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Chapter 5 "Revelation of Past"


"Five for Night stay"! Four for meal and six for Water"!


"That's so mean we can caught cold first let us in"! Then we will accelt the deal"!..


"Eight for medical aid"!..


"You're growing greedy"! Is this the way to do bussiness"?..


"Pay then get a way"!..


Jalal stared at Amir scoffing inwardly, then back at Kanika, who has pointed out how much gold coin they needs to pay, for being allowed inside the hut, ofcourse things aren't free that to in the deep forest, the cold rain was still pouring heavily wetting them gravely. She was standing on the Entrance not letting them in, with Sword pointed towards them, nodding they took out the Small pouch counting the coins offer 15 to her, then only she moved aside, upon stepping in they saw the change in Hut, a thread was tied inside parting the hut in three portion, and Black color Cloth was drapped over it, his gaze fall on Radha (Jodha) who has lighted some wood to warm the cloths, And she has change into comfortable black Tunic brown trouser tucked under brown color turban. Counting the coins Kanika put them in the wooden box she started talking to Radha who just pointed towards the ingredients kept for cooking. Nodding Kanika move to cook they talk so slowly he both men didn't Gets to hear a thing. Glancing at each other they moved towards the rest of portion one was to change, other was to sleep. Sighing they pick their own cloth to change into comfortable one. While changing he thought about her, "Radha"!. Hm beautiful name, so you're not the one"? Or you are"? You can't be angel of death I'm sure, the Angel of death live like non-existent creature. But you make a living out here in forest,

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Veer, hm so he's isn't the one I thought he's"? Or they're really the one I thought they're"? If young prince was coming here he will come with army, not alone in disguise. Or he will"? To know our strategy our weaknesses to strike on us again"? I needs to know who he's but how"? One thing is sure he's not commoner he's warrior his swiftness his strength his skill speak of his warrior shrewd personality. And his looks, thinking about his look she glqnced at his way laying on the Dry grass temporarily make shift bed. So calm and extremely hot, having one hand over the Dagger on his side, other over the head, eyes closed lips parted a little, The calmness of moon is nothing infront of his sleeping figure, yet she didn't dare to get lost in the calmness he provide just by sleeping.her ear perk up over the conversation going on behind her at distance in hut corner.


"You're warrior"? No trader"!..


"No we are former Soldier cum Trader now"!. He's Veer Singh and you know me already"!..


"Former Soldier cum Trader Or a spy Sujan Singh"?...Are you here to spy"? "For King Abul Shah is he intrested ti ruin our state again"?..


"No"! "His majesty is just concern about our Sovereignty here"!. "None of our troop able to make out of here safely"! But we aren't here on his words"!.


"Yes that's because of Angel of Death"!."she rule the Forest here"!.."keep tab over the passages or every path lead out of Amer for people"!. Though we don't support her but we definitely adore her"! For protecting us serving us Justice"!


"Angel of Death"?..I has heard about her she's merciless"!.kill our troop leave no trace of their existence behind"!. What you mean by protecting and serving Justice"?..


"She's known as Angel of death for reason"! No one knows her real name or saw her face"!. she's like Air"! Which exists but can't be Caged or challenged"!. The Tyrant Subedar Adham Khan"!.. he exploit the people here"!. His army does the same"!.


What a Acting Kanika, thought Radha (Jodha) inwardly, as she glanced at the laying men, the sight of fingers being curled and uncurled was clearly stating he's listening the conversation to. You will know the things we want you to know"! Impersonator Veer Singh (Jalal) nothing more nothing less"!. where's Sujan Singh (Amir) thought about what he heard he glance back at His friend and thought about the the clench curled up fisted hand made him realize the mere mentioned of Adham angered him. He glance at the Girl Radha, she was leaning over the wall sitting on muddy floor, with closed eyes but she wasn't sleeping. So Adham Khan exploitating the people here, where's the angel of death is rebel, people doesn't support her in fear of Adham khan but they definitely adore her. Surely they will if they get help they will rely on her.


"Your friend seems expert in weapon"!..


"Not only she all women's are here expert in weaponry skill"!. Not to wage a war but to protect their Honor"!..After what happen with Royal family our Princess we all were"!..


