MG FF : A Torn relation| Part 46,47 page 6,8| May 20th, 2020 - Page 7

Reading after a very long time. Hope you will update second life FF.

A torn relation

Part 47

https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2020/05/20/a-torn-relation-part-47/

thanks for updating again!

Part 47

majestic update. awesomely written!

Geet just needs Maan near her. he is indeed the source of her life.

can understand Maan's concern for Geet.

at least the doctor alerted him.

nice that Maan heeded the doctor's advice.

Maan feeling guilty is reasonable.

sad seeing Geet like this.

liked that Maan helps Geet.

glad she opened up with Maan.

great that Maan wanted her to reveal everything. She needs to speak about what happened.

hate that Geet blamed herself when she was not at fault.

loved how Maan tries to assure Geet.

wonderful that Maan diverts Geet's attention.

well it kind of worked but Geet then still in fear.

Maan realises her fears are based on the molestation incident that happened a year ago.

Maan kisses her so to distract her!

finally she falls asleep!

hope she gets well soon

Awesome updates 46 and 47

Replied on blog for both parts (separately) 😉

And yes thanks for starting this one again...

Part 46

Captivating Part

I feel if both Arohi and Arjun had told Maan about Ayesha

at least then he would have known that she is trying to sepertate

Arohi from him but they felt he loves Ayesha and they did not want to tell him

now at present Maan takes Geet out and she enjoys the peaceful surroundings

they truly have come a long way

Geet has suffered way to much , first when she was in college and then before she

married Maan he also didn't hear her pleas

I'm liking how Maan gives Geet the needed comfort and she now so willingly

listens to his words

her fear is just way to deep

Part 47

Another Intriguing Part

Maan has been feeling guilty that he is the one that made Geet

in this condition .

though it happened when Geet went on her college trip and its

just horrible and sad that Geet blames herself for that incident

though I liked Maan been guilty .

Maan trying to divert Geet's mind by kissing her but this time

he was gentle with his kisses and touches which is amazing

as now Geet can only respond to his touches she feel only in his arms

and finally when a disturbed Geet fall asleep her mind has been

diverted by Maan's smoothing words and touches

I really feel bad for Geet's suffering on both occasions it was not her fault

hopefully Maan will be able to take Geet out of that fear

Originally posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

And yes thanks for starting this one again...

You know why I did this.

My only resolution is to complete this by the end of year😋

Originally posted by: MA1970

Reading after a very long time. Hope you will update second life FF.

No I am not writing any old fics again

This will be the first and last.

Beautiful and emotional

So glad she responded a bit to maan. He needs to work so much more for her to start opening up