Alternate take on what happens after Mahashivratri - Pt 8 on pg 8 - Page 4

Finally updating the next part with Mishbir conversation. It's a long conversation, and covers things I wish they would talk about just like the last part with kuku. The shayari is from the internet, from what I can find it is by Dr. Kumar Vishwas (https://dilsediltak.co.in/dr-kumar-vishwas-shayari-bahut-bikhra-bahut-toota-thapede-seh-nahi-paaya/).

Please read and comment, PMs are also fine. I tried to balance between them discussing what I wanted them to but still keeping to character.

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Part 4

Abir and Mishti get their tea and walk to a tree nearby and sit down.

A - Thodi der pehle aate toh yahan pe kitne taare dekhne ko milte! Koi nahi, aaj raat dekhne ko milega (Looking at Mishti and grinning) Taare ginoge mere saath?

M (shaking her head) - Romance ke liye kya kya jagah chunte ho - chat pe, car mein aur ab aaj raat itne bachon aur Kuhu-Kunal ke samne. Wah!

A - Arre mujhe kuch toh karna padega. Maine socha tha maine ek liberated angry chorni se shaadi ki hai lekin woh toh...

M - Kya?

A - Angry chornia nahi, darpok morni nikli! Phone mein kuch bhi baat karti ho lekin paas ho to...

M - To?

A - To 1950s ki heroine ban jati ho (starts singing in a falsetto) chod do aanchal zamana kya kahega…

M (laughing) - Idiot!

They are both quiet for a bit as they drink their tea.

Mishti is in deep thought.

A - Kya soch rahi ho Mishti?

M - Kuhu ke bare mein. Main aur Kuhu tum aur Kunal jaise nahi hain Abir. Tum dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte ho. Main toh Kuhu ke liye sirf woh ladki hoon jisne uske family mein aake sabka attention cheen liya. Usne kabhi accept hi nahi kiya ki main bhi usi family ka hissa hoon. Aur ab use lagta hai ki main uske sasural mein aake phir wohi kar rahi hoon.

A - Jab tumne kaha ki hamara alag rehna Kuhu-Kunal ke liye theek hoga, tum isi ki baat kar rahi thi na?

M - Haan, Kuhu ne baar baar mujhse kaha hai ki woh mere saath nahi reh sakti.

A - Aur tum? Kya tum uske saath reh sakti ho?

M - Main? I don’t know Abir. Main try toh karungi lekin tumein pata hai hamare beech kafi history hai, toh shayad dono taraf se lapses honge. Bahut pehle, jab mein apni dadi ke saath thi, toh hum friends the. Ab family hain par woh ye baat manti hi nahi. Sab badal gaya jab mein badi-maa aur bade-papa ke saath rehne aayi. Jasmeet Aunty aur Kuhu ke baatein sunkar mujhe hamesha aisa ehsaas hota hai ki yeh mera apna parivaar nahi hai. Jaise main ek bhoj hoon. Tumne hi mujhe ehsaan aur pyaar ke beech ka difference bataya, lekin jab bhi Kuhu mujhse kehti hai ki “main tumhe meri family ko hurt nahi karne doongi” toh mujhe chubti hai! Nishant ke waje se woh mujhse itni naraz hai, lekin usne bhi toh tum logon ko help kiya tha. Uska kya? Divorce wali baat meri waje se sabke samne aa gayi, uske liye sorry bola tha na? Woh nahi maani! Lekin jab woh bolti hai ki usse galti se haar toot gaya ya sleeping pills coffee mein gir gaye, toh mujhe manna chahiye!

A - Haan, I mean haar toota, rishta toota... jaise mami kehti hain, “same same different different” (laughing)

M (slaps his arm) - Tum sach much ajeeb ho. Tum jante ho mera matlab woh nahi tha. Main toh sirf uska help karna chahti thi lekin maine kabhi nahi chaha ki baat aise sab ke samne aa jaye. Maine socha ki woh sabse chupa rahi hai kyunki ghar mein shaadi ho rahi hai aur akele hi deal kar rahi hai. Main uske liye pareshan thi yaar!

A - Main jaanta hoon tumne jaan bujke nahi kiya. Actually, mujhe bhi ye tabhi pata chala ki un dono ki divorce ho rahi hai. Main Kunal ki madad kar raha tha Kuhu ho manane ke liye. Shayad Kuhu ka kuch alag plan tha aur phir sabke saamne yeh baat aa gayi and it was out of her control.

