Rudhita FS : jealousy chapter 5B updated on page 27 - Page 13

This was a sweet cake of emotions and different flavours !!! I could imagine one going deeper and dissolving into your words.

Just loved the subtle way you expressed so much- and regarding the length - one could not get enough.

The update was filled with a platonic relation on the surface but deep inside it was completely passionate. The way Anirudh handles Bondita is amazing and Bondita’s jealousy is surreal , not at all overtop.

Saudamini is in balanced proportions and her dancing part seriously cracked me up. How real can you be ? She looks mentally disturbed seriously !!

The last part was awesomeness filled in a large cup - served.

Loved your work dear !!!

Keep it up!

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

For all the dialogues when they start

The word after the double quotes should be capital

I will suggest other things after I read it properly

I am in a fix as I need some suggestions

Thank you behen🤗read whenever you are free👍🏼

Tumhe kya suggestions ki zarurat padd gai behen

Originally posted by: bhshre95

Thank you behen🤗read whenever you are free👍🏼

Tumhe kya suggestions ki zarurat padd gai behen

I need some suggestions on it

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

I am writing a original fiction na

I need some suggestions on it

Original fiction😲Thats wonderful Al🤗🥳

But what happened?

there are so many writers in the forum nancy sujz aaliya mahi etc they might be of help

Originally posted by: bhshre95

Original fiction😲Thats wonderful Al🤗🥳

But what happened?

there are so many writers in the forum nancy sujz aaliya mahi etc they might be of help

I just need to know what is that missing factor

I wrote the teaser yaar

I wrote it on the new FF Section

Padh le if you want

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Tu bhi hai na

I just need to know what is that missing factor

I wrote the teaser yaar

I wrote it on the new FF Section

Padh le if you want

I am very new behen😆 I don't think I could be of much help

But i will try out

Par Ye new ff section kahan hai?

Aww

Beautifully written

Loved how Anirudh teased Bondita and she was jealous! So cute

Bondita in love❤️

Saudamini🤣

loved that part where he stood for her 👍🏼

Bechari Bondita seriously le liya ki Anirudh likes Saudamini and she cried😭

last part was nicely written describing Bondita's perfect emotions and accidental love confession

will stay tuned for next part

thanks for long and beautiful update 👍🏼

OMG!!!ITS MIND BLOWING👏love it!!just love it❤️ you're a rockstar Shreya,seriously🤗fantastic dialogues...fabulous plots👏jitni tareef karu utni kam h..I can imagine Ani in every single dialogue.."didi" ney to bichari Boni ki nak mein dam kar rakhha h😆

A big hug to you🤗...and literally a big fan of yours❤️SUBHO NOBO BORSHO🥳(bengali new year's day) and stay home, stay safe Rockstar😉

Unresd!!

Sorry for being late

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Wow just wow😊

shre sucha long update ❤️ Love you for this 🤗

It's splendid the way you had written 😳 it was so real 😎

Aren't they sharing a same room?

Ani is at his best in teasing level 😆 kya jalaya bon ko 🤣 bechari roh padi

So finally bon blurted out her confession in anger 😆 that part was indeed cute 😆 nokjok wala 😆

Why do you have to stop at this point ? Ye tumne teek nahi kiya 😵 hume aur tadpao mat jaldi update de behen 🤗

Can't wait for the next part Ani's reaction and their convo hope you give same long update only with Rudhita ❤️

Lalz🤗 yup i know it was too long😒 what to do, i thought it would be short but as i wrote it became very long😳

Yup Ani loves teasing her i guess😆 but maybe he didn't think matter would get that serious. But Bondu is very sensitive regarding him😳 and uske pet mein koi baat nai rehti, toh bol dala madam ne🤣

Next part don't know kab update hoga🤔 it will be the last one but not started writing yet, due to lack of new episodes don't feel like writing😒

Thank you so much dear for your comments🤗