My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 4

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Krithzz


This was good .Mini taking charge was too good .


Thanks 🤗

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by N_sharmaa



I loved this 🤣 That fall was my favourite . Mini violent tigress 🤣 


Thanks sharma.... 🤗


I want this to happen.... 🤣

Posted: 4 years ago

So here we go with. The next part... In this o have just focused on mineil... Nothing related to the case as of now.... 


Here we go mineilians... ❤️


Part 4


After isha left... NB also from Haveli....minni and Neil as usual went to restaurant... Minni left for haveli soon as she promised her chutanki that she will be back soon... 


M.chutanki I am back.... 

A. Veer balika tum aa gayi... Wow as promised.. Neil kaha hai.. 

M. Haw chutanki mean nahi chahiye kya... Neil kana hai... Usko aaj late hoga he has more work today. 

A. Tum saara kaam usi se karati Ho na... So sad.... 

M. Ya ya... U and ur genie love... Kya khaogi Donner pe... 

A. Tum banaogi... 

M. Of course yes... Neil ko late hoga and he will be tired na isiliye... 

A. I want Maggi... 

M. Wow it's so easy for me... 

A. Isiliye bola... Neil banata to kuch air bolti... 

M. Teri zubaan na bohut chalti hai.... 


Both the sisters had fun playing around... After sometime Minni went up to prepare dinner for them... She switched on the radio and started her work... Neil have come just now and heard Kishore Kumar voice and went up to see and he was just lost in Minni... She was humming the song and was doing the kitchen work... Minni got to know that Neil have gone and is watching her... She became cautious... She started tucking her hair behind her ears... She was seeing him from her eye corner... She saw him coming near her and... 


M. Ku.. Kuch chaiye Neil... 

N. Haa... 


By this time he was just back of her... Minni was between him and the stove platform... She was again getting effected with his proximity... 


M. Kkk... Kya chahiye... Neil... 

N. Ek jawab... 

M. Hmm.. Matlab... 

N. Why are doing this Minni... 

M. Don't you see why am I doing this... U can sense me right.. 

N. Yes I can sense you... But ek friend ke liye itna sab... (he stressed on friend more) 

M.  Minni can go to any extent for her friends Neil... Don't worry.. 

N. Really Minni... 

M. Yes Neil... I want you to have peace with your past... 

N. Aisa kabhi hoga Minni... 

M. Of course hoga... We will make it happen... 


Their faces were just inches apart... 


M.  Waise Neil oberoi.. I dint knew that tum itne seedhe Ho... 

N. What do u mean seedha hun... I am a good man... 

M. I know kuch zyada HI ache or phattu Ho... 

N. Don't challenge me Minni.. 

M. I challenge u Neil oberoi... Catch me... 


Minni pushed him and started running.. And Neil was behind her...they went to the balcony... And again to the dining area.... Somehow Minni got caught when she bumped into the stove table... Minni and Neil Now were facing each other... There comes a song which turned Neil on... 


Roop tera mastana 

Pyaar mera deewana 

Bhool koi humse na Ho jaye... 


Minni tried running away but Neil caged her between him and the table... 


M. Neil let me go... 

N. Oh Minni madam is blushing... Friend se bhi blush karte hai kya.. 

M. Neil... 

N. Yes I am listening... 


Minni was leaning back and Neil leaning forward... At a point she can't lean more back and just stopped... But Neill dint.... Now their faces were just inches apart.... 


Raat nasheeli mast sama hai.. 

Aaj nashe me saara jahan hai... 

Raat nasheeli mast sama hai.. 

Aaj nashe me saara jahan hai... 

Haa yeh sharabi mausam behkaye... 


N. Tell me Minni madam... 

M. What do you wanna know... 

N. U know what I wanna know.... 

M. Neil please arya aa jayegi... 

N. Choti madam samajh jayegi ki hero heroine romance kar rahe hai... 


Minni was shocked in hearing Neil... She was just thinking that... Did she hear that the are romancing.. 


M. Neil... 

N. Haa kuch galat kaha kya.... 


Minni was speechless with his advances.. She just can blush... Neil leaned more to kiss her... He stopped in between as of asking her if he can... Minni just closed her eyes as permitting him to do... He was just about to kiss her... 


A. Uffo veer balika Maggi jala diya tumne.... 


That's it guys for today... Hope u all like it.... 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by porankisrilata


So here we go with. The next part... In this o have just focused on mineil... Nothing related to the case as of now.... 


Here we go mineilians... ❤️


Part 4


After isha left... NB also from Haveli....minni and Neil as usual went to restaurant... Minni left for haveli soon as she promised her chutanki that she will be back soon... 


M.chutanki I am back.... 

