Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 70

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Well, Rishi was actually pissed off and Ansh had apologized after which they buried the hatchet. To yeh to thik suit nahi karega.

But then again, tumhara main idea Kya Hain? Comedy or Emotional?

Well, abhi koi definite idea nahi hai dimag main... I might write comedy or even emotional too, since I am trying to explore different genres.

I was actually thinking of an AU. The truth is revealed... Then, it is also revealed that Ansh became EDV due to the Daayan Saaya. Uske baad, after all the apologies and everything else, Ansh goes on a guilt trip as usual... To, aisa kuch soch rahe the.

I haven't zeroed down to something as of now... Abhi to bas Pia ki kidnapping main atke hain. Uske baad, I have to write the next chapter about the battle too. To ek baar ye khatam ho jaye, uske baad final decision lenge...

Then I would suggest tum Antakasur pehle thik she likho. Itna Sara ideas ek saath sochoge to garbar ho jayega. Aur waise bhi Antakasur khatam karte karte shayad tumhe much clarity bhi mil Jaye. Otherwise Bas Rishi ko leke likhne ke liye shuru nahi karna Chahiye.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Then I would suggest tum Antakasur pehle thik she likho. Itna Sara ideas ek saath sochoge to garbar ho jayega. Aur waise bhi Antakasur khatam karte karte shayad tumhe much clarity bhi mil Jaye. Otherwise Bas Rishi ko leke likhne ke liye shuru nahi karna Chahiye.

Kar to wahi rahe hain... Right now, I am only after Antakasur story. Waise bhi, kaafi lambi khinch gayi hai. Jaldi se jaldi khatam karni hai hume...

Bas ek baar ye khatam ho jaye, phir koi dusari uthayenge...

Although, I do have a second FF idea that I shared with you guys... To, maybe I might take that up too after this...

Nikki & Madhura!

Wanted to ask you both, according to you, how should have NaSa's story ended?

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Nikki & Madhura!

Wanted to ask you both, according to you, how should have NaSa's story ended?

Frankly speaking, I never wanted Naman and Saavi's love story. I was really very happy with my DilMan. Par kya kare... Makers ko dil todne main kuch zyada hi maza aata hai...

For me, if the makers would have planned to give Naman and Saavi's story ultimately, they could have shown Saavi developing a soft corner for Dafli and a nice bond being formed between the two. Then, she might have decided to get married to Naman. In between, they could have shown slow and gradual changes in Naman's feelings too.

Because, personally to me it looked quite odd that a guy who is mourning the death of his wife a couple of days ago and is ready to spend the entire life just staring at her photograph fell in love with another one just like this within a day or two... This was not in sync with his character.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Nikki & Madhura!

Wanted to ask you both, according to you, how should have NaSa's story ended?

They should not have started their story, cos they just started it for a week and it was random. Made no sense. I feel there was no need to kill Dilruba too, cos it seemed a total khichdi..she was killed, then within few days he just falls for S, they had few moments but no actual story. It was sad to see Saavi just used..

Thank you guys!

Actually today I was pocha lagao-ing and don't know why suddenly it occurred to me that I have written on pretty much every topic that we had a problem with. Like, redemption of Ansh - checked. Redemption of Piya - checked. Love story of MoPi - checked.

But NaSa remained unexplored and I agree with both of you. I wish they hadn't introduced the track at all. And even if they did, there should have gradual progression.

It doesn't make any sense that they killed off Dil out of the blue and SD joined Jinn within a couple of weeks. So that was totally uncalled for.

So wanted to know what type of ending you would have preferred, considering we had another episode and NaSa got a couple of dialogues to ponder over their situation?

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Thank you guys!

Actually today I was pocha lagao-ing and don't know why suddenly it occurred to me that I have written on pretty much every topic that we had a problem with. Like, redemption of Ansh - checked. Redemption of Piya - checked. Love story of MoPi - checked.

But NaSa remained unexplored and I agree with both of you. I wish they hadn't introduced the track at all. And even if they did, there should have gradual progression.

It doesn't make any sense that they killed off Dil out of the blue and SD joined Jinn within a couple of weeks. So that was totally uncalled for.

So wanted to know what type of ending you would have preferred, considering we had another episode and NaSa got a couple of dialogues to ponder over their situation?

Can't actually say. Cos as I told you, Dil killed out of blue made no sense, and end should have been DilMan only. Saavi and him could stay friends.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Thank you guys!

Actually today I was pocha lagao-ing and don't know why suddenly it occurred to me that I have written on pretty much every topic that we had a problem with. Like, redemption of Ansh - checked. Redemption of Piya - checked. Love story of MoPi - checked.

But NaSa remained unexplored and I agree with both of you. I wish they hadn't introduced the track at all. And even if they did, there should have gradual progression.

It doesn't make any sense that they killed off Dil out of the blue and SD joined Jinn within a couple of weeks. So that was totally uncalled for.

So wanted to know what type of ending you would have preferred, considering we had another episode and NaSa got a couple of dialogues to ponder over their situation?

