ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November - Page 32

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

yeh dono toh kahin bhi shuru ho jate hai......kuch toh khayal karo.........toh maan aur kurta pajama..........good change..........


lovely update..............


loved it.........


Maaneet hai ladai na ho toh it is not possible na hehe😘♥️ by the way thank you for the lovely comment♥️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 17

thank you for the pm!

amusing update.

wow Geet and Meera are best friends.

This Maan and Geet always argue. Gosh they fought over what baby Meera will have.

Poor Meera..... glad she intervened.

at least Maan agreed to give Geet half day leave so she attend Meera's godhbharai.

great that Geet got Maan to call her by her name,

nice that she will help him select the kurta set,

update soon

Hey khwaishfam you are my most loyal reader jb mai update nahi bhi krti thi tb bhi you always commented thank you for your patience and for your lovely comments lots of love to you... And yes will update soon i have started writing the chapter...♥️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Sasha is so confidant that nothing can happen to her. Dadi got her job back for her, so that makes her even more dangerous.

Geet and Maan just have to fight about everything.


Shasha ki toh bajegi pungi 😂😂😂 Dadi is innocent na unko ni pta isska dimaag Maaneet ho aur ladai na ho not possible naa 😂😂 by the way thanks for your comments ♥️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MA1970

Nice update. Precap interesting.


Thank you ♥️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Pauliqra

Nice story

This geet is bindaas and also strong qya awqaat diqhati h shaha qo wow

Maan and geet qi ladayi qa tou alag he mazaa h

Lekin hoshyarpoor qa qya scene naam sunte geet etna sad qyu hotii h

Maan is changing phle orange shirt fr song and ab kurta

Finally ye ms handa bolna bnd qr dia esne

Can't wait for next

Can you please send me pm for next part


Thank you so much for your lovely comment and i will surely send you the pm and will update soon♥️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Fabulous update. Meera is Geet's best friend and Maan's cousin Yash's wife. Meera came to invite Maan for her god bharai. She is amazed to see Geet there. She invited Geet also. Geet make fun of Maan for wearing official attir for family function. Maan took Geet to mall to choose kurta pyjama for himself.


Yes meera is awsome here you will see in upcoming updates ♥️😘 and thank you for your lovely comments♥️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

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Interesting unne ki fight baat karne se b pehle ho jati hai

Sasha try to warn Geet but Geet not interested in hr any talk

Meera Maan ki relative or Geet ki best friend

Meera was amazed seeing veerji fighting with Geet like this

Maan not less he got happy in irritating Geet now he made hr secretary too

Maan gave Geet half day leave on Meera request

Geet again bump to Maan poor him he have to listen Geet bakwas

Now Maan to make her buy his kurta fr function


Hehe.. maaneet ki fight i love islie i wrote this unki fight me jo maza hai kissi me ni hai and ab geet will choose kurta for maan ♥️😘 thanks you for the lovely comments ♥️😘

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Posted: 5 years ago

hey,

thanks for the updates...

loved the updates...

the scenes written wth maan and geet are so cute and funny remembered the drama days where they both used to fight...

Maan has slowly started to have feelings for her but hasnt realized as yet... he wants to spend time with her and also wants her to choose things for him...which is very unlike him...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: i rok

hey,

thanks for the updates...

loved the updates...

the scenes written wth maan and geet are so cute and funny remembered the drama days where they both used to fight...

Maan has slowly started to have feelings for her but hasnt realized as yet... he wants to spend time with her and also wants her to choose things for him...which is very unlike him...


Thank you so much 😘😍♥️

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Posted: 5 years ago

MG FF AANSOON


Thank you everyone for your lovely comments and likes luv uh all here is the next part… i have replied to all of your's comments agr koi reh gya ho th sorry... Hehe..

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Part 18


Maan said- Miss Handa…

Geet said- Miss Handa...

Maan said- Geet and he stopped after uttering geet… and eyed towards geet when he saw her he was lost in her.

And geet started dancing while saying- yupiee yupieee mai jeet gayi apne mujhe geet bulayaaa yeah… Mr Maan singh khurana ap Geet Handa se nahi jeet sakte… hehe…

Maan sighed and said- achaa theek hai geet ab dekho majne tumhari bat maan li na ab you have to help me with kurta and pyjama…

Geet laughed a little and said- ok…

And they went in for taking kurta pyjama for maan.


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As they entered the mall maan took geet to 3rd floor where his designer's showroom was...


