ArHi || Boundless; (Of poets and poetry) - Page 23

This is such a magical story.

Awesome, loved it when their eyes met

Originally posted by: Savera84

Simply put it, Magical and Poetic.

We always assume, the characters know everything about everyone. Payal doesn't know what is going on. She rightly thought, Khushi made a noisy entry and distracted Arnav. So, to keep the proceedings going or the magic she and others were transported to going, she took care of the distraction. She has no idea what is going on in Arnav and Khushi's hearts or minds or both. But, now that they are so close and the lights are on, is it heard to notice that Arnav and Khushi are more than distracted by each other?

Payal introduced Arnav as her friend. Is there a boy hidden in those introductions?

The Payal, no not the human payal, the beautiful silver piece of jewellery, which is dropped and fell near Khushi's feet, is it going to become Arnav's prized possession for time being?

Lovely chapter.

Cheers.......

Payal, and the payal - an interesting juxtaposition there :)

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: Arshi67

You evoke the most beautiful imagery with your words, “a fertile silence of awareness” to pick one of so many. Showing an incipient love through the eyes of unrequited love magnified the intensity of the moment immeasurably. Payal, I really do feel for you.

I loved how you showed the change in Arnav’s recital after he sees Khushi. Heightened emotions that imbue the words with a different profoundness. Much like the shadowed darkness of the hall, a chapter to be savoured in the still of the night.

Which do I feel more grateful for, your generosity, or the beauty of your words?

Thank you <3

Originally posted by: sammymas

That was really poetical update....so beautiful. Just calm and collected 💞

Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: shils28

Fabulous! ❤️

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: veds275

This is such a magical story.

That's kind, thank you.

Originally posted by: ranogill

Awesome, loved it when their eyes met

Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Res

Will come back and try summing up my thoughts and the magic you’ve spun, through borrowed verses :)

❤️

Love all the poetry. Fabulous update.

Both Khshi and arnav are spellbound by each other.

Payal is in for a heartbreak soon. She seems to be nice so hope she will find someone too.

Payal and her unrequited love..

be-niyazi hadd se guzri banda-parvar kab talak

ham kahenge haal-e-dil aur aap farmaenge, kya?!

Oh my gosh... WHAT IS AIR??? The description of Arnav’s recital was stunning

“Ik zara chehra udhar kijiye

inayat hogi

aap ko dekh ke badi der se

meri saans ruki hai” ~ Gulzar

I NEED MOREEE!!!