Well, frankly speaking, I would never want Naman and Saavi's love story. Had it been a gradual progression from friendship to love, it would have made more sense.

They killed Dillu out of the blue... And this was a big heartbreak for me. I wanted DilMan story to continue till the end.

NaSa definitely got a couple of dialogues for us to ponder over their situation but still, it looked totally rushed... How can a person who is so much in love with his wife that he was ready to live forever with his wife's photo frame fell in love with someone else within a couple of days or so!!

I agree with you... First of all, they shouldn't have introduced this track at all. And agar introduce karna hi tha, to they should have shown gradual progression in their relationship.

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

So, guys this is a really random and totally nonsensical OS... Bas likhne baithe the to aise hi likh diya...
Am ready for all the jootas and chappals that you guys throw at me...

Advance main warn kar rahe hain... Read at your own risk... Warna baad main mat kehna bataya nahi tha...

Jaadui Coat

Hmmm... To aaj hum baat karenge apne Sirjee ke coat ke baare main...

Aree na na na na... Koi aisa-waisa coat nahi hai ye!! Jaadui coat hai... Jaadui!!
Aisi-aisi cheezein nikalti hain na is coat se na ki ek baar ko Doraemon ko bhi complex aa jaye...aur wo bechara bhi dukhi hokar ya retirement le lega ya phir inke under main aakar inka chela ban jayega... Ab kya kare!!

Iske coat liye to bas yahi do linein arz hain:

"Tareef karu kya uski, jisne tumhe banaya"

Sachhi bata rahe hain... Wo coat banane wala tailor bhi kisi jaadugar se kam nahi hoga... Aisa coat koi mamuli insan bana sakta hai kya?? Bilkul bhi nahi... kam se kam is duniya main to aisa koi insan nahi hai jo aisa coat bana sake... Hota to wo aise coat bana kar bechta thode hi...wo to khud unhe pehenta aur ameer ban jaata... Shayad Ambani se bhi zyada ameer ban jaata...

Matlab pata nahi kaun si Doraemon ki pocket hai coat main ki jis cheez ki zarurat hoti hai, nikal aati hai...phir chahe wo Reevavanshi special rassi ho ya Kohrayan Katar ya Chalayan Dravya ya Patal Ketki ki bottle...bas farmaish kijiye aur cheez haazir!! Par ye hai ki wo jeb dikhti nahi hai... Bas Sirjee zara sa coat ke andar haath daalte hain aur chutki bajate hi cheez haazir!!!

Kabhi kabhi to man karta hai ki is coat ko chura lein aur jaadu ka khel dikha kar Mumbai ke world famous jaadugar ban jaye...
Par kya kare!! Har ek coat jaadui nahi hota na... Sirf usi coat main jaadu hota hai jo Sirjee pehente hain... Coat utarte hi jaadu bhi kahin gayab ho jaata hai... Shayad Sirjee ke paas hi koi special power hai jiski wajah se jo coat wo pehente hain, wo Doraemon coat ban jaata hai...

Sachhi bata rahe hain... Sirjee ka coat dekh kar na, bade-bade scientists ka bhi dimag ghoom jayega... Ka hai na ki apni poori zindagi main unhone aisi koi bhi cheez nahi dekhi hogi...aur na hi dekhne ki ummeed kar rahe honge...

Par kya hai na, yahan to aisi kai cheezein hain jo unhone kabhi nahi dekhi hongi... Ab aap kisi scientist se Daayan, Chudail, Davansh ke baare main poochenge to wo to aapko hi paagal bolega na? Kya pata aapka pagalkhane ka ticket katwa de? Ya phir aapke dimag ko ke jaaye apne saath ye pata karne ke liye ki is dimag main samasya kya hai??

To jis prakar ye log in Kaali Shaktiyon ke baare main nahi samajh sakte, waise hi is coat ke jaadu ko bhi nahi samajh sakte... Aur waise bhi, is coat ke jaadu ko samajhna har kisi ke bas ki baat thode hi hai...

Jo bhi ho, ye jadui coat to humare Sirjee ki aan, baan aur shaan hain... Hum to soch rahe hain Sirjee ke in jaadui coats ko (aur ho sake to saath main Sirjee ko bhi) kisi ajayabghar main rakhwa dein... Aakhir log bhi to dekhe duniya ka naya ajooba!!!

Inke coats bina to wo adhure hi hain...

Khair chhodiye... Aap bataiye, aap kabhi kalpana main bhi Professor Nishant ko bina coat ke dekh sakte hain?? Hum to nahi dekh sakte bhai...

Chalo, aaj ke liye itni bakwas kaafi hai... Abhi nikalte hain warna aap log bhi joote-chappal lekar humare peeche pad jayenge!!

Chalte hain!! Jai Ram Ji Ki...

Mera imagination main bhi Sirjee ko bina Coat ko nahi dekha

No need for jhootha chappals

When i read the post title i thought it was whimsical

The OS made me smile

Sirjee ka coat bahut hi anokha uski ek tareeka ke taraha

Nice to know i'm the only one who likes old songs