OS: I'll have you | Teaser Page 6 | October 23rd , 2020 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Update Is filled with The Emotions of Both Maan and Geet where Maan loves her But couldn't get her where As geet is Engaged to dev and wants His attention... Dev never cared about her But is Still with her!?

Geet wants to forget Everything on her special day and Maan was with her distracting her from the Pain by sharing a drink..

The Last words said By Maan was Filled with pain and Longing

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Sounds like a unrequited love situation, but glad she feel she has to step out of this relationship with Dev. If he is not going to be there for simple occasions that bring her joy and not be that shoulder why even bother just tagging along. Though drunk I wonder if she understood Maan.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice Os very well written

Geet is in a mess feeling low as she wants Dev to come and b wit her on her special day but he is not there. Maan is trying to take her overcome her turmoils.

Maan wants her but cannot have her as she is engaged to someone else. There's bitterness of the past or Geet would be his

Geet wants to break up with Dev.

Waiting for the nex part

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Geet with Maan in his apartment and get emotional bz her fiance didn't even gave importance to her on any important events of her life

Maan loved her but he was late in confessing but know she open her heart and she fed up with dev ignorance so he confess her he will b happy to spend his whole life with her

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Oh sad to see geet dev his her finance but he not cares for her geet is hurt she is with him bcz no men tolerate a successful women than him

Maan love her but cam confess bcz if it ruined their relation so maaneet already knows they r family friends

Lets see how maan got his love

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Posted: 5 years ago
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TEASER



He slid the small box towards her. They were still at a feet distance, he didn't knew why but he always preferred to look at a distance.


What is this? She asked with sceptical eyes. Although she knew that he was extravagant with his gifts and somehow always know what she wants.


She took the gift that was placed on the kitchen table with the left over food that he had managed to cook for her. She could now count how many times they have dined together in the vicinity of the aloofness. But it was not awkward.


Her hands worked meticulously worked with the wrappings of the gift and opened a small jewelry box.


There was an exquisite set of small diamonds like she preferred with a red ruby in the middle paired with stunning earings.


This.. is.. her words met his eyes and he completed without any hesitation.


Your birthday gift..


She nodded but her eyes were dull. She didn't knew but she was expecting something more. More from the man who was infront of her.


Don't you like it. He asked eyeing her disinterested look but she immediately smiled, a smile that he knew didn't reach her eyes.


No, it's beautiful..


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I will post the last part asap.

It will be long part so maybe I will split it into two short parts.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A Curious Teaser


Geet was expecting different

I wonder will Maan get it out from her

what she actually wanted as a gift

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing update.

Geet is very successful in career.

Geet n dev is engaged.

Geet is thinking abt leaving her relation with dev as he is always busy n never get time with on her important days.

Maan love geet years back n not saying her as he fear that might he lost her friendship also.

I think maan need to confess his love to geet.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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captivating teaser....

what was Geet expecting?

will Maan understand>

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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teaser

geet wants something different from maan as gift

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