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PART 16


Priya's POV:

Why did I share my concerns, my feelings will him. He is still a stranger then why did I trust him about my feelings? Why does his each words strive straight into my heart. His warm touch soothes my pain , his eyes make me feel special and secure. why? Why does his every stare feels familiar.. Did I ever met him in my past? Why don't I remember anything.. Why is destiny playing with my feelings..? Why I am suffering? Why my husband didn't come to take me along with him till now..why😭😭

Devastated in her own pain somehow trying to be strong for herself and her child. She decided to let this go and stay positive..May be things will turn out good for her one day.


Jalals POV:

How will I make jo Remember ME,US our relationship. How will I tell her she is my wife and I am her husband. If I say this directly then she may misunderstand me. What should I do.. May be try recalling her memory ..Yes I can do this..

With this Jalal kept hope alive in him.


Unknown POV:

So she is priya Malhotra.. I still didn't know anything about her except her name.. I need to know each and every detail about her soon else it will cost me huge loss. But where will I find her, my idiot goons are of no use😡 .I have already waited for few days for information and got only her name..huhh. wait .. May be I can find anything from internet . Lets check ..

After going through internet and analysing things .

so she is none other than the daughter of Raj Malhotra. That is why she was here at wrong time . Well well Miss Malhotra be ready to meet me😈 I AM COMING FOR YOU BABY


It's morning and everyone is waiting near Raj and Nilams bedroom door. As soon as the door opens everyone blast them with marriage anniversary wishes. Raj and nilam felt emotional seeing their kids wishing them, hugs from all including akbar, abrar,abdul and Priya specially prepared raj and Nilams favourite dishes.

Raj : Thankyou so much kids.. We are happy to have you all.

Nilam: yes kids. Thankyou all..

Sitting at breakfast table

Priya: So mom dad what's the plan??

Sanjay: what are you planning to do ?

Sunny: Maybe get me a bike 😁

Priya & Sanjay: It's their day , not yours.

Everyone laughs at this ..

Raj : No dear , we have no plans.

Nilam: We didn't plan anything special.

Akbar: Then do it uncle aunty.

Abrar: yes you guys should spend some quality time with eachother

Priya : I agree. You both will go and spend sometime with eachother and that's final.

Everyone: yes we agree.


After Raj and Nilam left

Priya excited : Guys don't you think we should do something for them?

Sunny: we have send them out , isn't that enough??

Priya : shut up.. They are our parents it's our responsibility to make them feel happy.

Sanjay😅 : well they become parents only after I was born so my responsibilty is done.

Priya : Seriously?? Anyways we are going to do something special at home .. Something sweet and cosy, What say??

Sunny 😬: ohh God why do girls plans always have lot of hardwork.

Priya ignoring it😑🤨: So it's final we are going to do something special.. let's divide our work

Akbar : We will be happy to be a part of this..

Abdul: give us some work

Priya : ok so Cake,food & Ahan will be sanjay bhai's & abduls responsibility , Gift will be sunny & Abrar's responsibility , decoration will be mine and Akbar's ok?

Everyone 👍🏻 : ok!!

Priya😝: abrar be careful with gift , the gift will be for mom dad and not for sunny .

Sunny 😅: sis please I know

Sanjay 😂: everyone knows. Akbar you know last time Sunny bought video game for mom dad

Akbar confused: video game??

Sunny: I thought they will like it🙈

Priya : yes and you played with it since that was of no use for them .

Sanjay: but this Time buy something they want not you Mr. Sunny

Sunny: ok fine I'll try

Priya to sanjay : And one more thing , bhai mom have taken out some clothes, toys for orphans, orphanage people will come and collect them. All the boxes are kept near the near door so don't mix anything with that .

Sanjay: ok we will take care ..


