FF : Tere bin na lage Mera Mann. Chapter 62 updated 23/02 pg: 78 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

618

Views

44.6k

Users

20

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

suryavni thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Wonderful chapter, masti, nok jhok and kitchen romance

Lol mami’s hotstar superstar wahan bhi Garam Sitara😆

Oh so mischievous Mishti and badmash Abir deliberately taught mami incorrect engliss 😆

Naughty boy and girl achhi Jodi hai 😳

And Mishti put the entire blame on Abir 😈

So now it’s Mishti teacher?😆

I’m glad that Mishti or Abir didn’t go to the outing with the others, they had some alone time in the empty house

Kitchen scene koffee hawt and romantic tha ☺️

Abir in white shirt with buttons open and messy hair

Mishti’s heartbeats out of control❤️

These two are so intensely aware of each other, yet talk and behave normally as if nothing is happening inside

Abir in white Kurta with wet hair holding Mishti at the sink, koffee 🔥 scene hai! 😍

Khichdi is their favorite, did Abir pretend all these years to hate khichdi because it reminded him of Mishti?

Kunal is definitely showing too much interest in Mishti now, he better stay away from future Bhabhi😡

Uh oh Kuhu is getting jealous of Mishti, kahin wo negative na ban jaye
Meenu doesn’t like Kunal showing interest in Mishti that’s good!👍

Raksha Bandhan per Meenu Mishti Se Kunal ke haath per Rakhi bandhwa le buss aur kuch nahin chahiye😆

Why is Abir apprehensive about Raksha Bandhan? 😕

Thanks for the update and the PM

Will be waiting for next chapter.


Thank you dear ❤️

I truly enjoy your analysis 🤗

I hope my ability to write romance hasn't dwindled yet...😁

Thanks for the hawt comment..

Do continue to support and comment

❣️

suryavni thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you all for your Views Likes and Comments

❣️

This show had won all our hearts in this short one and half years...

It's heartbreaking to say adieu to the characters whom we daily saw smiling crying and cracking jokes..

But 2020 is taking away yrhpk too from as keeping it's trend of taking away the precious things in this world..

I hope I can provide a reprieve through this FF.. although it is not related to yrhpk storyline..

Do comment

It's a big motivation to me... other wise I too would be sulking....



~~ Tere bin na lage Mera Mann~~

Chapter 29



Mishty closed her ears to the repeating Tok Tok noice on her door...by pulling over the duvet to her head...


But it's persistence ..irritated her first and then suddenly her thoughts ran to something happening to Badimaa..


She jumped out of the bed and started to the door but stopped as she realized that the sound is coming from the balcony...


She looked at the time..5:30 AM..


Cautiously she went to the door and opened it..

"Kunal..!!!"


Kunal rushed into her room.. noticably agitated..


" Yeh Kya Kunal...tum..itni subh..tum raat ko soya bhi nahi Kya...itna upset kyun ho..."


Mishty asked in dismay...


Kunal didn't reply..

"Kunal...Sab kuch theek hei na... everything alright?..."


Mishty was now getting scared too seeing his reluctance...


" Kuch all right nahi hai...when you hear what I am going to say you also will be knocked out..."


Mishty frowned.....


"Kunal ...saafsaaf batao na..mujhe itni jaldi utha Diya aur suspense pe suspense de rahe ho......tell me...now!"


Kunal pulled her to the bed and made her sit, placing himself beside her....


" Kal raat mein Abir Bhai ke room mein Gaya toh woh wahaan nahi tha...neeche study mein light dikhi toh mein udhar gaya..."


"Kunal tum yeh sab....kya keh rahe ho..?? ismein upset honewaali Kya baat hein..?"


Mishty asked exasperatedly..


" Mishty..! Maine Badimaa aur Abir Bhai ko baat karthe hue suna...,"


Mishty kinda jumped with happiness..


" Sach...Abir aur Chotima..baat Kar rahe the...yeh toh good news Hein...aur tum mooh latkake suna rahe ho...ho Kya Gaya Hain tujhe..?"


Mishty still couldn't understand why kunal was upset..


Kunal took a deep breath..

" Woh donon raksha bandhan ke baare mein baat Kar rahe the ...aaj Ghar mein raksha bandhan ki rasam hoga.."


Mishty's face lit up in happiness....."so Chotimaa ma is celebrating Raksha bandhan for Koslu Mamu... aur ketki bhi...wow!! I am sooo happy...."


But seeing Kunal''s sulking face.....she frowned again.....


"But why are you making a face ....? Itni Khushi ki mauka Hein ..Sab tayyariyaan dekhne ko milegi...it's fun na?!"


"Oh! Mishty..tum kyun nahi samajh Rahi..

Unke rasam Tak theek Hain..haan ketu ko bhi mujhe aur Bhai ko raakhi baandhna theek Hein.. lekin..mujhe lagtha hai tumse aur Kuhu see bhi humein rakhi baandne ko kaha jaayega... "


Mishty's face ashened .


She never thought about that aspect..


Abir ..Abir as her ...rakhi brother..


" Abir ne Kya bolaa..."


Mishty asked mechanically..


Kunal who was irritated as such didn't notice her change of tone..


" Bhai haa hi bolega na...Nihaal Bhai family ke saath as rahe Hein aur Awasthis bhi.."


Mishty's mind was churning...

She didn't mind tying rakhi to Kunal.. ....


But ....Abir...


Never...

She can't cheat a sacred relation like that,....


Kunal looked at her face.

"Dekha I told you....you will be knocked out.....!"

Kunal went on saying some more things....


"Kunal...we need to escape....!"


Mishty said without much thinking......her focus upon something invisible in front of her eyes....


"Ow... Mishty ..exactly...!!! Mujhe pata tha ki tum samjhoge ..! That's why I came to you...!"


Kunal slipped onto his knees in front of Mishty. his face lit with happiness and excitement....


"But how..hum yahaan se kaise..?"


Mishty asked desperately...


" Tum jaldi fresh hojao aur change karlo...hum pehle yahaan see niklenge...mein Sam se keh deta Hoon ki hum donon rehearsals ke liye jaa rahe Hein...badimaa aarti ke time pe yeh baat hum subse kehne wali Hain Shayad... Bhai kuch Ulta na Kare isliye unse pehle kaha hoga.."


Kunal said and Mishty nodded in agreement.....


" Tum theek keh rahe ho... Chotimaa ne abhi Tak kuch bhi nahi kahaa..and thanks Kunal...tum nahi batate toh..."


"Haan jaantha Hoon...Abir Bhai aur mujhe rakhi bhi bandhthe..aur bro bro kehke peeche hi aate.."

Kunal looked at Mishty with happy glint in his eyes seeing the spark returning to her's as well....



******



Abir rubbed his blood shot eyes...


He couldn't even wink his eyes for a second...


Once he closed them her smiling face swarmed before him...


Maa wants rakhshabandhan...and the way she talked about Massima getting comfort in knowing that her daughters life being secure..


By forging a brother sister relationship ..???!!!


Even if she didn't say that as such..she always considered Mishty as her daughter and of course she would want her tied to the family...


His thoughts went back to the study last night..


****


He stood in the study assimilating the meaning of the words uttered by his mom..when a hand touched his shoulder..


"Nanko...tum soya nahi abhi Tak.."


Kunal's face was withdrawn and he did need any guesses that his Nanko did hear what his Maa said to him...


And the reason for his shadowed face..


