I am going speechless day by day. Itni sundar story ki mein kya hi tareef karun. So very beautiful . 💖💖💖😘😘😘
Originally posted by: pyaar2012
I am going speechless day by day. Itni sundar story ki mein kya hi tareef karun. So very beautiful . 💖💖💖😘😘😘
I can't thank you all enough for the comments which make me continue.
Thank you, thank you, thank you (Malharji style) 💝
Episode 29
“Siddhi, jaldi karo, der ho ri hai.” Kalyani was hurrying her daughter who was patiently chewing her breakfast.
“Mujhe bhi school nahi jaana.” she made a puppy face at her mom.
“Tumhari teacher koi naya game sikhayegi aur tumhe pata hi nahi chalega. Isliye ab jaldi karo.”
“Lekin Aai, Dada kyun nahi aa rahe hai mere saath?”
“Dada ko aaj doctor ke paas le jaana hai, isliye.” Kalyani helped her to wear her socks and shoes and handed over her bag to Malhar.
Malhar made his daughter sit in the jeep and got into the driver's seat. While driving he explained to her that it was wrong to raise hands on others.
"Siddhi, kisi ke saath jagda mat karna aur kisi par bhi haath nahi utana, warna tumhe koi apna dost nahi banayega."
"Baba aap bhi bad logon ko punish karte ho….."
"Woh log bohot jyada bure hai, bade bade galthiyan karte hai aur unhe sirf Police punishment de sakthi hai, koi aur nahi."
They had reached the school. Malhar picked up his girl from the seat, kissed her cheeks and asked, "Maine jo bhi kaha yaad rakhogi na?"
"Ok Baba" she nodded her head. "Bye." she walked towards her classroom and Malhar drove back home.
The three of them were sitting for breakfast where Moksh was fiddling with the food on his plate, avoiding the gaze of his parents. He somewhat understood why he was at home and though he wanted answers to the questions in his mind, he was also scared of what he might find out.
They finished eating and while Kalyani was clearing up the dishes, Moksh looked at his dad apprehensively, "Baba ! Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai."
Malhar, "Pucho.. " Malhar smiled at his son, encouraging him to speak further.
"Baba kal school me……" he started but hesitant to continue.
"Mujhe pata hai school me kya hua. Tum aage bolo."
"Baba, Vishal ki mummy ne jo bola, kya woh sach hai? Kya sach me aai meri stepmother hai?”
Moksh's voice choked and his eyes teared up even to utter the words. Malhar wiped his son's tears and sat beside him. Kalyani had also joined them, sitting close to her Pillu.
Malhar cleared his throat and said, “Ye sach hai ki Kalyani ne tumhe janam nahi diya, lekin woh stepmother nahi hai. Jabse tumhara janam hua usi din se Kalyani tumhari maa hai."
Moksh couldn't understand, "Kaise baba? Meri real mummy kaun hai? Woh kahan hai?"
Kalyani's voice shook as she controlled her tears and showed him a picture of Sampada and Aparna. "Pillu, yeh meri Aparna Aatya hai aur ye unki beti Sampada, jisne tumhe janam diya."
Moksh remembered hearing Aparna's name from Vishal's mother and was surprised that she was Aai's aunt, "Meri real mummy aapki behen thi?"
Kalyani couldn't hold back her tears when Moksh kept mentioning the term 'real mummy'. She just nodded through her tears.
Malhar could understand that the situation was getting difficult for Kalyani and he intervened, "Moksh pehle meri puri baat dhyan se suno aur samjho uske baad tumhare jo bhi sawaal hai uska jawaab denge hum.”
Malhar began explaining how Kalyani had come to Aurangabad after the loss of her mother, searching for Anupriya. He also told Moksh that he had been married to Sampada, Kalyani’s cousin sister at that time.
Moksh listened intently as his dad continued saying how Sampada had fooled all of them and left to lead her own life, how Kalyani had managed to save Moksh during his birth and had married Malhar only for the sake of a day old Moksh, how she had struggled to manage Malhar's anger, her studies and the child.
"Tumhari Aai ne kabhi bhi tumpar apna gussa nahi nikala. Hamesha tumhe sirf pyaar diya. Aisi Aai har kisi ko nahi milti Moksh. Sirf khoon ke rishte se koi maa nahi banta beta."
Moksh had tears in his eyes as his dad finished talking, How could I even think of my sweet Aai as a stepmother. No ! She is the best mom in the whole world. I cannot think of anyone else as my Aai.
Kalyani took his hands into hers, “Pata hai Pillu, jab tum Sampada ke tummy me the tab mai roz tumse baat karti thi. Tum toh mere best friend ban gaye aur jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha, apne haath me utaya, woh pal mere liye bohot special hai. Mujhe pata chala ki ek bache se pyaar karne ke liye use janam dene ki zaroorat nahi hai, bas dil se use apna samajna hota hai."