With this everyone gets involve with their task . Sanjay & Abdul had a hard time selecting food items , since abdul being a foodie wants to try everything thing , finding perfect flavour cake . But finally both ordered cake and food and got busy playing with ahan


Sunny & abrar went to buy gift , gifts which sunny choose was all his likes but abrar atlast convince him to buy a suitable gift for couple


Priya and akbar busy with decoration and other stuff. During this they got to know each other's hobbies, day to day activities and also became good friends. They decorated house very beautifully with red roses , lighted small lamps also decorated dinning table as a romantic candle light dinner . Seeing this akbar started imagining his and jos days when he used to take her out for hunting trip and after hunting they used to share a romantic candle light dinner , and how fascinated , breathtaking he used to be, seeing his jo dressed up for him . Those so romantic days were very soothing and burning for him. Suddenly priya snapped him out of his imagination . Asking about whose payal it was.? She seemed curious to know whose payal akbar was protecting that day from Rohit , he even was ready to do as said but akbar changed the topic saying someone special. This was little burning our priya's heart knowing their is someone who has already acquired special place in Akbar's heart . Don't know why she felt uncomfortable on thought of someone special to akbar but then she remembered what she is doing, how can she think about anyone when she already have someone in her heart, her wait for her husband - Ahan's father , as soon as she realises her mistake she started avoiding Akbar's stares thinking maybe he won't read what's in her heart. Akbar looked confused with sudden change in priya's behaviour before he could ask anything they was a know on door. The cake was delivered both priya and sanjay went to receive their order

Priya to sanjay : wow fast delivery . Let me see what cake you have order .

Sanjay proudly : It will be best one

Abdul who heard this came running to look at the order and forgot ahan who was playing with his ball.. Seeing everyone, ahan kept his ball at table and joined them.

Priya after opening box realises what blunder sanjay made. Sanjay who didn't notice it proudly describes himself like a perfect son. Irritated with this priya kept cake box on the side and throwed a pillow at sanjay

Sanjay: what the??

Priya : you are an idiot 😡

With this cushion fight started between both brother and sister. Akbar , abdul who didn't know what's happening stood a side watching the scene protecting ahan from all the flying piles of cushions . During this cushion war, one of the cushion hit table and the ahan's ball fell in orphanage box . Same time orphanage people came to collect things and went away. Exhausted with this hardwork both Priya and sanjay sat on sofa relaxing..

Priya angrily : You ruined it .

Sanjay : excuse me .. I am a genius.

Priya : ohh really?? Wait then . Abdul can you please show us all the cake ..

Listening this abdul brought the cake that had "HAPPY JOURNEY JOY AND JULIE " . Seeing this sanjay realise his mistake .

Priya : Happy journey??

Sanjay trying to makeup for his mistake: marriage is a journey 😅

Priya: ok .. what about joy??

Sanjay :have fun in life 😅

Priya😑 : and Juliet ??

Sanjay: his wife Juliet , u know Romeo and Juliet..🙈😝

Priya: Nice try but still not acceptable 😒

Seeing all this Akbar and abdul burst out laughing

Before sanjay could say something they heard ahan's loud cry.😭

Priya: ahan what happen?? Why are you crying baby?

Sanjay : cupcake what happen?? Tell me..

Akbar : tell angel why ahan crying?

Ahan : ahan ball nowhere.

Priya: it must be somewhere here only baby .. don't cry ..

Abdul : we will search it ..

After looking for sometime

Abdul: ahan you must have one more ball na.. you can play with that

Ahan: No .. ahan wants that ball only.😭

Sanjay: yes , ahan is attached to his favourite ball.. He won't stop crying till we find his ball😪

Akbar: Ahan wheres the last time you kept ball?

Ahan pointing to table : there ahan keep ball.

There was a cushion near the table seeing that soon sanjay and Priya looked at eachother with wide eyes.

Sanjay: Are you thinking the same ?

Priya 😅: Yes bhai.

Abdul: what??

Akbar guessing out: you both were fighting with cushions and one of the cushion hit the table where ahans ball was kept.. And I remember there were few boxes , maybe ball fell in those boxes

Priya & Sanjay in union: correct and now the ball is in orphanage van 😐

Sanjay excited : Ohhooo.. The great and good girl Priya Malhotra made a mistake. This needs to be noted

Priya: 😒 This happened because of you.

Sanjay : No no no baby , remeber you were the first one to start fight so logically you are responsible.

Priya😨 : ok fine but we are even now 😤

Sanjay : hehe now the score board is sanjay 1, priya 1

Priya : fine .. ahan don't worry baby I have orphanage number ..I'll go and get back your ball. And bhai you get this cake correct .

Akbar: I'll also come.

Priya at first hesitates to go along with him because of an unknown feeling but putting that to aside both went away


At orphanage office :

Manager busy romancing on his phone with his wife making both Priya and akbar feel awkward

Priya : Excuse..

Manager on phone : Yea baby ..