M - I know. Main jab bhi uski help karne ki try karti hoon toh kuch na kuch gadbad ho jati hai. Sabke samne aisi baat aa gayi, ye meri galti thi but woh toh uske shaadi, divorce sab ke liye mujhe blame kar rahi thi! Phir bhi meri waje se aur drama na ho isiliye maine shaadi ka mandap uske saath share kiya aur jab usne pehle shaadi karne ki zid ki, woh bhi maan liya aur humari shaadi ke liye alternative doond li.

A - Tumne toh humari shaadi hum dono ke liye bahut special bana diya. Tumne give-in bhi kiya aur jo tumhe chahiye tha woh bhi kar liya. Jab raaste do the, tumne teesra bana liya hamare liye. Ye sab ke bas ki baat nahi hai Mishti.

M - Main kisi ko hurt karna nahi chahti hoon par apna hak bhi nahi chodungi. Ab yeh ghar mera bhi hai. Main Kuhu ki jagah nahi lena chahti, balki apne liye jagah banana chahti hoon. Main jhagda nahi karna chahti hoon but main uski har baat pe give-in nahi kar sakti.

A - Mishti, tum aasani se give-in nahi karti isi waje se hum aaj saath hain. Lekin family ke liye kuch baton ko chod dena chahiye. Agar give-in karne se ghar mein shanti bani rahegi toh tumhe nahi lagta ki kabhi kabhi karni chahiye?

M - Jaise tum karte ho maa ke saath?

A - Yaar yahan meri aur maa ki baat kahan se aa gayi? Hum tumhare aur Kuhu ke bare mein baat kar rahe hain na. Main toh ye keh raha tha ki main bhi chahta hoon ki tum ghar mein sabke saath apna rishta banao. Aur maa ki baat aa hi gayi toh ab toh tumhe bhi clear ho gaya hoga ki maa ne tumhe accept nahi kiya hai. Tumhein kya lagta hai? Maa by chance kitchen mein sleeping pills leke gayi aur ye sab baatein karne lagi? Woh zaroor chahti hain ki tum aur Kuhu jhagda karen aur woh bol sake ki woh sahi thi.

M - Maa mujhe like nahi karti lekin family mein aisa jhagda kyun chahengi?

A - Maa ke liye sahi prove hona hi sabse important hai. Phir woh wohi baat ko baar baar use karke sabko control kar sakengi.

M - Hmmm

A - Suno, mujhe lagta hai ki agar hum chaar saath honge aur aapas mein sab share karenge without fighting toh maa kuch bhi kare, hum sab ek saath reh sakte hain. Tumhe hi sabke saath rehna hai. Maine tumse kaha tha ki hum alag rahenge but tum hi nahi maani.

M - Agar hum alag rehte tab toh maa definitely sahi nikalti na. Unka toh yahi manna hai ki mujhe ghar todna hi aata hai.

A - Maa ke ya kisi ke kehne se kuch sach nahi hota Mishti

M - Abir, ek hi cheez baar baar sunein toh kahin na kahin lagta hai ki shayad woh sach hi hai

A (hugging her close) - Toh main din mein sau baar tumse kahunga ki tum aisi bilkul nahi ho, OK? Mishti, maa ko sab ka weakness pata hai aur uska faida toh woh zaroor utayengi. Tum toh jaanti ho, unhone kaise kiya pehle Kunal ke saath, phir tumhare saath, aur mere saath bhi. Ab Kuhu ki baari hai. At least hum thoda understanding dikha sakte hain na?

M - Maine Kuhu se shaadi ke din hi baat kiya tha ki hum try karein get along karne ke liye lekin phir…

A - Toh phir in sab baton ko chod do na? Mishti, tumhein family se acceptance chahiye lekin tumhein ye bhi pata hai ki main tumhein har cheez mein support karunga. Aur main nahi karunga tab bhi tum khud itni strong ho. Kuhu aur Nanko ka rishta abhi abhi sab theek ho raha hai, aur ghar mein kya kum problems hain?

M - Theek hai. Lekin use samajhna hoga ki uski life barbaad karne mein mujhe kuch interest nahi hai.

A - Tumhara aur Kuhu ka soch kafi alag hai hain par tum dono hi chahte ho ki ghar mein sab khush hon. Iss trip ne humein thoda time diya hai sab sort karne ke liye aur...

M - Kya?

A - Ye decide karne ke liye ke hum maa se kaisa deal karenge. Parul maasi ko Nanko ne apna liya, maa ko bilkul accha nahi lagega. Woh toh mujhe iss baat se blackmail kar sakti hain lekin jab sab unke hisaab se nahi chal raha hai toh maa ab kuch na kuch drama karengi.

