AshNi + OC FF: Love is all you need - Page 41

Originally posted by: Veni-Vidi-Vici

Seems fine. You please add Ashu's perspective too when updates about the wedding are written

Yes I have something like that in mind. Maybe the wedding episodes, maybe after. Let’s see how it evolves

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

So the next update will take a while coming, it's been super busy at work and home, and I haven't even started writing it yet. 🤔

I wanted your feedback regarding the format of this fic: the alternating PoVs with Nidhi's PoV in between. Is it making sense? Is the story flowing well without seeming too confusing? Is it getting repetitive, are events being alluded to too often?

Would appreciate your thoughts on this! Thank you! 😳

It is good...it is meeting other objective as well...

Both Sara and Ryan are going through dark phase of life and Nidhi's POV is giving that brightness to the story...👏

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

So the next update will take a while coming, it's been super busy at work and home, and I haven't even started writing it yet. 🤔

I wanted your feedback regarding the format of this fic: the alternating PoVs with Nidhi's PoV in between. Is it making sense? Is the story flowing well without seeming too confusing? Is it getting repetitive, are events being alluded to too often?

Would appreciate your thoughts on this! Thank you! 😳

Take care of your work....relax and write when you are in good mood....

My job is still there or you finished it??? 😛

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

Yes I have something like that in mind. Maybe the wedding episodes, maybe after. Let’s see how it evolves

If am in Ashu's place.....would be like.....what kind of family i got....this sister of mine is more moody than me....i had to put more effort here to bond with them....

Papa and Brother are fine....want to see how they bond with Ashu and vice versa...

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Take care of your work....relax and write when you are in good mood....

My job is still there or you finished it??? 😛

Ha ha we raked once and then it got snowed in!! 🤡 We thought that was it for raking this season but now the ice has thawed and we might have to rake again! 🤪
Crazy crazy Canadian weather!

Originally posted by: Anjani9

If am in Ashu's place.....would be like.....what kind of family i got....this sister of mine is more moody than me....i had to put more effort here to bond with them....

Papa and Brother are fine....want to see how they bond with Ashu and vice versa...

Well, Ashu should be grateful he even has a family that wants anything to do with him!! After he alienated his mom for years, even after she tried so hard to reach out to him! He really was a stubborn ass, so let him work a bit now to bond with his sister! It’s the least he can do!!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

Ha ha we raked once and then it got snowed in!! 🤡 We thought that was it for raking this season but now the ice has thawed and we might have to rake again! 🤪
Crazy crazy Canadian weather!

I got a chance to visit CapeTown for a week....

Before the visit, my opinion was SA was very backward....

But the moment I landed there, I had realized i have landed on one of the most beautiful places on Earth....

Just posted Part One of Chapter 13: Ryan's POV.

I will come back to you after reading again...😊

The update is amazing, you have dealt with so many close relations, Jai's care for sister, good get-together between friends, admiration of Sara for Ryan, Ryan's integrity....👏