Akbar angrily : what??

Manager : I am saying to my wife . (On phone) yes baby we will go out for dinner.

Priya: excuse me.. I am Priya Malhotra.. Just an hour ago you have collected few boxes from Malhotra Mansion , by mistake we have given a ball which is very dear to my son.. Can you tell us where is it?

Manager : madam once you donate something, you cannot take it back.

Akbar : we know but that ball was dropped by mistake .. we want it.

Manager on phone : yes baby you look Beautiful in Red saree.

Listening this both akbar and priya was embarrassed.

Priya : can you tell us where the boxes are? We will search it ourselves.

Manager on phone : yes we will go to your favourite restaurant..

Irritated with all this priya angrily snapped : where are the boxes??

Manager : madam the truck is over there, go find what ever you want with your husband.

Listening this akbar felt shy , priya just ignored and went away. Both of them started searching ball in the truck when they felt truck moving . with this sudden movement priya and akbar lost their balance and felt in eachother, akbar held priya protectively in his arms assuring she is safe.

This moment made both of them more embarrass since they could feel eachothers breath and heartbeat. For a moment akbar wanted to hug her tightly forgetting all his sorrows and pains but drop this idea just not to make her feel scare. Priya also felt some soothing for the first time when she is in such a situation with a boy , as if this is her safest place in the world but remembering the fact that she is already married she controlled her feelings and both parted themselves holding the window stand . To ignore what just happened both started looking for ball avoiding eachother. After sometime priya got Ahan's ball from a huge mess and they started alarming the truck driver and soon left the truck.


Tired from all day watching movie, boating, roaming around city holding hands , romancing both Raj and Nilam reached home . After reaching mansion entire mansion was dark before they could say something everyone erupts with Happy Marriage anniversary wishes and soon the lights turned on . With a very romantic setup decorated with balloons, flowers, candles and a candle light dinner table set with a board hanging in background "MR & MRS MALHOTRA'S DAY" . This was something unexpected for the couple. Everyone dressed with red and black combination dresses and a chef caps . The most cute one was our junior Malhotra. Little Ahan dressed in Red black combination suit with his unicorn cap looking cutiepie . Priya respectively held her dad's hand and lead him to the table where as Sanjay did the same with his mom and made them comfortable at dinning table with sunny , abrar , abdul , akbar all came holding dishes and the little ahan with sweet dish serving them and a romantic dance by couple . Slowly everyone left the sweet couple in their privacy.


It's morning and everyone started their daily routine with prayers, excercise, morning walks etc . Priya who is just back from her morning walk saw sanjay and sunny planning something naughty..well well this is not new for anyone here.. Malhotra's never let people go without doing a prank at them . Here both brothers are planning something naughty for their guest . Priya didn't feel like troubling akbar and his friends but it's a siblings rule for them . They will atleast play one prank on their guest . After lot of convincing priya also agreed to be a part of this plan


Abdul waking up from a peaceful sleep went to get fresh, after struggling to keep his eyes open abdul managed to wash his face that is when he noticed red blood stains on the washbasin scaring him . When he looked into the mirror it almost gave him heart attack , there was something written on mirror with blood " YOU ARE GONE". This scared the shit out of him . Abdul immediately ran out of his room to Abrar's room who just woke up . Forcefully dragging abrar to his room into his bathroom to show what he saw . But the mirror was clean as crystal clear and no bloodstains on basin , like it never happened . Abrar convinced him saying it must be his dream and went away .

Abrar on reaching his room found a delicious cake piece on his table , seeing that he wasn't able to control himself from eating it and ate half of it but soon he realised the cake was salty . He immediately went to wash it off ,getting back to his room he didn't find the other half cake piece neither tray or anything as if it never existed. Confused with it he got fresh up and moved to breakfast table

At breakfast table everyone was having fun, discussion and breakfast . Abrar took samosa but it tasted sweet , when he tried juice it tasted spicy but when the same thing anyone else take they ate happily like a perfect one , thinking and convincing himself that maybe his taste buds are not working . With this thought he ate whatever taste he got quietly without letting anyone know .

On other hand abdul took a kachori to eat but when he ate , felt like something inside that apart from food , observing it he found a piece of paper in his kachori with " YOU ARE GONE" written on it. He didn't know how to act but before he could ask about it, to abrar , the paper fell from his hand and suddenly vanished like it never exist After this he also found a tissue paper under his plate with same words "YOU ARE GONE" written on it. But mistakenly sunny spills water on it and those words vanished. This scared him too.