As he entered the showroom the girls present there were seeing maan and were going fida over him.. but he ignored it all and went to meet Rishab singhaniya… he is naintara's brother…but he is a big flirt but good from heart.. as soon as he saw maan he went to greet him.


Rishab said-Hii Maan… and the second moment he saw geet and was shocked to see a girl with maan… he noticed geet and started liking her.. and thought - umm she is beautiful...


Maan said- Hello Rishab… he saw Rishab seeing towards geet… he felt something strange what he is not able to know… but he shrugged his thoughts and said- umm Rishab she is geet my secretary… and turning to geet he said- geet ye rishab hai mera designer..


Rishab said- ohh hii geet… or sir sirf maan ka designer nai hu mai inki bhabi ka bhai bhi hu...


Geet smiled and said-oh Hii… bhabi means ap naintara bhabi ke bhai hai…


Rishab said- yes you guessed it right… by the way you are very beautiful… and winked towards geet..


Geet was shocked to get such a compliment and a wink but she just smiled a little and said- umm thank you..


Maan saww all these things and was fuming from inside he held geet's hand and said to rishab - So Rishab I tolded you on phone I want something traditional…


Rishab when saw maan holding geet's hand thought to leave them alone otherwise maan will surely bury him alive seeing him glaring he said- Yes i know your choice maan and he called a salesman and said - Take them to traditional wear collection…


And salesman took them to the counter and said- Sir these are the collections please go ahead and choose sonething… and he went from there leaving maan and geet alone..


Maan said- umm geet so btao konsa kurta lu mai… he asked geet


Geet said nervously- umm sir vo kurta th theek hai hm choose krte hai.. pr phle mera hath toh chodiye..


Maan immediately left her hand and said- umm vo Rishab ne jo kha…


Geet said- it is ok..


Maan said- He is big flirt pr dil ka bura nai h vo..


Geet said- hmm vo toh i got to know.. sir.. and she smiled and said- chaliye jaldi se apke liye kurta choose krlete h...


After sometime...


Geet said while eyeing towards one kurta- Maan sir ye wala kaisa hai???


Maan said- nai nai geet bahaut bright colour hai kch light me dekho naa…


Geet said- ohfooo sir pichle do ghnte se ap apne liye kurta ni choose kr pare hai or na he mujhe choose krne de rahe hai … huhh


Maan said teasingly- ab mai kya karu agar mujhe pasand nai ara hai toh hmmm


Geet said- kuch ni chaddo parre… huh… and then she saw kurta of whitish cream colour simple yet attractive and she showed that to maan- maan sir ye wala acha hai na light colour bhi hai or attractive bhi hai aap par bahaut acha lagegaa…


Maan said- hmm acha th hai geet prr…


Geet said angrily- koi par var nai sir please hum yhi le rahe hai ok


Maan sighed seeing geet angry and said- Acha theek hai yhi lelete hai..

and then She called salesman and said bhaiya aap ye pack krdijiye…


Maan said- are pack karne ki kya zaroorat hai… mai phn leta hu na abi he.. vse bhi 1 baj rahe hai 3 baje tak hme waha pahuchna bhi hai… mai yhi ready hojauga..


Geet said thinking something- ok…


Maan then said to salesman - Payment ??



Salesman said- This way sir…


Maan said - Geet mai payment krkr aata hu tb tk tum yha wait kro ok…


Geet said- ok..


And then maan went to do payment.


Geet thought- Khud toh yha ready hojayege mai kha ready hougi.. huh dusht danav kahi ke 1 bja diya yhi pr… ab kya karu.. beechari meera wait kr ri hogi mera maine usse kaha tha mai 2 bje tk ajaugi.. 1 ghnta phle… huh.. oh teri meera se yad aaya maine uske liye koi gift toh liya he nai… hey babaji… and then she asked salesman.- ummm excuse me bhaiya… yha pr koi gift shop hogi kyaa???..


Salesman said- yes mam on 2 nd floor archies is there.. you can go there..


Geet smiled and said- ok thank you.


Geet was about to go on second floor but at the same time maan came and said- Geet kaha ja ri ho…


Geet said- umm vo sir actually mujhee meera ke liye kch gift lena hai..


Maan said- ohh gift vo toh mujhe bhi lena hai…


Geet said- achaa toh ap bhi chaliye mere sath…


And they both went to archies shop and buy gift for meera geet took lord krishna's idol and maan took a fairy's idol.


Maan then went to the designer's showroom and got changed.

Maan's Kurta


When he came outside geet was waiting for him at the corridor and she was checking him out unknown to her what she is doing… her trance broke when maan came near her and said - chalein??.


