Thread 3: Destined Love... (Chapter 61 updated) - Page 7

Hi stuti..

Wonderful FF..ur writing skills are commendable.. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading the story..please give us a lengthy update (where jo and ja will meet) asap

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

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Wow👏 I was mean to write and work on my own Stories 😆 but here I was busy reading your masterpiece such a beautiful amazing plot 👏

You penned down Expertily Shinning_Stuti di 🤗

>> Thank you so muchh Rashmi ❤️ So happy that you came here

i seriously just read few work of yours the only FF I read till now which wrote by you was NEW LIFE 👏and OS

Chittor Sieze

The sky was Scarlet 👏

And A guest of the Night

>>🤗🤗Baki bhi padh lo😆

That to to late to comment However because of Divya di 😳I come to know about this one thanks to Divya di 🤗 it will be first time when I will give review on your FF😳 I hope and pray it's worth

>> I must thank Divya first for gifting me such a awesome reader. I love love love you for the review❤️ Khush ho gayi mein to🥳

Enough of my rant time to wrote about story 😆

From Prologue to 46 chapters what a slow but magnificent ways to penned down about Prologue , charachter , emotion place , war and most importantly plot seriously you had done incridable job 👏

Our JO JA meet in disguise 😳

Their time together

Then the parting time 😒

Their loneliness and yearning for each other 😭

Their battles of life

>> Thank you so so much.

I believe you can win every battle if you have support of love one 😊but here unfortunately they were fighting with own people 😭

Jo pain and life which turn horrific after that Swine actions to put her down her own family didn't support her 😭 the humilation she went through was 💔 and when they met again it was more painful cause one denied and other 😭

>> Yeah... The society was like that only. 😞 It was a trial in her life.

But Ja condition was no different either he was having his own battle with his people and life 😒 the person he always held on high regard turn again him the clash between Mentor and Pupil 💔

I just feel so bad for BK and JA there the time when Ja was pouring his heart out before his mother was so emotional 😊 but more then that I was happy how she sensed her son's restlessness and yearning for someone😊

>> Thanks dear... Its like a journey down memory lane while reading your review. 😊

"My favourite character Maan😳 I like him so damn much👍🏼 and you had given him enough space in story to rule my heart 😆 I like Moti so much she's truly a friend everyone need in their life 😳

>> Of course, Maan ka time ayega 😂

Coming to Jo brothers' I don't like them at all they're always to proud to see beyond their own action which cause to much troubles 🤓

>> Chodo unko 😂

I don't like her mother and father either no matter what they're always to harsh and bitter in my view even if they love her in own way they're just never able to make me like them sometime I find them OTT huh the lesser of them the more I like 😆

>> Bass their time is up. 😂

I felt bad for Sujamal the men suffer so much and 😭 like Jo even he suffer so much 😭 he was one of my favourite character in JA Maybe cause it was played by Vickey 😆

Anyway coming to Mughal side I like Rahim the little chap is so adorable 😆whenever I read his and Ja part it's bring smile on my face 😃 Kids and their innocence 😃

Salima Hamida are cool ladies to however you stopped writing about Salima and Rahim where are they I wanted to see their meeting with Jo 😆

>> Salima and Rahim will take an entry soon. Of course they have roles.

Is there by chance I can get my hand on Maham and Her moron son I so want to kill both of them how 🤬 they re I just don't like them at all and the way you wrote how cruelly he acted in Malwa 💔 was so painful to even read I wanted Ja to hung him upside down but 😆

and that moron lady she dare to humiliate Jo how dare she and her so called Eunch 😡 I so want them to pay for this 😡

>> Everyone will pay for their actions. 😉

But the Engima lady Rukaiya Sultan I don't know why but I am liking her here and most importantly cause of how you're making her get befit reply from Jo

>>Oh thank god someone is liking her. 🤣 I am not sure you will in the next chapter though 😂

(SPOILER! 😉 )

I don't mind to read her scene if she's going to get face strong jo

>> Jo dhoke rakh degi usse.