Akbar was busy with ahan and stealing glances with priya .

Raj : We all are going to attend event today at lunch.

Nilam : That jewellery one??

Raj : yes , my friend is a jeweller designer and he has invited us at his jewellery exhibition . So we all will be there by today afternoon.

Priya: Dad me and ahan will be at home .

Raj: why dear? You love jewellery then ?

Priya : Dad there will lot of people ahan won't be comfortable there . It's better if he is at home , safe

Nilam : priyu we have special arrangements for ahan there with security guards. Don't worry he will be fine .

After lots of convincing priya let her worries aside and agreed to join them with ahan.


Completing their work everyone got ready to leave when sanjay and sunny winks at Priya . Priya hesitated for a while but decided to do as planned and asked akbar to sit in her car . Akbar was happy to get such opportunity since both were alone in priya's car . Raj and nilam with ahan in their car , sanjay sunny abrar and abdul in other car and akbar with priya in priya's car .

At beginning priya drive normally but later she started racing her car to fulll speed .

Akbar: what are you doing? Slow down.

Priya: why? Are you scared?.

Akbar : no but this isn't good for anyone .. please slow it .

Priya agreed to slow but then she realised what mess have happened

Priya panicked: I think brakes are fail.

Hearing this shocked akbar didn't know how to react . Priya started driving at high speed with worried face,this made Akbar's heart skip a beat , he felt as if something bad will soon happen and his first reaction was to held her hand tightly , bringing her close to himself protecting her .. At first priya enjoyed scaring him but later she didn't find it any fun and felt sorry for scaring him like this and stopped the car to a side .

Akbar: it stopped?? But the break..

Before he could complete his sentence priya spoke

Priya guilty: I am sorry . It was a prank. Breaks are perfectly alright . It just I .. I am sorry.

Akbar shocked hearing this ..

Angrily : How could you do something like this to me?? What do you think this prank was normal?? It almost took my life.. This was terrible. If something serious happens to both of us ? For once I thought I will loose you forever. I thought you might get hurt in this but you were enjoying this. If something would happen to you then how will I live.

Seeing tears, concern in his eyes priya felt very guilty for doing this stupid prank on him. Wiping his tears holding her ears

Priya: I am really sorry. Very very sorry . I know this was a worst prank and I scared you. I am sorry for it from bottom of my heart. I promise I won't do something like this again.

Sorry please??

Seeing priya's innocent face and her true guilty akbar let this go .

Akbar: it's ok.. but promise me one thing.. you won't do anything that risk your life.. promise me..

Priya : ok promise.

Akbar: ok now let's go to event.

Priya was still feeling guilty to make him this emotional . His words were so caring , even in that situation he was concerned about her safety.. How can someone be so nice and genuine at same time.


Soon everyone reached the event .

People started gathering in waiting hall when the head of event came an gave welcoming speech and soon everyone started viewing the jewelry show pieces kept around . Ahan was send to kids section where he was busy playing , here everyone in jewelry . There were marvelous designs each different from other. While the discussion was on sunny, priya and sanjay shared their pranks update when akbar, abrar , abdul heard them and got to know these siblings pranks .Things got sorted with all of them,when akbar, abrar,abdul didn't take the prank Seriously. Priya was about to go to kids section to look after ahan when someone called her to a side for discussion .

Suddenly everyone heard a gunshot and saw priya covered in blood pool holding her arm tightly in pain.

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Amazing chappy

Who is that unknown person

Feelings

Crazy siblings

Got shot

Update soon

Thanks for Pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very interesting Update

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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Awesome update didi

Siblings fight

And their siblings crazy rules

Omg jo is shot😱

Who is that mysterious person

Continue it soon

Thx 4 pm

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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Amazing chappy

Who is that unknown person

Feelings

Crazy siblings

Got shot

Update soon

Thanks for Pm


Thanks 💚.. wait for next chapter, secret with be revealed 😉

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Very interesting Update

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂


Thankyou dear 💚.

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Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Awesome update didi

Siblings fight

And their siblings crazy rules

Omg jo is shot😱

Who is that mysterious person

Continue it soon

Thx 4 pm


Thankyou dear 💚.. hehe siblings are crazy.. wait wait n wait 😉😝

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