Forbidden Attractions - -Sukor -Shorty cutie A Mini Bonus. - Page 4

The Final Chapter

(this is quite long... for two reasons......

1) i will be busy for the next two weeks with my work so will not be able to update and

2) i could not break this part as i felt the continuity will miss.... So yeah prep yourself for the long essay. 😃

Well he he you all know me... a sucker of emotions cannot just stop the flow)

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Treat (y) ………….the fusion of the frontiers.....

She woke up in the hospital…………….

Gazed was her vision……

Ms. Chakor are you ok.

She is opening her eyes….

She got her senses…

There were many voices around her all new

Her ears sharpened to identify that voice the only voice she knew but nowhere to be heard.

She closed her eyes….

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He was there in front of her…..

They were tied and made to kneel down in the lower deck of their cruise….

The luxury liner was having the Indian flag….

It was steering towards the international waters with the Indian Captain on Board.

But ……………………….

You cannot do this to us shouted Prathap…

I told you not to believe him shouted Sunil.

Why did you save us from the authorities without being arrested.

He was calm…..

Sometimes somethings has to be done in a different way, not in the normal way.

If you had been arrested you would need to be handed over to the international court of jurisdiction. Your trial may happen in India or Thailand and you will know your way out using your power and money and to rise again to create trouble to MY Country.

You will now understand that Indian Defense can never be intruded.

Let them search for you all over!!! let them think that you escaped and ran away! Let them trace you forever and ever but………. you will be punished under the Suraj court of Law……….simply RAW.

No No Prathap shouted. They saw Chakor….

Tanuj hold her, she killed the snipers and helped him, kill her….. shouted Sunil.

Suraj looked at her…snipers…. ???? she looked at him.

Tanuj tried to hold her when he in no seconds ruthlessly got shot right on his temple…before he could lay her finger on her..

His eyes was wondering he asked Suraj….is she your property… he went near his ears and spoke those words…. Tanuj was shocked….She was shocked too but what did he say to him.

She was bland looking at them…..

He drew the gun, fixed the silencer and locked it drew her close to him….

Chakor, Tell them who you are and kill them….butcher them as you want… let the moon which bled red that day bleed today. Its YOUR DAY… Kill them he said

Who are you Sunil asked……Tell us shouted Prathap. You wretched dancer….

One shot on his knees by Suraj….dare a word about her….. Shrieked Prathap….

She held his hands…..

She shot them in their shoulders… do you remember two years back you came to Thailand… You killed my mother and my brother Lee ruthlessly…. Do you remember how you butchered them in front of my eyes and threw them to the crocodiles…. She closed her eyes and shot them talking, raging…. I am Lee’s sister, shot again…. I am her daughter…. She shot again. You killed my family...for your greed.. because my brother did not heed to you. i will kill you both.

It was raining bullets on them… No no No they shouted after which the final shot was on their temple…. He left his hold on her hand but she could not stop herself she kept on raining them… I will kill you, butcher you both… she was on and on. She felt tired and finally fell on her knees holding suraj’s legs who was standing calm beside her.

He lifted her….. Get up… its not yet over…..they were in the middle of the sea in the international waters…. The undercurrents were heavy with swirls of sharks..

Hold… he said to her….. they both threw the bodies in the deep ocean and saw the pool of blood as the cruise steered fast…. The sharks had their feast.

She was bland looking at it…. He caught her shoulders…. Aren’t you happy he asked her…. She said thank you thank you Suraj I am happy but but….she could not emote…..

Please laugh or cry he said…. please think about your brother Lee and your mom and bring out those emotions as your heart is loaded with them. Unfreeze yourself he said to her…..

She could not….. her heart was very heavy…. She looked at him….. I don’t know how to react she said. her face was grim… Chakor please cry he said….. or atleast smile as you are happy…..

He remembered his psychiatrist friend’s words… One should express their emotions… if one cannot, that means they are turning rock and will prove fatal too as the heart will be suppressed and the brain will strain its neurons… she should emote else it will prove fatal for her…. Her heart cannot take the weight….

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She went to the corner sat down holding her knees close to her chest looking at him….. into his eyes… his eyes were tearing to see her like that… Oh god… please help her out… is this not enough for her to break??? What more shock she needs to unfreeze he asked to himself……. Please don’t be so cruel on her…

He got a call and saw up in the sky . The Coast Guard chopper was flying above and sending down the ladder for him as the cruise was steering towards UK safely by the Indian Captain to leave the tourists who were taken care of by the Indian Govt.

What’s that she asked…. Looking above…

I need to go…… you can go with the cruise to London I have made all arrangements for your living there.

Whaatttt??? How will I live she asked…. I thought….. you……………….. she kept quiet…

He looked at her …..what you thought??? You cannot think, express or emote…. I cannot help you more…. And I cannot be with you too as death always hangs on my head above. I donot want to attach myself to anyone. And you know about my work too so its better you lead your life in London.

Her eyes were dry but he could feel her heart going heavy…….I have to do this I am sorry he said within himself…

I am sorry for I cannot do more than this and I don’t want anyone to know about you as you may be harmed for even knowing me. Please go inside your room he said and held the ladder…….

She shouted at him.....I don’t want to go to London…her hands were shaking…… looking at the sea… She held her head which was banging within… Oh god ……Why I cant I do what all do..What cant I be normal… she said to herself……..Suraj cant you understand what I am going through…….

He looked at her…shouted back. I don’t understand and don’t want to either…. He climbed the ladder leaving her down…..

Surajjjjj she shouted…. Fine……….. go……go… … if you cannot then…………… I ……she stood up .. she ran to the end of the rail got on it and jumped into the sea…..

Noooooo he froze…..

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She closed her eyes…..and opened….

The doctor and nurse were around her.

Where am I? and How long I am here? Who brought me? she asked…

This is Maldives they said…its been a month…. You were brought here by the Indian coast guards

Thank god you are back to your senses….

You can go home in few days they said.

Home??? But….

Walked in a white uniformed young guy along with a young lady …. Mam good you are fine.

I am Kirti and she is my wife Hina… we will take you home they said.

She could not understand anything..

Thank you she said.

A week passed by… She was given medicines which often made her dizzy… she had bouts of her trauma sometimes of the nasty experience.

