ISHRA SS ~Pal Pal bhadhe Ye Hai Mohabbatein ~ last part pg 70 march/31 - Page 6

Beautiful update. Well written. Thanks

Thank you for the PM!!! The moment I read the title, I fell for the story...The title itself is so nostalgic and invoke so many memories...

An exciting start to what promises to be a scintillating work... It’s exact role reversals... Ishita is betrayed by her husband Subbu and as a result, he developed a sense of nonchalance towards her child Ruhi..

Contrarily, Raman could not beget a child and was abandoned by his fiancée Shagun.. He is affected by his disability but unlike Ishita channelled his frustration into his work... And the recreation of the iconic IshRu’s car was so convincing and well conceived too..

Raman was stunned to see the lackadaisical nature of Ishita against Ruhi and immediately fosters a bond with Ruhi, who seems to develop certain liking for her.. Incidentally, Raman moves into the same apartment as Ishita and all set to battle it out 🤗

Heyyy I love the story majedar h kia baat h nice concept

Lovely update .

Its reminds me of our yhm but opposite.

Loved ruhi and Raman's conversation.

Looking forward for ishra nok jhok .

Update next soon .

Pal Pal Bhadhe Ye hai Mohabbatein

Part 2

Raman was moving out of the compound of the building he was engrossed in his phone while Ishita too quickly walking towards her car both didn't notice each other and bangs with each other.

Raman makes faces looking at Ishita who was picking up her belongings from ground.: what a start of the day... Mrs iyer use your eyes..

Ishita glares at Raman and says: same goes to you Mr bhalla

Raman: don't know what bad will happen today as I have seen your face

Ishita: that's gross Mr bhalla. Forget it why I am talking with you. I have many important work. Saying this she turned to leave Raman smirk at her and shouts from behind: keep your eyes open mrs iyer kahin truck say na takra Jana.

Ishita ignores his words and settles inside car to go to hospital. Raman too walks towards his car he was about to sit in it his phone rings he looks at the screen which flashes mom. He takes a deep breath and takes the call.

Without waiting Mrs bhalla start asking questions from Raman: Raman puttar tu theek hai na mihir ne batya you are shifted in new house society theek hai tujhe koi problem to nhe kahe to mein ajaon.

Raman smiles listening to the continuous rant of his mother he shook his head and says: maa AP chinta na karo I am fine here koi problem nhe hai.

Mrs bhalla: Raman puttar

Raman: you know na maa your son can handle everything then why you are worrying

Mrs bhalla: I am your mother . Fikar to hogi na puttar aur to wahan itne saal say akela hai

Raman: maa don't get emotional

Mrs bhalla: tu wapis kab araha hai

Raman : maa abhi to mahina phele mein dehli Aya tha

Mrs bhalla: to apna transfer wahan Kara le puttar

Raman.: maa i am good here

Mrs bhalla: tu Meri baat kiyon nhe Manta..

Raman: bye maa take care. Saying this he ends the call and start his journey towards his office.

It was evening Raman was driving back towards home winds were flowing heavily and it was looking that anytime it will be raining. Raman shook his head seeing the weather. His car stopped abruptly he comes out of the car and was looking into it why car is not working. Soon it's start pouring earlier it was light but cloud start getting darker with thundering it was heavily Raman.

Raman runs towards the tree and stands under it's shade. He curses the sudden change of weather and looks into his mobile to call any mechanic. To his bad luck there was no network. He thinks: ab to auto ya taxi ka wait karna hoga.

He start walking slowly and waiting for auto.

Other side Ishita was looking at the heavy rain fall standing under stand and waiting for taxi as she has given her car for service.

Two boys comes and start teasing Ishita. Ishita hurriedly walks in other direction while boys start following her. Her feet twisted and she was about to fall but a pair of hands prevent her from falling she gets afraid she turns her head and finds Raman holding her hand. She gets up on her feet and was looking at Raman.

Raman turns and glares at boys who runs. Both were drenched in rain. Raman looks at Ishita who wrapped her saree pallu around her arms.

Raman signs her to leave. Ishita nods and start walking. Raman too follows her and thinks: how mean I have saved her but she didn't said anything.

Ishita looks at back and finds Raman following her she stops Raman signs her to keep moving. Ishita shook her head and says: why you are following..

Raman: Kiya pata you need my help again

Ishita: I would have saved myself

Raman: I know jhansi ki Rani can tackle those boys but Kiya hai muje apni herogiri dekhane ka shoq tha. He taunts her

Ishita looks away and says: I can take care of myself.

Raman nods and stops an auto he tells driver address and sits in auto. Ishita looks at Raman she was about to move ahead but Raman stops her and says: you may not get any auto or taxi in this weather. I will not mind if you come with me as our Destination is same

He expressed his opinion with courtesy. Ishita knowing she doesn't have any other options settles in auto beside Raman and says: for your correction Mr bhalla out destination is not same.

Raman gives a what ever look to her and sign driver to start. The tiring day comes to an end with two poles apart Raman and Ishita moving in same direction for same destination.

