Alternate take on what happens after Mahashivratri - Pt 8 on pg 8 - Page 3

its really nice daya..

Wow!! #badbola Kunal!! Isne to sab bol daala! 😲

Also, I can totally see the influence of you silent stalking the ATs. Saari complaints khatam hi kar di yaar tumne to! 😆

I'm pretty sure MA fans are going to super happy with your next chapter if it's anything like this!

omg...itna toh kunal show ke 271 episodes mein nahi bola hoga jitna yahan ek scene mein bol diya🤪

anyways I loved that kuku are discussing & sorting out their issues #maturecouplevibes ❤️

glad that atleast in this alternate universe kunal is taking the lead😎

I also loved how you have written it in the dialogue format, makes it easier to imagine

thanks for writing & sharing🤗

Originally posted by: aquaHP

Wow!! #badbola Kunal!! Isne to sab bol daala! 😲

Also, I can totally see the influence of you silent stalking the ATs. Saari complaints khatam hi kar di yaar tumne to! 😆

I'm pretty sure MA fans are going to super happy with your next chapter if it's anything like this!

Thanks aqua. In my opinion, the only person Kunal would talk so much to (if ever!) is Kuhu. He's a listener in general. I just think after all he did, he really needs to make it clear to Kuhu that he still wants her in his life because she's important to him and not just because he likes the status quo. I realized as I wrote that Kunal would never talk so much 😊. I need them to share with each other before I write about all four becoming a team.

Yes I've been stalking for a while now as you can see 🤣

Gosh I hope I do justice to MA. I like the whole cast, but they are my favorites, and it's hard to be satisfied with whatever I write for them.

Originally posted by: peacenfun

omg...itna toh kunal show ke 271 episodes mein nahi bola hoga jitna yahan ek scene mein bol diya🤪

IKR??!!! 🤣

Ye Kunal kitna bolta hai!! 😆

Originally posted by: angelfire78

Thanks aqua. In my opinion, the only person Kunal would talk so much to (if ever!) is Kuhu. He's a listener in general. I just think after all he did, he really needs to make it clear to Kuhu that he still wants her in his life because she's important to him and not just because he likes the status quo. I realized as I wrote that Kunal would never talk so much 😊. I need them to share with each other before I write about all four becoming a team.

Yes I've been stalking for a while now as you can see 🤣

Gosh I hope I do justice to MA. I like the whole cast, but they are my favorites, and it's hard to be satisfied with whatever I write for them.

I am liking this AU badbola Kunal. Kahin to bole ladka humaara. Also, after watching Kaveri's live interviews, I don't think the day is too far when he confesses his feelings in the show. She has hinted at that too many times and I can't wait for the show to be back now.

You will do justice. Don't worry! Dil se likho and jo niklega, achha hi hoga. That's my trick for being satisfied with what I write.

Originally posted by: peacenfun

omg...itna toh kunal show ke 271 episodes mein nahi bola hoga jitna yahan ek scene mein bol diya🤪

anyways I loved that kuku are discussing & sorting out their issues #maturecouplevibes ❤️

glad that atleast in this alternate universe kunal is taking the lead😎

I also loved how you have written it in the dialogue format, makes it easier to imagine

thanks for writing & sharing🤗

True 🤣By the way. what does that emoticon at the end of the first line mean?

I did debate about this a lot, but if the 4 of them need to become a team (and they do for my story), they need to sort out their individual issues first and Kunal has a lot he needs to sort through. I have more plans, but yahi bahut ho gaya, so I've kept Kuhu's issues for another time and place (if I ever get to it!).

Glad you liked it. It's my first story and I honestly didn't expect it to go this long.

Originally posted by: angelfire78

True 🤣By the way. what does that emoticon at the end of the first line mean?

#oops (atleast maine toh yahi soch kar likha tha😉)

I did debate about this a lot, but if the 4 of them need to become a team (and they do for my story), they need to sort out their individual issues first and Kunal has a lot he needs to sort through. I have more plans, but yahi bahut ho gaya, so I've kept Kuhu's issues for another time and place (if I ever get to it!).

I understand, thats why I loved this kunal, its a dream come true version of him for most kuku fans😈

Glad you liked it. It's my first story and I honestly didn't expect it to go this long.

for 1st attempt, its commendable👍🏼

Hi Daya

Just read all the chapters together. We are so used to miscommunication in the show now that the first chapter seemed too good but equally unbelievable 😆

But then that's how situations take place in real world, right. People talk , they apologise, forgive and move on. So, to keep it short, loved the breath of fresh air you brought to the situation. I started feeling lighter after reading it as if the pressure of the secrets was off my chest too 😆

Chapter 2 : oh how I have loved fantastic four on the show and it was great to see them back - as they should be - sensible, reasonable and funny. Reminded me of good old days when the fun quotient was much higher in the show. I just so wish the writers take your sensibilities and give us a positive track with the four of them as a team. Thanks for giving us a glimpse of them together.

Chapter 3: Because of the limited screen space, Kunal and Kuhu's story has so many loose ends that I personally feel one conversation may not be enough. But I loved the way you made Kunal open up to Kuhu not just about the current situation but his feelings in general. And I really liked the way you have aligned resolution of with Kuhu's major insecurities with Kunal's expression of love and appreciation for Kuhu. Thats a very practical take. Love actually heals deep wounds and Kunal really has the key to Kuhu's issues. And yes, he needs to balance his devar-of-the-year devotion with being an understanding husband, and his wife will back in her sorted avatar.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Originally posted by: shelzee

Hi Daya

Just read all the chapters together. We are so used to miscommunication in the show now that the first chapter seemed too good but equally unbelievable 😆

But then that's how situations take place in real world, right. People talk , they apologise, forgive and move on. So, to keep it short, loved the breath of fresh air you brought to the situation. I started feeling lighter after reading it as if the pressure of the secrets was off my chest too 😆

Chapter 2 : oh how I have loved fantastic four on the show and it was great to see them back - as they should be - sensible, reasonable and funny. Reminded me of good old days when the fun quotient was much higher in the show. I just so wish the writers take your sensibilities and give us a positive track with the four of them as a team. Thanks for giving us a glimpse of them together.

Chapter 3: Because of the limited screen space, Kunal and Kuhu's story has so many loose ends that I personally feel one conversation may not be enough. But I loved the way you made Kunal open up to Kuhu not just about the current situation but his feelings in general. And I really liked the way you have aligned resolution of with Kuhu's major insecurities with Kunal's expression of love and appreciation for Kuhu. Thats a very practical take. Love actually heals deep wounds and Kunal really has the key to Kuhu's issues. And yes, he needs to balance his devar-of-the-year devotion with being an understanding husband, and his wife will back in her sorted avatar.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Thanks shelzee. I grew up in a joint family, and fights and fun just went together. I too love it when the fun quotient is higher and drama less, but perhaps drama is better for TRPs. Somehow when I watched IPKKND I used to find something to laugh in every episode, even though there was more than enough drama there too. I have to admit, I watched it only last year and all at once, so I may have skipped over some drama and concentrated on the fun. YRHPK is the very first serial I'm watching in real time in its genre. I don't have the patience usually.