PreRish One-Shot: The Smell of Dread and Guilt - Page 5

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

I love this feedback! ❤️

Thanks!

Welcome

This was an amazing piece of written emotions.

fear of losing him, a corner of her heart had already given him a place which is going to remain his!that eating up guilt of him picking her over himself.even after all the hate&disgust she sent his way.somwhere she is also awwed at the "duty" of her husband to keep her safe.dreadful at acknowledging the fact that she indeed conceived new feelings for this man whom she has been trying to pack and decorate with "best father to his daughter " term . This lady is in a crossfire of emotions tough times coming ahead😉

Guzre har ehsaas se yun ki arsa hogaya rubaroo huwe khud se

Ek thokar ne bekhar kar rakh diye saare uljhe jazbaat jo qaid thay kab se

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

This was an amazing piece of written emotions.

fear of losing him, a corner of her heart had already given him a place which is going to remain his!that eating up guilt of him picking her over himself.even after all the hate&disgust she sent his way.somwhere she is also awwed at the "duty" of her husband to keep her safe.dreadful at acknowledging the fact that she indeed conceived new feelings for this man whom she has been trying to pack and decorate with "best father to his daughter " term . This lady is in a crossfire of emotions tough times coming ahead😉

Guzre har ehsaas se yun ki arsa hogaya rubaroo huwe khud se

Ek thokar ne bekhar kar rakh diye saare uljhe jazbaat jo qaid thay kab se

Thank you so much for liking my work! 😊

@Bold - Such a soulful shayari! ❤️

Originally posted by: Kabiraa

wow! just wow!👏

This is a marvelous piece of writing. I absolutely loved the read, Shruti. There were a couple of lines that were so beautifully written.

It wasn't just chemicals. The place smelled of blood, death and terror.

She deemed him the vilest man of her life. But changes began to creep in when she saw world's best father in the same man, threatening to break the image she had formed of him which was buttressed largely by the perceptions enforced by others. But today, she viewed him in an entirely original write, absolutely untainted by biased perceptions.

This is so captivating. There is so much scope to write on these two. I guess, that's what brings so many different fics from so many people, with such different perspective on these scenes. A very beautiful shot.

Cheers

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

This is a marvelous piece of writing. I absolutely loved the read, Shruti. There were a couple of lines that were so beautifully written.

It wasn't just chemicals. The place smelled of blood, death and terror.

She deemed him the vilest man of her life. But changes began to creep in when she saw world's best father in the same man, threatening to break the image she had formed of him which was buttressed largely by the perceptions enforced by others. But today, she viewed him in an entirely original write, absolutely untainted by biased perceptions.

This is so captivating. There is so much scope to write on these two. I guess, that's what brings so many different fics from so many people, with such different perspective on these scenes. A very beautiful shot.

Cheers

A Beautiful OS.....👏LOVED IT....❤️❤️

Fabulously written.....Ur words are just feels....

Pls do write more dear.....🤗

Finally caught up to this

Loved it, beautifully written

Originally posted by: shahijazz

A Beautiful OS.....👏LOVED IT....❤️❤️

Fabulously written.....Ur words are just feels....

Pls do write more dear.....🤗

Originally posted by: Kira_James

Finally caught up to this

Loved it, beautifully written

Thank you so much! ❤️