GREY LOVE - Rudhita os

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey guys this is a short figment from my imagination hope you like it . This us for you my friend @home786


It's a big day for Bondita . She never thought this can ever happen in her life. Ten years…………..yes ten years really changed her life. Five months before, she was the best student of the Cambridge University and also received an award from the Chief Justice for her expectional performance in both athletics and studies and today here she has to meet the chief viceroy because she has topped the National public service exam of British government . She will become an ICS officer soon. And there's just one person to who she can really dedicate her success, her would be husband, Anirudh . She is getting ready for a felicitation ceremony, organized by the British Govt.

Anirudh calls her. She smiles thinking it to be from her pati babu and picks up the call.

B: Sooraj uggne mein der kar sakta hai, par aap nahin………….

A: Absolutely! Btw taiyaar ho gayi tum?

B: Jee ho gayi…………….aapki daant thode hi khaani thhi…………..kab aa rahe hain aap?

A: Neechey khadaa hoon…………..jaldi aao…………

B: Pehle kyun nahin bataaya? Do minute mein aayi………….

Bondita rushes downstairs and sees Anirudh standing with a bouquet of red roses. She has got used to these sort of gifts from him. She takes the bouquet from him.

B: Aaj ek phool kam hai na?

A: Haan…………..yeh raha.

He gives her a rose. She blushes. Both laugh. Bondita hugs him with her one arm around his waist and other around his shoulder with her head resting at his chest. Anirudh hugs her back and caresses her hair. On Anirudh 's insistence, she had started not putting the pallu on her head. Even Kala was okay with it. Bondita sudden tear escapes her eye. Anirudh hears the sigh she gives out.

A: Maine kya kaha thha tumse……………ki tum royogi nahin. Ab phirse aankhon mein aansu? Crybaby ho tum!!!

B: Khushi ke aansu hain pati babu. Rone dijiye mujhe.

And she keeps hugging and keeps crying.

Anirudh's pov:

Anything might change but not his Bondita. It is still fresh in his mind how bold his Bondita was when she confessed her feelings to him in a grey manner to be precise by turning herself into a drunken mess but the moment he confessed his feelings she turned into crying baby venting out or maybe blabbering out about her thoughts what she turned into when she came to know him and mini. Haa that he never wants to even remember but what to do his cute and bold wifey only choose that day to confess to him finally. But he was happy that she did what she did maybe proud and relieved too because

The Anirudh Roy choudhary can bear and fight anything but not his Bondita 's ignorance.

Thus started their grey love story. Will try to post another os which will be Bondita 's drunken confession that I mentioned above. For hope you guys like this.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I never clicked on something so fast !!!

Looks nice !

Is this some cue?

Dear you should write - seriously , you have good descriptive skills. I was hooked with the last dialogue!

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Originally posted by: nancy56

I never clicked on something so fast !!!

Looks nice !

Is this some cue?

Dear you should write - seriously , you have good descriptive skills. I was hooked with the last dialogue!

Maybe a cue or not. Guess dear

And thank you so much.

Hey did you read my another os on preRish which I PMed you.

You have some suggestions for that too then let me know and once again thank you so much dear for your encouraging words.

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Thanks and glad you liked it dear

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Thank you friend, you're such a sweet heart. The title is such as enthusiastic one which will definitely create cravings for any reader. And of course, the selection of words and dialogues is really appealing. Overall it is a pleasant sweet Os . Do write more yaar. Will always love to read your works. Waise you can call me shaheen it's my Nick name. What should I call you???

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Originally posted by: Home786

Thank you friend, you're such a sweet heart. The title is such as enthusiastic one which will definitely create cravings for any reader. And of course, the selection of words and dialogues is really appealing. Overall it is a pleasant sweet Os . Do write more yaar. Will always love to read your works. Waise you can call me shaheen it's my Nick name. What should I call you???

First of all you call me a friend and say thanks really, are you for real???

And next my name is Sharmila and u can call me Sharmi like my friends and family do or whatever nickname u feel to address me with. I will be happy with which ever way call me OK shaheen dear.

And I am really glad you liked this🙂🙂🙂

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Originally posted by: Past1

First of all you call me a friend and say thanks really, are you for real???

And next my name is Sharmila and u can call me Sharmi like my friends and family do or whatever nickname u feel to address me with. I will be happy with which ever way call me OK shaheen dear.

And I am really glad you liked this🙂🙂🙂

Fine sharmila. Done 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: Past1

Maybe a cue or not. Guess dear

And thank you so much.

Hey did you read my another os on preRish which I PMed you.

You have some suggestions for that too then let me know and once again thank you so much dear for your encouraging words.

I could not see your pm dear. It’s not there in my inbox. If possible tell me the name of the os or you can paste the link here. I am eager to read it.

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Originally posted by: nancy56

I could not see your pm dear. It’s not there in my inbox. If possible tell me the name of the os or you can paste the link here. I am eager to read it.

First one:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152991831

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Originally posted by: nancy56

I could not see your pm dear. It’s not there in my inbox. If possible tell me the name of the os or you can paste the link here. I am eager to read it.

And then this is the second os hope you like it:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/152992818

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