Geet was embarrassed and said- ummm ji chaliyee… and thought - Geet kya kar rahi thi tu maan sirr ko haww che che ye sb na uss pinky ki vjh se hua hai.. uski vo batt meree dimag se jaa he ni ri h ki mere or maan sir ke beech haye hayee ye pinky bhi naa…

Maan said to geet when he saw her lost in thoughts- umm kya hua geet kya soch ri ho…


Geet said immediately - umm vo kch ni…


Maan said- umm kch toh soch rahi thi tum btao kya soch rahi thi??


Geet said- Yahi soch rahi hu ki mai kaha ready hougi ap toh taiyar hogye pr mai kha ready hougi huh…


Maan was guilty and thought - ohh noo ye toh maine socha he nai

ye geet kha ready hogi or agr ye late hogi toh meera meri jaan kha jayegi oh godd ab kya karu… and he got an idea.. and said to geet- Ohh no problem geet jab Maan singh khurana tumhare sath hai toh tumhe kissi cheez ki tension lene ki zaroorat nai hai ek kam karte dekho meera ka ghar mere ghar se 10 min ki doori pr he hai so mere ghar chalte hai and tum waha ready hojana or hum dono fir wahi se meera ke ghar chale jayege.. ok…


Geet listened to maan and said- aapke ghar nai nai mai waha kaise ja sakti hu nai mai ni jaugi wahaa…


Maan said being angry- kyu mai kha jauga kya tumhee haaa…


Geet said- nai vo mera matlab vo nai tha… vo akeli ladki apke ghar pr nai nai bilkul nai mai ni jaugi apke sth…


Maan said being more angry- Geet tumhe kya lagta hai mai asa vsa ladka hu haa…


Geet said - nai sir mera mtlb vo nai hai vo… mai ni ja sakti apke ghar aap smjhte kyu nai hai…


Maan said being angry - ok fine mat aao fir yhi road pr ready hojao okh…


Geet shouted and made an o shape - hayee babajii road pr chee chee kaisi baate kar re ho aap sir... Huh… mai soch ri thi ki mai meera ke ghr pr he ready hojaugi abi 1:30 pm hore hai 2:30 pm bje tk hm waha pahauch jayege or mai vhi ready hojaugi…


Maan said being angry- ok as you wish and he moved from there to his car in his rude MSK walk… geet also came behind While Driving to meera's house maan thought geet do no trust him that is why she did not went to his house to get ready but on the other hand he thought how could she trust him when he always behaves rudely with her but then he thought what ever she does why do I care… and jerked off his thoughts..


Geet was seeing maan throughout when he was thinking amd thought- Shayad maan sir ko acha ni lga mai unke ghar ni gyi pr mai kya karu ase kaise unke ghar chali jau secretary hu unki koi relative thodi hu jo ase he ghr chali jau hainaa babaji… ha geet tune theek kiya… she thought to broke the silence and said- Umm maan sir mai gaane chala lu…


Maan said in angry tone- Nahi mujhe gane nai sunnee..


Geet said- please sirr..


Maan said angrily - Tumhe ek bari mein bat samjh nai aati hai kya..


Geet was shocked to see maan this much angry.. but vo bhi kaha rukne walon me se hai.. she said- Arre ap chilla kyu rahe hai asa bhi kya keh diya maine gaane he toh chalane ko keh ri hu…


Maan closed his eyes and thought - Mai ase kyu react kr rha hu kya hogya mujhe oh god… and said to geet - chala lo gaane…

And geet turned on thr FM.. and this time song was…


Aati hain woh aaise chal ke jaise jannat mein rehti hain

Dekhti hain sabko aaise jaise sabko woh sehti hain

Par gusse mein jb aaye aur ankhein woh dikhlaye

Ladte ladte galti se muskaaye

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm


Maan when listened to the lyrics he immediately thought of geet..

and thought ye toh pakka issi ke liye hai and smiled to himself...