" Bhai..woh badimaa..." Kunal stopped short..


He brought a smile to his face and said to Kunal..


" Woh raksha bandhan celebration Haina..Sab keliye gifts Lena hai ..tum batao..ketu ko Kya chahiye hoga..abhi..itni jaldi decide karna hai..Mark se help Lena padega.."


"Kethu... Mishty...Kuhu"


Kunal said absently..not accepting the fact..


Abir's heart wrenched at the pain he was experiencing and the pain his Nanko was going through .


" Chal..ab sone jaao...mujhe thoda aur kaam Hain ...tum jao .."


He was not sure he could remain sane for how long and blurt the question to Nanko..

" Do you love Mishty..?"

Even framing that question in his brain was taking his sanity away...


*****


Abir paced in his room restlessly..


He could not hold himself together at the double blow .


He would have to accept her as his sister...


If what he was suspecting turned out to be true his Nanko would need him by his side judging from the disapproval he saw in Meenakshi's eyes today..

To accept her as his sister in-law..


His alarm rang startling him and in his desperation he was not able to shut it down at one touch..


He threw it hard on the stairs to his loft...


The clock shattered into pieces..


The rage welling up inside him at his helplessness needed a vent and this action temporarily quieted him down...


Abir sat on the bed gathering himself.. schooling himself that he needs to do what has to be done and if he has to see Mishty as his sister and live with heartbreak ...then so be it..!


****


As Abir left his room for aarti...his eyes automatically flew to her door... expecting a look at her before everything was going to change...


He went downstairs to the mandir ...


Lit the thaali and took it to Rajshri...


Rajshri was seated up and she smiled at Abir..

" Beta...aaj tum laye ho aarti.."


But then she took notice of his eyes..


" Kya baat hai Abir...itna thake kyun ho...kuch pareshani Hain Kya beta.."


Abir put on his smiling face..


" Woh thoda zyaada derTak kaam Kiya Kal raat...theek see sone bhi nahi paaya... that's all Massima..aap batayiye ki aap better feel kar rahe Hein ya nahi?"


" Mein bohot behethar feel Kar Raha Hoon..

Abiir... Mishty...Mishty ne kaha ki tum humare Ghar bechne ki idea se sehmath Hain...Kya tumhein lagtha hai ki woh sahi decision Hain..?"


Her voice trailed but Abir noticed the hope flickering in his Massima's eyes..


" Woh Mishty ke liye right decision Hain Massima.,"


Abir said as he watched the flicker die....


" Lekin aap keliye nahi...Kya aap ek secret rakh sakthi ho apni beti see?"


" Secret? Tum Kya karnewale ho.. Abir.. Jo bhi Kar rahe ho..Mishty se chipana aasaan nahi hoga.."


Rajshri looked confused...


" Maine abhi se woh property book karke rakha hai Massima...jab woh market mein aayega toh one of our holdings will buy it..aap bas yeh baat Mishty se kabhi mat kahiyega..it will hurt her ..."


Rajshri slowly pressed Abir's arm .. agreeing to his request but not in a state to respond otherwise due to her emotions...


" Abir Bro....Sach!!!?"


Kuhu came in swiftly and looked at Abir in disbelief..!


Abir shook his head sideways and kept his finger on his lips...


" Not a word .Kuhu...and promise me you'll just erase this thing from your memory..I repeat..Not a word.."


Kuhu cupped her mouth with both hands and nodded with wide eyes...


Slowly she removed her hands and a big smile formed...


" Kunal sahi keh Raha tha..aap toh Mishty se kuch zyada hi darne lage Hain..."


"Chup Karo Kuhu... Mishty aajayegi.."


Rajshri rebuked Kuhu...as Abir took a short breath...


" Waise Mishty kahaan gayi...? Maine Socha woh aap ki pass Hain ..room mein ya hall mein toh nahi Hain...aapne use dekha Kya bro..?"


Kuhu asked Abir and saw his face change slightly...


" Nahi...umm..tum Kunal ko dekha Kya?"


Kuhu's face too changed a bit as she signalled a no...


"Massima hum aarti karne jaaoo...chal Kuhu.."


Abir stood up and signalled Kuhu to join him..intenting to quiz her..


But all were present in the hall...

Mishty and Kunal conspicuously absent..!

Abir felt the chain of thorn winding around his heart tighten...


****


At Arti Meenakshi's eyes searched Mishty...


Parul looked around to see Kunal..


Then both looked at each other with a slightly worried look..


Abir even though suffocating in the realization that Kunal somehow took Mishty away...he noticed the dreaded exchange between them..


Just as aarti finished Parul asked Abir..

" Kunal kaha Gaya Abir..mujhe bataya nahi.. tumhein batake Gaya Hain Kya..Aur Mishty bhi dikhayi nahi de Rahi..?'


" Y..yes Massi...I..I forgot..Kunal ka rehearsals chal Raha hai...Kal raat woh Bata Raha tha...

Mishty..?...

Kuhu..tumhe pata hoga na..?"


His subtle head movement prompted Kuhu to lie..


" Use jaldi college jaana tha..Bol Rahi thi ki Kunal use chodegi.."


Meenakshi didn't look convinced but she called Parul..


" Koi nahin Parul..Bache apne apne kaam ke liye Gaye Hain...hum breakfast ke baad rakhshabandhan ki tayyariyaan shuru karthe Hain..."


Abir turned to the hall taking out his phone and tracking Kunal and Mishty..

Just then Kunal's message popped up..


" Bunking whole day... Mishty is with me..sambhalna Bhai... ketki se kehna ki mein uskeliye gift laane Wala Hoon..chidna mat ..okay.."


Abir closed the app and drew a sharp breath...as his eyes met with Kuhu he silently mouthed a thanks...


****


Nidhi Parul Kethu all started the preparations for rakhshabandhan and thalis were kept with tilak ,chaval and beautiful rakhkis...


The pandit performed the Pooja as all sat on mats spread on the floor.. finally he did the solemnization of the thaalis ...


Meenakshi looked at Kaushal and he nodded ..


He got up and took a thaali and walked into Rajshri's room.. Meenakshii and Parul too followed..


Abir was surprised at this as he too got up to follow them...

He saw Rajshri seated on the bed and Kaushal sitting beside her ..


With a beaming face Rajshri applied Tika on Kaushal's forhead and sprinkled chaval on him..with effort she tied rakhi on the outstretched arm in front of her..


" Aaj se mein poori tarah se aapka Bhai Hoon..Aur jitna bhi haq is rishthe mein hai woh mein jataoonga... aapka har zimmedari abse Meri Hui.."


Rajshri could only nod ...her eyes brimming in tears of happiness...

Meenakshi hugged her as Parul wiped her tears..


" Mere liye ek aur nanand...!!! "

Nidhi Maami.. mumbled as she put on a happy face ..


Abir too had tears in his eyes as Meenakshi's words last night made perfect sense to him...


All returned back to mandir .

Meenakshi and Parul tied Rakhi on Kaushal..

Ketki took the thaali and did the rasm for Abir ..


Kuhu looked on forlonely at the relations being celebrated ... truly feeling the void in her life ..a brothers protection..


As Ketki finished tieing Rakhi to Abir ..Kuhu asked him impulsively...


" Abir bro..Kya mein bhi aapko Rakhi baand sakthi hoo?.."


Abir looked at her in a happy surprise..


