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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey guys! It has been quite some time that we have posted anything here. So I am posting a short story. It's the introduction of another Two Shots but it's complete on its own. 😊

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It was just another ordinary day. Ansh returned from his office and entered into their room. Piya was

busy in her work. Looking at how engrossed she was in her own work, a smile crept across his face.

Who said people can’t fall in love more than once? He had fallen in love with the woman sitting in

front him every day while each time it felt like the first time. He had fallen for her cute gesture, her

antics, her brave yet lovable side even the vulnerability. There were so many different shades of her

and he fell in love with each of them on every single day. He recalled the first time he had noticed her

properly. Covered in colors and she was trying to clean her dupatta, paying zero attention to the

people around her or what might they think of her brief quintessential act of floating dupatta. Ansh

chuckled reminiscing the incident. Piya got startled and looked back. “Hello dear husband! How was

your day?” She asked with her brightest smile. That smile!!! It always made his heart skip a beat! All he

could think about was stopping time and savor that moment! “Ansh! Where have you got lost?” Piya

waved her hands before him. Her voice brought him back to reality. “Umm! It's nothing! I am right

here!” He felt a little embarrassed thinking about the crazy thoughts that had occupied his mind just

awhile ago. Piya raised her eyebrows and examined every angle of his face. The obvious blush and

awkwardness didn’t escape her attention. In fact, the longing and admiration in his eyes made her

feel loved and content. But they didn’t need to prolong this eye-romancing session. “You must be

tired! Go freshen up! I’ll bring your coffee.” She left the room while Ansh went to take a bath with a

grin.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Nushy, simple yet filled with lot of emotions. Loved the memory lane Ansh went on when looking at Pia.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Okay, waise to story ka review already de chuke hain lekin phir bhi yahan par bhi bol dete hain...

I agree with you... This is indeed complete in itself. Loved seeing Ansh reminiscing the past...

It is simple yet beautiful and filled with a lot of emotions...

Edited by Nikki_srk - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhura..

Nushy, simple yet filled with lot of emotions. Loved the memory lane Ansh went on when looking at Pia.

Thanks dear! 😊


I have started the Two Shots on a different thread and updated the first chapter. Let me know how is it when you are free. 😊

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Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Okay, waise to story ka review already de chuke hain lekin phir bhi yahan par bhi bol dete hain...

I agree with you... This is indeed complete in itself. Loved seeing Ansh reminiscing the past...

It is simple yet beautiful and filled with a lot of emotions...

Thank you dear! 😊

As I have told you, I love simple scenes. They have much depth in themselves. So as a reader and writer, I prefer such description.


I had started writing the TS but then I didn't like the introduction so scrapped it. Later when this idea came, wrote again and it seemed fine. I posted it only then.


But this para was special. So thought to add one short story which is not so emotional or comical but sweet.


I am glad you both liked it. 😊

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Originally posted by: nushy1995

Thank you dear! 😊

As I have told you, I love simple scenes. They have much depth in themselves. So as a reader and writer, I prefer such description.


I had started writing the TS but then I didn't like the introduction so scrapped it. Later when this idea came, wrote again and it seemed fine. I posted it only then.


But this para was special. So thought to add one short story which is not so emotional or comical but sweet.


I am glad you both liked it. 😊

Even I love simple scenes...

Piansh indeed had much depth in themselves...

This is indeed really beautifully written...

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Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Even I love simple scenes...

Piansh indeed had much depth in themselves...

This is indeed really beautifully written...

😊 🤗

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So, guys this is a really random and totally nonsensical OS... Bas likhne baithe the to aise hi likh diya...
Am ready for all the jootas and chappals that you guys throw at me...

Advance main warn kar rahe hain... Read at your own risk... Warna baad main mat kehna bataya nahi tha...


Jaadui Coat


Hmmm... To aaj hum baat karenge apne Sirjee ke coat ke baare main...


