PreRish One-Shot: The Smell of Dread and Guilt - Page 3

Thanks a lot guys! ❤️

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Reserved.

Unressing

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Shrutiiiii what did you write ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👏

This was wonderful ❤️❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜😘😘😘😘

First things first, I loved how she got a panic attack and how you handled that so effortlessly yet effectively. One is bound to face such traumatizing attacks Especially when thrown into such life & death situation and then the guilt of having someone else, Especially when it is your husband even if Naam ke wastey, to be the victim instead.

Second how she assured him that his daughter was safe with her mom. 💜❤️ Ofc how she took as much care gave him as much comfort as possible in the situation / position he was in, allowed her to. ❤️💜

& The last. How she wondered and pondered upon who she meant to him and how she would prove him her worth for he had saved her from a near death situation. ❤️💜🧡💚💛♥️

This was BEYOND BEAUTIFUL. I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU COULD CHURN SOMETHING AS BEAUTIFUL AS THIS OUT IN SUCH A SHORT SPAN OF TIME.

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Originally posted by: shin-chan

Shruti, it was very quick and awesome👏

Prerna placed her head upon his chest and gently clutched both his shoulders, and felt her racing heartbeat normalize upon uniting with his tranquil heart. - ❤️

Originally posted by: AryanSahil

Absolutely amazing 😉 👏👏thank u so so much dear ❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

Shruti you just laid out Prerna's heart .. it's beautiful ❤️

Originally posted by: Bhatkati-Aatma

shru🤗

this was awesome.. plss continue..

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Originally posted by: 123g

Beautiful♥♥ , you put her feeling in your words in a,efficient manner♥

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

So heart touching. His sacrifice started to melt Prerna's heart❤️😭

Originally posted by: saps.156

Simple, gripping, natural, believable, plausible, and perfect.

The journey of P from start to the end....miles covered and described beautifully.

At the start, she was in the hospital bcoz she was supposed/expected to be there, towards the end she wanted to be there.

Originally posted by: mitras

Absolutely amazing. 😊