" Woh.. Mishty ka kehne ko ek Bhai hai...haan yeh Sach Hein ki woh usse Mila nahi..kabhi..par Haina..! Lekin Mera koi Bhai nahi Hain..Kya aap mujhe apna behn maan sakthe ho?"


Meenakshi came to Kuhu .....


" Kyun nahi beta...waise tum toh ise bro hi bulate ho...Aur aise dekha jaaye toh yeh tumhara haq Hain...Haina Bapuji..?"

Nanu nodded serenely and signalled Abir to comply...


Abir nodded and Kuhu happily tied Rakhi to him..


" Mishty bhi hoti toh acha hota na di."

Parul looked at Meenakshii..who nodded absently already thinking the same..


******



Kunal sat beside Mishty on the leisure bench in her campus..


Mishty''s face was clouded with apprehension..


" Kunal...Sab humein dhoond rahe honge na.. Chotimaa agar badimaa see poochengi toh woh bhi tension mein aajayegi.."


Kunal turned to her ..


" No tension ...Maine Bhai ko message Kar Diya hai..ki hum saath Hein...baaki woh sambhaal lega..."


Just then Mishty''s phone pinged with incoming message..


" Kuhu ka message.."


She hurriedly opened it and her mouth automatically opened in awe...


Kuhu had sent pics and video of her tying Rakhi to Abir..!!


Seeing her expression Kunal took the phone and looked at the photo...


" Thank God we escaped..!!" He muttered.


Mishty was in another world..


Till now her only focus was on to avoid Abir ..to escape from committing a sin.. according to her ...

But when she actually had to see the pics of Kuhu tying Rakhi to Abir...it made her realize the profoundness of the custom..


" Mishty.. kahaan kho Gaye ho.. achanak se..acha..tum yeh celebration miss toh nahi Kar Rahi..?"


"Kunal... tumhein pata hai na ki Mera bhi ek Bhai Hain....lekin aaj Tak Maine use Rakhi nahi baandha Hain...woh to door ..main us se Mila bhi nahi Hoon...Kal ko woh mere saamne aayega toh bhi mein recognize nahi Kar paayegi.."


Mishty... wiped off the lone tear that escaped her eye..


Kunal felt bad for making Mishty remind of her loss...


"Tum apni brother ko miss Kar rahe ho...??

Toh tum Ghar pe ruk jaati na... just that I forgot what this mean for girls.....you guys get gifts from your bros....ah..!! and I must say Abir Bhai is an ever generous Bhai....!"


Abir's name brought her back to reality...


" Shut up Kunal...mujhe uski koi bhi gift nahi chahiye...abhi Ghar mein mehmaan Hoon...itna hi kaafi Hain...ab Rakhi bandhne see pehle hi big brother ka attitude sehna pad Raha hai mujhe....you know how I hate that...!

Aur ab Jo civil ..umm okay friendly relation Haina woh hi theek Hain.."



"Okay okay.. don't attack me .. tumhein bhook lag Rahi Hain Shayad..chal coffee and breakfast time..!


After finishing breakfast they walked back...

Mishty noticed a stall selling hand-made rakhis ...


" New York mein rakhshabandhan itna famous Hein Kya ..?"


She asked Kunal..


" Hmm..it's kinda brothers day here too... even Americans take fancy of this custom...unke liye aisa koi celebration nahi Hein na...! Moreover many Indian families are here... students too..ek baar Sofie mere peeche bhaagi thi..Rakhi baandne keliye...I won't forget how I saved myself.."


Mishty laughed at his antics as they walked past it..


"Tumhein Rakhi see itni problem kyun hai Kunal...Maine poocha nahi ki tum itne pareshaan kyun tha,...waise Kethu tujhe miss karega na??!"


Mishty's question made Kunal a bit uneasy..


" Tum batao tum Kyu aayi mere saath..?"


He answered with a return question..


Mishty flustered a bit but answered firmly..


" Tumhare Abir Bhai ko Abir bro kehna Kuhu ko ab acha lagegi...I don't want anyone in my life to have the licence to smother me with a big brother attitude...and I have first hand experience how irritating he can get..."


" You two...tum donon na kisike bhi samajh ke baahar ho.."


Kunal said off handedly..


" Acha bachu...sawal mera aur jawab bhi Mera.."


Mishty looked at him sternly but seeing his evasiveness she decided to press..


" Batao ab...tum thoda zaroorath see zyaada pareshaan tha ...is baat ko leke ki rakhshabandhan hone Wala Hein...baat Kya hein Kunal..?"


Kunal rubbed his hands together..


Preparing himself to say about the feelings which he was going through in the last few days...


"Mishty tum ek dum se react mat karna...just let me say and let it sink properly...phir mooh kholna....and no physical attack... agreed?"


He said these slowly raising his hands as a sign of submission...


Mishty's brows pinched in confusion but she nodded nonetheless.


" Ummm.. Mishty jab se hum mile ho...bachpan se I felt a good connection to you...and even if we didn't meet for years you have been there in my mind as my friend...and then the most amazing thing happened . you came back into our lives.."


He paused ... taking a deep breath... mustering courage..


Mishty looked at Kunal weirdly..


" And you were just like that ..and we picked up just as we were...you were understanding ..we had the same wavelength...aaj bhi dekho you are my partner in crime.."


" Hey.. Kunal...itna buildup kyun de rahe ho...mujhe bohot Ajeeb lag Rahi hain.."


Mishty said impatiently.


"Sun na...you are my best friend ever...and I..i.want you to be the first person to know when I feel something for someone.."


Mishty.. opened her mouth in awe..! Then Sprang up looking irritated at Kunal..


" Eww...are you kinda shipping us together... tumne woh boyfriend waali baat ko thoda zyaada seriously liya Kya??! no way ..!!."


Before Mishty could complete Kunal's demeanor changed to confusion...then refusal..


" Double eewwww...Maine kab tumhare aur mere bare mein kaha..??? Kya mein tujhe gay lagtha Hoon ...??!"


Mishty looked at him perplexed..


"FYI...itne der se toh tum hum donon ki baat hi tho Kar rahe the na...

And what do mean ki tum gay nahi ho.?..."


She kept both her hands oh hips..


Kunal eyed her stature...


"Isiliye toh...I never felt I have a girl as friend...tomboy kahinki..!"


" Okay okay ab Meri baat chodo...main baath batao..toh yeh saara buildup isiliye Hain ki tujhe Pyaar ho Gaya Hein..!!!!

OMG...Kunal in love..!"


Mishty clapped her hands in Joy and sat beside Kunal as he blushed ..


" Mishty... Mishty...Pyaar ..love..it's big...abhi I like her...and I don't know how to tell her...mein uske saamne jaate hi.. distraction dhoond Leta Hoon.. I try to avoid us being in the same room.... because of the fear of letting her know about my feelings..and her reaction...if she doesn't see me that way... you get it na?"


" So you want my help.isliye itna bada friendship ki misaall de rahe the ....you should let her Know na..ab tum bataoge ya jataoge nahi toh woh kaise samjhegi...by the way kab Mila rahe ho mujhe us se..?"


Kunal stood up and took a few steps away from Mishty..,


" This is the hardest part.... Mishty..Maine pehle kaha tha ki react karne se pehle sochna...

Umm..tum jaanti ho use..."


" Mein tumhare # like ko jaanti Hoon..umm..... Sofia... OMG..nonono.. Kunal..are you sure.?


Kunal rolled his eyes upward...


" Sofia nahi Mishty..umm..#...."


