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Posted: 5 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Beautiful os. Keep writing this kind of light hearted os.

Thanks I am Just posting old works

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

OS 4


khamoshi


https://suhanasmaaneetfictions.wordpress.com/2020/04/22/os/


PASSWORD: maangeet

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

4th OS


Painful and Awesome OS



It seems when Maan was alive with Geet though he loved her

he was obsessed and possessive and perhaps due to the obsession

in him made Geet go out of her marriage , though wrong but it also seems

like she suffered physically been with him

but now that he is dead she cannot forget , she harms herself just to punish herself

for what she did to her husband

it also seems that their relation must have had love too as she remembers certain

romances that they had

yet at the same time she feels her husband Maan is troubling her its almost as if

she will be at peace only once dead

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Hi suhaana..

Read 4 os...khamoshi..

Different angle to maneet story ..

Geet loved her husband but can't live with him .she killed maan ??

Last she is also no more ...she met her soul maan ..

It's nice ...


Thank you

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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

Hi suhaana..


Read it's not just love...this good the way maan and geet are straightforward. Geet is not in love with maan but want to marry him for her parents wishes ..

I wished you add a little bit more ..Geet meeting her biological parents and maneet happy marriage

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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

khamoshi

commented on blog

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

thanks for posting

commented on the blog

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Maan is gone? She had doubted him when he was there. Why?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

nice update...truly captured the essence of lockdown eat sleep and be merry. ek pillow fight bhi hogi na?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: tabby999

Hi suhaana..


Read it's not just love...this good the way maan and geet are straightforward. Geet is not in love with maan but want to marry him for her parents wishes ..

I wished you add a little bit more ..Geet meeting her biological parents and maneet happy marriage


Thanks

Actually this was a SS concept but I didn't had time so wrote a OS

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