Overall the story is very intriguing it's hook me from past two days and because of this I even got scolding by my friend 😆 nevertheless it's worth spending time Shinning_stuti di it's so beautiful story

>> Thank you dear again! 😃

please only one request gave update soon that's it 😆

>> Trying my best yaar! 😞

Originally posted by: Mavi_16_2

Beautiful update...

I read it all in A one go from where I left😊

It's good to see that u re still updating... I thought that many must have left the forum😒 but no I was so wrong....  Good to be back here again

Aww Mavi! Was so happy to see you in the forum that day. 😃

Now I am going to wait for you after each update

Originally posted by: pari0706

Great update. Jo is making her place in harem. And jalal realises that his ego is coming between him and Jodha.

Can’t wait to see what he does when he comes back

Thank you dear. Jalal is coming back 😉

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy Di

Want jo and jalal scenes

Wish to see them together without any differences

Update soon Di

Thanks for Pm Di

Sorry for the late reply Di

Aapki wish zarur puri hogi🤗

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

hope jalal dosent let ego overrule his love for jo. Maha manga and adham behaving as per their aukaat. They got more than they deserved, so unable to digest it.

But whatever maham told rukku is going to be true in future😳. Hope to see lovebirds together. Jalal is surrounded by leeches and thorns while jo is the beautiful rose who will spread her fragrance in jalals dark life which will be remembered for centuries to come☺️

Thank you for your beautiful words Divya. So true 😊

Originally posted by: swetiii

Interesting chapter

JJ fighting their own battles

But there wasn't any face off between the duo

:(

Loved the way Jo handles these petty issues

At least ruku is not so bad untill now

Update asap buddy

A biiiiiiiggggggggg chapter

Thank you so much dear. Trying to update by tuesday or friday maybe😒

Originally posted by: mirami

Superb chapter...

Was expecting J-J meeting...

Update sooooon... With a long n beautiful meet of our love birds....

They are meeting soonest. 😉

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you so much dear. Trying to update by tuesday or friday maybe😒

Waiting 😁

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

>> Thank you so muchh Rashmi So happy that you came here

It's actually other way round😆 I am happy to get my hand on such a awesome work but your welcome Stuti di 🤗

>>Baki bhi padh lo

You have wrote more 😲 please share the link of them or Index 😊 I will love to read the rest of them

>> I must thank Divya first for gifting me such a awesome reader. I love love love you for the review Khush ho gayi mein to

Yes yes you should😎 she's is such darling member of forum always ready to help like rest of them 😳 really you enjoy my one review 😲 I am so ☺️

>> Thank you so so much.

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>> Yeah... The society was like that only. 😞 It was a trial in her life.

"You know while reading those part I was recalling HBAS where Harka sahibs was 😭 this trial of humilation even now days women had to endure

>> Thanks dear... Its like a journey down memory lane while reading your review. 😊

"I didn't wanted to miss any of its part however I lacked the time so try to write about entire story in one go 😊at what I felt what I like the most 😆 and I am glad to know it's liked by you

>> Of course, Maan ka time ayega 😂

Really 😃wow can't wait anymore 😆

>> Chodo unko 😂

"I didn't held them but I will let them be if their part is over now 😆

>> Bass their time is up. 😂

Thank heaven no OT anymore 🤣

>> Salima and Rahim will take an entry soon. Of course they have roles.

"Indeed they must have I want to see their re-entry my favourites and now your reply made me happy that I am more eger to read next update

>> Everyone will pay for their actions. 😉

"Good they should that's a life 😉however in JA series nothing as such happen so I am putting my bet on your work 🤞 I know you will serve justice 😎

>>Oh thank god someone is liking her. I am not sure you will in the next chapter though 😂

(SPOILER! 😉 )

Well till now you didn't made her do anything which can me dislike her yet 😆so yeah I like her till now actually your Ruk make me recall the first Ruk (Smilie Suri)

>> Jo dhoke rakh degi usse.

Can't wait to see the happening😆 but don't know why your line make me recall Jo slapping Ruk 🤣

>> Thank you dear again! 😃

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>> Trying my best yaar! 😞

"Oh don't go so hard on yourself😊

take care as well 🤗

Thanks for replying to my Comment 🤗