Aree na na na na... Koi aisa-waisa coat nahi hai ye!! Jaadui coat hai... Jaadui!!
Aisi-aisi cheezein nikalti hain na is coat se na ki ek baar ko Doraemon ko bhi complex aa jaye...aur wo bechara bhi dukhi hokar ya retirement le lega ya phir inke under main aakar inka chela ban jayega... Ab kya kare!!


Iske coat liye to bas yahi do linein arz hain:


"Tareef karu kya uski, jisne tumhe banaya"

Sachhi bata rahe hain... Wo coat banane wala tailor bhi kisi jaadugar se kam nahi hoga... Aisa coat koi mamuli insan bana sakta hai kya?? Bilkul bhi nahi... kam se kam is duniya main to aisa koi insan nahi hai jo aisa coat bana sake... Hota to wo aise coat bana kar bechta thode hi...wo to khud unhe pehenta aur ameer ban jaata... Shayad Ambani se bhi zyada ameer ban jaata...


Matlab pata nahi kaun si Doraemon ki pocket hai coat main ki jis cheez ki zarurat hoti hai, nikal aati hai...phir chahe wo Reevavanshi special rassi ho ya Kohrayan Katar ya Chalayan Dravya ya Patal Ketki ki bottle...bas farmaish kijiye aur cheez haazir!! Par ye hai ki wo jeb dikhti nahi hai... Bas Sirjee zara sa coat ke andar haath daalte hain aur chutki bajate hi cheez haazir!!!


Kabhi kabhi to man karta hai ki is coat ko chura lein aur jaadu ka khel dikha kar Mumbai ke world famous jaadugar ban jaye...
Par kya kare!! Har ek coat jaadui nahi hota na... Sirf usi coat main jaadu hota hai jo Sirjee pehente hain... Coat utarte hi jaadu bhi kahin gayab ho jaata hai... Shayad Sirjee ke paas hi koi special power hai jiski wajah se jo coat wo pehente hain, wo Doraemon coat ban jaata hai...


Sachhi bata rahe hain... Sirjee ka coat dekh kar na, bade-bade scientists ka bhi dimag ghoom jayega... Ka hai na ki apni poori zindagi main unhone aisi koi bhi cheez nahi dekhi hogi...aur na hi dekhne ki ummeed kar rahe honge...

Par kya hai na, yahan to aisi kai cheezein hain jo unhone kabhi nahi dekhi hongi... Ab aap kisi scientist se Daayan, Chudail, Davansh ke baare main poochenge to wo to aapko hi paagal bolega na? Kya pata aapka pagalkhane ka ticket katwa de? Ya phir aapke dimag ko ke jaaye apne saath ye pata karne ke liye ki is dimag main samasya kya hai??

To jis prakar ye log in Kaali Shaktiyon ke baare main nahi samajh sakte, waise hi is coat ke jaadu ko bhi nahi samajh sakte... Aur waise bhi, is coat ke jaadu ko samajhna har kisi ke bas ki baat thode hi hai...



Jo bhi ho, ye jadui coat to humare Sirjee ki aan, baan aur shaan hain... Hum to soch rahe hain Sirjee ke in jaadui coats ko (aur ho sake to saath main Sirjee ko bhi) kisi ajayabghar main rakhwa dein... Aakhir log bhi to dekhe duniya ka naya ajooba!!!


Inke coats bina to wo adhure hi hain...


Khair chhodiye... Aap bataiye, aap kabhi kalpana main bhi Professor Nishant ko bina coat ke dekh sakte hain?? Hum to nahi dekh sakte bhai...


Chalo, aaj ke liye itni bakwas kaafi hai... Abhi nikalte hain warna aap log bhi joote-chappal lekar humare peeche pad jayenge!!

Chalte hain!! Jai Ram Ji Ki...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Chappal to zaroor marna chahenge, par befizul ki batein karne ke liye. 😡


Now let me quote Saavi - Yeh Sab Idea Tumhe Aate Kahan Se Hain?


Sir Ji ke coat!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


Honestly, I had the same reaction after reading every para, if not every line. Specially the magic is in Nishant - cracked me up! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


Not to mention Doremon's complex. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆


As usual Naman was at his comic best! Keep it up! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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