The voice grown shaking, as Kanika started sniffing, Sujan glance at her and didn't knew how to comfort her, any other case he would have held the hands or hug the people to comfort them, but she's girl who isn't welcoming towards such a gesture coming from stranger men. Helplessly Sighing he Bow his head down in sadness closed his eyes recalling the day everything was ruined.


"Jalal"! Let's go"! "Adham Khan has returned"! His majesty has called for us in court"!..


Reaching inside the room , snatching the glass of wine from him, he try to Shake the young prince to get reply from him in sobber state, but Jalal being Jalal refused to pay heed to him though he answer in low tone with grim smile on face, he hasn't stepped out from his room from the past week.


"I don't want to"!..what I will do there when whatever's I say fall in deaf ears"? He's damn going to marry her"? "Her"! leaving all the people out there he wants to wed queen of my heart"!.. and I even being crown prince could do nothing"!.


Picking his dress out, he forward a dry cloth as well water bowl, taking little amount of water on hand palm he splash once twice then thrice feeling little sobber he took the dry cloth to wipe his face. As Aamir offer him glass of Lemon juice mix warm water. And replied to have him reason why he should attend the court meeting.


"He's isn't marrying her"! The way I saw him approaching the court I think somthing wrong happen"!. Perhaps he face rejection"!..


"Rejection"? Huh that's to good to be true why king Bharmal will reject him"? As father he love her, as king he know what's better for his state, is it possible he value her opinion more than my father value mine"? Is it possible she declined and"?.. he trailed off on his thought a smile made on his face, as he wore his dress Check his appearance once in Mirror than walked out to attend the court and heard the words of his father king Abul Shah.


"I don't think"!. King Bharmal could do this"!.. he agree to sign peace treaty"! Organized feast to celebrate our friendship"!.. why he will insult us"?..


Greeting his father and everyone he silently goes to sit on his place, The voice of King Abul Shah sitting on throne echo's in the grandeur hall, as he faced the Scholar Khwaja Moin standing with sheer embarssement on face, And Adham Khan who were seething in rage. As king he was confused trying to see the other side of coin.


"Your majesty don't you trust me"? Don't you trust the Scholar"? Why we will lie to you"?.he rejected the proposal"! Insulted you"!..


"That's what I'm trying to know"? After Embracing us as Friend why they will offend us like this"?


"Your Majesty"! You're forgetting why we went there with Matrimonial alliance"? Because we assume today they agree to honor the friendship tommorow they can back off"! Perhaps people fill their ear against us"!


King Abul Shah glanced around, then saw the face of Jalal sitting with grim look on throne, expecting unbiased opinion from him was out of question, as he was opposing the alliance from the moment it was discussed, he glance at chief Commander Bairam khan who sensing his gaze spoke.


"We wanted his Daughter here as token of assurance"! They will never think of going against us"! Your majesty"! But they refused as Adham stated they speak ill of you and The Empire"! It's cannot be ignored"!..


"Crown prince won't you say anything"?


"King Bharmal is Righteous Honorable Rajput"! He vowed he will support us"! We Mistrusted and sent alliance, he's king with shrewd mind"! He Must have sense the mistrust and denied the alliance"! But I refused to believe he insulted his Majesty"!..


Amir standing behind him, could sense a relief as well hestitation, relief perhaps cause the alliance isn't happening, hestitation cause the turn of even could lead to chaos, he wish to stop with all his might. But being young as well only a crown prince he was aware his opinion may not taken seriously like The opinion of chief Commander.


"The insult can't be ignored"! If we ignored we will be labelled as weak"! Our sovergnity will be challenged everywhere"!.. Jalal Lead the Army teach the enemy lesson for Offending us"!..


Stunned by hearing the order he could do nothing just nod, disobedience isn't welcome in court, that to when the situation demand the prince to side with king and Empire. If he deny, people will take it as treason.


"But why crown Prince your majesty"? He didn't support the decision of alliance"! He doesn't believe they offended us"!


"Adham khan are you trying to question the loyalty of Crown prince"? Judging his capabilities to lead Army"?


"No your majesty I won't dare to do that"! It's just we all are aware how Crown prince help the princess"! And..


"Fine Jalal lead the Army for war"! But Let Adham khan take decision over victory"!..


What"? Jalal rose from his seat ready to protest but one look of King he knew it's futile attempt hence he just nodded even being crown prince first time in his life he felt this helpless. He glanced at Adham khan, who was looking at king with unreadable expression but his body language was enough to convey the rage.