" Toh Bata Dena kaun Hain...."


Mishty said exasperatedly....but then it dawned to her...and she looked Kunal in his eyes shocked as he said

" Kuhu...!!"


*****



Abir looked around feeling a bit relieved..


In one way what Kunal did was the best for him too...


If Mishty was here then she too would be tying Rakhi to him..


And that would have sealed their fate forever..


His phone rang..

" Sir..I have arranged gifts and they are on the way..as per your specifications.."

" Thanks Mark...do hold the fort for an hour..I will be there soon.."

" Okay Sir"


Ketki came to him smilingly..


"Bhai...aap Kya gift karne wale ho mujhe...?"


" Thodi see toh wait Kar sakthi hai na.."


As he said that Sam came in with the box send by Mark..


" Lo Tera gift aagaya.."

Sam opened up the box and Abir took out two gifts out already labelled by Mark..


" Keep the box in my room Sam.. upstairs."

Abir directed and Sam nodded as he took away the box...


" Kuhu...aajao...bro Wala pehla gift lelo.."


Kethu called out for Kuhu who was giving a helping hand to Parul in arranging delicacies for the guests..


"Yeh lo Kethu sethu..."

Abir gave her giftwrapped cover which Kethu opened in no time..

" Oh my...Bhai...Gucci....!! Oh God...you are the loveliest Bhai in the world.."

Kethu jumped up and down in joy with the Bloom's print shoulder bag and gave a tight hug to Abir..

All looked at her happiness smiling at each other..


" Kuhu...I don't know your favorites yet .. therefore I bought you same as Kethu..being a fashionista and all..."


Kuhu smiled openly and hugged Abir...


" Well bro...this time I am not going OTT over the gift...I got you as my bro .. that's the #best gift ever for me...and Gucci never ever will disappoint me.so yay..!..thank you.."


Kethu was still in awe of her gift ...

"Papa Papa ."

She searched for Kaushal from the hall entry.

" Woh baahar hoga Kethu.."

Nidhi Maami called out to her..

Kethu turned and ran outside but crashed on to a person..his arms holding her from falling down..

******


Hope you all enjoyed the twist..

Do tell me how you liked this..did I made it boring or you were interested till the end..

Please comment

🤗

Mii5 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

First of all a big 🤗🤗 for making Kunal n Kuhu as a pair....I am relieved....💃💃💃 Thank God

I thoroughly enjoyed Mishti's antics with Kunal... enjoyed reading the story...

So is it doctor who has come home and saved Kethu from the fall.....????

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Thank you

Sumaiya27 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

Omg thanks for another lovely update 🤗


Kunal likes KUHU? I'm so relieved...this calls for a party 🥳


Thank you kunal for taking mishti away from the RB..but why did he take mishti if he was scared of tying rakhi ti kuhu? He could've just ran away by himself right? So is he lying about liking kuhu?


Oooh did ketki bump into varun? Is varun mishti's brother? so much suspense omg!!


Looking forward to the next update 😎

pallavi25 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome Chapter! ❤️

First of all PHEW! A big sigh of RELIEF! Kunal loves KUHU and not Mishti! Thank You! 😆🤗
Mujhey itni tension ho rahi thi ke ab Kunal confess Karne wala hai and Mish will beat him up 😆

Gay wali feeling 😆 Matlab all along Kunal considered Mishti as his tomboy friend, not girlfriend 🥳

Now Abir ka Rasta saaf, Gadheda samjhega kab?

I hope Mishti brings him into her confidence and ask his help to bring KuKu together just like in the show, Unka help karte karte Abir Mishti ka bhi Ishq Parwan chadhega 😳

The night before poor Abir couldn’t sleep at the thought of getting rakhi tied by Mishti, I can understand his anguish at the very thought!

Kunal also had sleepless night fearing same about Kuhu

Mishti ke bhi hosh udd Gaye Rakhi ka sunkar, they made a great plan of running away to avoid Rakhi 😆

Why was Meenu trying to get MishKu tie Rakhis on the two boys? Doesn’t she want them paired up?

Mishti has a brother from her mom Karishma? Wow, that’s a nice touch, maybe he will appear in the story now?

Wow Abir gave Gucci bags to Ketu and Kuhu but anyway he’s loaded. So his plan was to buy BM’s apartment anonymously and keep it safe for the girls future. But if they marry the RJV boys they won’t need it naa....

Oh did Ketu crash into Nihaal? Is Ketu to be paired with Nihaal?
Now I can guess what your prologue meant, the baby and Mrs Rajvansh at the hospital.
Thanks for the lovely update and your PM, please continue soon.

You’re so right, 2020 also ended our serial, one more victim of this terrible year!


Edited by pallavi25 - 5 years ago
Hello2020 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Such a big relief...I was really worried ki krunal kahi mish ko ilu na bol de... First time when I read the chapter..Maine woh part chhod diya tha...But second time badi himmat kar k padha.....And he loves kuhu....Ow.. Great yaar... Otherwise I thought he loved mish...Now please do something about r mishbir......And I thought meenu was thinking about their alliance...But it's a twist...She wants misht to tie rakhi to my boy ..No...And ketki...In whose arms... Neil or doc

suryavni thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you all for your Views Likes and Comments

❣️❣️

Well..

Here it is..


~~Tere bin na lage Mera Mann~~



Chapter 30




Mishty sat dumbstruck as Kuhu's name echoed in her ears..


Her palms cupped her mouth in a shock..


Kunal could not bear to see her like that..he sat on his knees beside her..


" Mishty...I am sorry... Mujhe tumhein aise Bata Dena nahi chahiye tha...I understand..she is your sister..but you are my best friend too na..use kuch pata nahi Hain...agar tum abhi mujhe ek chata maroge toh bhi chalega....aise..aise silent mat raho...."


Mishty was trying to understand how she missed what was just before her eyes..


The way Kunal cared for Kuhu from the beginning....

the way he included her in all his activities... planning Abir's birthday decor.. jogging sessions..

OMG the total attention to Kuhu's emotions during Badimaa's surgery..

His eagerness to take the responsibility of Kuhu for college admissions.

And lately. The way Kunal behaving around her when Kuhu was also there...!!


Kunal was waiting for her response with his worried face..


Mishty took off her specs to rub her eyes and put on the specs back..


Her face hardening all the way..

And Kunal's heart sank deep seeing her change..


" Toh yeh Sab kab se chal Raha tha tumhare dimaag mein...?? Seriously Kunal...? We live with you ..in your home...and you have such intensions for my sister..?.."


Kunal started to say something but Mishty stopped him.


"No no no.. tumhein Jo kehna tha Maine sunliya...and you told me to react after thinking through..right...so now I will speak and you will listen..

Tumhein andaza bhi hai ki tum Kya keh rahe ho...Ghar mein kisiko pata chal Gaya is bare mein toh socha hai Kya hoga?..

Parul Massi toh...ya tujhe Ghar se nikaalega ya humein...Kuhu is bare mein jaanti hai ya nahi...yeh toh koi poochega bhi nahi..usko discredit Kiya jaayega..Kya tumne yeh Sab Socha hai??"


Kunal sat back on his knees ..his head hanging .. shaking his head dejectedly..


" And what about future..Tum corporate law karne wale ho na... tumhein idea bhi hai ki kitna hard work karna padtha Hein.. even to clear all the papers in the first attempt..? Tum independently apne businesses ko help karna chahtha tha.. Abir ko help karna chahtha tha..Sab kaise hoga agar tum....aise .."