They took her to the house……………..it was a beautiful one on the shores of the sea….surrounded by palm trees with a beautiful portico…. Garden…………. A private pool .

The house was big and classy with a first floor and a terrace…..

She walked in to the welcome of a beautiful breeze….

How did I come here???

Hina got her hot soup… she said thanks….

Whose house is this she asked…. Aapka Hina said…. what is she speaking… I can’t understand…. Yours he said….thank god he speaks English…..Mine??? ……….she was confused..

She closed her eyes….did you leave me for real she asked to herself. There were few canvas with brushes and paints. She was surprised…. Its been over two and half years…..she said to herself.

She went towards it and opened the canvas… she spread it in the middle of the big room… she took the brushes and started to sketch and paint…. Hina brought her breakfast, lunch and dinner too she did not touch anything….

She finished the painting and lay beside it… where are you?…. She heaved heaved which brought out her first tears….. she cried cried for the first time in her life after the black day….she broke completely Surajjjjj she cried a lot…… tears were flowing down…..

Oh god why was I saved…. You could have left me to die….. I have nothing in life to look forward to live too.. I have nothing she said crying hard…

Her whole body shook….. the sun was setting…… she woke up and walked towards the balcony which was facing the sea….

Far away on the shore under the canopy she saw with her blurred eyes the apache…..

She wiped her eyes and scrunched to see again… Her eyes grew wide and bright…

She ran down like mad …. She went all over as she did not know the way out… she hit against everything…. finally she came outside to the beach…..

She saw the Apache ….. she ran towards it…..she felt there is someone she knew…. She hugged it kissed the handlebar… the seat…… crying… smiling… she smiled…………for the first time….. how did you come here?? Where is he??? Is he here??? She lay her head on the seat….hugging ...crying... i missed you.... where were you??? where is he???

Are you going to give all your hugs and kisses to the Apache………..came a firm voice from behind…….

She startled lifting her head up……………that voice.. the only voice she has been craving for, to hear to, to run to… she cried…Is she really hearing him…. She turned around..

He was there few feet away standing with his hands open wide…. Would you not hug m……………… before he could complete she ran to him and jumped on to him……… no words she broke into a big cry…. Smile….. Surajjjjj ………its you… you…. Really……….. am I hallucinating she asked. Suraj…. she looked at him still on him…. I am emoting….seee tears I am crying…………….. I am smiling……….. she hugged him tight…cried cried aloud… hitting him where did you? Why did you leave me…. She smiled… cried again……. He went into her ears and said yes……………… I see you crying……………. Smiling………….. I waited long for this….. She soon realised she was clinging on to him like a child… She quickly got down….

Where were you? How was I saved… what happened to me? And Maldives how????

He shhhed her and whistled…… before I answer.... first my celia………………

Celiaa??? Who is celia Chakor frowned……… who is she??? You brought her with you she asked?? Why is she with you….Is she your…..

He smiled so you are now feeling jealous…. Not bad….but why should you feel jealous…he winked. He whistled when she came running to him ………….Celia the huge brown and black German Shepard jumped on him pushing him down licking him all over kissing him….

She stood surprised so celia is his pet….. and I felt jealous, why am I feeling jealous…. I am unable to see anybody loving him… what did I say…… Love…. Yes she cried… smiled…

Ok ok my baby…he rolled with her… He kissed celia and thank you my dear for taking care of her when she was in the hospital..

Celia took care of me?? Whats happening….

Too confusing isn’t it… he lifted her chin…..

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A mini flashback

Chakor I cannot be with you and I have to leave he climbed the ladder………………

Oh ok if you cannot then ………………….I……… she jumped into the deep sea.

Noooooo…. He froze….. he did not expect that. No No I missed my calculation….. I am wrong… I thought she would cry, emote, get angry and shout but what has she done….

He quickly called Anil and the Coast Guards… there was swift action of the lifeguards and special jet speed boats which searched the deep sea and brought her out…..carried her to the Port trust hospital.

She was unconscious….

Suraj was shattered. She cannot do this…… not even the sea can touch her…. He cried… Anil walked in Suraj so you are…………… looking at her………… Suraj said I don’t know what it is…. But yes I am getting affected looking at her like this…. I am indeed getting attached to her…. Which I don’t want… Anil you know about my job and the hazards I face daily….

Anil held Suraj…. Is there no hazards in others lives?… everyone needs to live and die one day…. It does not mean that we in the defence should not lead our life… you have been staying away from all this in silo far away…. You are already 28…But for how long…. And I have never seen you getting affected for anyone but this is the first time I see love in your eyes. Can’t she be loved he asked…

I don’t know said Suraj…. She had faced so much hardship in life…He quickly briefed about her... Anil was surprised....she is too young…. Suraj was indeed breaking down…. Anil… she had indeed saved me from those snipers….and she jumped in to the sea… Anil realised how this RAW officer who has been so RAW has unconsciously been too attached to her…infact fallen in love with her....

Suraj, what more evidence you need that she is in love with you when she could save you and also give her life away…. You are smart, intelligent in everything but don’t be dumb in your life. Take her to your place… get her treated…. and Man For Heaven’s sake please start living for yourself and her…. Please, I have listened to you all my life, will you not listen to what your true friend says….. Suraj embraced Anil….Thanks buddy….

He was looking at her through the ICU glass door… she was on the bed motionless with tubes all over her… it cringed his heart…

Maldives……………….

The haven for everyone….

He had his single room apartment in Delhi in the conjusted area to be in the city buzzle and to make all believe he is a very normal middle class bachelor for the outside world….

But….Suraj Dhopar Rajvanshi a RAW officer…He had his fishing farm in Maldives spending his life with Celia and his Apache and the cute couple Kirti and Hina whom he get amused seeing their love and the most faithful and trusted ones. None knew about his job but only know he keeps travelling a lot….. and visit Maldives seldom but his employees took care of the business well.

When not in action he would be at peace here….Surfing, going around in his Apche, making all drool over him and happy swimming in his private pool and playing his piano…………

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He brought her here and admitted in the hospital which he runs for the benefit of the slender population but with international medical standards.

She was surprised to hear all, though he did not say anything about love..or what Anil told him, for he did not want her to feel obligated for saving her.

She understood the untold but kept quiet….