A. Veer balika tum aa gayi... Wow as promised.. Neil kaha hai.. 

M. Haw chutanki mean nahi chahiye kya... Neil kana hai... Usko aaj late hoga he has more work today. 

A. Tum saara kaam usi se karati Ho na... So sad.... 

M. Ya ya... U and ur genie love... Kya khaogi Donner pe... 

A. Tum banaogi... 

M. Of course yes... Neil ko late hoga and he will be tired na isiliye... 

A. I want Maggi... 

M. Wow it's so easy for me... 

A. Isiliye bola... Neil banata to kuch air bolti... 

M. Teri zubaan na bohut chalti hai.... 


Both the sisters had fun playing around... After sometime Minni went up to prepare dinner for them... She switched on the radio and started her work... Neil have come just now and heard Kishore Kumar voice and went up to see and he was just lost in Minni... She was humming the song and was doing the kitchen work... Minni got to know that Neil have gone and is watching her... She became cautious... She started tucking her hair behind her ears... She was seeing him from her eye corner... She saw him coming near her and... 


M. Ku.. Kuch chaiye Neil... 

N. Haa... 


By this time he was just back of her... Minni was between him and the stove platform... She was again getting effected with his proximity... 


M. Kkk... Kya chahiye... Neil... 

N. Ek jawab... 

M. Hmm.. Matlab... 

N. Why are doing this Minni... 

M. Don't you see why am I doing this... U can sense me right.. 

N. Yes I can sense you... But ek friend ke liye itna sab... (he stressed on friend more) 

M.  Minni can go to any extent for her friends Neil... Don't worry.. 

N. Really Minni... 

M. Yes Neil... I want you to have peace with your past... 

N. Aisa kabhi hoga Minni... 

M. Of course hoga... We will make it happen... 


Their faces were just inches apart... 


M.  Waise Neil oberoi.. I dint knew that tum itne seedhe Ho... 

N. What do u mean seedha hun... I am a good man... 

M. I know kuch zyada HI ache or phattu Ho... 

N. Don't challenge me Minni.. 

M. I challenge u Neil oberoi... Catch me... 


Minni pushed him and started running.. And Neil was behind her...they went to the balcony... And again to the dining area.... Somehow Minni got caught when she bumped into the stove table... Minni and Neil Now were facing each other... There comes a song which turned Neil on... 


Roop tera mastana 

Pyaar mera deewana 

Bhool koi humse na Ho jaye... 


Minni tried running away but Neil caged her between him and the table... 


M. Neil let me go... 

N. Oh Minni madam is blushing... Friend se bhi blush karte hai kya.. 

M. Neil... 

N. Yes I am listening... 


Minni was leaning back and Neil leaning forward... At a point she can't lean more back and just stopped... But Neill dint.... Now their faces were just inches apart.... 


Raat nasheeli mast sama hai.. 

Aaj nashe me saara jahan hai... 

Raat nasheeli mast sama hai.. 

Aaj nashe me saara jahan hai... 

Haa yeh sharabi mausam behkaye... 


N. Tell me Minni madam... 

M. What do you wanna know... 

N. U know what I wanna know.... 

M. Neil please arya aa jayegi... 

N. Choti madam samajh jayegi ki hero heroine romance kar rahe hai... 


Minni was shocked in hearing Neil... She was just thinking that... Did she hear that the are romancing.. 


M. Neil... 

N. Haa kuch galat kaha kya.... 


Minni was speechless with his advances.. She just can blush... Neil leaned more to kiss her... He stopped in between as of asking her if he can... Minni just closed her eyes as permitting him to do... He was just about to kiss her... 


A. Uffo veer balika Maggi jala diya tumne.... 


That's it guys for today... Hope u all like it.... 


This was tasty ,spicy. Loved it 😉 and Arya at the end 🤣 and you have used the song perfectly here ☺️ and friend taunts😆 even today he was doing same 🤣

Edited by N_sharmaa - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Lata ita awesome 🤗

Bacha Lia tumne, I was almost dying.. my MiNeil 

Posted: 4 years ago

And I Love Arya Maggie one haha. 😆 I can see her saying this.

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by N_sharmaa



This was tasty ,spicy. Loved it 😉 and Arya at the end 🤣 and you have used the song perfectly here ☺️ and friend taunts😆 even today he was doing same 🤣


That friend wala taunt was so steamy today... That's why include it in the pulav... 🤣

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Rishrabh


Lata ita awesome 🤗

Bacha Lia tumne, I was almost dying.. my MiNeil 


Thanks yaar...🤗

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Rishrabh


And I Love Arya Maggie one haha. 😆 I can see her saying this.


I know... 🤣

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by porankisrilata



Thanks sharma.... 🤗


I want this to happen.... 🤣


So many wish list we all have 🤣



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