Mishty waved her hands pointing out the silliness of his action..and looked intently at Kunal..who was sitting still now.


" And on top of that ..you were intentionally parading the boyfriend jokes in front of me to get a reaction from her na...I can't believe you just used our friendship like that..."


That snapped Kunal from his submissive attitude with which he was taking in whatever Mishty was saying..


" Mishty..you can't say that..you Know me..I know that ..and I am not a complicated person..you get what you see...and at that time I was not looking for her response but sheilding mine with your help..you didn't take that seriously then and even now you said it to rile me up right..?"


Mishty nodded slightly but maintained her Stern face..


" As of the way you said intensions...Kya yaar...I haven't even flirted with her even innocently as I do with you...I don't know what gharwale will do when they get to know my feelings...but I don't fear them...I haven't shared this even with Abir Bhai... though I do have an idea how he will react..."


Mishty bit her lips at Kunal's mention of Abir's reaction....she could imagine it all too clearly...!


"I never thought I had feelings for her that matttered this much...until last night... when I heard Badimaa talk about rakhshabandhan...then.. I feared only about your response...I care really about your response..and see I am risking my chances even to explore if there is anything between me and Kuhu by telling this to you ryt...coz you know for sure I won't if you have an iota of disagreement with this.."


Now Mishty could clearly see that Kunal was in the same predicament as she herself is...


"Toh tum yeh Sab batanekeliye mujhe Ghar se le aaya..Kya?"

She asked him candidly..


"Mujhe pehle Ghar se nikalna tha ..phir laga agar akele chale Gaye toh wapas aake bohot dant padega..ya Badimaa phone karke wapas aane ko bolegi..tum saath ho toh badimaa kuch nahi bolegi na?.."


Mishty smacked him hard on the shoulder..


" Are .. tum marna mat...I also knew you doesn't want to bring Abir Bhai that close to you..remember?..you had that problem with him from the beginning...and tell me..who said first about escaping rakhshabandhan?"


Mishty stood there without an answer..

Kunal looked at her intently..


" Mishty you haven't said anything about umm Kuhu....I know it's...."


" Kunal...are you sure...yeh humara rishtha badalne Wala decision hoga...Aur Kuhu ka Kya stand hai? Use tumhare bare mein Kya khayal hai...yeh Sab toh..pata lagana Hain na..."


Mishty said already thinking about the pros and cons..


The next moment she was on air...Kunal had picked her up and spinning her around..


" Areee...put me down.. Kunal..yeh Kya Kar rahe ho...OMG sub log dekh rahe Hain..neeche utaaro.."


Mishty hit him on his shoulders lightly as Kunal released her from his hold..


" Pata hai Mishty.. first time jab Maine Kuhu ko dekha na...then I thought she was you and twirled her like that..."


Kunal was ecstatic on getting the green signal from Mishty..


" Zyaada Udo mat... Maine okay nahi ki hai abhi Tak.....bade jaldi hein khayali pulav khaane ki...pehle hum donon ke baat karthe Hain..."


Kunal got a bit fizzled out..

" Hum donon ka Kya..?"


" Seriously..tum iss baar mujhe granted nahi le sakthe ho Kunal...if you want my help it comes with conditions attached.."


" Are mein law padne Wala Hoon tu degree kabse Lee negotiation mein...acha Bol.. condition accepted."

Mishty corrected him..

" Conditions as in plural.."

" Uh..okay..boldo .."


******


Kethki pinched her eyes shut in fear..

Someone was holding her..

Not her Papa...

Nor Abir Bhai...

Nihaal on the other hand , though slightly winded at the clash.. looked at the girl who held on to him ..


"Kethu..tujhe lagi toh nahi..? Thanks yaar.."


Abir tried to relieve Ketki off Nihaal..but as she put her left leg down she winced in pain..


" I think she sprained her ankle..mein bhi help kartha Hoon.."

Nihaal said .


Both of them guided Kethu to the sofa and Kuhu made her put up her leg..


" Wah Kethu..tujhe toh leg sprain hua nahi is se pehle doctor bhi aa Gaya..!"

Abir tried to cheer her up..as Nihaal bent down to look at her ankle..


Nidhi and Kaushal too reached the hall by this time..


Kethu was flustered by the fact that she collided with a stranger..and that person was now holding her ankle... pressing slightly to see where was she hurt..


" Aww...mamma..."


She cried out as Nihaal pressed at her ankle.at the pain point.


" Kuhu get me some ice pack..mein baandh deta Hoon Aur kuch analgesic medicine hoga mere pass .."


Kuhu nodded and went off to get as Parul and Meenakshii too joined them with Nihaal's Parents..


Kethu was looking at Nihaal secretly...and as he straightened ... their eyes met..she immediately looked away.. slightly blushing..


Nihaal too was perplexed at the impact this girl was having on him...

But as Abir thanked him he brushed off the instinctual feelings ..


Kuhu and Nidhi helped Kethu to slowly climb the steps and go to her room to take the medicine and rest..


Nihaal's father was Rajvansh's personal physician.. especially taking care of Nanu's health over the years..and his mom too was a personal friend of Meenakshi and Parul..


" Well it's been a good long time Bapuji... touchwood..lekin I am happy to see that you are looking good..."

Dr. Pratap Saxena said jovially..and nanu smiled..

" Sab bimaariyaan mujhse darthe Honge...aakhir is jawaan see panga kaun lega!??"


All laughed at his comments as Bharti Saxena.. turned to Meenakshii with a questioning look towards the stairs...

Bharti was pointing at Kuhu and Kethu..and Meenakshii understood her confusion..

"Bharti..Kya tum kethki ko bhool gayi..Koslu ki beti..usi ko chot lagi Hain..Aur Nidhi ki saath Kuhu Hein.. Rajshri ki doosri beti..."

Bharti nodded smilingly... keeping her questions to herself understanding Meenakshi's tone..


" I would like to visit Rajshri aunty if you'll excuse me.."

Nihaal got up from the gathering as Abir too followed suit...

" Hum aate Hein ..aap batein kijiye..."

Sam had by then came With refreshments for everyone..


****


After visiting Rajshri ... Abir took Nihaal to his patio..


"Yaar kitne din hue aise Tere Ghar aaye hue...ek time that jab meenu aunty extra pillows bhej deta Tere room mein mereliye.."


Nihaal said reminiscing..


"Aaj Kaisa time nikala tu ne?..I thought you were busy and uncle aunty hi aanewale Hein.."


Abir asked as he sat on a gazebo..


Nihaal looked at Abir intently for a moment..then acting casual...


" Mishty dikhi nahi..? .. kitchen mein bhi nahi thi...woh mein thoda personal time lene ka decision liya hein...of course I am on call..umm tumne bataya nahin.. Mishty..?"


Abir's already bruised heart had started throbbing at the resonance of her name..


Ab isko bhi Mishty se milna Hein...!


"Hmm..She went to college...!"


Abir said in a sour tone...


" Ab phirse jhagda hua Kya...tujhe Rakhi baandh ke hi toh Gayi hogi na...dikhao..yup..2 rakhis...2 sisters..phir tera shakal aisa kyun hein"


Abir's desperation was climbing notch by notch..


"Yaar..bas Kar..kuch nahi hua Hein..can we talk about something else...."


" Aree Maine aisa Kya pooch liya... okay fine.. leave it.."


Nihaal raised his hands in mock submission..