“Aai….." he hugged her as she went on.
"Jab Sampada tujhe chodkar gayi, tab mujhe bohot gussa aaya ki koi apne baby ko kaise chodke jaa sakta hai lekin ye toh Bappa ka plan tha na ki mai tumhari Aai ban jaun. Pillu ! Tumhari Aai banne me mujhe bohot khushi mili."
Kalyani then showed him a picture of Madhuri, “Pillu, ye meri maa hai, jisne mujhe janam diya. Nani ne bhi mujhe janam nahi diya lekin woh mujhe bohot pyaar karti hai."
"Moksh, jaise Nani aur Aai dil se maa beti ban gaye waise hi tumhare aur Aai ke dil ka bhi special rishta hai. Isliye tum ye bure stepmothers wale kahaniyon ko sach mat maan lena."
"Nahi Baba, mujhe toh bohot hi special Aai mili hai. Sabse best."
Kalyani's tears were flowing freely as she heard her sons words and Moksh was trying to wipe them away, hugging her. "Rona mat Aai, I love you."
"Baba, jab Siddhi ko pata chalega toh kya woh mujhe Dada bulana chod degi?"
"Bilkul nahi…..woh tumse utna hi pyaar karti hai jitna tum usse karte ho."
Kalyani ran her fingers into his hair lovingly, "Pillu, kya tumhe lagta hai ki mai ya baba kabhi bhi tumhare aur Siddhi ke beech farak karenge?"
Moksh shook his head, his heart was at peace after knowing the truth. "Nahi Aai. Tum Aur Baba hum donon se pyaar karte hain."
"Koi aur doubts hai?" she asked and Moksh shook his head. "Nahi."
"Maine tumse kaha na Kalyani ki hamara Moksh sab kuch samaj sakta hai, woh bohot strong hai."
Precisely at that moment, Kalyani received a call from Aparna, "Kyun Kalyani, Dar gayi tum? Aaj Moksh ko school nahi beja? Kitne din ghar pe rakhogi use?"
"Aatya, mai aapse nahi darti isliye aap mujhe dhamki dena bandh kijiye."
"Mai aaj Moksh se milne aa rahi hun."
"Aaiye Aatya. Hum sab ghar par hi hai."
Malhar shook his head in annoyance and got up, "Mai Siddhi ko school se le aata hun."
As Siddhi and Malhar returned back from school, they saw Aparna sitting with Moksh showing him pictures of Sampada and telling him that she wanted Moksh to come with her to meet his real mom.
Moksh asked Kalyani, "Kya mai unse milne jaa sakta hun?"
Aparna gave Kalyani a victorious look as she agreed to it.
Siddhi who was watching all this somewhat connected the dots of what had happened in school the previous day and felt that Moksh was going to go away with this lady.
She began to cry, "Dada mat jao, please Dada, mujhe chodke mat jao."
Malhar tried to calm down his daughter but she ran to hold Moksh's hand, "Mai bhi chalungi, mujhe bhi le chalo."
Aparna jerked away her hand roughly and Siddhi fell to the floor hurting her elbow. Moksh rushed forward to his sister and wiping her tears he told her, "Mai jaldi wapas aa jaunga."
Malhar told Aparna, "Moksh aur aap meri gaadi me aayenge."
Kalyani struggled to hold her own emotions in check while trying to hold her little daughter who was trying to run behind the jeep. Though Moksh had understood everything, he still had a right to know his biological mother and she would not deprive him of that chance how much ever it hurt her. She felt that Moksh should be given the right to make the decision himself.
She tried to divert her daughter who refused to drink milk or even watch cartoons on TV and sat down in a corner of the room crying. Kalyani couldn't do anything except sit there as Siddhi's cries slowly turned into whimpers.
"Dada kyun chale gaye? Dada ko wapas lao na Aai."
"Tere Dada jaldi wapas ayenge tum rona bandh karo aur ye doodh pi lo."
"Mujhe nahi chahiye, jab Dada wapas aayenge tab piyungi."
Kalyani tried to pacify her but it was of no use.
On the other hand, Malhar had reached the place where Atharv and Sampada lived.
"Shukriya Malhar, ab tum jaa sakte ho. Moksh ka khayal hum rakh lenge."
"Baba, aap thodi der yahi rukiye, please."
"Are iski koi zaroorat nahi hai Moksh, apne asli Aai se itne saal baad mil rahe ho, itni jaldi toh nahi jaane denge hum tumhe."
Moksh ignored her and his eyes pleaded with his dad to stay back.
