DMG's changing story..do read !!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyy frndss !!!
well...i jus cudnt complete my earlier prediction..cz it ws goinn verryy sad...lol..sso..i jus thot of a nyu track..read on...n do reply :
Holi celebrations r goin on...angie is bout 2 leave frm home..she asks ridz..
ANGIE: hey ridz..tumne abhi tak chnge kyu nhi kiya ?..cum on...v'll hv fun..
R: uhh...di..aapko toh pata hai...mai bachpan se..holi itni pasand nhi karti...sso..mai nhi aaoongi...
ANGIE: ohh cum on ridzziee...dun b a spoilt-sport....aao na..bohot mazza ayega..n plus..iss baar toh...it'll b dffrnt...atul bhi aagya hai..rahul..dt chttrbox muskaan n armaan...cum on...
R: di.....acha agar mera mann kiya toh..'ll try...par..main promise nhi kar sakti..
ANGIE: ohhkk..as u wish...but..try zaroor karna...newys...cya..bye !!
R: bye di...aur haa...meri taraf se sabko wish kardena..😊
(aftr a while..at sanjeevani..every1 has reached....n r bout 2 strt playin...jus wen armaan aftr wishn angie says..)
A: uhh...btw...basket nhi aayi...m sure woh darr gyi hogi..darpok..!
ANGIE: hmm...quite true...actually..ridzzie bachpan se hee holi nhi khelti...usse kuch khaas pasand nhi hai...but..she hs asked me 2 wish u all...aao..usske taraf se bhi...happy holi !!
RAHUL: agar woh yaha hoti toh aur bhi maza ataa..but if u want...mai unhein bulaane ki koshish karoo?
A: (in rahul's ears...arrgantly) rehne de...woh tujhse nhi pategi..nhi aayegi...apna tym wste mat kar...
RAHUL: tujhe mere tym ki itni parwah kabse hone lagi...tu jaakar holi khel...aur jaha tak riddhima ki baat hai...woh tu mujhpar chod de..aftr all main unka dost hoo...aur dosti ke naate ye mera farz banta hai...
A: abbey tu....(controls himself)...f9..as u wish !..btw...happy holi...(n puts water on him...!!)

(den armaan goes near d food stall..n is tryin all d sweets...jus wen nana cums n says..)
N: ayye apple..kya hua...holi mei tera rang kyu uttra hua hai...kyyaa...bulbul nhi aayi ?..hain ?
A: chodo na...mujhe kya...ye sab mujhse na milne ke bahane hain...achi tarah jaanta hoo mai usse..
N: ayyee..khaak jaanta hai...tune hee toh usse apne se door rehne ko kaha tha...kaha tha ki nhi ?
A: (stares at nana)..
N: kyyaa...ghoorta kya hai..tune hee panga kiya..ab tu he ro rha hai
A: (immediately) main ro nhi rha hoo..
N: lagta toh aisa hee hai...
A: nana plzz...choddo...mujhe usske baare mei baat nhi karni..

