Akshan ff:true love part 9 updated 2/6/2020 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 9

Dadi:Athe hu dono jadagna shuru kiya 

Aj:nahi ma aisa kuch nahi hum tho aise hi 

Guddu:maji aisa kuch nahi hai 

Dadi:yeh lo juice peeyo or aram karo tab yak dinner ready hojaugu before going out she hug her son 

Dadi:lalla tu teek tho hona 

Aj:ma mei bilcul teek hu she goes outside guddan gets sad thinking she is cheating her maji 

Aj:sambalo kudh ko hum jo bi kar rahi hai achayi keliye hai 

Guddu:par mei maji ke dip ke saath kel rahi hai tume nahi patha ki dadi keliye unki lalla kya hai or jindal saab keliye unki ma 

Aj:mei samaj saktha hu meri ma bhi muje aisa hi pyaar kartha hai 

Guddu:tumari family ki bare mei kuch nahi jantha kon kon hai tumari family mei 

Aj:ma papa bai and babhi 

Guddu:smiles sab tume bahuth pyaar karthi hogi hai haina 

Aj:ha bahuth 

They hear Durga and Lakshmi ‘s voice 

Kya hum andar asakthi hai.......

Guddu:ji ayiyena Durga bahu Lakshmi bahu 

Durga:aj apko dekkar hum bahuth kush hai 

Lakshmi:ha aj ap vapas agaya huna ab is gar ki roshni bhi vapas augi avinash papa jo andagar is gar mei failaya ap use fur karugi hume barosa hai 

Durga:hame tho yakeen nahi horahi hai ki hum fir se apko dek rahi hu mei me kishore ji vardan rahul ko informe kiya hai vo abhi athe hogi 

Lakshmi hug him akshat gets shocked ab yeh kya hai (here aj have beautiful relationship with his bahu’s and all Durga Lakshmi is more friendly with him)

Lakshmi started to cry hame abhi bhi yakeen nahi horahi aj ki ap vapas aya 

Durga also hug him 

Durga:aj apki favorite dish banaya apki tharah tast nahi hogi par hum koshish kiya hai aj hum chalthe hai ab apdono romance kariye they smiled and leave 

Akshat is in shock what is happening 

Aj:yaham bahu’s saru ko hug kartha hai yeh kon sa Reethi rivas  hai mei ne tho suna hai blessing Letha hai 

Guddu laugh:jindal saab unhe bahu nahi dost jantha hai is liye vo ithna friendly behave kar rahi hai is gar ko aj sab jindal saab ko yaad bhi isliye this kartha hai 

Kishore vardan and rahul came they also hug aj 

Kishor:yakeen hu nahi horahi ki ap hamare samne kada hai they hug him crying 

Avinash:ab ithna kyun pyaar har Sarahi hu vo tumlogo ki dad nahi mei hu 

They get angry 

Vardan:janam dene se koyi baap nahi bansaktha 

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Awesome 

Aj  ko bahot mehnat bkarni padegi 

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Teaser

He look at her face she look like a baby how cute she is 

He look around wall is filled with his pics nooo her jindal Saab’s pics he so lucky to get her love he felt why ?????kyun muje bura lagrahi hai??????he once again look at her is I am falling for her??????nooo this can’t happend........

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Interesting teaser

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Part 9

Next day 

Guddan woke up early akshat was still sleeping dadi came there 

Dadi:lalla Guddan jaldi ship puja karna haina 

Aj sleep broke by her words 

Aj:ithni jaldi unda hai 

Guddan smiles:jindal saab ise pehle ustharaf mera mathlab suraj ke pehle ....she smiles

Aj:what the hell is this tumara pathi ko apna bhi pasand nahi 

Guddan:Vo sirf todo der sothi hai ab jaldi Karo pooja mei patt lena hai 

They came downstairs after bath 

Akshat saw everyone gathered in hall avinash try to take pooja tali dadi stop him 

Dad:mera lalla vapas agaya hai aj vo or uski pathi karugi pooja dadi give aj thali aj take it Guddan and akshat started to do pooja Guddan’s Mind flashing abou her jindal saab how they used to pooja together a long tear escape from her eyes after pooja  kishore vardan and Rahul goes towards aj tell him about business problem how much loss they have after avinash’ entery 

Akshat:don’t worry kal sr mei office augi kal meeting hai share workers sr kehna kal mei augi or he look at avinash 

Akshat:I hope ab ap meri restorat na aye 

Ganga:aisa kyun bol rahi hu devarji ap 

Avinash:yeh sab mera bhi tho hai akshat 

Akshat:nahiii....yeh sab meine banaya hai sab mera hai ise katham karne nahi dugi mei apko

Ganga:damad ji apki bai sr bath kar rahi hai app 

Akshat:muje patha hai or mei sab kuch chuki hu ab apki manmani nahi chalegi 

Bahus’s And Guddan get happy 

Dadi:lalla trek kehrahi hai avinash tumne lalla ki moujoodagi mei is gar ko narak banaya ab or nahi 

Avinash and Ganga angrily goes fromthere 

Dadi and bahu’s go to kithchen 

Guddu:thankyou 

Akshat:hm yeh 1 step hai ithni asani se vo har nahi manugi 

Guddu:hm chalo mei khana banathi hu tu yaham bait 

She goes from there 

Akshat was roaming around he like this house he saw dadi babhus and Guddan who where in kitchen making dishes they where gossiping smiling he smiles looking at happy family they are not looking like saas and bahu’s they look like friends or sisters he understood how much they love each other he roam around he saw kishore vardan and rahul who where pulling eachothers leg and smiling he look at them they do him call him

Kishore:aj yaham baitona he sit with them 

They all chat long time their chat disturbed by guddan’s voice who call them for breakfast they eat breakfast after sometime akshat saw Guddan resting her pillow on bed post he look at her face how beautiful she look he thought he look around the room which have filled with his and guddan’s pic.....nooo her and her her jindal Saab’s pic how happy they are he felt bad thinking it’s not him who is with her why iam feeling bad???is she started to attack her noo this can’t happend she is affecting him but why???he look at akshat’s pic 

Aj:you are lucky who got her life ...she is also luckiest who got a loving hubby you are not only loving hubby you are a grate human thats why everyone love you so much then why you left all of them???

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#29

Awesome

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