Next day

Raman enters the compound and was about to move towards lift when he hears a loud scream he turns and finds little ruhi crying holding her Injured knee. He couldn't see her crying he moves towards her and kneels down taking her in his arms trying to console the little soul.

Raman: hey big girl. Stop crying you are brave girl..

Raman wipes tears from her eyes and tenderly kisses her hairs. Ruhi looks at Raman and says: Raman uncle dard ho Rahi hai

Raman takes her in his as while ruhi caretaker comes and says: give me. I will put ointment.

Ruhi: ahhh.. uncle bohat dard hai. She cries

Raman: come ruhi uncle will put ointment and pain will vanish

Saying this Raman start walking towards his home while caretaker also follows Raman as Raman unlock his door caretaker says: sahab humare Ghar chalain wahain ruhi baby ko dawai laga Dena

Raman nods and heads towards Ishita home. Raman cleans her wound and put ointment. Caretaker bring glass of milkshake for ruhi. Ruhi was cranky due to her wound. Raman takes the glass and forward it to ruhi and says: you want to become big girl na

Ruhi looks at Raman and says: per AP to muje big girl hi kehty Hain. Kiyon ky mein big girl hoon. I don't like milk. She says innocently

Raman smiles listening to her and says: yes you are my big girl but to become more strong you have to finish this

Ruhi: aur strong

Raman nods

Ruhi: mumma ki jaise strong girl

Raman: yes.. come one finish it.

Ruhi finish the milk while Raman Pat's her to sleep. Ruhi sleep in no time. Raman gets up while caretaker follows raman. Raman was about to leave but caretaker says: thank you sahab apne ruhi ky like itna Kiya

Raman: no need to say thank you ruhi ki mumma ya papa ko Bata Dena chot Kay bare mein

Caretaker: mein Ishita ma'am ko Bata dongi

Raman was leaving when Ishita enters and fumes seeing Raman in her house. She cross her arms across her chest and says: what are you doing here Mr bhalla

Raman: ruhi was injured I was just tending her

Ishita: I have arranged caretaker for her you don't need to worry about her

Raman glares her and says: I have done it for humanity. Jaise Kal tumhare like Kiya tha but you know what this is your problem you are thankless person.

Ishita: this is none of your business Mr bhalla I am saying again stay away

Raman: don't know how your husband is bearing you. Lagta hai bhala insaan hai warna koi aur hota kab ka choir Kar bhaag jata

Listening to his taunt Ishita wounds gets fresh her eyes gets teary she shows door to Raman and shouts: shut up Mr bhalla you have no right to interfere. Get out of my house and never show your face

Raman was taken aback listening to Ishita out brust he was tongue tied he wanted to open his mouth and give it back to her but seeing her face or her teary eyes he couldn't hurt her more he walks away.

Ishita looks at caretaker and says; I don't want any stranger in my house or near ruhi got it.

Caretaker nods

Ishita moves towards ruhi room and finds her sleeping she looks at her injured knee. She caresses her hairs lovingly. She leaves the room and goes to change. After Changing she find her phone ringing it was her mother call. She takes the call and greets her mother

Mrs iyer: ishu how are you

Ishita: I am fine

Mrs iyer: how is ruhi

Ishita: she is fine and sleeping right now

Mrs iyer: ishu vandita has shifted to dehli she was asking us to shift there what you say

Ishita: jaisa AP ko theek lagy

Mrs iyer: ishu why you have distanced your self from us

Ishita: aisa kuch nhe hai amma

Mrs iyer: tu bhi dehli aja. We will be near to ruhi. Tum to hospital mein hoti aur ruhi akeli

Ishita: caretaker hai ruhi Kay like aur subah mein usy daycare center chorti Hoon

Mrs iyer: ishu she need love from family bahir waly kitna Pyaar de sakty Hain

Ishita: Amma please. I have some work. Will talk to you later

Saying this Ishita ends the call. Mrs iyer looks at Mr iyer and says: subbu ki wajah say Meri ishu to poori badal gayi.

That's it my dear friend I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comments and response.

Love

Riddi

Awesome update continue soon

Brilliant update dear

Fabulous 👏👏👏

Ishita is very rude

She always show her attitude to raman

Raman helping her but she wouldn't thanks him

Poor ruhi.....

Raman and ruhi bond is very nice

Eagerly waiting for next update plzzzz soon

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Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

Sorry for the late reply Di

Part 2

Raman is a cutie in this story...

Mujhe Herogiri krne ka showk hai was funny...

Ishita has become so rude but was hurt when Raman unintentionally said stuff about her husband...

Loving the story :)

Thanks for the PM and the update :)

Fabulous updt di

Totally loved it so much

Love ruman bonding. Raman taunts made ishu recall her painful past. He is taken back seeing her teary face. Love the scene where Mrs.iyer advises ishu that ruhi wants a care from family not from outsiders. Mrs.iyers wants ishu to stay with them in Delhi.

Thanx for the pm

Continue soon