holi prediction/ff updated P3, P3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😊hi guys this is mine and my sis's(heenaz) prediction for holi.
and its my ff.
first part is similar 2 sum1 elses ff/pridct. cnt remem. whos it is. hope u dnt mind
this is my very first ff, so pls support me. thanx.

so basicly the first scene is when ridz is walking in the corridoors, thinkin abt her and armaan, and then she goes to the AR corner.and sits there,(ishq leta hai - playin in the b.g). then nana comes and starts to console ridz.

Nana: aye bulbul, tu idhar akeli kya kar rahi hai, tera hero kaha hai?
R: nana aap yaha kya kar rahe hai, aapko to rest ki zaroorat hai.
N: mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni thi
R: kya?
N: tera aur hero ka jhada hua hai kya?
R: nahi toh, aisa kuch bhi nahi hua hai
N: toh tu aise moo latka ke q baiti hai?
R: woh aise hi.
N: nahi tere aur uske beech kuch hua hai. tu mujhe bol - starts shouting

ridz calms him down by saying-mai bolti hu, and starts to say evrything that happend.

N: toh yeh chakar hai
R: ab aap hi mujhe bataiye mujhe kya karna chaiye.
N: woh tujhe bol ke gaya tha?
R: haan lekin saaf saaf nahi
N: lekin woh tujhe bata kar toh gaya tha
R: haan lekin...
N: lekin wekin kuch nahi, tu usse pyaar karti hai ki nahi?
R: bohut karti hu, lekin ab toh woh meri baat bhi nahi sun na chahta hai.
N: mai usse baat karta hu.
R: thanx nana

then Armaan makes an entry.
dats it for now, tell me if i shud cont.😊

Luv Hiba & Heena😊

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Kanika05 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey..that's cool..

continue soon šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesomee.. šŸ‘ šŸ‘
continue...!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue soon... 😃 😃
am dying to know wat happened aage šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyyyy!!!!!
nyc work!!šŸ‘
cont asap!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey it ws amazng ff yaa its similar 2 sum1.....
bt its vry nce u should cont.........
cont soon ab armaan ki entry kya karega
luv yachna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww šŸ‘ veru gud
doo continuee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continuing......

Armaan enters...

A: sorry mujhe laga koi nahi hoga (he starts to go from there)
N: aye apple ruk
A: kya baat hai nana, main aap se baad me baat karta hu (in an angry tone)
N: nahi ruk idhar aa
A: maine kaha na main aap se baad me baat karta hu
Nana starts to shout
N: abe aata hai ke nahi
Armaan starts to walk down the stairs
N: baith idhar
Armaan sits down on the same step as ridhima is sitting.
Nana is sitting behind them two and in the middle.
N: kya tu isse pyar karta hai
A: kya farak padhta hai
Ridhima on hearing this starts to cry
N: farak padhta hai, bulbul ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya hai. Tu isse baat kyun nahi karta.
A: plz Nana, mujhe iske baare main kuch baat nahi karni hai
Armaan starts 2 leave and then suddenly Ridhima grabs his hand.

To be cont.......

Love Heena & Hiba 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaar plz cont i wnt 2 know yaar itna gussa armaan ka
dekhte hai kab tak ridz hold his hnds wow
cont soon
luv yachna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
awesum ff!!

do cont soon!

cant wait 2 knoe wat ridz says!


Marisha

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