Originally posted by: aparna3011
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maan n geet's first meeting is interesting
when geet clear her stand why she in forest this late maan become worried for her n follow her till she reach to safe place
Thanks aparna3011...😃
Originally posted by: aparna3011
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maan n geet's first meeting is interesting
when geet clear her stand why she in forest this late maan become worried for her n follow her till she reach to safe place
Thanks aparna3011...😃
Originally posted by: taahir004
I'm truly sorry for been so late
to read and comment
Part 1
Interesting Start
Mohinder he had to sell the land to Maan
but it seems now he is stalling perhaps wants something more
the villagers are terrified about the female ghost spirit
that roams around the forest and because of this fact they all
stay in doors after sun set
I guess for villagers once one makes a statement and that is also
proven true everyone would believe the same
Lucky tensed about his sister Geet
Prcap is Fascinating
Geet at the lakeside while even Maan att hat moment believes
that its a ghost while Geet needs to defend herself
Thanks taahir004...😃
Apologies accepted...❤️
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Part 2
lovely update.
of cos Geet was scared
liked how Maan and Geet met!
great that Maan followed Geet to ensure she reaches home safely.
her family are relieved seeing her
Thanks khwaishfan..😃
Originally posted by: taahir004
Part 2
Intriguing and Curious
Maan feels the land is his as it was his Rano Maa's land
he seeing Geet and thinking that she is the one that scares off the villagers
though I liked their first meeting but none actually saw the
other's face , how will they recognize the other again
I liked that Maan followed Geet to ensure her safety
and when he came into the rose plantation it was as if he had some
beautiful memories
Lucky talking about his Maasi is it Geet's mother
Thanks again taahir004...😃
Yes they haven't seen each other... But Maan might recognise her... Next update on this note!!
Yes, Lucky's Maasi is Geet's mother... (I have tried to stick to the same characters as in the show..)
Originally posted by: kabslocks
Awesome update. Geet's scooty is broken and she decided to walk through the jungle. Maan is in the land of his Ranoma when he saw a girl coming from the jungle. He thought him as bhootni and wanted to expose her. But Geet told him that she is not bhoot neither she believes in it. She went away and Maan followed her to her house. He is again lost in childhood memories. Lucky and Preeto are relaxed to see Geet back.
Thanks kabslocks...😃
Originally posted by: masoomii
Geet he bhootni niklegi dekh lena 😅
Thanks masoomii...😃
Arehhh, Geet toh bhooto mein vishwas hi nahi karti...😆
Prologue looks too different and interesting! 😆
Well Was that his dream or reality? Bhootni tho Maan ke peeche padi Hain.. Looks like it is attracted to him.. Or that, it was his imagination!? Looks likes geet is bootni??! 😆
Ohh so Maan is here to take the land of his rano maa.. But Mr handa seems a cunning person he wants the land himself . But MSK does not spare anythingwbich is his ! 😎
Geet is missing from noon
Haha precap seems intresting.. Looking forward to more 😆
Beautifuly written cia 👏
Part 2
Maaneet Meeting was lovely.
Geet was about to hit him, bach gaya bechara varna she could have hit him badly..
Maan has followed her till she reached her place that was cute..
I think that Land is Geets
Waiting to read more
Waiting for Part 3
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