"Aur haan..she was not here for rakhshabandhan . She went early.. with Kunal.."


Abir said answering Nihaal's question..as if he couldn't stop thinking about her..


"You wanted to change the topic and now you are going on about her...acha tohh woh tumhein Rakhi nahi baandha isliye uim gussa ho... understandable.."


Nihaal's eyes shrewdly observed the flickering hurt in Abir's eyes and understood that whatever the reason...his friend is in pain..

Just as he decided to drop all the pretence and ask Abir openly Kuhu came to them bringing Neil with her..


" Abir bro..yeh apko pooch rahe the.. toh mein le aaya..


Nihaal suddenly asked Kuhu..

"Ketki...? She is okay na..?..there will be a little swelling...you should keep her leg elevated.. should I come and check?"

" Nahi.. doctor Saab.. kethu is resting..and pair jaise aapne kaha waisa hi rakha Hein...pills liye Hein..pain bhi Kam ho Rahi Hein..."

Kuhu smiled at Nihaal's concern..


Abir too was calm after hearing this exchange as he greeted Neil..


" Surprise ... even I didn't think I'd be here.."

Neil responded to Abir's I didn't expect you comment..

" But Piya was adamant that I give you this message personally.."

Kuhu smiled at Abir knowingly .


"I will send some refreshments Abir bro.."

and allowing them privacy she retreated.


" Nihaal tum Neil se mile Hein na.?"

Abir turned to Nihaal..

" Why not..we met once or twice.. college days."

Nihaal shook hands with Neil..

" Doctor...suits you man!"

Neil gave Nihaal a congratulatory hug..


" You were giving some personal message.."

Nihaal too tried to give space but Neil laughed out...


" Waisa Wala koi personal nahi Hein.. actually dhamki mujhe di gayi Hain ki that I should convince you to take you back to Toronto.."


Abir was now thinking that this would be a chance to leave home...

Leave her behind..

Leave the pain behind and learn to live with reality..


" Hmm..I will call her and make arrangements for my stay there..she is right..if we didn't finish the project in the stipulated time we are going to run into complications with many.."


Abir said in a determined voice..


" Toh tu..jaa Raha hein.I mean..sab yahaan Hein na..abhi.."

Nihaal feebly tried to change Abir's mind..


"Kunal hei na..woh San sambhaal lega...!"


The trio then talked about Neil's upcoming fashion week..and Nihaal's odd and OTT experiences for a while before finishing up the refreshments and joining others..


Nirmala looked happy at seeing Abir but went on about Piya being away and alone..


Neil looked at Abir and rolled his eyes..


Just then Abir got a call from Mark...and after attending his eyes went to Nanu.


" I got to go to office..excuse me.."


He left others and walked towards his room in a hurry..


His mind was churning at the info but as he reached his room his eyes fell on the box Sam had kept there...

His eyes lingered on it ...


******


Mishty came back just an hour after Abir left for the Office...


She met with Saxena's and Nirmala..in the hall along with Meenakshii , Kaushal and Nanu.


As she met Rajshri she found her badimaa overjoyed as she shared what transpired in the morning..

Mishty too was emotional at hearing her Badimaa's childish happiness..


Parul came to her and enquired about Kunal..

" Woh Massi uska rehearsals...mujhe college chodke woh Chala Gaya.. after noon classes nahi tha toh mein jaldi aagayi...woh Shayad college mein hi hoga.."

Mishty said feeling contrite on lying..


" Usko batake jaana chahiye tha mujhe...kitna acha din tha.."

Parul berated Kunal..

Mishty asked about Kuhu and Kethu and then she got to know about Kethu's minor mishap..


As she heard about Kethu.. Mishty went upto her room..


To her surprise she saw Nihaal and Neil sprawled out on the Sofa entertaining a bedridden Kethu along with ,Kuhu and Nidhi Maami..


" Mishty tum aa gayi..?!"

Kuhu slid off the bed as Mishty acknowledged the men with a smile and went to Kethu..


" Zyaada toh nahi lagi na..?"

She asked Kethu...to which Kethu shook her head..


Mishty looked at Nihaal..


" She seems okay Mishty..but let me know tomorrow morning about the swelling and pain..."


" Okay..Kethu .. lucky girl...gir gayi... sprain hua .. doctor ke saamne hi..'


Mishty joked..

Kuhu giggled..

"Saamne nahi Mishty...#baahoen mein... Oops."


Kuhu cupped her mouth and looked at Nidhi Maami...who frowned a bit..


Kethu blushed all the way and Nihaal was finding that endearing...and surprised at himself..


Mishty too laughed at Kethu's reaction....but stopped as she noticed Neil staring at her..


Sam came in and informed that downstairs all were waiting for them to join..


Mishty and Kuhu both offered to stay with Kethu but she said she was fine and will sleep a bit..


Nihaal smiled at her and took leave along with Nidhi Maami and Kuhu.


" Mishty..!"

Neil.. stopped her in the corridor as Mishty was joining them.


" I need to talk to you...!"

The sense of urgency in his voice intrigued Mishty.


****


Later in the hall...

Bharti smiled at Meenakshii as she saw Mishty coming down with Nihaal and others..


Meenakshi's eyes too were glued to Mishty....


Pratap took Nanu's aashirwad and Nihaal too followed suit..


All took leave after pleasantries...


Mishty was tired and troubled by the events from the morning...


And what was Neil going to tell her before Kuhu called her , going on and on with Abir's gift and his urgency to go to the office..

" Varna bro toh poora din hum sab ke saath rehthe..!"


She looked at the business card he placed on her hand...

"Eve & Tal.."

She looked at it again and carefully kept it in her purse..

She definitely needed to cool down...


After freshening up she came out towelling and stopped short near her study table..


A beautifully wrapped thin box was placed on the table..

With a folded note on it...

Her fingers slowly slid along the wrap towards the note...


Opening the folds slowly...


Her heart beat increased as she recognized the doodle at the bottom..


AMR


"Har rishtey Dil se bante Hein...

Har Nate Dil se judthe Hein..

Lekin jis rishthey mein dosthi Hein..

Woh rishtha har waqt saath nibhaata Hein..

Ek tohfa dosti ke naam...Aur ek waada bhi dosti ke naam.."


AMR


Abir ki gift..!


Then it dawned her that he brought it to give it to her as Rakhi gift...

Her sigh encompassed her supressed emotions..


Mishty ran her fingers along the initials...her love for him brimming in her whole being..


She looked at the box ...got up and opened up carefully...


A Laptop?.Dell XPS...!!


She powered it on and was again surprised to see her smiling face look at her as the wallpaper..


Her pic which Abir took the day they went to Central Park..!


He did this before he went to office..??? Kuhu said Abir was in a hurry and still..


She clicked the folder named "Yaadein"..


and her past came live in front of her ...

Her eyes filled with unshed tears ..

Her lips smiling .. reliving the moments..

pics of Abir as a boy... and herself .


Image

(Pic credit Twitter)



" Bhai ne mujhse yeh sab pics digitalize karke bhejne ko bola tha..


Kethu's voice from the door made Mishty rub her eyes with her towel.. and turn..


Kuhu had supported Kethu and both came in..


" Yeh bore ho Rahi thi ek hi position mein rehke..Aur mujhe toh tujhe interrogate karna Hein.."


Kuhu said as she and Mishty helped to settle Kethu on the bed..


