Pyaar Ka Izhar: A Rudhita SS (chap-17 updated on page 48) - Page 10

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Originally posted by: Prit_007

I was trying to write an OS but it became too long so I am posting it as an SS. Here it is-

The RC Mansion is decorated like a bride. Whole Mansion is lighted like Diwali. Children are running here and there. Some women are busy in gossip and some are busy in arrangements for big puja of Ramnavami. Ramnavami is celebrated in a grand way every year in RM Mansion but this year it is arranged in a special way. In a special way for the Badi Bahu of Roy Chowdhury family- Barrister Bondita Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury.

This year Bondita has become gold medalist barrister and is coming to Tulsipur from Calcutta with her husband Barrister Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury who now practices in Calcutta. Bondita studied in Calcutta University. Bondita refused to go to London for study as she wanted to stand beside her husband in his mission of changing the society. She is the one who always stands by Aniruddh at each and every step. Aniruddh and Bondita has become one soul in these years. Aniruddh means the world for Bondita and Bondita means the whole Universe to Aniruddh. Both have fall for each other. Both are aware of their love for each other but neither of them confessed till now.

In RM Mansion, a handsome man with refreshing cute smile in blue kurta and grey dhoti was busy in attending guest. It was none other than Anirudh Roy Chowdhury. Aniruddh who was busy in talking with guest, suddenly heard familiar anklet sound. He looked towards the direction and mesmerized seeing an angel in a golden border blue saree adoring sindoor of his name on her forehead. Yes it was none other than Bondita Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury- the soulmate, the heartbeat of Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury. The same was the situation of Bondita. She was also mesmerized seeing her handsome husband. The eyes of both Ani and Boni is filled with deep love – love which is unconditional, beyond any definition.

The matching blue dress for Bondita Aniruddh was an idea of Batuk. Batuk and Som chuckled seeing their dear Dada-Boudi. Sampoorna and Saudamini were grinning seeing them. Yes Saudamini she is no more an evil lady. Circumstances has changed Saudamini. She is now friend of Bondita as she is a friend of Ani. She is now more like a sister to Bondita. Kaka, Baba, Saurabh all were happy seeing them.

Bondita came to Anirudh and both went towards temple. Suddenly Bondita slipped and Ani balanced Bondita in his arms. Rudhita had an eyelock. Bondita flustered and stood firmly. Ani realized and felt awkward.

Sampoorna and Saudamini got the whole matter and decided to make Bondita confess her love to Ani.

.....To be continued

Please share your suggestions as well as criticism

Chapter2 @ page2

Chapter3 @ page 3

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Great job,such a wonderful plot.... ❤️

I liked that Bondita stood beside Anirudh supporting him always. Anirudh's biggest strength will be none other than his wife only.

In serial also,they should show this things.

Ani-Boni sounds cute... Not like Ani-Mini... 😆

The colour matching was on the top...

Blue blue... Both Ani Boni😎

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Hello everyone. Here is the third chapter. Please share your views so that I can improve.

Chapter-3

Bondita was about to fall in the study but balanced herself.

Ani(with concern): Are Mishti! Tum thik ho? Kya hua?

Boni: Wo. Mai…mai thik hoo patibabu. Bilkul thik.

Ani(with straight face): Par lg to nhi raha. Kuch kahne ayi ho? To saf saf kaho na itna q ghabra rahi ho. (Smiling) Mai tumhe daatunga thodi.

Bondita remembered something. Years ago Anirudh promised her that he will not scold her and smiled.

Boni: Ha wo mujhe pata hai ap datenge nhi par mujhe dar hai ki kahi ap naraaz na ho jaye.

Ani: Mishti tum kbse mujhse kuch kehne me hichkichane lagi. Tumhe hua kya hai. Mai sunna nhi v chahu tb v tum mujhe jo sunana ho wo suna hi deti ho fir aj kya ho gya.

Boni: Patibabu.(hesitantly) ye bat kuch alg hai.

Ani: Fir to mai jarur sunna chahunga Mishti. Aisi kaun si bat hai jisne meri sahasi Mishti ko itna nazuk bna diya hai.

Bondita blushed at Anirudh calling her His Mishti. Anirudh did not realise he referred Bondita as his.

Ani(sternly): Kaho Mishti . Mai sunne ke liye intezar kar raha hoo.

Boni(stammering): Patibabu……wo wo sampoo didi….(a sound came from behind and Ani noticed)…nahi nahi…wo wo mini didi (again a sound came from the same direction and Anirudh again noticed it and was sure there’s something fishy)..

Ani(firmly): Kaho Bondita.

“Wo wo patibabu mini didi aur sampoo didi mujhe yaha jabardasti leke ayi apko ye batane ke liye ki mai apse bahut bahut pyaar karti hoo aur ye batane me ab der nhi karna chahiye.” Bondita said in one breath.

Ani was surprised at first at what Bondita said. Did she really say this or he was dreaming. Then realised it is reality. Ani chuckled at her cutie wife’s behaviour. Her wife who has fire in his eyes when fighting for right has how much innocence in her eyes right now, who never fears a bit even before thousands of man, is standing nervous before her husband, who flawlessly put arguments in the court is unable to speak a line properly. His love has that power which can make her lioness an innocent doe.

Anirudh came out of his thoughts and sternly said “Sampoo- Mini samne ao mujhe pata hai tumlog yahi ho.”

Sampoo-Mini came as they were caught. They were looking down. Bondita also looking down.

Ani: kya hai ye sab? Kya matlab hai iska?

“Wo. Ani….” Mini was about to say something but trailed off seeing Anirudh glare.

Ani smiled wide and said “Thik hai aplog ja sakte hai. Mai Bondita se bat karna chahta hoo abhi.”

Sampoo-Mini surprisingly looked at each other and then a wide smile came on their face.

Bondita (innocently): Bat? Kya bat karni hai patibabu apko mujhse?

Ani(with mischievous smile): Ab wo to inke jane ke bad hi bata sakata hoo.

Sampoo-Mini chuckled.

Bondita (looking at Anirudh): Mtlb mai samjhi nahi.

Mini hit her head with palm and Sampoo- Ani smiled at her innocence. Sampoo was about to say something. Ani said controlling his emotions “Aplog jaiye mai smjha dunga”.

....To be continued

I thought I will read all the chapters and then will comment but I couldn't stop myself from typing... 😆

It is so so so.... Much good.. bondita's confession was damn🤗

Ani's Mishti confessed her love to him. Yay!!

Chapter 2 was also very good... Sampoorna and Mini explaining Boni to express their love... ❤️

Mini told her the right thing to confess her love.