Now Abir is lost in his own thoughts.

M - Ab tum kahan kho gaye?

A - Uss blackmail ki waje se maine tumse break-up karke tumhara barosa toda...I’m sorry Mishti.

M - Tumhe toh kuch sochne ke liye bhi time nahi mila Abir. Mujhe pata hai, jab hamare dreams toot jate hain, toh bahut bura lagta hai. Tumne toh bachpan se apne baba ka intezaar kiya hai aur phir unke bare mein pata chala and mujhse bhi break-up karna pada…

A - Bahut bikhra bahut toota thapede seh nahi paya

Hawaon ke isharon pe magar mein beh nahi paya

M - I’m sorry Abir. Aur yeh sab meri waje se hua. Tumhare baba ko maine laya tha …

A - Mere liye Mishti! Jo bhi hain, jaisa bhi hain, sab apne liye khud responsible hain. Baba aise nikle usme tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Anyway, tumhe jab shak hua toh khud detective ban gayi sach pata karne ke liye. Akeli gayi yaar, itni danger mein thi. Mujhe pata hai tumhare paas woh magenta belt hai…

M - Brown belt...

A - Haan whatever, phir bhi, kuch bhi ho sakta tha Mishti!

M - I know, I’m so sorry Abir! (Mishti holds on tight to Abir’s hand) Maine socha ki bina proof ke tumse aise kaise keh sakti hoon?

A - Aur maa ko sab bata diya?

M - Maine call kiya tha Abir, par tumhare phone se baba ne message kiya. Aur jab wapas aayi toh maa mujhe pehle mili thi, raste mein hi. Woh pareshan thi ki tumhein tumhare baba ka sach kaise dikhayen. Mere paas toh proof tha. Maine tab kaha maa se ki wapas aake sab ko bata dete hain, lekin maa…

A - Unka plan kuch aur tha. Unko kaise trust kiya tumne? Tumhe toh pata hai na maa kaisi hain? Phir kyun unke baaton mein aa gayi?

M - Jab mujhe tumhare baba ke bare mein sach pata chala tabhi mujhe maasi aur Kunal ke bare mein bhi pata chala tha. Mujhe laga maa ne itna kuch kiya hai, itni responsibility khud pe le li. Meri maa ne toh unki apni beti ki responsibility strangers pe chod diya tha!

A - Lekin unko ye use karke apna kaam karvane se koi problem nahi hai! Aur phir, Nanko ko apnaya, par maasi ko naukrani ki tarah rakha yaar, door ke rishtedar bhi bana sakti thi na?

M - Apne husband se aisa betrayal sehna aasaan nahi hai Abir. Hum kaise keh sakte hain ki unhe kaisa react karna chahiye tha? Unhone toh Kunal ko poore dil se apna beta maana hai aur maasi ko bhi usse door nahi kiya.

A - Maasi ke liye kitna difficult hua hoga itne saalon se apna beta kisi aur ko maa keh raha hai. Nanko abhi bhi maasi ko maa nahi keh raha hai.

M - Abhi abhi toh tumne kaha ki kisi ke kuch kehne se woh sach nahi ho jata. Toh kisi ko kuch na kehne se bhi kuch nahi hota. Kunal maasi ke liye kuch toh feel karta hai, isiliye toh unka insult seh nahi paaya. Tum kyun insist kar rahe ho ki woh unhe maa bulayen? Jab use sahi lagega tab woh kar lega.

They see Kuhu and Kunal walking up to them and wave.

A - Aao tum log bhi kuch le lo aur phir hum chalte hain.

this good but i expected more of mishbir convo not about kuku or meenu...

i really want to see how they communicate about their 2 months period and how meenu sent parul to jail and mishti ki letter burn kiya, abir should have said this...

i know being in joint family we should compromise but never at cost of self respect, kuhu ne tho mishti self respect ki dajiya uda diya in cooking and convo of shivratri pooja in temple...

so mishti's hurt and ghussa is understandable, nd kuhu never gave any reason to trust her then y the hell they should trust her , just because they have adjust in joint family.. this is not fair acording to me...

trust should be between 2 persons and both should work on relation like in ur previous chapter u described how kunal should work for kuhu here also kuhu should work for mishti... as mishti made major efforts

many dont like me taking mishti's side but i really feel abir and kuhu both should work in mishti's side...

bahut rant kiya but nice chapter...

