MishBir SS : Tu Mere Saath Rehna (Part 10 : Pg 25) - Page 18

Originally posted by: LetThereBeLight

wow this is so sweet vaishu.. 👏👏❤️

wow intro scene with mish bm n abirs partner(god) thats really awesome 👍🏼

abir in memories of mishtu and ketu atul teasing them, atul getting caught awww... sweet sibling moment 😆❤️ and our cute nidhi mami n atul hayee if only we get such in show too ❤️

and the devar bhabhi scen hayeee vaishu i really loved that subtle sweet convo between them... hayee hoping to see such sweet sweet convo in show too yaar as everything is getting back on track.. ❤️

finally our cute sa sweet sa awesome mishbir scene... actually i was shocked when i read mish is working in kunals company n then understood abir too comes there so basically they will work together... and the comfort, happiness on each other so beautifully written dear.. ❤️ and the end fall catch hayee mish in abirs lap and that hug.. aww the whole update is so awesome dear.. 👏🥳🥳 very much in sync with our mood today.. 🤗 thank you dear 🤗

First of all so sorry for replying late diyu 😅🙈

And Thanku so much 🤗,glad you liked it 🤗

Atul ki Yaad Aa gayi mujhe 😆

Humare sapne sach Hogaye diyu, kunal and mishti #bestdevarbhabhi of the year 🤗😆

Mish bahut ngo mein transfer Ho jaayegi, no worries about that 😉😆

Glad you loved it 🤗

Originally posted by: ruhi19

when u will update this... deagerly waiting... last mishbir was so romatic... just lost in them...

Sorry for replying late Ruhi 😅

Updating soon, teaser already updated 🤗

Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

Teaser

Both Abir and mishti had a content smile on their face, mishti resting her head on abir's chest still sitting on his lap. Abir's one hand wrapped around her waist and other caressing her hair. Their eyes were closed as they were feeling each other warmth.

A-mishti

M-hmmm

A-main humesha tumhare saath isi tarah rehna chahta hu, aur tumhe humesha apne itne hi paas rakhna chahta hu

And he held her more tightly. Mishti smiled, her heart beat started increasing due to the close proximity.

She lifted her head up from abir's chest and looked at him, abir leaned closer to her. She closed her eyes feeling his hot breath on her face, her stomach started doing somersault.

Abir leaned more closer

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"Joooteee", Abir jumped in front of Jai Ketki's would be husband. Atul followed.

Mishti saw her Ajeeb aadmi doing Ajeeb harkatein, she shook her head giggling all the while

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M-I am really sorry ye galti se gir gaya

"Nahi koi baat nahi main saaf kar lunga ", said the man while looking at his messed up kurta.

M-I am really very sorry uncle

Stranger - koi baat nahi beta, aap mujhe bata dengi washroom kaha hai

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N-abir mishti ab tum dono jawaab do, kya tum shaadi ke liye tayyar ho, kya hai tum dono ka faisla

Abir and mishti both looked at each other hearing Nanu's question, both looked in other's eyes searching for the answer

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Excited?

Updating soon 🤗🤗

Awesome Vaishu! 👏 The teaser has piqued my interest. Can't wait to read the complete chapter. 😃

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Awesome Vaishu! 👏 The teaser has piqued my interest. Can't wait to read the complete chapter. 😃

Thanks Ashi 🤗

Updating tonight 🤗

Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

First of all so sorry for replying late diyu 😅🙈

And Thanku so much 🤗,glad you liked it 🤗

Atul ki Yaad Aa gayi mujhe 😆

Humare sapne sach Hogaye diyu, kunal and mishti #bestdevarbhabhi of the year 🤗😆

Mish bahut ngo mein transfer Ho jaayegi, no worries about that 😉😆

Glad you loved it 🤗

its ok yaar.. 🤗

haha finally viashu thank you for the teaser yaar in this chance i got to read the story once again i skip read to remember... 😆

atleast you include atul in all your stories yaar poor boy doesnt get it in show 🤣

haina mishnal are rocking never knew this day will come so soon... 😆 most of your stories come true viashu... 🤗😆

teaser looks so amazing come on continue it yaar... the sibling time, that uncle is baba naa so mish baba meet wow.. 🥳

and what will mishbir answer are they ready or need time??? hayee interesting yaar..

Originally posted by: LetThereBeLight

its ok yaar.. 🤗

haha finally viashu thank you for the teaser yaar in this chance i got to read the story once again i skip read to remember... 😆

atleast you include atul in all your stories yaar poor boy doesnt get it in show 🤣

haina mishnal are rocking never knew this day will come so soon... 😆 most of your stories come true viashu... 🤗😆

teaser looks so amazing come on continue it yaar... the sibling time, that uncle is baba naa so mish baba meet wow.. 🥳

and what will mishbir answer are they ready or need time??? hayee interesting yaar..

😆😆that's good

Yess can't exclude Atul 😆#aslirajvansh 🤣

I hope about the Man they Love the most comes true 😉🤣and our first child

Yup updating tonight, glad you liked it 🤗

Part 9

Both Abir and mishti had a content smile on their faces, mishti resting her head on abir's chest still sitting on his lap. Abir's one hand wrapped around her waist and other caressing her hair. Their eyes were closed as they were feeling each other warmth.

A-mishti

M-hmmm

A-main humesha tumhare saath isi tarah rehna chahta hu, aur tumhe humesha apne itne hi paas rakhna chahta hu

And he held her more tightly. Mishti smiled, her heart beat started increasing due to the close proximity.

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Guys I don't think anybody on IF is interested in this story

2 comments and 7 likes, so I will continue it on wattpad only, I can't update without knowing how many liked it, and the number is not so good

Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

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Guys I don't think anybody on IF is interested in this story

2 comments and 7 likes, so I will continue it on wattpad only, I can't update without knowing how many liked it, and the number is not so good

Hey Vaishu,

Yeah, I understand. It can be very discouraging and disheartening when you don't receive any response despite the effort you take in creating a story. Even I was planning to discontinue my story on IF and continue it only on Wattpad.

I'm already following you on Wattpad. I'll read your story there. 🤗

P.S.: My Wattpad ID is @LabyrinthOfMystery.

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Hey Vaishu,

Yeah, I understand. It can be very discouraging and disheartening when you don't receive any response despite the effort you take in creating a story. Even I was planning to discontinue my story on IF and continue it only on Wattpad.

I'm already following you on Wattpad. I'll read your story there. 🤗

P.S.: My Wattpad ID is @LabyrinthOfMystery.