Karti hu jab usse baatein Lagta hain sone wala hain

Soke jab jabbhi woh jaage Lagta hain rone wala hain

Par chupke se woh aye meri neend se mujhe jagaye

Le baahon mein aur khud hi woh gir jaaye

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm


Ha woh na na karti hain

Ha bada akadti hain

Ha thodisi ziddi hain

Ha akal se piddi hain

Jate hain sab baaye daaye wo jati hai

Tedhi in baaton se mujhko yeh satati hain

Har waqt se pehle aanaa sunn na na koi bahana

Par dekhna mera rasta rojana

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm


Ha picture mein rota hain

Ha khulle muh sota hain

Ha zara nalayak hain

Ha pitne ke layak hain

Jaane kya kehta hain jaane kya karta hain

Sofe pe chadhta hain pardo se ladta hain

Jab karne lage safaai samjho ke shaamat aayi

Fir thak ke jab leta hain angdaai

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm


Ha thodi alag si hain

Ha thodi galat si hain

Ha thoda alag sa hain

Ha thoda galat sa hain

Aaisi bhi hogi woh aaisa na socha tha

Ha Aaisa hi hoga woh aaisa hi socha tha

Kyo lagta hain yeh apna

Yeh sach hain ya hain sapna

Dar lagta hain kahi ho na jaaye jhuth

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm

My dil goes mmmmmm


And they reached there destination. Maan and geet entered meera's house together. Everyone present there was shocked seeing maan with a girl and that too in kurta pyjama. Dadimaa Naintara and Dev was also present there even they were shocked to see maan in kurta pyjama.. even shasha was also present there and was fuming from inside seeing maaneet together… and said - Ye geet ajkal kuch zada he mk ke sth rehne lagi hai iskaa kuch toh karna he padega .. and left from there stomping her foot….


Naintara said being shocked to Dev and Dadimaa - Ye aajkal kya gazab horha hai kal orange shirt or aaj kurta pyjama i can't believe this maan veerji me itne changes achanak se…


Dev said- Ha naintara asa lag rha hai jaise mujhe mere purane bro wapis milne wale hai jo hmeshaa muskurate rehte thee .. kyun dadima??


Dadima said - Ha dev bete ap bilkul sahi keh re hai bs ek bar maan ki shaadi hojye fir sab theek hojyega. In mind she thought - ye sab badlav geet ki vjh se hai… pr geet yha kaise aayi hme pata lagana hoga… and then she saw geet talking with meera..


Geet as soon as she entered meera's house with maan she left maan and went towards meera directly and said- Hii meera kaisi hai tu??


Meera said-So finally madam ap gaye pure adhe ghnte late hai tu she made an fake angry face..


Geet said appolgetically- I am sorry meera vo kch important kaam agya tha office me islie late hogyi… sorry… dekh mai taiyar bhi ni hui abi tk please help kar naa… she made puppy eyes… and meera melted and said- acha theek hai theek hai ab maafi Mt maang… chal mere room me and ready hojaa and she took geet to her room…. And said - Geet nandini kaha hai??


Geet said- maine usse msg krdia tha bs aati hogi vo bhi… And then meera helped geet to get ready…


And said- Wow geet you are looking like an angel…


Geet smiles and said- Thank you meera😊


Meera said- Chal ab chalte hai… Tujhe baki sabse bhi milati hu yash mummy ji or papaji se… and she took geet with her… as she entered the hall.. Maan saw geet and he was mesmerized seeing her… she was wearing a beautiful cream white colour dress… simple yet attractive...

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His trance broke when Dadimaa came and said- She is beautiful naa…


Maan asked questioningly- kon dadimaa..??


Dadima smiled and said- Geet…


Maan asked - Geet ap kaise jaanti hai usse???


Dadima said- Office me mile the ek bar…


Maan said- ohh…


Dadima was about to say something but meera's MIL Shanti devi called her and said- Aaiye function start karte hai…


Dadima said- ji chaliye…


Meanwhile nandini also came. Meera took geet with her to his MIL dadima was also present there…


Meera said- Mummy ji ye geet hai meri best friend..


Geet said folding her handa - namastey aunty ji


Shanti ji said- namastey beta.. jab se meera tumse milkr aayi hai bas tumhari he baate kari jari hai… tum bahaut sundar lag ri ho beta...


Geet said- Thank you aunty ji and then her eyes fell on dadima.. who was standing beside shanti ji… and thought ye th vhi hai jinse mai uss din office me mili thi.. meera ki fam inko kaise jaanti hai… her trance broke when meera introduced dadima to geet- Geet ye dadima hai.. maan sir ki dadi..


Geet was shocked to listen that she is maan sir's dadima… and thought - oh teri… ye tune kya kardiya geet babaji ab th mai gayi maine kitna kuch keh dia tha dadimaa.. ko maan sir ke baare me.. hey babaji bacha lena… she controlled herself and greeted dadima.. and said cutely with nervousness- namastey… maan sir ki dadimaa…


Dadima laughed on her antics and said- namastey beta…


Meera and her MIL left dadima and geet alone because some realatives called them…


Dadima said- bete ap itna ghbara kyu rahi hai??.