Originally posted by: ruhi19

this good but i expected more of mishbir convo not about kuku or meenu...

i really want to see how they communicate about their 2 months period and how meenu sent parul to jail and mishti ki letter burn kiya, abir should have said this...

i know being in joint family we should compromise but never at cost of self respect, kuhu ne tho mishti self respect ki dajiya uda diya in cooking and convo of shivratri pooja in temple...

so mishti's hurt and ghussa is understandable, nd kuhu never gave any reason to trust her then y the hell they should trust her , just because they have adjust in joint family.. this is not fair acording to me...

trust should be between 2 persons and both should work on relation like in ur previous chapter u described how kunal should work for kuhu here also kuhu should work for mishti... as mishti made major efforts

many dont like me taking mishti's side but i really feel abir and kuhu both should work in mishti's side...

bahut rant kiya but nice chapter...

Yes Ruhi, there's still a lot of stuff that needs to come out; but Abir, in my thinking, does not dwell a lot on things once they are resolved to his satisfaction. I have plans for some of the stuff you mentioned coming out, but right now I just want them (Mishku) to be in a position to talk to each other.

Conversations aise hi toh hote hain. Maine ek jagah start kiya aur likhte likhte kahin aur chali gayi. I edited and refined so many times aur kafi cut bhi kiya.

Are you talking about the shivratri pooja convo Kuhu had with Meenu? The pehli rasoi wala one I didn't think was vindictive. She was just trying to save her the embarrassment. Just before that she had told Jasmeet chachi they were on a truce. Of course, I don't remember now if Meenu said about the haar before or after she said this.

Kuhu aur Mishti ke beech friendship toh nahi ho rahi hai, uneasy truce hai ab tak. Trust toh door ki baat hai.

Abir aur Mishti ke beech toh itna trust hai, I can only think of these lines when I think of them - "rishta dil se dil ke aitbaar ka, zinda hai hum he se naam pyaar ka" ❤️

Thanks for the feedback 🤗

Originally posted by: angelfire78

Finally updating the next part with Mishbir conversation. It's a long conversation, and covers things I wish they would talk about just like the last part with kuku. The shayari is from the internet, from what I can find it is by Dr. Kumar Vishwas

Please read and comment, PMs are also fine. I tried to balance between them discussing what I wanted them to but still keeping to character.

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Part 4

Abir and Mishti get their tea and walk to a tree nearby and sit down.

A - Thodi der pehle aate toh yahan pe kitne taare dekhne ko milte! Koi nahi, aaj raat dekhne ko milega (Looking at Mishti and grinning) Taare ginoge mere saath?

M (shaking her head) - Romance ke liye kya kya jagah chunte ho - chat pe, car mein aur ab aaj raat itne bachon aur Kuhu-Kunal ke samne. Wah!

A - Arre mujhe kuch toh karna padega. Maine socha tha maine ek liberated angry chorni se shaadi ki hai lekin woh toh...

M - Kya?

A - Angry chornia nahi, darpok morni nikli! Phone mein kuch bhi baat karti ho lekin paas ho to...

M - To?

A - To 1950s ki heroine ban jati ho (starts singing in a falsetto) chod do aanchal zamana kya kahega…

M (laughing) - Idiot!

They are both quiet for a bit as they drink their tea.

Mishti is in deep thought.

A - Kya soch rahi ho Mishti?

M - Kuhu ke bare mein. Main aur Kuhu tum aur Kunal jaise nahi hain Abir. Tum dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte ho. Main toh Kuhu ke liye sirf woh ladki hoon jisne uske family mein aake sabka attention cheen liya. Usne kabhi accept hi nahi kiya ki main bhi usi family ka hissa hoon. Aur ab use lagta hai ki main uske sasural mein aake phir wohi kar rahi hoon.

A - Jab tumne kaha ki hamara alag rehna Kuhu-Kunal ke liye theek hoga, tum isi ki baat kar rahi thi na?

M - Haan, Kuhu ne baar baar mujhse kaha hai ki woh mere saath nahi reh sakti.

A - Aur tum? Kya tum uske saath reh sakti ho?