" Aise Bina bataye Tum gayi kahaan..?.. Abir bro ne situation sambhaal nahi kiye hote na.. Dadi bhi Shayad khabra jaati.... Abir bro bhi tension mein tha jab Tak Kunal ka message nahi aaya."


Mishty felt bad hearing about Abir's tension..par Kya karthe...he doesn't have an inkling what she was going through..


She tried to be nonchalant..


" Haan..jab mein nikla..Kunal bhi ready tha ...use bataya toh woh mujhe college Tak chodne aaya...woh wapas nahin aaya?.."


Mishty said innocently...now looking for any indication of Kuhu's response at Kunal's mention..


" Woh duffer kahinka...seedha rehearsals keliye Gaya hoga aur abhi Tak lauta nahin..

Well.. Mishty uski baat chodo...Kethu ko kuch poochna Hain..."


Mishty scrunched her eyes as Kuhu addressed Kunal as duffer..and intently asked Kuhu..


" Chodoo...Kya ..Kunal ki baat..?..okay..Bol Kethu Kya poochna Hein.."


" Kuch bhi nahi Mishty..yeh Kuhu aise hi...


" Kuhu aise hi...!..Kuhu ki toh kaan Paka Rahi thi doctor doctor.. doctor.."


Mishty laughed at Kuhu's imitation..


" Acha Dr .Nihaal ke bare mein?.he is your Abir bhai's friend na...jab woh aayega unhi see pooch Lena.."


Mishty said mischievously to Kethu..


" Bhai se Kya poochna...nahi..mujhe kuch nahi jaanna...ooh.."


As she bit her lips in pain Mishty said.

" Mein aur ice pack leke aati Hoon.."


" Tada.."

Just as she was going to get up from the sofa..Kunal came in with ice packs..

" At your service ma'am..!"


" Aree Kethu sethu...Maine aaj Tumse khoob Bhai seva kervane ka soch Raha tha aur tumne sab plan chopat kardiya.."


Kunal dangled a Rakhi in front of Kethu..


"Mujhe aapse baat nahin karni..."


Kethu turned away as Kuhu silently put the ice packs in place..


" Ab gift bhi nahi chahiye...theek Hain..."

Kunal acted as if he is going..


" Bhai...it's okay...Rakhi dedo..mein baandh deti Hoon..."

Kunal extended his arm..


" Are..aapko kisi aur ne bhi Rakhi baandhi hai Kya.."


Kethu looked at the already tied band on his wrist..


" Woh college mein .. Sofia hei na.. Mishty ki friend..usne thodi zabardasthi karke baand liya"

He said sheepishly...


Kethu tied Rakhi and Kunal looked at Mishty..


She smiled and took a gift box from her bag..and passed over to Kunal..


"Wow..!.. jewelry..!! Thanks Bhai... Mishty ki selection Hein Kya.. it's beautiful.."


Kunal sat on the arm of the sofa beside Mishty...

" Beautiful gift for a beautiful sis by a beautiful GF... right.."


He leaned on to her to murmer something to Mishty ..


Kuhu was observing the two under her lashes..

Something has changed between them...


Both had a glow of happiness in them as they chatted on... ignoring Kethu and herself...


The tugging at her heart was becoming unbearable as Kunal said Girlfriend..


" Kunal Bhai...Kya chal Raha hein...hum se bhi toh share Karo...."


Kethu asked suspiciously..


" It's a secret Kethu Sethu... between me and Mishty..let it be.."


He looked at Kuhu and smiled...she was stunned for a moment ..then made a face at him.....


*****


Later

Abir hasn't come home yet ...


At dinner Meenakshii asked Mishty why she went early..and she dodged her by giving her debate excuse...


Kethu was asleep in Mishty''s room ...


Mishty changed into her nightwear and got into bed to sleep...


But Kuhu's words echoed in her mind..


Abir bro bhi tension mein tha...

But he didn't message or try to call her...!

She was evading him...for her own reason..


But Abir...


Woh aaj ki harkat se naaraz toh nahi hua?


She sat up and slid out of the bed ...


A restlessness engulfing her..as she stood holding the balcony railings..


She haven't seen him the whole day...!


And he gifted her a thoughtful gift with precious memories...


Mishty noticed the headlight shimmering on her side of garden and her heart beat increased..

Abir was home.


*****


Abir went straight to his room.


All had retired for sleep ..only Sam waiting up for him..


After a cold shower Abir changed into his cargo shorts and a t-shirt..


His mind was as if it was trapped inside the eye of a storm...

The information coming from Rajkot was disturbing..

But what disturbed him most was Mishty''s behavior...

He admired her straightforwardness..

But today..she didn't even thought of informing him ..or message...


He had been checking the tracking app at regular intervals..and found her going back home alone just some time after he reached office...Kunal was seen heading to his college..


Abir felt relieved at the same time guilty at keeping an eye on them...


Then he was thrown into the mire of business..


Mark had at times taken care of his food but his appetite was dead...and he had instructed Sam to bring him sandwiches and hot milk...


He need to rest and tomorrow he was off to Toronto.

Away from her... it's better if he didn't see her before going... Shayad jaa na paoonga...


He berated his heart as he climbed the stairs to his loft with his laptop..


The sanctuary for his troubled mind...


As he uncovered the canvas..he heard a knock on his door..


" It's open Sam.. keep it there..I'll have it later."


He eyed the canvas with nostalgia...and opened the laptop for that pic..


Ab nahi.. !! Aur nahi...!!


He closed the laptop and covered the canvas....put on his headset and took his guitar...


*****


Mishty heard the gentle strumming of the guitar as she slowly took to the stairs to the loft...


When she reached the point where her eye level could see loft layout she stopped to lookout for Abir...


He was sitting by the bay window ..


A calming tune floating around from the guitar..


Even from the distance she could see the worry lines and tiredness on his face..

She moved up holding his tray she took from Sam when she intercepted him on his way to Abir's room.



Abir sensed her .... though he didn't see her..


Something bleak welled up inside him...


Feeling desperate at the power her thoughts had on his heart ,mind and will power..


His anger at himself made him to stop strumming abruptly and put away the guitar a bit rudely on to the Divan.. followed by the headset..


His realization that his feelings were on point collided with his physical sense of seeing her in front of him...

Holding a covered tray and flask..


" Tum!??"


Abir stood dumbstruck for a second letting it sink in that Mishty was actually standing before him..


He then hurriedly went to her and took the tray from her hands and kept them on the reading table..


"Tum..soyi nahi ..? Yeh sub. Sam Kar lete na..tum kyun....."


Abir said consciously avoiding looking at her and eying his canvas surreptitiously..


Mishty stood there taking in the view in front of her ...


His hair was wet ...and his presence was giving her the much delighted light headedness...


But she also noticed that he was not looking at her..and stood there silently..

At last he turned towards her but still..not looking at her..


" Okay..tum naaraz ho ..?"


Mishty asked as she moved to him..

Abir moved away.. picking up his headset and fidgeting with it..



His one look at her had shattered all his resolve to be away from her..


Her guileless eyes sparkling under her specs..


Her silky hair now kissing her bare shoulder..


And the sensuousness she exuded even in a simple nightdress...



" Abir ..Abir .."

She came to him and he turned away...


But her hand on his arm halted his move..


" I know you are angry...You brought a gift for me and I ..umm..was not there...."


She paused as he half-heartedly turned to her .

" I..I just wanted to thank you for the gift and our..our memories..."


The way she said our memories tugged his heart..


