RiAnsh OS : About Last Night - Page 2

Wow👏

Dialogues are 🔥🔥

This piece is soo amazing Ankita❤️

Loved every bit of this one shot

Very beautifully written👏

The dialogues were bang on🔥

Awesome beautifully written dear

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Beautifully written. It felt like you were the actual scriptwriter of the show 👏 The language, the feelings and the portrayal of how the morning after would go was truly perfect ❤️ Very deep philosophical thoughts as well. Please write more of such stories.

Originally posted by: amritat

Excellent writing...the language is exquisite!

Aadatein bahut wafaadaar hote hain...👏 Wow.

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

This was utterly beautiful!❤️ The way you've written, the story woven, the words spoken, everything flowed like honey...sweet yet dangerous! Riddhima's train of thought, Vansh's careful care, it was all so meaningful❣️

Loved it! Would you consider continuing this one?

-Sanu

This will remain a one shot. I will write more OS when I get time. 🥰

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

"Aadatein bohut wafaadar hoti hai..."

Wow... Touched that place of the heart..

This is par excellence..

Felt as if reading a novel...

Please do consider to continue this.

This will stay a One shot. I’ll more OS sometime later. :)

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

This was extremely well written!

The way you captured the essence of the characters, and breathed words into their life, it truly made me feel like I was reading a written update for the show. The style was also smooth, and incredibly easy to read, so thank you for that.

Will be looking forward for your future pieces. :)

I do try to write in a way that is easy to be read and understood.

Originally posted by: ShumiM

Beautiful. Thanks

Originally posted by: merryyura

Wow Ankita.. so beautiful this was

Please consider continuing this OS or writing another one on riansh.. 😳

I really liked this particular dialogue

“Yaha.....theek yahan.... kal raat kuch aisa khila tha jo bohot khoosorat tha. Usse phirse dohorane ka mann kare toh khud ko ijaazat de dena. Yahi mere karz ki keemat hai.”