M - Main? I don’t know Abir. Main try toh karungi lekin tumein pata hai hamare beech kafi history hai, toh shayad dono taraf se lapses honge. Bahut pehle, jab mein apni dadi ke saath thi, toh hum friends the. Ab family hain par woh ye baat manti hi nahi. Sab badal gaya jab mein badi-maa aur bade-papa ke saath rehne aayi. Jasmeet Aunty aur Kuhu ke baatein sunkar mujhe hamesha aisa ehsaas hota hai ki yeh mera apna parivaar nahi hai. Jaise main ek bhoj hoon. Tumne hi mujhe ehsaan aur pyaar ke beech ka difference bataya, lekin jab bhi Kuhu mujhse kehti hai ki “main tumhe meri family ko hurt nahi karne doongi” toh mujhe chubti hai! Nishant ke waje se woh mujhse itni naraz hai, lekin usne bhi toh tum logon ko help kiya tha. Uska kya? Divorce wali baat meri waje se sabke samne aa gayi, uske liye sorry bola tha na? Woh nahi maani! Lekin jab woh bolti hai ki usse galti se haar toot gaya ya sleeping pills coffee mein gir gaye, toh mujhe manna chahiye!

A - Haan, I mean haar toota, rishta toota... jaise mami kehti hain, “same same different different” (laughing)

M (slaps his arm) - Tum sach much ajeeb ho. Tum jante ho mera matlab woh nahi tha. Main toh sirf uska help karna chahti thi lekin maine kabhi nahi chaha ki baat aise sab ke samne aa jaye. Maine socha ki woh sabse chupa rahi hai kyunki ghar mein shaadi ho rahi hai aur akele hi deal kar rahi hai. Main uske liye pareshan thi yaar!

A - Main jaanta hoon tumne jaan bujke nahi kiya. Actually, mujhe bhi ye tabhi pata chala ki un dono ki divorce ho rahi hai. Main Kunal ki madad kar raha tha Kuhu ho manane ke liye. Shayad Kuhu ka kuch alag plan tha aur phir sabke saamne yeh baat aa gayi and it was out of her control.

M - I know. Main jab bhi uski help karne ki try karti hoon toh kuch na kuch gadbad ho jati hai. Sabke samne aisi baat aa gayi, ye meri galti thi but woh toh uske shaadi, divorce sab ke liye mujhe blame kar rahi thi! Phir bhi meri waje se aur drama na ho isiliye maine shaadi ka mandap uske saath share kiya aur jab usne pehle shaadi karne ki zid ki, woh bhi maan liya aur humari shaadi ke liye alternative doond li.

A - Tumne toh humari shaadi hum dono ke liye bahut special bana diya. Tumne give-in bhi kiya aur jo tumhe chahiye tha woh bhi kar liya. Jab raaste do the, tumne teesra bana liya hamare liye. Ye sab ke bas ki baat nahi hai Mishti.

M - Main kisi ko hurt karna nahi chahti hoon par apna hak bhi nahi chodungi. Ab yeh ghar mera bhi hai. Main Kuhu ki jagah nahi lena chahti, balki apne liye jagah banana chahti hoon. Main jhagda nahi karna chahti hoon but main uski har baat pe give-in nahi kar sakti.

A - Mishti, tum aasani se give-in nahi karti isi waje se hum aaj saath hain. Lekin family ke liye kuch baton ko chod dena chahiye. Agar give-in karne se ghar mein shanti bani rahegi toh tumhe nahi lagta ki kabhi kabhi karni chahiye?

M - Jaise tum karte ho maa ke saath?

A - Yaar yahan meri aur maa ki baat kahan se aa gayi? Hum tumhare aur Kuhu ke bare mein baat kar rahe hain na. Main toh ye keh raha tha ki main bhi chahta hoon ki tum ghar mein sabke saath apna rishta banao. Aur maa ki baat aa hi gayi toh ab toh tumhe bhi clear ho gaya hoga ki maa ne tumhe accept nahi kiya hai. Tumhein kya lagta hai? Maa by chance kitchen mein sleeping pills leke gayi aur ye sab baatein karne lagi? Woh zaroor chahti hain ki tum aur Kuhu jhagda karen aur woh bol sake ki woh sahi thi.

M - Maa mujhe like nahi karti lekin family mein aisa jhagda kyun chahengi?

A - Maa ke liye sahi prove hona hi sabse important hai. Phir woh wohi baat ko baar baar use karke sabko control kar sakengi.

M - Hmmm

A - Suno, mujhe lagta hai ki agar hum chaar saath honge aur aapas mein sab share karenge without fighting toh maa kuch bhi kare, hum sab ek saath reh sakte hain. Tumhe hi sabke saath rehna hai. Maine tumse kaha tha ki hum alag rahenge but tum hi nahi maani.

M - Agar hum alag rehte tab toh maa definitely sahi nikalti na. Unka toh yahi manna hai ki mujhe ghar todna hi aata hai.