(den rahul on fone wid ridz)
RAHUL: heey ridhima...aap aayi kyu nhi?
R: rahul...woh bass..mujhe hol kuch khaas pasand nhi hai...
RAHUL: well...holi itni bhi buri nhi hoti....aur...aap aati toh..aur acha hota..y dun u tryin cummin..
R: uhhm..ohhk..mai dekhti hoo...
RAHUL: ye hui na baat...sso...mai aapka intezaar karoonga...
(n hangs up...as soon as he turns...armaan's stnding it frnt of him)
A: nhi aa rhi na....kaha tha maine..tym wste mat kar...mai janta tha...woh nhi aa --
RAHUL: (immediately cuts him) woh aa rhi hai..
A: (is surprised...n stares at rahul 4 while..meanwhile rahul moves ahead)
(armaan's still thinkin..is confused..but den says annoyingly)
A: hppy holi 2 u dr.armaan....verry verry happy holi....(n walks away)
(celebrations strt off wid a bang..every1 is njoyin...n slowly..evry1 gets high on bhaang..muskaan n armaan r dncin 2gdr madly..n armaan strts visualizing ridz in place of her...both of dem..i.e. armaan n fake-ridz strt dncin 2gdr crazily...) (aftr a while....wen evry1 is low on energy..n is almost in deep sleep in dffrnt corners...either near d poles..or near d mithaayi-wala...or near d pickaaris....ridhima makes an entry...shes amused on seeing such a sight..she tries 2 wake up angie....den dr.keerti...but evry1 is either uttering 'hol hai...hppy holi'...or slowly singin 'jai jai shiv shankar'...shes convinced dt no1 is in d state 2 evn wish her...but den..suddenly she hears sum1 singing loudly frm behind...she follows d sound..n here she is..infrt of armaan...who's almost talli...jus walking here n dere...n singin "jai jai shivshankar")
R: (worriedly....stops armaan frm falling) armaan...armmaan hosh mei aao...tum theek toh ho...armaaan....armaan sunno..
A: huh...kaauunn....arrey basket tuumm...hehe...happy holii....lekinn..tum toh....bilkul saaf ho...ruko mai rang lata hoo...(n strts wlkin away..but trips n falls down)
R: (goes n helps him 2 stnd up) armaan rehne do...tum theek nhi ho...chalo andar chalo....armaan challoo...(n keeps his arm around her nek 2 giv him support...n takes her inside sanjeevani)
A: (completly talli...jus dznt knw wher hes goin...n is singin unknowingly)
(finally ridz brings armaan 2 d general ward...all d patients r sleeping...on seeing dt nana's bed is empty..she puts armaan on dt bed) (she fixes d pillow under his head..n is bout 2 turn n leave...jus wen armaan pulls her hand n brings her on his chest...but wid his eyes closed)
A: riddhimaa...(smiles uknowingly)....tum...tum mujhe pyaar toh karti ho na...(forwns in his sleep)..toh fir aisa torture kyu karti ho...
R: (ridz is totally taken a back....n becums emotional...she slowly luks up n has tears in her eyes)
A: (still not in his senses) i love u ridhima....i love u..i love u...i love u (n slowly it becums in-audible...n he goes off 2 deep sleep)
R: (she frees herself...n keeps his hand on his chest...n whileholdin it..she says..all emotionally..but 2 herslef) i love u too armaan..(n a tear rlls down her eye)
sso guyss..hw ws it...shud i continue..or ne 1 of u wud lyk 2 ??😳

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ayshuri14 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
hey, dts wel gd, i tink u shud continue ...
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Desii.Babiie thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh my God, that sounds SOO real..n possible!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘

I really hope that happens.😳 😳

well written!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwww! cho cho cho extermly cute! i really wish dis happens! plz do cntd!
saylithegreat thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great as always payal šŸ‘
armann saying tht i love u . ... i love u wud be so cute 😳
as i was reading i cud just imagine everything happening in front of me

continue soon

Edited by saylithegreat - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
well as i loved ur prev prediction this one is also great 😳 😳 omg i wish this only happens... šŸ˜‰
hey plz yaar go tell the creatives abt ur story n dmg will rock more šŸ˜†
it ws funny on parts and emotional too 😭 😭
love the way u write yaar! 😳
again vry nicely framed n put up šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
continue......plz continue.....
i cant wait now! šŸ˜‰
333360 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#7
I JST LUV DIS PREDICTION!!!!!!!!
its tooooo gud yar!
hope u cont!
will u?
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont
i really hope dis happens
it soundz realistic.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heheee šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
Its great, continuee!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... tht is so cute yaar!

Just totally awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😳

Plzz continue 😳
payal_dmg thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
heeyy guys..thnx 4 d appreciation !! 😳 😳
well...m jus thinkin hw 2 cont...by dt tym...ne1 of u cn also cont.... 😳

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