"Morning"!..


Opening his eyes he stared ahead and saw Amir, standing near him, sitting up he stretch his hands, yawned then glance around the rain has stopped the entire hut was showered by sunlight. He smilied and greeted Amir back, then Get's up to move out of hut. only to get mesmerized by the sight infront of him. The wet curled hairs, caressing the soft spotless rosy cheeks, dressed in simple, white color tunic and trouser, she was busy in making salve.


"I wonder why a girl like you stay in the forest hut"?


"For Angel of death"!


"What"? You you work for her"?


"I work for her men"! You don't think the grain stocked up here is for me and my friend"!. Or you do"?..


Jalal sigh when he and Amir arrive here there was no one in hut, but they did investigate the hut before and either than stocked up grain, spice ingredients to make medicine nothing was found. They assume not very important person live here, hence upon finding her in hut he Gets dumbfounded and charge up cautiously against her. But now he don't know how to react he's here to investigate about mysteriously disappeared troop and Angel of death, but the girl they take shelter from help her. He didn't what to do or say how to react to this revelation. But then he realized she's been honest with him he can trust her to.


"So you provide them meal"?..


"Providing them meal medical aid and other basic facilities"!..


"You has seen her"?..


"No"!. "I hasn't seen her at all"!..but why you're asking about her"? Scared"? Or you're indeed spy"?...look no one will help you if you're working for king Abul Shah"!..


"Why not"? He's King of Amer now"!..


His focus was on her face that he didn't noticed her arm which was behind curled up into fist listening his words, his words made her feel bitter she didn't knew how to stay calm at his presence anymore. Though there was no pride when he mentioned, Abul Shah is king, or any arrogance still it left her enraged.


"For the people here's he's just an oppreasor A backstabber"!


"That's not true"! King Bharmal backstabbed him"! He promised to be his friend"! But when it was time to prove his friendship he insulted him"!.. rejected the alliance"!..


"VEER SINGH"!.. "for Political matrimonial alliance"! Princess are supposed to marry a king or crown Prince only"! Adham khan was nothing"!. The king Abdil Shah insulted him by sending a proposal of that low life for her"!.


Veer (Jalal) fall back on floor staring at her, the wrath in her eyes was like lighted fire, She was staring at him pointing the her hand towards him glaring furiously, If mere commoner has such a rage against King Abul Shah his father, he cannot imagine the rage of ANGEL OF DEATH. Because she's fighting the oppressors to guard the people. But her words made him frown in disbelief years been passed but he never looked for such a scenario either. All the while insult of king Abul Shah his father he try to get rid of his guilt hiding behind the so called offense targeted against his father by King Bharmal. Never thought it was insulting for King Bharmal too, if he believes on Adham words that king Bharmal rejected the proposal Infront of his minister's then it mean he received the proposal in his grandeur Special Royal hall of meeting the courtiers. Oh Lord it must've been so offensive for them. Where's Radha (Jodha) who was staring at him even now smiled bitterly then averted her gaze from him, get lost in the past memories.

It was week later of their last meeting. She was making a painting in her room, And her maid cones to inform her, King Bharmal her father has called everyone to assemble in the royal court. Stepping inside she calmly walked up to her place, sat beside her mother staring around the courtiers were having mix expression on face some were curious and confused.


"Greetings King Bharmal"!. "I'm here on word of His Majesty"! He has sent me with with matrimonial alliance proposal"!..


"Just recently we formed a relation of friendship"! Then why Matrimonial alliance proposal"? Doesn't King Abul Shah have faith on us"?


"No commander in Chief Askarn Singh"!. "He have faith it's just the council's ministers porpoise this"!. Just like you raised doubt on His Majesty's faith on you"!.


King Bharmal glanced aroubd then at his Daughter, Jodha who was looking at the Scholar Khwaja Moin and Adham khan was taken aback by their words. But when she felt gaze of King Bharmal her father on her. She shyly averted her gaze to her mother. King Bharmal understand her unsaid unexpressed wish, he has seen Her meeting with Jalal their friendship wasn't Hiden from him, he didn't find the happening to wrong, however marrying was tough decision he knew many of his courtiers share disagreement with his friendship with king Abul Shah but now"?.. listening Khwaja Moin words he glanced around some of his minister's were gripping the pommel of their sword, so some were curious and confuse.


