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Okay guys... Another question.

I am working on the 11th chapter. And I want to confirm which other points are left to be taken up. The weapon, it's location and the face-off are left.

What else is left to be taken up??

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Okay guys... Another question.

I am working on the 11th chapter. And I want to confirm which other points are left to be taken up. The weapon, it's location and the face-off are left.

What else is left to be taken up??

That's all.

But yes, Rudra's connection to all these or why he was behaving weirdly is still unanswered.

Plus I got confused earlier that Anta would never supply Team R with the books. Because it would be much easier for him to take down Piya if she wasn't aware about the impending danger.

So I think you can write a bit to clear these things (for me 😛) like when Anta killed him or if it was Anta since the beginning, why did he inform Team R about everything.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

That's all.

But yes, Rudra's connection to all these or why he was behaving weirdly is still unanswered.

Plus I got confused earlier that Anta would never supply Team R with the books. Because it would be much easier for him to take down Piya if she wasn't aware about the impending danger.

So I think you can write a bit to clear these things (for me 😛) like when Anta killed him or if it was Anta since the beginning, why did he inform Team R about everything.

Oh haan... I completely forgot to mention Rudra. Chalo, ek aur addition ho gaya list main...

About Veer... I guess I already told that Veer was killed on the evening of 27th. This means that the one who gave Nishant those books was the original Veer but the one with whom he conversed on the phone in the next chapter was Antakasur.

I guess if I would not have shown Antakasur entering Nishant's house in Panditji's guise, I would have made him enter in Veer's guise...

Anyways, no problem... I'd keep this one in mind and try to explain. 😊

Also, any suggestions regarding how to begin the next chapter? The previous one ended with Ni-Sa-An getting to know Antakasur's truth... What about this one?

I believe you both covered all points now, Nikki. TFS on Veer too, wasn't clear.

Well, you can definitly start with Ansh the Hulk and Nishant putting some sense in his Khali Khopri. 😛 But then a brief conversation between them where they'll connect all the dots. Here you can explain Veer and Rudra. Finally they'll decide to go look for the weapon.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

I believe you both covered all points now, Nikki. TFS on Veer too, wasn't clear.

Okay... Thank you so much. 😊

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Well, you can definitly start with Ansh the Hulk and Nishant putting some sense in his Khali Khopri. 😛 But then a brief conversation between them where they'll connect all the dots. Here you can explain Veer and Rudra. Finally they'll decide to go look for the weapon.

Ansh the Hulk... Ho payega? Cos he was angry plus disappointed in the previous chapter and then Nishant calmed him down and they were talking with GM and Panditji. So, dobara Hulk mode... Is it possible??

About Rudra... Iska explanation hum thoda sa differently denge.

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Ansh the Hulk... Ho payega? Cos he was angry plus disappointed in the previous chapter and then Nishant calmed him down and they were talking with GM and Panditji. So, dobara Hulk mode... Is it possible??

About Rudra... Iska explanation hum thoda sa differently denge.

Hmm! Let's see, detail mein dene ki zarrorat nahi. Ek line se start kar sakti ho ki he is pissed and guilty and others were discussing. Aise shuru kar sakti ho. Otherwise directly discussion deke start karo.

I'll be waiting for your explanation regarding Rudra! 😊

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Hmm! Let's see, detail mein dene ki zarrorat nahi. Ek line se start kar sakti ho ki he is pissed and guilty and others were discussing. Aise shuru kar sakti ho. Otherwise directly discussion deke start karo.

I'll be waiting for your explanation regarding Rudra! 😊

Chalo theek hai... Dekhte hain kya ho sakta hai.

Besides, I need to write one scene about Ant too... After all, I have made Panditji mention about that weapon with which he would kill Pia...

About Rudra... I hope jaisa hum soch rahe hain waisa likh paye...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Chalo theek hai... Dekhte hain kya ho sakta hai.

Besides, I need to write one scene about Ant too... After all, I have made Panditji mention about that weapon with which he would kill Pia...

About Rudra... I hope jaisa hum soch rahe hain waisa likh paye...

All the best! 👍🏼