She saw a pic on his phone… a middle aged lady in a beautiful saree. Who is this she asked him.

He smiled, lovingly caressing the phone he said My mother…I lost my father… had never seen him… my mother was everything to me. A bold lady who taught me to respect women and my country. She was beautiful…. with a blob of tear… I miss her he said… she held his hands and pressed. I am sorry, she said. Its ok, she had a peaceful death when I was with her as she was ailing too……. …Suraj… what is she wearing it is so beautiful she asked.

Oh!! this is saree…. She looks beautiful in saree though she would wear salwars but I liked her in sarees the most….

Ok its been long lets get to have dinner and you take some rest we shall talk tomorrow and also go shopping for some dresses for you and then you can decide …. he stopped….

She looked at him and just said Thank you for everything but decided what she needs to do. She stood when she asked Suraj I know the Cruise went to London but….he said… your snakes were handed over to the snake park in Maldives. Her eyes were filled with tears. Thank you she smiled…

They had dinner together and retired to their rooms… after few hours, he heard a noise and walked out into the big room when he saw the canvas of the painting of him….his smiling face on the floor… he smiled…. she was curled with her hands on him sleeping… he laid on the floor on the other side and slept looking at her…

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He woke up to see her nowhere.

He called…. Chakor…. she came in a long skirt and a tops with breakfast for him.

He thanked her and smiled….Good morning…

A borrowed one from Hina… she could not understand what Hina spoke as it was broken English and hindi as she was from North India settled in Maldives.

But she realised Hina was attending a wedding in the local temple nearby and she was going to the shop to buy some gifts for the bride. She said I will buy saadi, chuudiya and sindoor. She could not understand but she smiled at her. Chuddiya… she understood its bangles as she signed it…

Suraj refreshed and took her shopping in his Apache… she touched it and sat on it holding his shoulder… while driving through being a small town all bowed him with respect Suraj Rajvanshi Sir….and looked at her with eyes surprised. While the young girls were indeed drooling over the handsome dude with his coolers driving through in style and feeling J of the new girl behind him in the pillion which was always empty, Chakor looked at them and brought her hands down from his shoulder and hugged his abdomen leaning on him holding him tight. He smiled to himself and pressed her hands with his and revved more…hmmm shade of possessiveness….

He showed the Indian shops and told her to buy whatever she wanted and told her to tell his name so that they will collect the money from him. She went looking at the shops when one shop had sarees hung and said all bridal accessories available. She saw the temple nearby and saw a couple coming out after getting married along with Hina and Kirti…

She went into the shop and picked up few salwar suits and few more and asked him for bangles and few more. She had some money with her which was given to her along with her possession which they managed to get from the cruise but not much. She paid for her purchase while Suraj was busy talking to the town authorities and was watching her through corner of his eyes…

She saw him and went towards the Apache and waited there for him and was looking at him. He too shopped and went to the shop she went to and came out with his bags.

All done he asked… yes she nodded…

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It was evening…..

She was in the salwar suit with her hair loose Kriti and Hina were away with the marriage party. Suraj made some dinner and brought it…. they had when he looked at her and said you look pretty in salwar… and what’s your plan….

She excused herself and went to her room… it took long and he became worried.

He went into the room to be found latched inside… Chakor what are you doing, why are you taking so long. Are you ok… he was restless. She opened the door when he was taken aback and started to laugh….

She was standing with a saree literally rolled around her and sweating terribly…. it was a chiffon red color saree thin and transparent too…

He laughed what are you trying to do…

She said shut up Suraj I am trying to tie a saree…. But…. she hung her face in sadness…I know nothing…

She was wearing the sleeveless ready made blouse which was with a low back and needing to be knotted…

Do you know how to wear he asked… No… she said but felt he was sounding a bit different.

Ok give me few minutes I will be back he said.

He went down and locked the doors and gave food to Celia and kissed her good night…

He looked at his mobile for few minutes and put it on silent mode and walked towards her..

For the first time she lowered her head and said I am feeling somewhat when he said… lifting her chin you are shy… and you look beautiful when you are shy.

He spun her around and removed the saree and she was in her long skirt. He first went behind her and very very slowly knotted her blouse and she felt butterflies as his hands touched her back down. He knew she was getting affected and so was he.

He took the inskirt which was there and gave her to change into and turned his back… she lost herself in his gentleman’s behaviour and changed into the inskirt… I have changed she said very softly when he turned towards her. He was lost in the smooth abdomen and her naval which was making him loose his sanity. He held himself. He took the saree and held the upright corner and asked her to tuck in to her right.. she tucked in and he turned her around…. How do you know she asked softly….. hmmmmm google he said….he was finding it difficult to keep his voice normal…

He slowly pleated the saree and asked her to tuck into the inskirt below her naval when she slipped the pleats. He did it again and took his hands to her inskirt and very carefully tucked in when her heart missed a beat as his fingers caressed her naval and her lower abdomen. He quickly tucked in when his heart started to race …. He took the rest of the saree around her when his breath fanned her shoulders… she closed her eyes… he brought around and brought it over her assets without touching them and dropped the pallu fall over her shoulders. Now there you go… he stepped back to see her…. She was so beautiful and was making him go crazy… he moved her back to make her sit on her bed while her eyes were down…. and for the first time her cheeks were red which did not go unnoticed by him…

He saw the bangles besides… he slid them through her slender hands which was matching her saree… made her wear the ear hangings….

You look beautiful he said but her forehead was plain… he took the bindi and pressed it between her brows.. She was in tears…

She made him sit beside her. she joined her hands together folded bent her head down and went into his chest with tears Suraj I don’t know the Indian way but this is the way the Thai’s and Koreans do, to show respect to the Man they love… I don’t know about you but I know my heart beats only for you…. I love you and want to be your property forever. I know I am not perfect and I know nothing but I will learn to know more about you by loving you and will make myself perfect for you..

