever the new guys name is)

P=pammi da mummi (😆)

A=anand

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S= hey saand tu kya karne wala tha meri kanya ke saath?

R=oye pulo ki dukan, me kuch nahi karne wala tha. Sunna ab sub ne, mein kuch nahi karne walla tha. (hes still drunk by the way)

P=acha acha damad ji, Kanya beta inko undar le ga, isne kuch zyada hi pe lahi hai🤔

K=acha mom! thinking= is saand ko itne kyun pe ne the. paagal meri holi he karab karde bas thode hi minutes left the. 😡 (by the way its evening now so in 30 min everyone was going to leave anyway so kanya did have a good time throughout the day so she isnt tooo mad!)

P= chunnu kanya ke madad kar do na, damad ji ko under legane mein.

C= ji aunty

Kanya and Chunnu hold Ranbir by the arm and take him inside. Kanya and Chunnu help ranbir onto the bed.

C= (Low whisper) oye yeah ranbir to kamal ka nikla, kam karne hi walla tha or per jab shanta tai came to apne ap ko kaise bachaliya isne, very smart man.

K= tumne kuch kaha, kanya was lookin for clean clothes to wear so she was in her own thoughts as to what she shud wear.

C= nahi to kuch to nahi. acha ab mein chalta hoon aur tum apna or jiju ka khayal rakna. Mein sabke madad kar ne ja raho clean up ke liye.

K= ok ima gonna change and see if this idiot can come back to senses and change😆

C=ok bye see u later!

K= k bye

Now kanya and ranbir are all alone in thier room. Kanya goes to take a shower and change. She is wearing a plain shalwar kameez that u wud wear if u needed to go to sleep. She tries to wake ranbir up but he wont so she puts her wet hair on his face and sees if he will wake up.

R= (still half intoxicated) kya hai sone do na kanya wats wrong with u!

K= ranbir get up and change then u can sleep all u want

R= fine fine fine, and why r u here, go with ur chunnu!

K= i noe he is my chunnu but ur intoxicated so i needed to come in here with u so u can get cleaned up

R= ur gonna help me get cleaned up😆

K= eww no! u know what i mean, now cum on get ready

R=wat if i dont want to (seductive voice)

K= hey, stop flirtin with me and go get changed, hopefully after u take a shower ull be less intoxicated! Now Go! and she pushes him into the bathroom.

Now kanya is blow dryin her hair and now that she is dun, she hears the shower go off. (By the way guys, there is a bathroom in their room i noe there isnt one in the one in the show but i need it so the scene can be romantic, just keep readin😉)

R= oye kanya yahan pe towel nahi hai, zara de do na

K= acha baba, hold up

R= Jilde karo na

K= han han .......

She gives him the towel and their hands touch. ranbir cant believe how smooth her hands are and they have an eye lock😳

R= arey kanya yeh tumhare balaon ko kya huha hain?

K= oh i was blow dryin it, lekin tumhe tumhara towel chayeh tha to maine comb nahi kiya. and by the way, it looks better than urs😆

She goes to comb her hair and wen she turns around.....................

Wat will happen? Plz tell me wat u guys think its my first time and my languages collide a bit. If u didnt understand anything plz post it and ill answer it asap.

AND THE BIGGEST QUESTION: SHUD I CONTINUE?

i wont continue until i get atleast 10 comments. Hope u liked it!

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KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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me first yay....aw thats cute... pls do continue...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was great.
so do con't soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was gr8,
continue soon
and welcome to india forums
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haha! Ur demanding comments like me..😆😆 Well, Welcome to the KIT forum btw! It is an excellent Fan-Fic.. Continue!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ye its soo good plz write more =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great FF! plzz continue
and i loved how chunnu called ranbir jiju 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank You guys, i really appreciate that u like my fanfic! Heres a personal thanks to all who posted their comments:

KC294: thank you so much and by the way i luv radio rankan and to love or not to love. im totally ur fan! plz update soon!

rkath: thanks ill cont soon!

sam78: thanks ill cont soon!

*rankan*: thank u so much 4 da welcome and likin my ff!

suganain: omg im like ur fan! i luv ur ffs! especially Pyar kiya to darna kya! thank u soo much!

sejal719: thanks so much and ill continue soon!

punjabi.princes: thanks ill cont soon! ill try to make it funnier!

26javey26: thank you!

Kiran_1: thanks and ill cont soon!

kamna: thank you!

AND THANKS TO ALL THE SILENT READERS BUT PLZ POST UR COMMENTS WITH SUGGESTIONS SO THIS FF CAN BE GR8! I WOULD LUV TO HEAR EM!

ok guys im going to write one and post it soon. Hopefull itll be here by today!

Edited by ZaraCZaara - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok guys itll be posted momentarily stay tuned 😉 !
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah continue soon.. it is excellent................cant wait for the next part.

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