Geet said being embarrassed- umm vo I am sorry maan sir ki dadimaa.. mujhe nai pata the ki aap maan sir ke dadima hai ni th mai asa kch ni bolti….


Dadima said- aree beta apko maafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nai hai humara pota toh hai he khadoos bilkul sahi kaha tha apne…


Geet smiled when dadima said maan khadoos…


But two pair of eyes were seeing them and was fuming and he came forward and said- Dadima…


Dadima said- Haa maan bete boliye…


Maan said being angry- aap bhi iss geet ke sath mil gayi haa apne mujhe khadoos kha…


Dadima- Khadoos ko khadoos nai toh or kya kahege… haaa


Geet was enjoying the scenario between dadima and maan when suddenly nandini came from behind and said- Geet didi… finally ap mil gaye mujhe mai kabse aapko dhoondh rahi thi didi kha the ap… haa…


Geet said- aree nandu saaas toh lele…


Nandini took a breath and said - Geet didi meera didi se milwao naa kaha hai vo hmm… and while talking her eyes fell on maan and dadima standing behind them.. and seeing maan she said to geet in her ear- umm geet didi ye kon hai??? Haaye kitna handsome hai yr.. kya look hai… marjawa...


Geet said being angry - oyee nandu kya bolri hai tu… ha ye maan sir.. khabardar agr kch gadbad kari tune toh..


Nandini said being shocked- Geet didi ye apke boss hai omg apne inko andha kha tha hey babaji … And the she said.. umm didi introduction toh karaa doo…


Geet said- umm dadimaa maan sir… ye nandini hai meri bahen..


Maan said- oh toh ye hai vo jo uss din ph pr bakwas kr ri thi….


Nandini said being embarrassed - umm ha vo mai he thi pr jo kuch bhi maine bola tha naa vo toh mujhe geet didi ne btaya tha…


Geet muttered under her breath - nandu ki bachi tu toh gayi ghar chal fir btati hu.. tujhe she glared at Nandini and she instantly got shut..


Maan said- tumhari behn ka toh mujhe sab pta hai pta ni punjabi me kon kon si galiya deti rehti hai mujhe… or toh aur ab toh meri dadimaa ko bhi bhadka diya isne mere khilaf..


Geet said being angry - haww maine ni bhadkaya apki dadima ko samjhe ab apki harkate he aisi hai koi bhi apko khadoos he kahegaa… bs badi badi ankhe dikhate rahege sabko… huh…


Maan said being angry and glaring st her- GEET..


Geet said- dekha maan sir ki dadimaa maine kha tha naa badi badi aankhe… dadima and nandini started laughing and maan went from there in anger…


Dadima thought- hmm kya bat hai nice improvement miss handa se geet pr th aaye and she smiled to herself.


Meera and yash came forward and meet nandini and geet…


Yash said- aur salisahibaa kaisi hai aap apke bare me bahaut kuch bataya hai meera ne such me you are very beautiful…


Geet said- yash jiju ap bhi kuch kam handsome nai hai and winked towards yash and started laughing…


And then function got started.


Everyone started feeding sweets to meera and giving something in her jholi and some old ladies said to girls group which had geet and nandini also - aree ladkiyo…. kuch nach gaana karoo..


Geet said- ji aunty ji bilkul aakhir mai maasi jo banne wali hu…


And she went with girls to dance…


Geet started singing and dancing…


Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa

Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa


She took baliyaa of meera with her both hands and danced while moving her waist moving her hands with tune at her head and she danced.. and then she stsrted singing


Sola singar karke godi bharayi le

Sola singar karke godi bharayi le


She enacted like wearing jwellery and earings then she was waving her hands like holding a baby… and then she quickly went to yash and draged him in the middle and sang...


Saiyyan saiyyan saiyyan saiyyan

Saiyyan se kheli bahut

Abb chhotu ko khilayi le

Sola singar karke godi

Bharayi le sola singar kare


She again enacted taking baliya of meera…


Meera was blushing…


Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa

Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa

Chhotu jo aave ghar me


Yash also sang with geet and danced a little.


Chhotu jo aave ghar me


Oye hoye hoye hoye oye hoye hoye hoye


She danced doing bhangda..n while doing bhangda she went to meera's mother who knew geet well from college days… and took her with her in mid and sang..


