MG: OSes | Pg 10 , August 1 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

75

Views

4.3k

Users

17

Likes

114

Frequent Posters

suhaaana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: crazymaneetian

nice update...truly captured the essence of lockdown eat sleep and be merry. ek pillow fight bhi hogi na?


Is this comment for twenty one days?

crazymaneetian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#52

yes. did i again post comment on another story? how come I end up performing such magic?

suhaaana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#53

Random shot


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2020/05/16/fire-and-ice/


There is no continuation.

It's just a random write up.

Edited by suhaaana - 5 years ago
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 5 years ago
#54

thanks for another OS!


Fire and Ice

tremendous OS! majestically written!

so Geet used Maan....

sad that it was just a game for her.

can understand his anger.

Why did she do this?

seems like Maan really loved her!


wish this was continued...

taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#55

Fire and Ice OS


A Brilliant and Bold OS



oh I so loved it

It almost feels like Geet was hurt that she felt or believed that Maan

perhaps cheated or loved someone else

she used his love for her revenge game , and she was so clear about it

so Maan was always only Geet's

well that's bad as she is leaving and will never know what she lost

khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 5 years ago
#56

waiting for the next random OS

suhaaana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#57

Random shot


Well I was reading about the sharda act proposed to legalize the marriagable age of girls to 21 yr.



So, just wrote something.


https://suhanasmaaneetfictions.wordpress.com/2020/06/24/random-shot/

khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 5 years ago
#58

hi thanks for posting!


Random Shot

tremendous update

sad that Geet got married at the age of fifteen... she was just a child but forced to take on responsibilities.

hate how he husband treated her.

now he wants her back.... as if nothing happened.
liked how she handled the matter.

glad that Geet gave him befitting reply.

he deserved that.

at least she had the family's support.

Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
aparna3011 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago
#59

9

very thoughtful

every one must think before doing injustice to any relation more in the relation of husband n wife

taahir004 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#60

Interesting and so Superb OS


Parents are the one's responsible for their daughters

and giving them away at such a tender age of 15 years

its truly sad but it has to be worst for the girl instead of enjoying life

she is hit with responsibilities and pain

I'm glad that Geet decides to stand up for herself

her husband left her went to another woman now comes

back and wants his wife back

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: mayyo

4 years ago

Wired Hearts (8) Updated Ch:61, Pg:37 |August 9th

INDEX 1. The Blanket Of Time 2. Family 3. R R 4. Mending Bonds 5. A New Beginning 6. Anticipation 7. Maasi. Twice Over 8. Life Is A Cycle 9. A...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom

8 years ago

MG FF - HOW TO NAME IT? - UPDATED PART 11 & 12 PG 83 Dt. 23rd August.

HELLO EVERYONE...I have been imagining a very different story line with Maneet and decided to Pen it down...This Storyline is far different and...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".