Malhar gave a stern look to Aparna, "Jao Moksh, Sampada se mil lo. Jab tak tum bahar aake mujhe jaane ke liye nahi kehte, tab tak mai yahin intezaar karunga."
His heart felt heavy as Moksh got down and walked in with Aparna.
He recognized Sampada from the pictures. She was sitting on the sofa ordering the helper about dinner preparations and two kids, a little older than Siddhi were fighting with each other for the x-box controls. They stopped when they saw Moksh and Aparna. A man who was dressed in a suit was sitting on the other sofa glaring at them. He clearly looked unhappy with Aparna and Sampada's actions.
"Sampada, dekho kaun aaya hai tumhare paas, tera Moksh."
"Moksh", she cooed. "Aai dekho kya haal bana diya uss Kalyani ne mere bete ka."
She hugged him, " Ab tum hamare paas aa gaye na, toh tumhe bhi sab ache, expensive cheezon ki aadat ho jayegi apne bhai aur behen ke tarah." she gestured towards the two kids.
Moksh looked at her strangely. He did not feel any warmth in her hug and her smile looked artificial. The two children didn't even bother to get introduced to him.
Aparna and Sampada took him to a large bedroom, "Ye kamra aaj se tumhara hai, tumhe jo bhi chahiye sab tumhe mil jaayega."
"Ye sab mai tumhare liye layi hun. " Aparna showered him with gifts.
"Chalo hum pehle dinner karte hai. Uske baad aaram se baitkar baat karenge."
At the dinner table, Moksh felt out of place. The two kids who sat opposite him were whispering and giggling among themselves.
There was no joy in his heart when Moksh looked at the woman who had given birth to him.
He felt like an outsider in this house. It lacked the chirpiness and love which was always present in his home.
He thought about Siddhi who always ran around him trying to grab his attention, helping him, listening intently to whatever he said and standing up to support him however she could.
His thoughts kept going back to Siddhi's tear stained face as he was leaving with Aparna. In comparison to his sweet sister, he couldn't think of the two in front of him as his brother and sister.
Somehow he just ate a little bit to be polite. He didn't want to be in this place anymore. He just wanted to get back to his home, to his Aai, Baba and Siddhi.
"Sampada Aunty !"
"Aunty ? Moksh mujhe Mom bulao."
"Ji nahi, meri Aai ka naam Kalyani Rane hai. Isliye aapko Aunty bulaonga."
"Moksh… maine kaha na Kalyani tumhari Aai nahi hai. Sampada tumhari Aai hai aur mai tumhari Nani." Aparna butted in.
"Maaf kijiye, aap meri Nani nahi hai. Meri Nani ka naam Anupriya hai."
"Moksh….." Sampada angrily raised her hand.
"Sampu… " Aparna held her hand.
"Aai, Dekha kaise baat kar ra hai. Kya zaroorat thi ise yahan lane ki. Mujhe koi shauk nahi Malhar ke bache paalne ka. Are isliye toh use chodke gayi mai. Na mujhe Malhar pasand hai aur na uski koi nishaani. Tumhara dimaag kharaab ho gaya ki tum ise yahan le aayi." Sampada screamed at her mother.
"Sampada aunty, mai bhi yahan rehne nahi aaya hun. Main sirf aapko thank you bolne aaya tha. Thank you ki aap mujhe chodkar chali gayi warna meri Aai mujhe kaise milti. Baba bahar intezaar kar rahe hai, mai unke saat apne ghar wapas ja raha hun. Bye."
He turned and walked out of the door leaving Aparna and Sampada stunned.
When Moksh got into the jeep, he felt relieved.
"Baba, ghar chalte hai. Aai aur Siddhi ke paas."
Kalyani was relieved when Malhar returned with Moksh. He ran straight into his mother's arms who just welcomed him into her warmth without any questions.
"Pillu, aa gaya wapas ? Pehle jao aur apni behen ko mana lo."
Moksh went in and felt bad to see his sister whose eyes were swollen due to crying continuously.
"Siddhi…!" he hugged her tightly.
"Dada, mujhe chodke kyun gaye? main baat nahi karungi."
"Pagli mai toh wapas aa gaya na, tere paas. Mai bhi tumhare bina nahi reh sakta."
"Wapas chale gaye toh?"
"Kabhi nahi jaunga, pinky promise."
Siddhi hugged him back, "Mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai Dada."
"Aa jao mai dono ko apne haat se khilaongi." Kalyani fed both her children after which they went to sleep.
Kalyani hugged her husband, "Malharji, ab hume darna nahi hoga. Moksh ne apne zindagi ka bohot hi important milestone cross kar liya hai."
"Haan Kalyani, ab sab acha hoga." he tightened the hug.
They felt content.
Epilogue
A few years later…...