"Elobrate about the proposal"!..


"If You agreed with the proposal"! Then in a week a marriage ceremony will be held in Sambhar"! Where Young Princess Jodha and Prince Adham khan will tie the knot"!


"WHAT"!..


King Bharmal raised his hand gestured the ministers to sat back calmly compose themselves. They has already stood up telling in Union unable to believe Such a proposal can come from King Abul Shah that to for their princess even Jodha and her mother Champavati Gasp at the words. Both look at King Bharmal, who avoided looking at anyone.


"Adham khan are you going to succeed King Abul Shah"?


"No but"!..


"Princesses Jodha isn't only a Princess she's crown Princess held Aura and Pride to honour with Queen position either by succeeding me"! Or By marrying with Crown prince"!.


"King Bharmal "You're insulting me"!..


"I'm expressing my disagreement with proposal"! If King Abul Shah wants to carry on with alliance I want My daughter to marry with Crown Prince Abul Fath Jalal-ud-din only"!..


"King Bharmal you has no idea what I can do"!.. you're rejecting me just because of"!..


"Watch your tone Adham khan"! Don't forget your position and place you stood"!. There's no lackness for me to marry my daughter with brave-hearts warrior noble crown Prince of their state too"!..


She has never seen her father raising his voice, but today was an expectation, Adham khan was crossing his limit, but she has bad feeling about it. But she trusted her father over the case, she was thinking and staring at her father. But then a cruel creepy laughter echo's in the hall snapping everyone attention in the centre of court. It was Adham he was laughing, as if he lost his sense has gone crazy.


"Crown Prince"? Hold aura to become queen"? Listen carefully King Bharmal slave I will make her my slave"! And you your family your entire state will pay gravely for this"!..


"Adham Khan watch your words"! I can slice your tongue out for your Sinful audacity"!.. but I won't get out of here before I do it"!..


Adham heard nothing, with Khwaja Moin and his men walked out of court. Seething in rage of humiliation, what follows after his departure was humiliating for Her as well. The courtier express their displeasure in unethical way. Staring how forming friendship with King Abul Shah was grave mistake on king Bharmal part, how highly they think of him and how low they think of king Bharmal and his family that they sent proposal of such a low life orthodox person for their princess. They even question on her for meddling with Crown Prince. Some stated Adham khan will conspire against them, he needed to be arrested the king shouldn't have let him go. But king Bharmal calmed everyone down stating he will march towards Agra meet King Abul Shah.


You ok"?


Ask Veer (Jalal) watching her hand turning red, she washed her hands wiping it answer him, coming to present, she glance at him then stated calmly. Kling his concern with her look and declining his approach towards her with her words.


"Never ever dare to boost of King Abul Shah victory Infront of anyone if you wish to live"!..

Edited by Evil_Flower_08 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Don't laugh this time no Romance 😆

But next time 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice part dear

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update didi ❤️

Adham was such a cruel person 😡

Because of him the misunderstanding happen between king bharmal and King Abul Shah 😡

So this is the reason why Jodha has become the angel of death ☹️

Continue it soon

Thanks for PM ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Nice part dear

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Thank you 🤗

Will try my best ⭐️

Thanks lot for comment 🤗

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Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Awesome update didi ❤️

Adham was such a cruel person 😡

Because of him the misunderstanding happen between king bharmal and King Abul Shah 😡

So this is the reason why Jodha has become the angel of death ☹️

Continue it soon

Thanks for PM ☺️

Thank you Sayani 🤗 for comment ⭐️ I'm glad you liked it ☺️

Yes he's cruel 😒 cause of him many lives were spoiled 😵

Yeah kind of this is the reason 🤓 let's see what Ja do once he gets to know everything ❤️

Your welcome 🤗

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Originally posted by: Evil_Flower_08

Thank you Sayani 🤗 for comment ⭐️ I'm glad you liked it ☺️

Yes he's cruel 😒 cause of him many lives were spoiled 😵

Yeah kind of this is the reason 🤓 let's see what Ja do once he gets to know everything ❤️

Your welcome 🤗


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Awesome chappy

This adham😡

How dare he

Interesting too

When truth will be out

Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing chapter my frnd

With this equation between them romance is hard to even think

Wishing this changes soon

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