~The unfathomable love~ Thread 2 UPDATED PART 17 pg 28 - Page 14

Loved the song💛💛💛💛

Nice one dear🧡🧡🧡🧡

Thnx for pm😃

Continue soon ☺️

Sorry for Combine review Appy

I wanted to catch up with story as you are resuming it.

Part 2 & 3

Malaysia scene:

completely opposite to India, Modern society..

Typical homely scene😛 Care for their daughter's safety...

Jalal all set to expose the traitors😎...

And what an entry of our hero in the scene to catch and give a life time lesson to the culprits,

Part 4

Those beautiful memories of Jodha accompanied with song,

Again one more good choice of song

Friends Gala time very much funny...

Jalal n Abrar teasing foodie Abdul...

And their chariot ride was ...but poor Jalal... he has become such a lost soul in her absence...😒

Part 5

Humorous one

Full of Abdul n Abrar fight over getting lost in unknown place...

Well done

Part 6 - 8

Wonderful...

Fun and fight while shopping😆

What I like the most was, start of part 8...

You have Beautifully penned them👏

"closer to dreams is always a beautiful thing in life.!

Who knows where destiny lies.?"❤️

Family time at MM was nice..

And Jalal n Ahan scene cute...

👍🏼

Thank you for rewriting all chapters

Please continue soon. I'm so curious 😁

Awesome one didu

Loved the song

Poor jalal is jealous seeing Rahul and priya( whom he belived as jo)

Bt who is this mysterious person😲

Eager to know😉

Continue it soon didu😊

Thx 4 pm also didu😊

Awesome update n thnxx for pm me

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Loved the song💛💛💛💛

Nice one dear🧡🧡🧡🧡

Thnx for pm😃

Continue soon ☺️

Your welcome 💚

Originally posted by: GOLDPEN30

Loved it dear

Awesome part

I loved the song you choose it's quite melodious 🙂

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Thankyou dear 💛