" No need to thank me Mishty...it was a friendly gift...but haan...a little bit confused as to why you didn't tell me yesterday.. about going out early... even I could have dropped you on my way to work.."


Abir tried to ask her in a roundabout way why she bunked the ceremony..


Mishty was the one fidgeting now..


For life she could not tell him the truth ..and she couldn't lie at his face too..


" Umm..I didn't want to disturb anyone..."


She tried to evade his scrutiny..


" Tum khana Khao..baitho.."


Mishty poured out the milk to his cup and kept the sandwiches before him..


Abir's face hardened at her evasion..she was definitely hiding something and she thinks he is unaware of that...


" Mein kha loonga...tum jao..mujhe kuch tayyariyaan karna Hein.. tomorrow I am going to Toronto.."


He said moving to the wall shelf library.. browsing through them and selecting one by one...


Mishty''s heart sank ..

Abir is going to Toronto..!


" Umm.. you'll be coming back soon na...I.."


She thought of something to talk... something to hold him back...

" Umm.. about Greenville..I haven't talked to Chotimaa yet...if I get her permission too..I would need your help.."


Abir's temper was hanging by a thread and it was starting to fray...

So it's just her convenience she is worried about when it's not even a concern...she just don't care if he is here or not..


His palm fisted involuntarily..

The books slipped from his hand and both of them rushed at the same time bending down to take them..


"Ouch.."

"Ooh.."


Their forheads collided and both of them sat on their knees on the rug.. rubbing their head. ..asking simultaneously...


"Tum theek ho?"

" Tumhein lagi toh nahi..?"


Mishty shaked her head indicating she was okay.and adjusted her specs..


Abir stretched his hand across to her forhead rubbing slightly...


Tears rushed into her eyes..

Not because of any physical pain but because of his tenderness and the fact that he was leaving..


" Tum bohot buri tarah jhoot bolti ho...aansu bhi aagaye Aur kehthi Hain ki tum okay ho.."


Abir rubbed his fingers gently and Mishty held herself from breaking down in front of him....


" Mein theek Hoon...tum umm..apna.."


She rubbed away her tears silently thanking God for the excuse for spilling them over..and pointed to the reddish bruising appearing on his forehead..


" It's nothin...Kal Tak sab theek..ho jaayega"


Both collected the books and got up ..and an intrigued Mishty asked...

" Tum kab Tak vapas aaoge..?!"


Before Abir could answer he heard Kunal..


" Bhai aap top mein ho!?"


Abir's face changed ..as he looked at Mishty who reacted to Kunal's voice with a .warm smile....

" Mujhe aapse kuch baat karna Hein..."

Kunal paused as he came up and saw Mishty with Abir...

He looked at her confused ..eye signalling her asking if she told Bhai his truth...

Mishty shaked her head in negative..and raised her brows at him questioningly... asking if he was there to tell Abir ... despite their talk in the morning...

Kunal scrunched his face sheepishly..at Mishty..

" Tum soyi nahi ab tak.."

" Woh mein Abir ko thank you kehne aayi thi.gift keliye.."


" Aur Mera thank you kidhar hein..."

Kunal asked jokingly and Mishty smiled at him knowingly..and returned his joke..

"Tumhein bhi thanks milega...for the lifelong memorable durable gift...".


He smiled openly and then turned to Abir..


" Bhai..Piya...mujhe bula Rahi Hein aadhi raat ko... where is your phone..she says you are not attending..Aur aap Kal Toronto jaa rahe hein??...Piya ne bataya mujhe ki woh aap donon keliye ek superb apartment rent Kiya Hein... Bhai..! Are you serious about her..?.. Badimaa is gonna hit the roof..!"



Mishty felt her whole world shaking at Kunal's words..and The moment he announced that Abir and Piya will be together she was hearing strange woosh in her ears....nothing entered her mind except the dark despair...and she literally backed away from Abir......winded... losing balance at doing so .


" Mishty...sambhalke...Kya hua "


Kunal supported her and she tried to smile..


"Nothing..just the rug caught my slippers.."



Abir who was noticing the silent exchanges between Kunal and Mishty.. his focus entirely on their banter ... which was innocent but with some inner meaning....


He didn't hear what Kunal said as he was glued to her warm demeanor directed at Kunal..


His hands shot out as Mishty was about to fall ,but fisted and took it back seeing Kunal's attention to Mishty...and the way she held on to him...


Unbeknownst to him...he found himself saying..


" Well.. I asked her to find a perfect place for us...and if Maa has a problem...it's her problem... I can't help that.."


Abir could never anticipate the profound effect of the verbal acknowledgement of his and Piya's relationship on Mishty...


It was getting difficult for her to breath as she saw the determination on his face .


"Tum donon baatein Karo..I am feeling sleepy.."


Mishty turned ..not bothering about their reply..and alighted the stairs....


Her heart breaking into million pieces..but somehow still held together tenuously... allowing her to live....


His eyes followed her.. knowing for sure that something definite changed between them,.

But not knowing that he was responsible...



The update is crappy..

I am angry at Mishbir and put off writing many times...

Then decided to torture both..!

Wicked me.!

Do give honest Comments...

And wait for the next update...


pallavi25 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks for the long, detailed update and for the pm!

My guess was right, a cute romance starting between Nihaal and Ketu 🤗

Good, Ketu should have a love story too!

Was Mishti really upset that Kunal love for Kuhu will complicate family relationships?

But then what about her feelings for Abir? Will she always hide it and pretend they’re just friends in order to keep their families happy?

I don’t like Mishbir friendzoning EO when their feelings are anything but platonic 😳

Wahan the adults are in their own world, Meenu and Nihaal’s mom planning to hook up Mish with him while Ketu and Nihaal ka romance is budding

I wish Mish had advised Kunal to tell Abir about him and Kuhu, phir Abir’s misunderstanding would end.

Awww Abir gifted her a laptop and added their childhood pics to Memories album 😆

Lol Those childhood pics from twitter...so adorable 😍

Did he paint Mishti’s portrait and hiding it in the loft?

The loft scene was intense, so much repressed passion! The tension between them is stretching to a breaking point. Kab tootega Sabr ka baandh?

Oh God, this Piya and Abir staying with her in Toronto. Please Abir don’t go, Mishti’s heart will break into pieces.

Yahan Neil is targeting Mishti as his next prey? 😰

I hope both Mishbir run miles away from that brother sister duo 😡

It’s not a crappy part but drama is building up in the story with multiple characters having their own tangents. But please Abir ko Toronto jaane mat dena, Mish ke saath Humara bhi Dil toot jayega 😭

Don’t think about the Mishbir in current episodes, think about your Mishbir, the innocent, raw, organic souls that are longing for each other but social norms and family ties are stopping them from confessing.❤️

Please continue...

Sumaiya27 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

First of all, thank you for the PM 🤗


I'm very happy for kuhu and kunal 😃


Please kunal stop playing with kuhu's emotions and tell her. It's so hard to see mishbir and kuhu going through all the pain, especially mishbir 💔


Thank you for pairing nihaal with ketki 😃


This neil-piya duo aren't upto any good..let's see. I hope abir doesn't go to toronto (even though that's my city 😆)


Mishbir please confess already 🥺


Can't wait for the next part!

Mii5 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

It was a good chapter.


Wish Abhir doesn't go to Toronto 🤞and stay with Piya....


Thank you for the lengthy update and PM...


Awaiting for the next part ☺️

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".