He was full of tears… held her hands… don’t fold your hands please…. Chakor the day I saw you I knew something happening within me, the day I knew you saved me from the snipers affirmed you will not allow anything to happen to me. But I feared as I don’t want anything to happen to those who are mine. I love you too.. I am also not perfect, I too have many flaws most insensitive…. She closed his mouth… you are the most sensible and sensitive human being Suraj… I don’t know whats this for but I was told by the shopkeeper that this is very important for a woman. She showed the small wooden container which had the sindoor… will you accept me she asked…. You have every right to say no… I don’t want to force you she said…

He looked at the sindoor and said….but… I cannot accept you……she was shocked….. its ok her lips shivered and she closed her eyes when he wiped her tears and kissed her forehead. My dear girl before I fill you with this sindoor I need to marry you….that is to tie the sacred mangalsutra he said.

She looked into his eyes. Yes the shopkeeper told me and showed me too but …. But…… I could not get it as it was gold and expensive and I…… he took a small box from his shirt pocket and gave it to her…. She opened to see the MS in there…. The same she had seen but could not buy as she was short of money…she felt too emotional…. Surajjjj will youuuu…. She cried…… yess I will….. he took the kurta which he had brought in the morning. Changed into it and held her hand and took her to the small Pooja room he had which had the idols of lord Ganesha and Laxmi which his mother worshipped.

He brought and switched on the barbeque in the middle of the Pooja and put the fire sticks in it to create the sacred agni… he took her hands tied together with her dupatta and took saath pheras, explained her the meaning of each steps…. She was in awe of his knowledge of everything…..she vowed to follow it within herself.

The moon was shining bright…..

There was no grand ceremony, nobody to stand witness. they didnot need any as the moon was there to preside and their hearts were there as witnesses. He made her light the diyas at the deity’s platform.

Standing in front of his mothers pic which was in the Pooja and the almighty he tied the mangalsutra around her when she felt too emotional. He took the sindoor and adorned her hairline with it…. I promise in front of my mom and the almighty that I take you as my wife Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi and will ever be yours and provide you with all respects, love and protect you through our life together.

He hugged her and kissed her forehead… she was in tears, all she could say was I too promise you….Thank you thank you for making me your pro….

He closed her lips…. Chup you are not an object to be my property for you are my life, my love…

She looked up and asked is this what you told Tanuj…. Yes he said with a smile… I decided you as my life long back. I love you my girl… they took the blessings of the almighty and he lifted her to the balcony to thank the moon, which was indeed bleeding blue…

He made her stand and held her hands...he said… Chakor you are my life but….she said I know Country is your priority and my love will not intervene in that… Chakor you need to also understand duty will call me anytime and I will not be able to let you know where I will be as that is of high confidence and even if something happens… she closed his mouth... I know Suraj…. She touched her sindoor and said… I trust my love will guard you as your love to India ensures its protection.

He felt very emotional and hugged her… Thank you Chakor he said…

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He carried her to his room well from now on their room….

He placed her on his bed which was big and his room was so huge and beautiful with the tint of blue and a special wall paper pictures of deep sea… one side of the room was facing the sea….

This is beautiful she said… you seem to love the sea…

Yes! he said pulling her back to him when she jumped a bit… the effect of her trauma of her past experiences. He calmed her…Chakor.. easy easy your Suraj only your Suraj please and turned her towards him. She calmed....

Their eyes met which was full of love….

Her hands were on his chest… he held her close to him holding her waist with left and lifting her chin with his right.

Chakorrrrr…. Her eyes were closed and her lips were trembling……anticipating as his breath was coming close to her…. She tilted her face….

I love you he said and may I ……. She held him and raised herself opening her eyes looking into his and placed her lips on his…… just that sent electrical ripples within both their bodies….

I love you too… she said….

They discovered their lips passionately and stayed like that for long…..

She felt a bit dizzy when he relaxed her moving her back….. Are you ok he asked. Hmmm

The effects of the medicines….I am sorry she said….. he hugged her while she placed her head on his chest…. When will I get over this trauma Suraj… she asked… I am sorry she cried….

Chakor Lets take it slow….. first your health as you were on bed for a month and suddenly all this… I can understand….he said kissing her forehead…you will be fine soon he said wiping her tears…

They changed into their night wear ….. seeing the moon together….slept with a smile on their face..

He woke in the middle to see his lady curled this time facing towards him but still with her cheeks on his palm…her solace as she slept with peace as her dream was beside her….

He smiled looking at her, slowly drawing her closer to him as she cuddled into him without opening her eyes as she knew only her Suraj will be there beside her as she is his life and he is hers!!!

She will soon get over her trauma to twine with each other for they have to live their life together!!!

They had their own frontiers which were breached to have a beautiful treaty..

They forbid themselves due to their lives but were attracted unknowingly.

The forbidden attractions indeed breached the frontiers to unite forever as love can never be forbidden by anyone….

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It was lovely to write this …. … I enjoyed this different genre…

Thank you all for travelling with me in this journey. Hope you all enjoyed too.

Love you all!!!!

FANTABULOUS SUMI 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 MAKING ME WANT MEEJAY MORE AND MORE... IMAGING THEM IN THIS STORY

What a fantastic fantastic last chapter.......lovedddddddd it❤❤

The entire journey of unsuppressing the suppressed emotions was just superrrrrrr.... hats off to you (yet again)

The way she butchers the bad guys shows her pent up feelings, the way he pretends to leave her to make the robotic chakor human was a good idea, painting, celia, Apache ride, shopping, saree tying 😍😍😍 , the unusual wedding.... you aced it all👏👏👏👏

End as usual cherry on the cake...❤❤❤❤

Thanks a ton for this different story.

Hope you are back soon with another equally dhamaakedar one😜😜I am sure you will say insatiable nikki.... but I am for your stories...😘😘

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FANTABULOUS SUMI 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 MAKING ME WANT MEEJAY MORE AND MORE... IMAGING THEM IN THIS STORY

What a fantastic fantastic last chapter.......lovedddddddd it❤❤

The entire journey of unsuppressing the suppressed emotions was just superrrrrrr.... hats off to you (yet again)

The way she butchers the bad guys shows her pent up feelings, the way he pretends to leave her to make the robotic chakor human was a good idea, painting, celia, Apache ride, shopping, saree tying 😍😍😍 , the unusual wedding.... you aced it all👏👏👏👏

End as usual cherry on the cake...❤❤❤❤

Thanks a ton for this different story.