A - Maa ke ya kisi ke kehne se kuch sach nahi hota Mishti

M - Abir, ek hi cheez baar baar sunein toh kahin na kahin lagta hai ki shayad woh sach hi hai

A (hugging her close) - Toh main din mein sau baar tumse kahunga ki tum aisi bilkul nahi ho, OK? Mishti, maa ko sab ka weakness pata hai aur uska faida toh woh zaroor utayengi. Tum toh jaanti ho, unhone kaise kiya pehle Kunal ke saath, phir tumhare saath, aur mere saath bhi. Ab Kuhu ki baari hai. At least hum thoda understanding dikha sakte hain na?

M - Maine Kuhu se shaadi ke din hi baat kiya tha ki hum try karein get along karne ke liye lekin phir…

A - Toh phir in sab baton ko chod do na? Mishti, tumhein family se acceptance chahiye lekin tumhein ye bhi pata hai ki main tumhein har cheez mein support karunga. Aur main nahi karunga tab bhi tum khud itni strong ho. Kuhu aur Nanko ka rishta abhi abhi sab theek ho raha hai, aur ghar mein kya kum problems hain?

M - Theek hai. Lekin use samajhna hoga ki uski life barbaad karne mein mujhe kuch interest nahi hai.

A - Tumhara aur Kuhu ka soch kafi alag hai hain par tum dono hi chahte ho ki ghar mein sab khush hon. Iss trip ne humein thoda time diya hai sab sort karne ke liye aur...

M - Kya?

A - Ye decide karne ke liye ke hum maa se kaisa deal karenge. Parul maasi ko Nanko ne apna liya, maa ko bilkul accha nahi lagega. Woh toh mujhe iss baat se blackmail kar sakti hain lekin jab sab unke hisaab se nahi chal raha hai toh maa ab kuch na kuch drama karengi.

Now Abir is lost in his own thoughts.

M - Ab tum kahan kho gaye?

A - Uss blackmail ki waje se maine tumse break-up karke tumhara barosa toda...I’m sorry Mishti.

M - Tumhe toh kuch sochne ke liye bhi time nahi mila Abir. Mujhe pata hai, jab hamare dreams toot jate hain, toh bahut bura lagta hai. Tumne toh bachpan se apne baba ka intezaar kiya hai aur phir uke bare mein pata chala and mujhse bhi break-up karna pada…

A - Bahut bikhra bahut toota thapede seh nahi paya

Hawaon ke isharon pe magar mein beh nahi paya

M - I’m sorry Abir. Aur yeh sab meri waje se hua. Tumhare baba ko maine laya tha …

A - Mere liye Mishti! Jo bhi hain, jaisa bhi hain, sab apne liye khud responsible hain. Baba aise nikle usme tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Anyway, tumhe jab shak hua toh khud detective ban gayi sach pata karne ke liye. Akeli gayi yaar, itni danger mein thi. Mujhe pata hai tumhare paas woh magenta belt hai…

M - Brown belt...

A - Haan whatever, phir bhi, kuch bhi ho sakta tha Mishti!

M - I know, I’m so sorry Abir! (Mishti holds on tight to Abir’s hand) Maine socha ki bina proof ke tumse aise kaise keh sakti hoon?

A - Aur maa ko sab bata diya?

M - Maine call kiya tha Abir, par tumhare phone se baba ne message kiya. Aur jab wapas aayi toh maa mujhe pehle mili thi, raste mein hi. Woh pareshan thi ki tumhein tumhare baba ka sach kaise dikhayen. Mere paas toh proof tha. Maine tab kaha maa se ki wapas aake sab ko bata dete hain, lekin maa…

A - Unka plan kuch aur tha. Unko kaise trust kiya tumne? Tumhe toh pata hai na maa kaisi hain? Phir kyun unke baaton mein aa gayi?

M - Jab mujhe tumhare baba ke bare mein sach pata chala tabhi mujhe maasi aur Kunal ke bare mein bhi pata chala tha. Mujhe laga maa ne itna kuch kiya hai, itni responsibility khud pe le li. Meri maa ne toh unki apni beti ki responsibility strangers pe chod diya tha!

A - Lekin unko ye use karke apna kaam karvane se koi problem nahi hai! Aur phir, Nanko ko apnaya, par maasi ko naukrani ki tarah rakha yaar, door ke rishtedar bhi bana sakti thi na?

