Family- A SuVan OS! - Page 3

He was her Moon...This line! Liked the metaphor so much here! A nice OS. Shravan became Silent & Suman was missing the old Shravan. And then comes the proposal. It was beautiful. The last para, "firse bhagenge" "nahi unhe bhagayenge"😆 Liked the ending on a lighter note.

Originally posted by: Bucky

The thing I noticed is your proposal scenes are always hatke and endearing😉

Thank you ji....wildest dreams hai🤣

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

He was her Moon...This line! Liked the metaphor so much here! A nice OS. Shravan became Silent & Suman was missing the old Shravan. And then comes the proposal. It was beautiful. The last para, "firse bhagenge" "nahi unhe bhagayenge"😆 Liked the ending on a lighter note.

Glad you liked it...thanks you❤️🤗

@bold were the lines I too enjoyed writing😆