Hope you are back soon with another equally dhamaakedar one😜😜I am sure you will say insatiable nikki.... but I am for your stories...😘😘

Ufff atlast got that word @bold from you 💃💃💃

Thanks so much Niki for the lovely words. Means a lot to me

Yes a different genre i enjoyed though bit scared too... But nonetheless when i read such comments all my sweat 😰 goes off phewwww 🤗🤗🤗

Another 🏃🏃🏃🏃🏃

Thanks so much Sonia for the lovely words 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Just read all parts Fantastic & superb update 👏👏👏 Specially the last part The way Suraj saved Chakor & bring back to her life it was amazing Saree part was 🔥🔥🔥 Their confession to each other to their simple wedding witnessed by chandu ji reminded me of sukor beautiful camp wedding Sukor moments are blissful as always Waiting for your new story 😉😉😉

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Thanks Smita for the lovely words. You always make it so special.

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Final part :

Finally got the time to read this part & OMG, what a breathtaking, marvellous update it is Sumi. Total dhamaka 👏👏👏👏, this is called the finale part, it's just mind-blowing 👌👌.I was amazed while reading this from start to end.

Niraj's death at Suraj's hand for the crime of touching Chakor, made me staggered & Prathap was shot for making bad comments about Chakor, then giving her the chance to butcher her enemies, the way Chakor put them to death, I was stunned 😮😮 , Then his trying to bring her emotions out by intimidating to leave her, because it could have been fatal to her although he had already made her his life & couldn't even think of leaving her 👍👍❤❤, then her trying to commit suicide, the entire scene made me stand still for a while. After getting consciousness her missing him, her tears looking at the sketch of Suraj, seeing his Apache, her running towards it, like a lunatic, his saying "Are you going to give all your hugs & kisses to it? "😊😉😉. Their tight hug, her feeling jealous of his pet 😁😁, loved the entire sequence. Suraj's break down seeing her in such critical condition in the flash back scene, his ambivalence regarding his hazardous work & his love for her but finally was convinced to start a new life with her. I loved that he deliberately didn't spoke about his love for her while he was describing the whole incident to her but she understood his unspoken words 👍👍💓💓. Her desire to wear Saree after seeing his mother's pic wearing Saree, hugging him to make all girls jealous while riding on his Apache 😁😁👏👏, the shopping, his transferring her pet snakes to the snake park, his lying on the floor, slept looking at her ❤❤, so beautifully written, I just loved this portion. I always love the exquisite details in your every story, his helping her to wear the saree, was so fiery & beautiful 😍😍. Then their emotional confession, the unprecedented marriage by witnessing the moon, so delightful ❤❤😍😍, then their first night, the entire conversation, the way he think of her well being, setting aside his own urge, was great 👍👍. I loved it, though it was not a romantic night but a very emotional & soothing one. Overall a fantastic story, our journey with this new Sukor story in the different backdrop was quite interesting & engaging 👌👌❤❤. But I hope we will get a romantic Sukor moment as a bonus from you later 😊😜😜, which was incomplete here , although I'm not so greedy but hopeful as we know that you will not leave any of our desires unfulfilled, you will surely fulfill it at some point 😊😊❤❤ Thank you.. & sorry for the lengthy comment..

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And lengthy???? Noo i love 😍 😍 😍 😍 it. Brings a big smile ☺ 😁😁😁 on my face

🙈🙈 Sukor romance will try to give a bonus...

The twining……….. My SuKor …a Bonus

(I started writing this story for Sabah but ending it with the wish of Smita... Sukor story without a tantanaatan.... Well here is the Bonus.... Should you all need a warning??😆.... well lo here it goes.... tantanaaatan)

He smiled looking at her, slowly drawing her closer to him as she cuddled into him without opening her eyes as she knew only her Suraj will be there beside her as she is his life and he is hers!!!

She will soon get over her trauma to twine with each other for they have to live their life together!!!

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Two weeks passed running by

They were getting used to each other, his touches and his proximity.

They were also understanding about each other, their likes and dislikes.

She found the meaning of their names…. Suraj means the mighty Sun who will rage for her and bring his rays down to incubate her…..

He explained that Chakor means bird….a free spirited bird who fly high and turns into an eagle like she did to punish the evil… she smiled and said but without this Sun the bird could have not met its goal… their eyes locked many a times as he would be lost in the innocent beauty in front of him but would burn those eyes who would even look at her otherwise.

She learnt a lot from Hina, his favourite food, his general way of life. She would get lost herself when he would surf in the sea with ease or play with Celia and his piano. He would surf in his shorts through the rough waves in the sea. The wetness and the seawater drops shining on him due to the sun would indeed make her feel proud that this handsome guy is hers and only hers and will quickly run to him and cover him with the bathtowel when he would walk out as there will be gaping eyes on him… he would hug her sideways and wink at his jealous girl.

He would look at her with awe the way she sketched the sceneries and loved the way she drew Celia and his Apache. He would loose himself as she would swim like a fish in the pool and dance beautifully. They had their beautiful moments together in the pool with Celia watching…. She grew fond of Celia and so was Celia too. But sometimes the naughty one would slip away to the nearby colonel’s house. She would search for her and Suraj would just laugh out.

They would lie down on the beach hours together just cuddling looking at the waves when she would sometimes fall asleep and he would carry her to their room….

She found him very firm and adamant in certain things and calls a spade as a spade.

She was equally firm but decided within herself to always give in for his wishes, whatever, whenever and wherever as she was amazed and felt too emotional as a guy of such a knowledge and stature has taken his time to understand her pain, agony and love her unconditionally and wait for her. He would never leave her and ensured his touch was there always to give her the confidence… She fell in love with him more and more and felt guilty of not able to take their love to the next level… during her bouts of trauma he would just hold her and ease her saying its just her Suraj and none can lay even their eyes on her… she would calm down and turn and hug his neck with tears, as he would hold her waist closing his eyes kissing her head behind.

He had his special personalized gym and would do his workouts while she would be admiring him. He had his boxing ring practices too. He taught her few Taichi self defense techniques to build her confidence.

It was inevitable the way he was respected by one and all and also how he has broken so many hearts by loving her…. Nevertheless, the people were so happy that she came in his otherwise lonely life.

He took her around Maldives in his Apache, showed their fishing firm. Luckily Anil managed everything and would seek Suraj’s expert advice and would ensure he does not leave her.