M - Apne husband se aisa betrayal sehna aasaan nahi hai Abir. Hum kaise keh sakte hain ki unhe kaisa react karna chahiye tha? Unhone toh Kunal ko poore dil se apna beta maana hai aur maasi ko bhi usse door nahi kiya.

A - Maasi ke liye kitna difficult hua hoga itne saalon se apna beta kisi aur ko maa keh raha hai. Nanko abhi bhi maasi ko maa nahi keh raha hai.

M - Abhi abhi toh tumne kaha ki kisi ke kuch kehne se woh sach nahi ho jata. Toh kisi ko kuch na kehne se bhi kuch nahi hota. Kunal maasi ke liye kuch toh feel karta hai, isiliye toh unka insult seh nahi paaya. Tum kyun insist kar rahe ho ki woh unhe maa bulayen? Jab use sahi lagega tab woh kar lega.

They see Kuhu and Kunal walking up to them and wave.

A - Aao tum log bhi kuch le lo aur phir hum chalte hain.

So sweet! Abir & Mishti talking about each other's issues clearly. MishBir know each other so well that we know they will need one simple conversation to give each other the comfort they need and deserve. Abir comforting Mishti as well as explaining the delicate situations in their family is what every newly married couple should talk about.

Mishti explaining her perspective during Baba track really interests me because I really wanted her to talk to Abir before literally entering Lion's Den.

I liked the conversation and now I look forward to my fantastic four teaming up.

Daya,

I don't know what you were worried about. This chapter just became my favourite out of all 4 because it seemed so true to the onscreen characters.

Being more of a KuKu fan, I am sad now that you went the wish fulfilment way for them. I absolutely loved this conversation. This was so real, so MishBir and so peaceful. I felt calm after reading it.

I am actually a fan of both couples. It's just that KuKu scenes give me the butterflies and I found more acceptance for my overall thoughts for the show in the KuKu AT. I've been trying to balance the thought process for all 4 characters and stories like yours are of great help.

Also, the one detail I loved above all was the conversation about Baba. They haven't really spoken about it in the show and that must be so hard for Abir. He had been fixated on the guy for so long and then his life just fell apart the next day he found out the truth.

Originally posted by: shelzee

So sweet! Abir & Mishti talking about each other's issues clearly. MishBir know each other so well that we know they will need one simple conversation to give each other the comfort they need and deserve. Abir comforting Mishti as well as explaining the delicate situations in their family is what every newly married couple should talk about.

Mishti explaining her perspective during Baba track really interests me because I really wanted her to talk to Abir before literally entering Lion's Den.

I liked the conversation and now I look forward to my fantastic four teaming up.

Thanks Shelzee.

Abir has clearly chosen Mishti over his family. Mishti knows this, appreciates it, and wants to try to live together with the family anyway. For this to work, they would need to clearly understand the power play and lose some battles to win the war 😊.

Glad you liked the baba track convo. I thought they should have it but it took some thought to have the conversation flow (I hope) organically.

Originally posted by: aquaHP

Daya,

I don't know what you were worried about. This chapter just became my favourite out of all 4 because it seemed so true to the onscreen characters.

Being more of a KuKu fan, I am sad now that you went the wish fulfilment way for them. I absolutely loved this conversation. This was so real, so MishBir and so peaceful. I felt calm after reading it.

I am actually a fan of both couples. It's just that KuKu scenes give me the butterflies and I found more acceptance for my overall thoughts for the show in the KuKu AT. I've been trying to balance the thought process for all 4 characters and stories like yours are of great help.

Also, the one detail I loved above all was the conversation about Baba. They haven't really spoken about it in the show and that must be so hard for Abir. He had been fixated on the guy for so long and then his life just fell apart the next day he found out the truth.

Thanks aqua. I tried really hard to keep the characters as true to themselves as possible.

I know kuku (especially Kunal) were not. As I said before, I really debated about that. I couldn't think of any other way to have Kuhu enough at peace with herself to agree to be part of their team. She needs that love and security and from Kunal she really deserves it after all she put up with for and from him.

Originally posted by: angelfire78

Yes Ruhi, there's still a lot of stuff that needs to come out; but Abir, in my thinking, does not dwell a lot on things once they are resolved to his satisfaction. I have plans for some of the stuff you mentioned coming out, but right now I just want them (Mishku) to be in a position to talk to each other.

Conversations aise hi toh hote hain. Maine ek jagah start kiya aur likhte likhte kahin aur chali gayi. I edited and refined so many times aur kafi cut bhi kiya.

