Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 79

Originally posted by: nushy1995

All the best! 👍🏼

Thank you so much... 🤗

Anyways, needed a small suggestion...

I have almost finished the 11th chapter but beech main thoda sa gadbad hai. According to my story, it is still the 29th and they still have a lot of time before the Kaal Shukra Grahan. So, how do I skip the time and make it the evening of 30th?? What should I make them do the entire 29th and half of the 30th??

Since they'll be trying to retrieve the weapon to kill Anta, you could add one last line that after retrieving it they'll realize hours have passed and they need to hurry to save Piya.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Since they'll be trying to retrieve the weapon to kill Anta, you could add one last line that after retrieving it they'll realize hours have passed and they need to hurry to save Piya.

See, weapon to bina Daivik ke milega nahi cos only Pia can pick it up and give to Ansh... Isiliye samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Simple way would be they have to search a lot and time passes, about other details like if Pia is needed, they have to find a way. Since it's your story, you would come with the best alternative.

Plus they possibly have to do some overnight Puja in a mandir to activate powers or get hints.

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Simple way would be they have to search a lot and time passes, about other details like if Pia is needed, they have to find a way. Since it's your story, you would come with the best alternative.

Plus they possibly have to do some overnight Puja in a mandir to activate powers or get hints.

Okay, thanks for the suggestions...

Hopefully, I'll be able to come up with something...

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

See, weapon to bina Daivik ke milega nahi cos only Pia can pick it up and give to Ansh... Isiliye samajh nahi aa raha hai.

Let me PM you.

Ab is thread ki baari...

Ek hafte se yahan bhi sannata hai...

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