Anil spoke to Chakor and all he said to her was thank you my dear sister for coming into my friend’s life.

She went for her regular check ups and wanted to give away with the medicines which were prescribed for her trauma. She wanted to avoid those medicines completely. She would cry on his chest and feel guilty when her trauma sets in when they get a bit intimate. He would hug her and kiss her saying just few days she will be alright and they would have all the time to them and he will make her make up for the loss… he would crack jokes to change her mood and she would smile but was praying to her mother to make her well soon. They loved each other crazily…

They would kiss before they sleep and slowly she started to sleep straight with her cheeks on his palm facing him and not curling herself which was a great improvement as she fought her trauma. During the midnight he would slowly draw her close to him and she would come to him cuddling without opening her eyes and he would watch her lips mumbling and one night he very carefully lip read and teared to realise her saying My Suraj, My Suraj… he would kiss her forehead and sleep with his hands around her.

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the imprint of Love

It was a morning, she asked Hina to take slow and be with Kirti and she would prepare the breakfast.

She was in the kitchen with her hair loose, a spaghetti tops and her short skirt…

He came behind and hugged her which she is now used to and gave in when he kissed her nape. He pushed her hair aside and was surprised…. A tattoo on her neck behind… written in calligraphy S with C engraved within … when did you do this he asked… didn’t it pain… why only S he asked…and why here….kissing her there and placing butterfly kisses on her cheeks and shoulders…

She felt shy… not S it has C within the S, Chakor is always within Suraj…. Her eyes were swelling with tears… He too got emotional … kissed there…and why here he asked… hugging her back to him….hmmm that’s the only place I can show and allow the tatoowala girl to design and I did not know if you would like too..she said… Its beautiful but it would have burnt your skin… please don’t do anything that will harm you he said very sternly… He turned her towards him when he saw her maang with that bright red sindoor… she never missed to keep it and ensured it was always bright on her… He smiled at that…. She said Hina said it is very very sacred… Kissing her forehead… he slowly kissed her lips too.. I love you he said…

They had breakfast together. He took her to a corner of a store room which had a secret tile on the floor with a password. The stairs lead to a bunker underground. Looking around she was shocked, surprised…

It was a room with a home theatre and a huge computer and many small monitors. It had many gadgets with information flashing non stop on the screen with the Indian map on one.

Whats this she asked. He held her hands…Chakor I am going to share something which is important than my life. This is my working area. He told her the password and said only only if you foresee any trouble for your life use this password and come down. None I repeat none knows about this structure below. Not even Kriti so please…. She said Suraj I will die with it but will not reveal at any circumstances she said.

He took her to a special monitor and did her thumb and retina scans as the password. It opened and she saw a red dot in the map of Maldives. She looked at him questioning… Yes when I am on an assignment I don’t carry my personal mobile or will reach you too from my official one as I will be always monitored…I will not be able to talk to you too and I donot want you to call Anil as our phones are always checked for safety. You can see me where I am through this monitor. How? She asked. The technology geek said I have a microchip implanted in my biceps which transmits the signal here. I did not had the need to do it until now… as I had not bothered about my life…he looked at her. She touched his biceps and asked does it pain. He smiled, no it doesnot its too small and not noticeable and cannot be identified by any lasers too. But, Suraj she said… you don’t want me to come down unless my life is at stake but how do I know you are safe… a true wife’s concern.. He said there is a digital clock inside the pooja which keeps ticking with a green light which is also connected to my device… the clock will show that I am safe but the location will be seen only in this monitor down. He joked… the clock will stop ticking if ………..Shut up! she closed his mouth and said…. Mother India will save her son… and so will my love. He kissed her hand covering his mouth.

He took her to a safe beside and gave her few legal documents.. Chakor in case of any fatality to me… she smirked Surajjj…. He smiled my life is always on fire so in case something happens …. He showed the documents of all his property and bank accounts and all his investments and other business which had her name jointly…When did you do all this she asked. He smiled not replying anything.. Nothing will happen to you she cried… I too pray he said as I love you too much Chakor and want to live with you forever but…..something cringed in her… she hugged him saying I need none of these as before the digital clock stop my heart will stop... they both teared with emotions.

The room was huge with a small kitchenette, a wash and a bed, which showed that he would spend days together down engrossed in his work studying the monitors and giving orders and advice as required. He has his confidential talks with his Excellency the PM of India from here. Chakor once you come into this room and scan your retina I will know you are in trouble so I will take the necessary action. His face was very serious and Suraj Rajvanshi meant business. He asked her to rest in the bed while he was monitoring and giving instructions to Anil and was getting updates about any alarm but thankfully everything was under control. Hours passed by and he did not turn even once to see her behind and she realised that her man is indeed RAW when it comes to his work and protection of his country. Nothing will override that. She felt proud. Looking at him she slept, after finishing his work he very carefully carried her to their room.

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Special Monsoon day in Maldives…

She recouped fine it was a special monsoon day in Maldives.

There was a tribal function in the midst of an island and Suraj and Chakor were invited to participate and open the new aquarium there.

Suraj accepted to attend the tribal function as Chakor was excited about it. They attended the same. She wore a beautiful sky blue saree with danglers and sleeveless low back blouse. She danced with the tribes and he was lost in her grace….She enjoyed the aquarium a lot like a small child…. it became very cloudy and started to rain when they reached home…it was quite dark.

She was about to change when he stopped her hugging from behind… You look very beautiful in saree he said..nuzzling her closing his eyes…

She was indeed loosing herself in the handsome guy who was in his sheer black transparent shirt with a jean…The chillness and the breeze was making things so different. It was too windy. She went forward and was closing their bedroom windows when she suddenly remembered about Celia. She called out for her when she heard Celia’s voice at a distance and was so different… Suraj smiled,,, his eyes were turning dark looking at the slender figure… it kindled fire in him.

