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I loved epilogue it was hilarious

You ended so soon...loved it.
Liked that Tarun found a partner and Daksh and Rano..sweet.

Nice end to a beautiful story!!
Yes and I loved the epilogue.. It was funny..Loved Jigyasa attitude...

So when do you start the next FF???

😛

Hey shoba,,

Sorry, sorry and sorry. I should've comented earlier.. but you know na, I was trying to catch up with the ffs. Since you already said that this was based on Sweethome Alabama, you gave your story away. That was the reason I delayed reading this.

But, Boy.. Oh Boy.. that was something. I kick myself for not commenting earlier (well!, you can do that too😉).

I really liked this little spitfire of yours (I am assuming she was petitie in your story). Like you said before, she had all the spunk in the world. But, she never did seem to say the right things at the right time. At least she got that part right at the end😉😳.

Yaar, tume Tarun ko kya bana diya. No matter what his s***** orientation is, I loved him in this story. Loved his loyalty and his honesty. Always had a soft corner for him just like the way I do for Meera (well, I have my own reasons for that...but let's not go into that now)

I liked your dig at mikasa.. lol, you left Waterford out😃.

I really enjoyed it, shoba. Epilogue was icing on the cake👏👏👏

Oh ! And I forgot to mention the dream she always has (about her being pregnant with JW child and dreaming about the lil boy who looks exactly like JW in the quaint little cottage).. It kind of stayed with me till the end of the story. Quite a dream.. that is. wonderful

Jai 'won' at last 😉, so now I withdraw my request to kill Daksh 😆
very sweet and hilarious ending.....great work 👏

Shobu di..
what is this..??
i told u too update...
not.. end the story..
and btw.. that was a very small epi..
i want a longer..
please.. please.. please..
pretty please.. .
for me..
please

Wonderful ending to such a sizzling story.....loved it loved it and loved it.....so finally lightning stroke and all became quiet in Goa 😉 😳 .....enjoyed "JB forever" part 😳 😳 but missed "Princess B" part sooooooo much 😉 😆 ....you etched descriptions of all other characters so hilariously that I failed to close my mouth 😆 😆 ......now now now start updating PG after that my favourite one.....please....pretty please 😳 😆 😆

Well done PM👏

This poem is for only "JB forever" 😛

I can offer you my laughter.

I can share with you my pain.

I can hold the storm till after

You feel safer from the rain.

But you have to promise me that someday

When you feel the lightning strike,

Swear that fear won't keep you

From knowing that it's right.

Come and say, "I love you."

Let the heavens thunder and the fierce winds blow.

Come and say, "I love you."

We're not afraid; we're in love and so

I'll give you the time you need now

To let go of the past.

I'll give you the space you need now

Until you come to me at last.

And when you know, come and say I love you.😳

That was such great ff.Love the movie & loved your version. The epilogue was hilarious especialy Jigs & Karunas fight.

Kya epilogue tha...Jigs-Karuna dueling...
This whole ff had a beach-y feeling - Jigs and her large-flowered skirt, boats, etc; your ffs convey the whole atmosphere of the place beautifully, be it Italy or a chhota gaon or whatever. Shows the depth of thought u put into it... 👏 👏 👏
(I am fine, always trying to catch up on updates and comments - so many good ffs, so little time 😆 )

Hey Di,

love the ending to this very sweet love story,union of two people who truly belong together was penned down so well.the ending was soo cute.Karuna and Jigs brought an smile on my face.loved it.thank soo much for writing this amazing ff. 👏

preet 😳