Are you talking about the shivratri pooja convo Kuhu had with Meenu? The pehli rasoi wala one I didn't think was vindictive. She was just trying to save her the embarrassment. Just before that she had told Jasmeet chachi they were on a truce. Of course, I don't remember now if Meenu said about the haar before or after she said this.

Kuhu aur Mishti ke beech friendship toh nahi ho rahi hai, uneasy truce hai ab tak. Trust toh door ki baat hai.

Abir aur Mishti ke beech toh itna trust hai, I can only think of these lines when I think of them - "rishta dil se dil ke aitbaar ka, zinda hai hum he se naam pyaar ka" ❤️

Thanks for the feedback 🤗

i would love to see more of mishbir struggles in those 2 months, greedy for mishbir but hoon, i cant do anything...mishbir gives me relationship goals... just seeing them together is happiness for me...

im not saying conversation shouldnt be like this yar, as i writer i can understand how much we edit it out and how it start from one and end it at other point, i really wanted first their issues to be solved, like how mishti felt worse seeing him like this or how he waited for him to open his eyes, thats it...

yes shivratri convo with meenu after kuku did aarti, meenu question about mishti to kuhu so she says mishti kud ki decision leti hain and she dont how to be in joint family, pheli rasoi according to me kuhu demean mishti only because of haar thing, meenu first only said to kuhu that she will give that haar after pheli rasoi and kuhu dont want that go for mishti or idk about her thoughts but for me it looked like demean only, i mean if she want to make free from embrassment she would ahve said i will guide and then she will cook for madam tho chop kar diya... anyways har koyi ka apna nazariya hota hain, so i leave it...

kuhu and mishti talking terms mein ho bhi sakte hain until and unless they are out from both MAH and RJV house, if they go there then rinse and repeat start hoga...

abir and mishti had alot of trust, bas unko ek dusre ki sun ni chahiye... they are not the people to drag things, they just need assurance from other that they are doing right and knowing each other issues...

Originally posted by: ruhi19

hi daya...

i would love to see more of mishbir struggles in those 2 months, greedy for mishbir but hoon, i cant do anything...mishbir gives me relationship goals... just seeing them together is happiness for me...

im not saying conversation shouldnt be like this yar, as i writer i can understand how much we edit it out and how it start from one and end it at other point, i really wanted first their issues to be solved, like how mishti felt worse seeing him like this or how he waited for him to open his eyes, thats it...

yes shivratri convo with meenu after kuku did aarti, meenu question about mishti to kuhu so she says mishti kud ki decision leti hain and she dont how to be in joint family, pheli rasoi according to me kuhu demean mishti only because of haar thing, meenu first only said to kuhu that she will give that haar after pheli rasoi and kuhu dont want that go for mishti or idk about her thoughts but for me it looked like demean only, i mean if she want to make free from embrassment she would ahve said i will guide and then she will cook for madam tho chop kar diya... anyways har koyi ka apna nazariya hota hain, so i leave it...

kuhu and mishti talking terms mein ho bhi sakte hain until and unless they are out from both MAH and RJV house, if they go there then rinse and repeat start hoga...

abir and mishti had alot of trust, bas unko ek dusre ki sun ni chahiye... they are not the people to drag things, they just need assurance from other that they are doing right and knowing each other issues...

I know right? I am also greedy for mishbir - that's why I'm writing. I have another story started on how they meet up at the resort, but I haven't had a chance to concentrate on writing that. That one is all mishbir though.

Shivratri ke ek episode se kitna material mil raha hai. Have to see what all will come out and be discussed.

While I like mishbir feeling comfortable enough to fight the way they are doing (reasons for which we keep discussing in the AT 😉), I also want them to just listen to each other.

Originally posted by: angelfire78

I know right? I am also greedy for mishbir - that's why I'm writing. I have another story started on how they meet up at the resort, but I haven't had a chance to concentrate on writing that. That one is all mishbir though.

Shivratri ke ek episode se kitna material mil raha hai. Have to see what all will come out and be discussed.

While I like mishbir feeling comfortable enough to fight the way they are doing (reasons for which we keep discussing in the AT 😉), I also want them to just listen to each other.

then put it out of resort, either good or bad if u wont put it out it, u cant concentrate on next..

shivaratri ke time bahut kuch mila, esply abir's antics with mishti, i can see anytime in loop...

see i love mishbir fights but baseless i cant take it, now a days both are correct but its becoming baseless for me.. but i can understand abir want to cocncentrate on other things and mishti want to solve or say all about kuhu and then other thing...so ye tho hona hi tha... lest hope they come back soon...