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pwincess kanzi thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
cnt w8 2 noe wats gona happen nxt! cntd sn! plz rite longer prts! thx! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
hey
nice ff yaar
grt goin
cont super sooooonnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
hey it is too gud
plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14

Hey plssssssssss its just turning interesting but bad yaar it wasw too short plsssss update.😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
hey guys back wit it
thanx for liking it though.
anyways here goes.....

Ridhima holds armaan's hand, Armaan stops wit surprise look and turns around.
R: ruko Armaan
A: Ridhima ye tum kya kar rahi ho
R: plz Armaan mujhe aaj mat roko,
N: main abhi aata hu (he goes to leave them 2 alone)
R: (wit tears in her eyes) aaj kehne do jo kehna hai Armaan. main janti hu ki maine tumhe accuse kar ke bahut badi galti ki thi. Main bahut galat thi Armaan. maine tumhe na hi jaana aur na hi pehchana.
Armaan is all melting down by hearing dis.
R: tumhari dosti pe shak kiya, tumhare pyar pe shak kiya. (now she is crying) mujhe maaf kardo Armaan plz. main tumhare bagair nahi reh sakti. meri zindagi tumhare bagair kuch nahi hai Armaan.
Armaan comes close to her and takes her in his arms and kisses her forehead. He is in tears as well.
A: Ridhima galati sirf tumhari nahi thi, mujhe bhi tumhe bata ke jaana chahiye tha. Maine jo bhi tumhe kasauli me kaha uske liye mujhe maaf kar do.
R: Armaan mujhe bhi maaf kardo, maine jo kasauli me kaha uska matlab ye nahi tha ke main tumse pyar nahi karti. Main tumse bahut pyar karti hu Armaan. (she gets up from his chest and kisses him on his cheek)cute na
They both wipe off each others tears.
R: I love u Armaan
A: I love u 2
R: plz mujhe ab kabhi bhi chod ke mat jaana
A: kabhi nahi jaunga, tumhe chod ke jaana bhi kon chata hai. (they both smile and again they share a passionate hug)
while hugging
A: to hum abhi sabko bata de
R: nahi Armaan abhi nahi (she has got a surprise on her mind)
A: Ridhima tum ab bhi nahi bata na chati
R: plz Armaan mujhe do dino ka time do
A: acha thik hai, lekin in do dino me tum kuch nahi kar payi to main sabko bata dunga.
R: ok baba

-------------------------Meanwhile-----------------------

Rahul and Muskaan are walking in the corridoor and fighting.
M: abe jaa dr. Keerti se best cases main hi lungi
RA: haan haan sapne dekhne ka haq sab ko hai
M: sapna hoga tera
RA: jaa jaa dekhte hai
M: haan haan dekh lenge
Just then by accidently a wardboy pushes Muskaan and she falls down on Rahul.
They both r staring at each other in an romantic way.
Just then Dr. Keerti comes their
K: ye kya ho raha hai
Rahul and Muskaan come to reality and get up.
RA: k..k.. kuch nahi Dr. Keerti
M: wo actually.....
K: (angrily) bas, aap yahan kaam karne aate hai, dusre cheezon ke liye aapke paas apna time hota hai.
M: sorry Dr. Keerti
RA: Sorry Dr. Keerti
K: agli baar se kaam pe dhyaan dejiyega.
RA & M: ji Dr. Keerti

On hearing loud noises Armaan and Ridhima come out of the staircase area.
On seeing them 2 doing no work Keerti shouts at them as well.
K: aur aap yahan kya kar rahe ho, phir se Dr. Ridhima ko fire escape dikha rahe the kya? šŸ˜†
A: wo Dr. Keerti.......
K: bas, mujhe aur koi excuse nahi chahiye. everyone get back to work.

everyone gets a relif as she walks away.

M: oye hero tu is fire escape me kya kar raha tha
A: wo main..... umm wo...
R: wo hum dekh rahe the ke fire escape saaf hai ke nahi, pata nahi kab zaroorat pad jaye.
M: ok
Rahul looks suspiciously at them.
A: kya be tu kya dekh raha hai
RA: meri ankhen hai kuch bhi dekhuga
R: ab bas bhi karo, chalo jaldi warna Dr. Keerti phir se aa jayengi.
everyone get back 2 work.

----------------------later dat night--------------------

Everyone has finished their duties and are in the locker room

AT: anjali kal holi hai, tum aa rahi ho na
AN: obviously Atul. sanjeevani ki holi aur hum na aaye
M: haan yaar kal to bada mazaa aayenga, kyun hero.
A: haan kyun nahi ab to bahut mazaa ayenga
AT: ab, matlab phele tujhe mazaa nahi ata tha
A: are nahi yaar aisa nahi hai, wo ab hum sab log saath jo hai, kyun ridhima
R: umm... haan.... waise kal tum sabke liye kuch surprise hai
everyone: kya
R: aare bolungi to surprise kaise rahega
M: haan yaar, chal thik hai tu kal hi bata na
R: chalo di ghar chale
AN: haan chalo
R & AN: bye evryone see u tom
everyone leaves for home

armaan was left wondering wat the surprise is...........

dats it for now guys
hope u like dis part
i hope it's big enough šŸ˜†

Love Heena & Hiba 😊


yogzz thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
now i m wondering what the surprise is!!!!!! šŸ˜• šŸ˜•
kahi ridhima sabke saamne armaan ko propose tho nahi karne wali hai....... šŸ˜• šŸ˜• šŸ˜•
hey it was too gud
plz continue soon
pwincess kanzi thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
i sure d suprise is dat ridz is gona tell every1! yes it ws big n cute n romantic!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
hey wow yaar i am so happy now thy hv patch up
sooo cute bt i ws wonderng whts
d surprise zaroor kuch dhamaal hoga
ya apne pyar ka izhaar karegi
wow cnt wait tll nxt prt
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
cont soon
luv yachna
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
AWESOME šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Eagerly waiting 4 the surprise dat Ridz is gonna give.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
hey
nice prt
plzz
plzzzzzzz cont soooooooooonnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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