Malhar was now the commissioner of Aurangabad while Kalyani had also become a very successful author of children's books.
Moksh was a medical student who wished to specialise in paediatrics. Since the day he had seen his pink little baby sister in the hospital, he felt a soft corner towards little babies and as he grew up, his curiosity about the cute little bundles made him choose this field of study.
Siddhi was still in school and blossoming into a pretty girl. She was more interested in her dad's profession and aspired to join the Police force.
They all now lived in a more bigger house as Sarthak and Anupriya had also moved in with them. Their family was complete and happy.
***Note of thanks
When I started this FF, I had planned to write a few chapters of Moksh's growing naughtiness and how Kalma deal with it but somewhere along the way, it changed into a complete story.
Thank you to all the readers who boosted me with your lovely comments and to all those who boosted me with likes. Your support is appreciated. 😍
Do let me know if you enjoyed this last chapter too. 😊
Very beautiful ❤️
I love it
No words to describe
The whole story is very beautiful ❤️
Thanks for writing
Beautiful Update Rekha di
It was sweet+emotional+Lovely
Aww
Malhar and Siddhi bond is so cute
Princess ne apne baba ki baat maan li❤️
When Kalyani was telling truth to Moksh, it was so emotional 😭
The way KalMa handled situation 👍🏼
KalMa beautifully explained him meaning of Raabta❤️
(Rishtey apne pan ke sacche hote hai
Khoon ke rishton se bhi acche hote hai❤️)
Lines from title song of Yeh Hai Chahatein
SiKsh bond❤️
Siddhi's tears when he was going away💔😭
Kalyani's difficult situation, the way she controlled her emotions 🥱❤️
Malhar ji is so strong, but he also felt bad😭
Sampada and her sweet talks, materialistic treatment was described so well
Atharva and SamTharva kids did not even pay any attention
More than that Moksh himself understood that he will not get love same as he was getting in 'His House'!
Ye Sampada abhi tak nahi sudhri😡
Moksh ek saal ka bhi nahi tha, tab bhi marne ke liye haath uthati thi, ab bada hua phir bhi😭😔
Aww
Moksh cute baccha, ran to his Papa❤️
Kalyani's happiness ❤️
The way Moksh promised his little sister
KalMa ❤️😍😍😍
Epilogue was beautiful where everyone is happy and at good position ❤️👍🏼
KalMaAnuSarMoSi together ❤️
Happy Family, Cute family 👍🏼
HAPPY ENDING!
Thanks for writing this cute and beautiful FF👍🏼
Originally posted by: leelavathi845
Very beautiful ❤️
I love it
No words to describe
The whole story is very beautiful ❤️
Thanks for writing
Thank you Leela 💕
Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius
Beautiful Update Rekha di
It was sweet+emotional+Lovely
Aww
Malhar and Siddhi bond is so cute
Princess ne apne baba ki baat maan li❤️
When Kalyani was telling truth to Moksh, it was so emotional 😭
The way KalMa handled situation 👍🏼
KalMa beautifully explained him meaning of Raabta❤️
(Rishtey apne pan ke sacche hote hai
Khoon ke rishton se bhi acche hote hai❤️)
Lines from title song of Yeh Hai Chahatein
SiKsh bond❤️
Siddhi's tears when he was going away💔😭
Kalyani's difficult situation, the way she controlled her emotions 🥱❤️
Malhar ji is so strong, but he also felt bad😭
Sampada and her sweet talks, materialistic treatment was described so well
Atharva and SamTharva kids did not even pay any attention
More than that Moksh himself understood that he will not get love same as he was getting in 'His House'!
Ye Sampada abhi tak nahi sudhri😡
Moksh ek saal ka bhi nahi tha, tab bhi marne ke liye haath uthati thi, ab bada hua phir bhi😭😔
Aww
Moksh cute baccha, ran to his Papa❤️
Kalyani's happiness ❤️
The way Moksh promised his little sister
KalMa ❤️😍😍😍
Epilogue was beautiful where everyone is happy and at good position ❤️👍🏼
KalMaAnuSarMoSi together ❤️
Happy Family, Cute family 👍🏼
HAPPY ENDING!
Thanks for writing this cute and beautiful FF👍🏼
Your comments are always detailed ❤❤ and lovely, listing out every aspect.
Thank you so much Bhagya. 😀
Hey. First and foremost thing you are a beautiful writer and a great talent.
Writing is not just a story it’s more about narration which makes the readers to visualize the scenes.
I read this Fanfic and enjoyed a lot. I was able to visualize the scene with ease which added more joy while reading this story.
I love Kalmash a lot. Your story narrated the real Kalmash. Siddhi is bonus 😊
Keep writing and make all of us enjoy Kalmash with full heart.
Lots of love and God bless you
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