THE MIRROR - A PreRish TS (ch2, Pg10, Uptd. 31/12/2019) Completed - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

142

Views

13k

Users

22

Likes

300

Frequent Posters

Sunn_shine thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: cassiop

I am sure she does... I can speak for myself-you two gave me 2 beautiful stories.. written in a way that connects with me... the choice of scenes.. ❤️

Destiny forever stuck ho gai hai wo alag baat hai😡


Other story- will wait because thats another my types stories.. 😳 waise bhi humara kaam hai intezaar.. bhaut intezaar..

🤩

Sunn_shine thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: yogakshema

Superb!!!

Made me smile while reading each line!

Hope to see you soon with another amazing story!!

Happy New Year!! 😊

Thank you so very much Yoga.. I am so happy this story could bring a smile on your face.. that means a lot to me honestly 🤗

I will try to work on more ..

Happy New Year to you too🥳

Sunn_shine thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu8193

This is very cute update.....

The trio bond is awesome...👏love it...


Beautiful ending....

Hey Annu.. happy New Year🤗

Thank you so much for your kind word and glad you liked it ..sply the ending coz I know how bad I am when it comes to ending a story 😆

Thank you!

Sunn_shine thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: oa2019

ah what a lovely ending. very satisfying.

Hello OA.. thank.you so much for reading the story and sharing your thoughts with me .. 🤗

Sunn_shine thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MishtyShona

You did complete justification to the story and characters. I am happy that Prerna realized her mistakes and took steps to rectify it. Kukki is the hero of this story and love the fact that she behaves her age and is her father's angle since he has only her and none. The last morning scene was cute. Each ordering the other to close the curtains. Kukki is the real Cupid. Loved her playful and naughty side. This plot had so much potential, but alas the CV's threw away a real diamond for glass shards! Anyways loved reading your TS. It was realistic and believable. Much much much better than what paid professional writers are churning out in the name of plot!

Happy New Year Mishty🤗

@bold- this is ❤️ Keeping things a bit close to reality is what has been the biggest point for me ....I have troubled Ankie so much asking if ye theek.hai so theek hai.. When you as a reader feel its realistic and believable .. ohh I reach on 7th sky 😳

Apni Kukki is Dad's angel like how Ankie imagined her in her prompt and I did in my other forever pending story..

I am soo soo happy you liked it. Thank you so much for always sharing your thoughts that only encourage me to get better🤗

Sunn_shine thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update to cute

Thank you very much Ammy for reading.. I am glad you liked it🤗

WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 5 years ago

Comments here


Image

Sunn_shine thumbnail
5th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

This coming from a true KSGian like you Ankie makes it so special ❤️🤗

1177236 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago

Awww...💓💓💓💓

ektamaddan42 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update......👏

Its to emotional....every words beautifully described...

Edited by ektamaddan42 - 5 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".