She was very worried and said Suraj why is Celia sounding different and where is she? Is she in trouble…

He walked to her and drew her close… he kissed her neck … she was loosing but still asked Suraj… where is Celia…. Its too cold… hmmm he said… Yes too cold so Celia will be with Ceaser in the Colonel’s house. What ?????… Who is Ceaser she asked… Turning her towards him, holding her cheeks he went very close to her lips and told Ceaser is Celia’ssssss…… and what will she do……she soon realised it and bit her lips ………. his eyes were dangerously red … she looked up into his eyes which was lusting… he hugged her cheeks tight and kissed her lips…you want to know he asked…. Within few seconds he realised what he was doing and quickly came to his sense. Chakor I am so…rr….. I just…lost myself…

She pulled his collar and said I know what celia will be doing… she will be doing what Chakor will be doing to HER Suraj now, her voice was turning husky…. She cupped him kissing his lips… I love you she said.. she hugged him tight that for the first time her assets were crushing him… Chakkorrr he sounded so erotic… are you sure he asked….. she kissed him hard… caressing his torso…. Yes yes…. I am for I have kept you waiting too long….

Her saree was making him go crazy and so was his sheer for her… You are beautiful he said…. you are too handsome she said… they kissed for long when he lifted her to the bed. Placed her slowly and hugged her facing her.. The rains was playing its part with the wind gushing setting it perfect for the night…He kissed her forehead and her cheeks and she gave in completely allowing him to have her his way… her heart was heaving a lot…

Holding her cheeks he said… you dance so beautiful… she felt shy and was rippling in sensations as his hand was caressing her slender hands drawing down and slowly caressed her naval…

She closed her eyes and said yes I like to dance and those lovely fishes too… but you did not see them she said..

I don’t need to see those fishes as I have my own aquarium in front of me he said. her eyes scrunched..

Hmmm …you are an amazing aquarium he said… he squeezed her waist and was going behind her back…He kissed her fingers and her neck but was hesitating to go beyond… she teared at his hesitation… Am I a fish? she asked and slowly took his hands and placed on her assets looking into his eyes…she had decided to give him the best as she had been delaying it for long.

He was surprised with her sudden move and very preciously kissed her valley and caressed her mounds…

She raised herself when his hands went behind and removed the knot of the blouse and slowly removed it and her transparent saree was over the asset… the hardened peaks was driving him crazy…. Chakor you are so beautiful he said… hmmm not a fish but many… he kissed her eyes and said your eyes are like those active guppy… and your cheeks are like the angel fish… round and soft…. Your neck is like the slender danio which is so sexy too.. kissing her there…. she flickered her eyes…. Your hands are like the Siamese fish which would fight any one for me… he kissed her valley and kissed on her peaks over her saree. She held the spread tight as her heart was pounding.. Noticing it he twined her hands with his and said… Chakor please tell me I shall stop if you are…

She unbuttoned his sheer shirt, removed it and lost herself in his toned shoulders, biceps and firm torso. She caressed him….raised and kissed his torso… she held his hands and helped him slid the saree down exposing her assets to him… he had so many emotions and she made him hold her assets… she closed her eyes in shy but yelped when he very preciously kissed them… he took on her affirmation and slowly mouthed them. She caressed his head in sheer pleasure… I love you Chakor he said… looking at them he kissed and cupping them softly said… these are so beautiful like the mature katla which is my most favorite one from the fresh waters. she smiled shy.

Squeezing her waist he removed the saree and said Chakor when you are in the short skirt I loose myself as you are like the black tetro… so seductive and sexy…..she smiled at his comparisons and said… you are an expert in every field. He lifted himself up and said you are making me an expert but there are few fields which I have not experienced … slowly unknotting her inskirt…. You are a treasure he said…. he crushed himself on her assets and lifted her slowly… making her sit on him…

Her heart was beating very very fast as he was taking it further… equally was his too… he was very very careful not to hurt her and was watching her as the last he wants was her to feel dizzy or sick.

They were bare up twining and kissing, caressing her back and she was palpitating terribly at this new experience. He made her stand and went on his knees to caress her navel, she moaned when he kissed it saying its like the star fish… He removed his jeans and her inskirt when she held his shoulders tight crisscrossing her legs…

He placed her down on the bed slowly…kissing down the valley to the navel and down when she yelped as his lips was caressing her inner thighs…

Looking into her eyes he said your legs are long beautiful like those dolphins which slides in the water. She shivered in the sensations… mmm was all she could say…..He slowly removed her inner when she just shuddered and he very very slowly kept her hands on his boxers and made her feel him…. she was red completely and he slowly downed his with her hands. You are beautiful …I love you he said….I too she stuttered.

He very softly and slowly kept his hands on her lips below and his hands shivered as it was his first too. He looked down and slowly kissed when she closed her eyes tight as she thought she would die in shy… she felt so scared that she raised herself up, held his head and hugged him tight syncing with his heart… he hugged her tight caressing her back… easy baby, my sweetheart, its your Suraj and you are my Chakor…they kissed each other when he slowly prepared her by rubbing her down and kissing her…

I love you…. And thank you for coming into my life he said… she just teared couldnot say anything as she was rippling in emotions, sensations, he was showing what love is and handling her so divinely… Sweetheart you ok he asked… yes yes she nodded as she trusted him, the one who stood by her to fight her trauma..… Chakorrr he sounded so erotic touching her precious wet treasure and said this is like the golden fish which has its beautiful little lips.. she quivered when he slowly placed himself between and adjusted to take the plunge… This is going to hurt he said…. hmmm hmmm she said… she raised to kiss him as she was truly scared and felt safe kissing him…Both their hearts where raging…

Chakorrr he cupped her face kissing all over…. while his manhood was kissing her soft lips down which was palpitating… He said thumbing her lips up… this red molly of yours makes me go crazy and crave for more for its juice…. Taking her lips diverting her he slowly thrusted in her, she arched and buried her nails as she shrieked in pain…it was too painful… he kissed her all over saying sorry …sorry…I love you, I love you…. He could not see tears in her eyes which was flowing due to the pain..

He stopped, he got worried and started kissing her to settle when she cupped him and told in his ears My RAW Officer don’t worry…. I am fine, Love me she smiled in between her tears…

My girl…….. he kissed her and took stride slowly throbbing when she started to settle and adjusted to enjoy the pleasure which was taking her into ecstasy. It was fire, passion and love. and lust.. She moaned his name loud which made him proud and happy. He took it slow, steady and increased pace along with pleasure as she was syncing with him. She came over everything as he saw that she fought her trauma to twine with him, to love him, to twine their lives together. It was bliss, it was love, passion with sweet moaning…. He discovered the treasure in her while she discovered the love in him for her…. They synced beautifully together to reach the bliss and the nature too blessed them with the thunders and rains wishing them forever…

They heaved together… hugged together calling each others name ....he kissed her with butterfly kisses while she too caressed him and kissed him for coming into her life…

It was not a ceremonial night with a bed decorated with flowers and sweets but it was indeed ceremonial with lust, passion and love winning everything together.

