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Posted: 4 years ago
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Okay,guys so this is my first ever attempt on writing sth like this on an online platform(wattpad bhi try nhi kiya maine aaj tak,kasam se). Hope its tolerable.



"Kyun nahi kiya mujhse pyaar? Itni buri thi kya main?" Reyansh knew Pranati was intoxicated at the moment. Yet this accusation gave a sharp stab in his heart. Is this really what Pranati thought about their past or was it just the drug making her talk? He desperately wanted to believe in the latter.

When he looked back at her,she could see her staring back at him,eyes brimming with tears. "Pyaar toh kiya tha,tab bhi or ab bhi. Bas nibhaya nahi gaya." The words toppled down his mouth even before his brain could register. Shocked at his own confession,he looked back at Pranati. She'd already fallen asleep in his arms,probably didn't hear what he had just said. That was a bit relief. There are thousands things running on his mind right now. But all of those can wait till morning.


~The End~




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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved It!!!!Please continue!!! ❤️

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Wonderful!! Please continue.

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Originally posted by: parboni

Okay,guys so this is my first ever attempt on writing sth like this on an online platform(wattpad bhi try nhi kiya maine aaj tak,kasam se). Hope its tolerable.



"Kyun nahi kiya mujhse pyaar? Itni buri thi kya main?" Reyansh knew Pranati was intoxicated at the moment. Yet this accusation gave a sharp stab in his heart. Is this really what Pranati thought about their past or was it just the drug making her talk? He desperately wanted to believe in the latter.

When he looked back at her,she could see her staring back at him,eyes brimming with tears. "Pyaar toh kiya tha,tab bhi or ab bhi. Bas nibhaya nahi gaya." The words toppled down his mouth even before his brain could register. Shocked at his own confession,he looked back at Pranati. She'd already fallen asleep in his arms,probably didn't hear what he had just said. That was a bit relief. There are thousands things running on his mind right now. But all of those can wait till morning.





aww, if this happens in the show, it would be magical with the bgm playing post that. <3 damn cute, I think you should write more on this.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: parboni

Okay,guys so this is my first ever attempt on writing sth like this on an online platform(wattpad bhi try nhi kiya maine aaj tak,kasam se). Hope its tolerable.



"Kyun nahi kiya mujhse pyaar? Itni buri thi kya main?" Reyansh knew Pranati was intoxicated at the moment. Yet this accusation gave a sharp stab in his heart. Is this really what Pranati thought about their past or was it just the drug making her talk? He desperately wanted to believe in the latter.

When he looked back at her,she could see her staring back at him,eyes brimming with tears. "Pyaar toh kiya tha,tab bhi or ab bhi. Bas nibhaya nahi gaya." The words toppled down his mouth even before his brain could register. Shocked at his own confession,he looked back at Pranati. She'd already fallen asleep in his arms,probably didn't hear what he had just said. That was a bit relief. There are thousands things running on his mind right now. But all of those can wait till morning.





I so want this to happen in the serial rather the direction they are scaring us they will take.....can even imagine the scene where she opens up about the hurt she felt when they broke up in college....and her pregnancy time...managing with just mom by her side.....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wonderful scene parboni👏👏👏


I wish we get such scene in serial... please continue...


Looking forward to read yours

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