Distorted Lives..FOUW..Thread 2..... updtd note pg 105 - Page 36

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Pari and rehan meeting is classic. Both have a good sense of humor. Maybe we have a couple in the making here.

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Mann has bonded so well with Muski. He would make a good father. dadi is right though. maan and Geet need to find their own way towards each other without any push from anyone.

Maan is such a caring person amid all the Chaos in the story he is always their when anyone needs him...loved him so much here...

Annie taking a break from both boys....waiting to see how duo react...

Annie met geet and discovered she has a child too...hopefully things could go easy for geet further for now.

Thanks for double treat dear 👍🏼

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Geet at the hospital yet she does not want to meet her mother

at the moment I'm not blaming Geet nor her mother for anything
at the end of the day a mother is such she either gives soft love

or tough love to her children

circumstances and situations may have been wrong but its difficult

for a mother to dislike her child

but I like the fact that Maan advises Geet to go for therapy because

she has all these bottled up emotions of her past with her mother

and the fact that she just gotten a divorce .

Maan telling Geet he will support her by going with her , he tells her

she is not ready for more but he can offer her his care

and I think both know they are attracted towards each other but

responsibilities kick in and the fact that both have been hurt by their

spouses so they don't want to jump into anything

but they aware there is sexual tension and Maan himself tries where ever

he can to bring Geet close to him

he tells her that they can be friends until they both decide where they want

they relation to be

but for some reason it seems Maan almost seems confident that they will be together

and its amazing to see him with Muskaan

Hey Aditi... please be safe....

Hope you are safe and good dear

Originally posted by: CHERUKURI9

Nice update.

Thanks a lot dear!! 😊

Originally posted by: nishamna

So I guess there is one more love story coming our way. Pari and rehan would be a great couple. It is good that dadi and aniee somewhere accepted that geet and maan have some connection and they look great together. But as anieee said this relationship will take time to grow . I also think geet needs some councillor who can help her to come out from past. Waiting for next dear

Thanks a lot dear!! Pari deserves a partner in life and I am sure you would love her story as much as out Maaneet. About Maaneet, it is a slow building relationship but you will soon see some progress.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hey Aditi... how are you?

thanks for the pm and double updates.

Part 32

Fascinating update, superbly written.

I knew it was Pari.

at least Rehaan met Pari.

can understand Pari's feelings.

Liked how Annie revealed that Geet has a daughter.

Never expected Muski to say that.

Geet handled the matter well.

great that Pari apolgised for what she said.

Indeed Maan has lost his heart... to Geet....

of cos Rey is plotting and planning.

Rey is intelligent and was successful thanks to Annie.

Aww Muski is correct that Maan is the best.

not suprised that Geet knew what was happening and is helpless.

but Geet does not want to see her mom.

wonderful that Rey apologised to Pari for what she has gone through.

Rey and Pari???

admire Rey's efforts to distract Pari.

finally Pari confronted him about Geet.

nice that he was honest.

But Pari's response is justified.

enjoyed their banter. hope they become friends.

Thanks a lot dear!! I am sure Rey and Pari will have their own journey to make. As for Maaneet, this is a story of two people badly hurt . Geet especially will take time to move forward.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

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marvelous update. perfectly written.

glad that Geet managed to rest.

Geet's thoughts are understandable.

so Maan was stunned seeing Geet there.

at least he apologised on Annie and Rey's behalf.

glad that Maan and Geet talked.

yes things are a bit complicated.

liked Maan's suggestion that they become friends.

I am sure Pari will not tell anyone about that night.

both Maan and Geet need time. nice that he was direct with Geet.

agree with Maan...

Love the moments between Maan and Muski...

dadi is happy seeing Maan like this! Indeed the trio are perfect together.

Dadi was correct.

nice that Maan is cooking for them.

Feeling for Geet. Maan consoled her and she needed this.

Maan cares so much for Geet and Muskan.

will Geet go for counselling?

sad that Muskan has grown up so quickly.

hope Maan manages to do something for Muskan.

well dadi and Annie admire the trio.

update soon!

Thanks a lot dear!! I am glad you liked it and I am sure you will love the next part even more.