The man and his lady lusted, made love, twined to become one for they have breached all odds to twine in love.

She felt tired…. He hugged her close to his heart pulling the quilt over and cradled her like a little baby inside him as she his life, precious and sacred.

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It dawned beautifully. They woke up smiling at each other with a satisfying night not only for SuKor but for CeSar too…

Celia walked in happily running to SuKor when Suraj naughtily said….hmmmm looks like my little puppy has grown into a beautiful lady…. How is Ceaser he asked…. Celia snuggled his shoulders wagging her tail in shy between her legs and making sweet noises while Chakor kissed her…

Why can’t Ceaser be here she asked…. Suraj laughed and said well maybe he doesn’t want to be our ghar jamai… What’s that she asked. Ha ha he laughed loud…in house son-in-law. She kicked him with her elbow….Suraj youuu….

You both must be tired… let me bring some hot milk for you both he said kissing them.

Mumbling a hindi number he got up and walked towards the kitchen…

Surajjjjj… she called loud.....I don’t understand Hindi… he said better you start seeing some hindi shows with subtitles but please don’t think about logic….as there is nothing like that there.

She smiled wearing his sheer black shirt….looking at the sea through her window…….hugging Celia who was beside her…..

Indeed life is beautiful she said to herself…..looking at the love bites of his on her she smiled saying RAW he is indeed… closing her eyes in peace…. My Suraj…. My Love…..mumbled with a smile on her lips…

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Sumi this RAW one is totally ummmmm bhi ahhhhhh bhi..... reminded me of the camp scene😍😍❤❤

Again where do you get these superrrrrrr duper ideas!!!!! Comparison with a fish..... fantafab 👏👏👏👏loved it.... especially the katla😜😜😜

The technology part was a little fundu......but nonetheless loved it when SR meant business❤

And the special monsoon day was indeed hawt, romantic, blissful, loving, beautiful👌👌👌

Enjoyed this bonus update thoroughly.... thank you smita😍😍

Btw just want to tell you that i am already missing the ficfam🙊🙈

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Sumi this RAW one is totally ummmmm bhi ahhhhhh bhi..... reminded me of the camp scene😍😍❤❤

Again where do you get these superrrrrrr duper ideas!!!!! Comparison with a fish..... fantafab 👏👏👏👏loved it.... especially the katla😜😜😜

The technology part was a little fundu......but nonetheless loved it when SR meant business❤

And the special monsoon day was indeed hawt, romantic, blissful, loving, beautiful👌👌👌

Enjoyed this bonus update thoroughly.... thank you smita😍😍

Btw just want to tell you that i am already missing the ficfam🙊🙈

Niki thanks so much 😘🤗🤗🤗

Awwwh my right brain overworks when it to comes to our special jodi 😜🤭

Technology part 😆😆 inspired by my one and only heart throb Pierce Brosnan 007 James Bond technology.. Love K and his special gadgets nonetheless is my dude so yessss😀😀😜😜

Awwwhhh the monsoon 🙈🙈🙈🙈

Ficfam 🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️

Thanks for the lovely words dear Smita.. You made my day 🤗🤗🤗😍😍

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Bonus :

Ohh God, Sumi!!!, it's such a suuupperr🔥🔥🔥🔥 bonus. I'm loving it 😍😍. Thank you for making my wish fulfilled & giving us this super duper explosive one 🙏, it's so sensuous . Loved their feeling attracted towards each other, admiring each other from afar, his keeping distance between each other despite reluctance due to her being traumatized while getting intimate but that always made her feel guilty & his trying to change her mood 😊👌👌, then her loosing herself seeing him, feeling jealous, but it's normal even I too was imagining Vj in shorts & wet body & the seawater drops shining on him due to the sun 😍😍& it has driven me crazy , his loosing himself to her innocent beauty, her sketches, her fondness to Celia, the light moment, their longingness for each other, love the kitchen scene, the tattoo 👍, his getting emotional. The secret room in the underground. Wow, this portion made me amazed, really you have such efficiency to write anything with such ease & perfection & with the fine details 👏👏. Indeed SDR is a technology geek & RAW when it comes to his work & protection of his country. Then the hot, sizzling, monsoon night as if the monsoon makes me feel like summer 😁😁😉😉, it was too 🔥🔥 , their craving for each other, the comparison with the aquarium fishes, the description 🙈🙈, he's not seeking to hurt her, she realised of his hesitation, cutely made it easy 😜😜. Ufff hotness overloaded .I'm continuously blushing while reading 🙈🙈🙈, you have achieved great expertise in writing such hot & romantic scenes 👌👌. I always wonder from where do you get such diverse idea? each one is different from the other 👌👌. I loved it & yes the CeSar pair too 😉😉 .Thank you dear for such a beautiful, luscious update & for making our weekend so pleasant 😊😊.

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My little sweetheart Kavi... Felt sooo happy to see you active and writing your lovely comment on insta. Thanks so much 😊 🤗🤗🤗😍

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Hello dii. Today again i read ur update. I think you have done phd in romantic stories.just joking.. simply superb😍😍😍waahhh hats off to you dii your thinking n creative level🙏🙏 your stories touches our heart n soul very deep😍❤️❤️mood booster updates all time favourite updates i will never ever forget ur stories. how can a story be so magical and dreamy?? its all bcz of you.. your stories giving couple goals. 😍👩‍❤️‍💋‍👨👩‍❤️‍👨Every girl dream about this kind of husband..,i wish i get a life partner like suraj/ Raghav😁😁😁 joking. Simply simply awesome.

How is Raghav??? I'm missing him so much 😆😍😁😝

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Awwh sumi di naive 🤭😜😜😜 shy shy 🙈 🙈... Haha PhD🤭🤭

Arey now Raaghav😀😀. Ficfam living happily ever after 🙏🙏