Chhotu jo aave ghar me nani behlave

Payal pehenke nani nach dikhave

Payal pehenke nani nach dikhave


Meera's mother also danced a little and went back to her place…


Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa

Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa


Maan also came forward seeing geet dancing and singing and he

sang..


Han chhotu jo aave ghar me

Geet was shocked seeing him but then she also sang… while moving towards meera and sitting behind her..


Chhotu jo aave ghar me


Then maan sang while keeping his one shoulder on yash….


Hoye hoye oye oye oye

Chhotu jo aave ghar me masi ko bulave...

Napi badalke unki lori sunave

And Yash laughed over it


Geet said being angry- Napi masi ki… and she thought to give him answer back and said coming close to yash and kept her hand on yash,s shoulder forcefully shfting maan.. and sang….


Chhotu jo

Aave ghar me aave unke mama


Yash said-


Mama ya chacha mm chacha


Geet sang while moving towards maan amd enacting -


Chhotu jo aave ghar me

Aave unake mama

Daton se nadaaa pakde hath

Se pajama


And meera starting laughing on geet's enacting


Then geet sang-


Ohh teri hasi bhar

Bharke ghar me chhidkave

Oh sola singar karke godi bharayi le

Sola singar karke godi bharayi le

Saiyyan saiyyan saiyyan saiyyan

Saiyyan se kheli bahut


She again enacted the same steps and gave the krishna idol which she bought for meera and gave it in her jholi while singing..


Abb chhotu ko khilayi le

Sola singar karke godi

Bharayi le sola singar karke


She again took baliyan of meera… when geet was dancing maan thought - mai bhi fairy idol dedeta hu.. and he also came forward and blessed meera and gave her fairy idol.. meera was so Happy.. geet sang again taking baliya of meera..


Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa

Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa

Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa

Wari jawa wari jawa wari jawa

Sau sau bari sau sau bari wari jawa.


And after teasing sessions the function came to an end… but everyone present there was happy seeing maan enjoying the function whole heartedly after 5 years… but one person was fuming from inside and she was Shasha..


Everyone went there home including shasha only close members were left and meera also stopped geet and nandini… with her…

So persons left in the house was meera yash geet maan dev naintara nandini dadima and yash's parents.

Meera thought chalo let's play something….


Geet said being excited - haa chalo khelte hai…


Nandini also said- yes…


Yash said- No Meera i think you should take some rest..


Meera said- nai mai bilkul theek hu… plesse naaa yaash pleaseee bs thodi der khelege fir mai rest krlugi...please naa


Yash melted and said- umm acha theek hai zidddi ho tum bahaut… meera… pta ni mera baby kaisa.. hoga…


Meera said teasingly- meri tarah he hoga ziddi haha… and laughed…


Geet said- ek min mai ayi… Maan noticed her going… and she instantly came with a pillow and told meera to have this by her side so that she does not feel backache or uneasy…


Meera and everyone present in the room liked this gesture of geet including maan and dadimaa… and said- thank you so much geet tu hmesha se he itni caring hai love you…


Geet shooked her head and said- chal chal zada drame na kr ab or bta kya kehlna hai… hmmm…


Meera said- Passing the pillow excitedly…


Geet said- Passing thr pillow not a bad idea…


Meera said - toh ajao sb log hm khelte h…


Maan said- tum log khelo i have some work mai chlta hu.. ok bye meera take care... And turning towards Yash he said- dhyan rkhna iskaa agr ek bhi complaint sunii na maine th dekhna… he glared towards yash…


Yash just nodded his head like a obedient student.


Meera knew maan will not play game but still she tried to stop him And said- aree veerji ap kha ja re h please ab bhi kheliye naa bahaut mazaa ayega… please naa..


But instead of maan geet answered and said smilingly- aree meera kya tu bhi maan sir khelege or vo bhi passing the pillow kbhi nai unko toh bs aankhe dikhakr darana ata hai bs… and she started laughing and said - unkee bass ka nai h ye sab… rehnede hum sb log khelte hai…


Maan listened to geet and she was sounding like she is challenging himm… and he got angry and said- achaa mere bass ka nai hai… vo th abhi pta chl jyega ki kiske bas ka hai or kiske bas ka nai miss geet handa… and he said to meera- Start the game… he sat on the sofa..


Geet laughed on maan and said- let's see Mr. khurana who wins… and she also sat infront of the sofa…


To be continued.........


Precap- Phle page ko 60 pr pahauchao… amd next update would be on page number 51… hehe… meko bhi new thread open krna hai naa meri pehli ff… help mee… hehe..


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